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1、學生自我陳述英文版 篇一：MBA專業(yè)自我陳述By serving as a noncommissioned officer in theUnited StatesMarine Corps, I learned and developed valuable leadership skills that would prove crucial to my success as a leader and to my ability to gain the respect of my subordinates. The Marine Corps places great emphasis on lea

2、dership characteristics, believing that great leaders are not born, they are properly trained. I submitted to grueling training on my way to becoming an officer in the Marines, and believe this training gives me the foundation of strong leadership skills that I will need in every day corporateAmeric

3、a.Leadership in the Marine Corps is more complicated than the simple management of employees. I learned this lesson the hard way, being thrust into a management position as my unit was being shipped over seas during the Persian Gulf War. As a newly promoted Corporal, I was given the job of night cre

4、w supervisor in charge of 15 other marines. In the Marine Corps, leaders are not only held accountable for the work getting done but also for the performance and conduct of their marines. At the age of 21,I had the responsibility not only to carry out my orders but also to safeguard the personal liv

5、es and protect the general welfare of my men. This being my second time over seas, I understood many of the difficulties that a young marine can have on their first extended trip away from their family. I enjoyed helping my marines over come their problems, and learned that the benefits were well wo

6、rth the time that I invested. I discovered that employees who have the support of their management tend to be more focused on the tasks at hand, gaining levels of trust and loyalty that can only benefit the organization.Related to this issue of gaining trust and loyalty through management supportive

7、ness is that the Marine Corps requires creative means to motivate subordinates. It can be very difficult at times to be in charge of individuals, yet have no direct control over their salaries or advancement in the organization. The government decides military salaries, and promotions are controlled

8、 by boards with the primary means of measurement being time in service. For this reason, I learned to manage through mutual respect. I believe it is much more important to gain the trust and confidence of your employees than to use direct compensation to motivate them.Throughout my Marine Corps care

9、er and beyond I developed many strong leadership skills, but most of all I learned that to be effective as a manager one must remain focused on the human aspect of leadership. By concentrating too much on the goal and not on the people needed to meet it, leaders risk alienating their employees and t

10、hus failure in achieving the goal itself. By leveraging the lessons and qualities I gained while serving as an officer in the Marine Corps, I hope to meaningfully contribute to the academic environment at the Anderson School of Business.點評：本文是一篇表現了leadership skills的優(yōu)秀文書，可以顯示出作者是一個具有管理能力和技巧的MBA候選人。1.

11、文章結構文章只有四段不到500字的篇幅，可以分成總分總三個部分。第一部分總起說自己在海軍培養(yǎng)到了領導能力。第二部分就具體說自己得到的是什么樣的領導能力。第三部分再次強調自己的領導能力，表達要進入安德森商學院學習的決心。2.文章內容文章一開頭就描述自己在海軍得到了寶貴的領導技巧。吸引讀者往下看究竟是何種技巧那么重要。在文章的第二部分，作者通過描述作為一名海軍軍官所肩負的責任，以及他怎么處理上司與下屬的管理關系的技巧，得出相互尊重，人性化是管理的訣竅。3.總體評價MBA文書向來要求簡潔凝練，觀點集中，這篇文書首先就滿足了這些要求。領導素質和技巧有很多，但是不可能在一篇文書里全部表現出來，因此就要選

12、取一個別人不太可能有的素材來展現自己某方面的領導天賦。作者選取的素材是他在海軍作為一名軍官的經歷。在文中作者不是體現自己如何有能力帶兵打仗，而是把這段經歷提升到自己注重管理人性化，與下屬相互尊重，從而可以達到良好的管理效果。4.可借鑒因素文章可借鑒之處就是簡潔明了，主題明確，選取的素材并不是常人可以經歷到的，還有就是從不平凡的經歷當中提煉出一種獨特的觀點。本文中作者得出的管理之中注重管理之中的人性因素，相互尊重比用獎金激勵員工更加具有效果的觀點就是比較獨特，常人不是很容易想到的觀點。譯文：作為美國海軍的一名軍官，我學會并且培養(yǎng)了寶貴的領導技巧。因為這種技巧對于我成為一名成功的領導者，得到下屬的

13、尊重來說是至關重要的。海軍對于領導特質的培養(yǎng)很重視，他們相信領導者不是天生的，而是經過恰當的訓練得到的。我歷盡磨練成長為海軍的一名軍官。我相信這樣的訓練培養(yǎng)了我的領導能力，而且這種能力在我以后每天的工作中都是需要的。在海軍作為一名領導者比簡單的員工管理復雜得多了。我是經過艱苦的學習培養(yǎng)了自己的領導能力。海灣戰(zhàn)爭的時候我被委任到海軍的領導層。作為一名新提拔的下士，我的工作就是帶領一個15名成員的夜間行動部隊。在海軍里，領導者不僅僅要負責任務的完成，還要負責士兵的表現。在我21歲的時候，我肩負的責任不僅僅是執(zhí)行任務，還有就是要確保下屬的生命安全和福利。這已經是我第二次出海了，我明白一個年輕士兵首次

14、離開家鄉(xiāng)出海會遇到的許多困難。我很樂意去幫助下屬克服困難而且我也明白我的付出是有價值的。我發(fā)現那些支持管理者的員工會更加關注手頭的工作，對于公司的信任和忠誠也會得到加強。與通過支持管理者而產生的信任及忠誠相關的就是海軍要求創(chuàng)新方法去激勵下屬。在一個公司管理員工是非常困難的，因為薪水和提拔都沒有統(tǒng)一直接的控制。而政府決定了部隊的薪水，提拔也是由委員會根據服務時間的長短來決定的。因為這個原因，我通過相互尊重來管理。我相信去獲取年輕員工的信任和信心遠比通過獎金來激勵他們更為重要。在我海軍生涯之中我培養(yǎng)了許多領導技巧，但是最為重要的是我學會了要做一名高效率的經理必須注重領導當中的人性化。假如領導者過于

15、注重目標而忽視實現目標需要的員工，他們將會與員工漸行漸遠并最終達不到目標。我希望在海軍中作為一名軍官學到的領導技巧和平衡能力可以為安德森商學院的課堂作出應有的貢獻。篇二：醫(yī)學專業(yè)自我陳述Veterinary BackgroundChanging the bandage on an angry bulldogs paw or trimming the hooves of a 2000-pound draft horse can be an intimidating venture. Curing animals requires compassion, precision, and confid

16、ence; it is also an excellent way to learn about practicing medicine and to feel the satisfaction of helping someone in need. Due to my rural background, knowledge of animals, and love of science, I began working for a local veterinarian at a young age. Later in life, when I decided to become a phys

17、ician, I saw that my veterinary experiences had prepared me well for a career in health care.When I started volunteering in an emergency room, I learned that humans really arent so different from other animals - I needed to show my compassion in order to earn their trust before I could heal or comfo

18、rt them. When a child or widow brought me their dying pet and pleaded for me to cure it, I had to soothe the person as well as the animal. I used this calm compassion in the emergency room when comforting the family of a father who had just suffered a heart attack, or when talking with a husband fra

19、ntic about his wifes car accident. I saw further similarities between human and animal medicine when I shadowed Dr. Harry Williams in his family practice. I saw that his close relationship with his patients led him to keep thinking of them long after his office closed for the day. Likewise, as a vet

20、erinary technician, I had often carefully considered how to help each animal. Compassion is truly a prerequisite for any career in health care.In my work with animals, I learned that perseverance is key to successful treatment. Interruption of that treatment can lead to disastrous results. In many r

21、ural communities near my home, I witnessed the consequences of the absence of consistent medical care. As a farrier, I have worked in many old-order Mennonite communities whose needs arent being met: when one clients daughter injured her hand in a corn sheller, she was unable to get medical care bec

22、ause facilities were far away and no doctors could come to their farm. The girls hand was infected and not healing well. I did what I could, but I was troubled that I didnt have the expertise to treat the injury. On my next visit, I saw that her hand had grown deformed. Had she been able to see a ph

23、ysician more frequently, her hand might have healed correctly. Encounters of this kind have revealed to me the consequences of medically underserved communities. I look forward to working toward a solution to this problem when I am a physician.A good veterinarian operates with precision. I have appl

24、ied the careful, exacting skills I learned with animals to my lab work. I am currently involved in research on corneal endothelium with Dr. Carson Kennedy. In the lab, we study mammalian corneal cells; eventually, we would like to describe and prevent ophthalmic diseases such as glaucoma. Through th

25、is work, I have honed my scientific skills and sharpened my analytical mind. It is exhilarating to catch a glimpse of valuable knowledge, not yet known by anyone, which has the potential to help many people. It is also very rewarding to know that I have contributed to the advancement of medicine by

26、providing research results that will improve peoples health.Perhaps the most important quality required to practice human or animal medicine is confidence. In the lab, in the emergency room, and in the field, I have had many opportunities to observe the importance of confident leadership to a medica

27、l practice. Over the years, I have observed that the best veterinarians and physicians handle each issue swiftly and appropriately, delegating tasks to others with self-assurance. In every medical situation, someone must take the lead role while working to manage the team. Leadership roles have alwa

28、ys come naturally to me - I spent twelve years working toward becoming an Eagle Scout and helping my younger brother to do the same. The composure I gained as a troop leader helped me to excel in my role as supervisor at a large walking horse farm. Since then, I have grown into leadership roles that

29、 required more significant responsibilities. I am comfortable as a leader because I am confident in my ability to ensure the health and safety of others. The leadership skills I have developed will be a vital part of my work as a physician.When I began working as a veterinary technician, I did not f

30、ully realize that the skills I gained would be so applicable to my eventual career as a physician. Yet my experiences with animals have provided me with an excellent foundation to continue my studies of human health and well-being. I am eager to develop the medical knowledge I have gained thus far i

31、n order to become the kind of physician my community will be able to rely on.結構解析：這是一篇申請醫(yī)學的文章是很成功的。說實話我是很喜歡的。我們看一下這篇文章的結構：第一部分，開頭。在這部分開門見山的點中了題目，獸醫(yī)的經歷。第二部分，延伸引入。光看了開頭讓人很迷惑，怎么獸醫(yī)的來申請醫(yī)學了呢。所以這里解釋引入一下，告訴別人，我之前的經歷和和現在的申請有關系的。第三部分，主體。這里主要是在講自己的醫(yī)學上的經歷，跟老師做實驗也好，還是之前的社會活動，結合這些事情來說自己在醫(yī)學上的認識，非常的真實也令人信服。而且作者的邏輯性

32、很強，由潛到深的敘述，一切都顯得那么自然。雖然很多東西都是專業(yè)的東西，但是結合他所說的東西并不顯得枯燥。第四部分，升華。通過對主體部分的總結，寫出了自己對專業(yè)的一些看法，領導能力對于外科醫(yī)生非常重要。并且詳細的寫出了自己的觀點。第五部分，結尾在升華的基礎上，點名了自己的目的，說出了自己的目標。點評：可以說這篇文章的格式是相當的標準的，一共是6段，分為很標準的5個部分。結構清晰，讓人可以很清晰的知道作者要表達的思想和內容。不像很多作者在做文章的時候太散太亂。這篇文章中我最喜歡的就是這點。而且這篇文章的中心很明確，并且用獸醫(yī)的經歷把整個文章串了起來?？梢哉f獸醫(yī)的經歷就好像是一根繩子，牢牢的把各個部

33、分有機的連接起來，讓人看到文章的時候第一個感覺就是整體感好。可以說，很多時候學生在做個人陳述的時候，都喜歡簡歷試的羅列，一個個人陳述洋洋灑灑的XX段，看得我頭都大了。并且都是一種純的羅列試描述，我做了什么，通過多少時間得到了什么結果，純的描述。沒有任何的邏輯思維，給人的一個感覺，就是亂。除了達到了簡歷的效果之外什么都得不到。亂糟糟的，我看了都頭疼，你想想那些天天看材料看到要吐的評審委員會成員們會怎么看你的這個東西呢?我想這個就不用我來說了吧。良好的文章結構代表了良好的邏輯思維能力。這個是毋庸置疑的，并且從我得到的一些信息來看，我至少是相信一點，就是評審委員會的人在看你文章的時候，同時也是在看你

34、的邏輯思維能力，畢竟做科研的人，沒有一個良好的邏輯思維能力是不可能的。專業(yè)固然重要，但是我們要掌握怎么去表現我們的專業(yè)。簡歷有簡歷的用處，有它應該體現的點，PS有PS應該體現的點，如果你想把簡歷做成PS，如果你想把PS組成簡歷，這是什么?前者，畫蛇添足;后者，照貓畫虎反類犬。都是四不像的東西，并且掩蓋住了我們本應該體現的點。這樣你真的就認為你的PS就是好的PS嗎?好的PS不在于文章的形式，不在于內容怎么寫，不在于開頭怎么寫，沒有一個定式，沒有一個模板，沒有一個套路。但是核心是一樣的，體現我專業(yè)的深度，或能力。那么怎么把你的文章組織好，用一個很好的線串聯起來。邏輯思維的體現。切記簡歷試PS，你有

35、沒有這樣的想法?有，必要改正。篇三：臨床醫(yī)學專業(yè)自我陳述LifeWhen a pod of 55 pilot whales recently beached themselves on a stretch of Cape Cod, vacationers and beach-goers came to the rescue. By high tide, they managed to save 46 whales. In explaining his motivation for jumping in to help, one volunteer simply answered, “Life.

36、” The same purpose inspires my ambition to become a physician.Medicine appeals to my deep appreciation for human life, inculcated by studying man as both a human being and biological machine. The decision to practice stems from a perpetual fascination with science combined with this basic love for l

37、ife. I grew up capturing insects and watching PBS, always questioning the complexities of how the body works. Through academics and medical research, I have begun to answer this question.My passion for knowledge of the inner workings of the human body led to proactive involvement in medical research

38、, enriching my view of medicine as well as nurturing the desire to continue research endeavors throughout my medical career. For the past two years, I have studied the relationship between structural damage and preserved clinical function in multiple sclerosis patients through functional MRI, under

39、the tutelage of Drs. Cranston and Mahoney. Although unsure how these two factors correlate, we hypothesize that a critical period exists when the brain undergoes reorganization. In a concurrent study, I am investigating the role of the pelvic veins in cryptogenic stroke, funded through a grant award

40、ed by the American Heart Association. The objective is to determine, via MRV, whether the pelvic veins are the source of thrombolytic emboli in cryptogenic stroke patients who also harbor a patent foramen ovale. The results of these studies not only will contribute to the advancement of medicine, bu

41、t may also hold therapeutic benefits for those afflicted with such neurological damage.The rewards of medical research lie in its practical application, and there is no better place to observe the miracle of life than in the NICU. Each day, newborns struggle to survive, illustrating the inherent adv

42、ancements and limitations of medicine. I have witnessed preemies, from 24 weeks of gestation and on, live and die. Exposure to patients revealed that people are much more than collections of cells and organs - we all share the special gift of life. My role in helping to care for them abounded with b

43、oth challenge and joy.My first patient, Baby S, arrived nine weeks prematurely and spent the first month of life in the NICU. Due to the presence of an extrachromosomal fragment, he suffered slight mental retardation. His mother, who had the same condition, visited infrequently during his hospital s

44、tay. When she did, her visits were brief and inattentive. I grew quite fond of Baby S, often watching him snuggle into the blankets like a small burrito. Although his sky blue eyes moved in a spastic manner, they gave life to his somewhat immobile body. He rarely showed signs of discomfort, whether

45、hungry or needing a change. I tried to give him the extra attention he lacked. At times, he rewarded my efforts to interact with a smile; other times, he gave me a dirty diaper.Reflecting on my experiences, I realize that the practice of medicine entails more than remembering and dispensing scientif

46、ic facts. It requires exercising both mind and heart, along with a genuine respect for life. Baby S and my other NICU patients instilled in me a sense of how precious life is, and I am certain that my current EMT training and planned medical mission to southeast Asia will reaffirm my conviction to i

47、mprove the lives of others.The career of a physician will allow me to balance an intellectual curiosity with my desire to help those in need. By helping man at his best and his worst, combining a passion for life with the pursuit of scientific knowledge, I can help heal and comfort others. I eagerly

48、 anticipate a vocation in which my patients fuel my search for knowledge, and that search embodies reciprocal benefits to my patients. When asked why I have chosen a medical career, I can confidently respond, “Life.”點評：這是一篇臨床醫(yī)學生的Essay，從文章的內容以及最后一段的宣言可以看出，作者想要申請的也是臨床醫(yī)學，并且立志當一名醫(yī)生。1、主題思想：對于一個醫(yī)生來說，什么是最重

49、要的呢?當然是最生命的重視，并且是發(fā)自內心的珍愛。因為作為一名好的醫(yī)生，最首要的是醫(yī)德，其次才是醫(yī)術。文章就是緊緊地抓住了這一點來寫的，動之以情，從一開始闡述自己當醫(yī)生的理由、到后來文章中所提到的在醫(yī)院的實習經歷，都可以看出，作者想要強調的首先是自己對于醫(yī)學事業(yè)的一份熱忱和對于生命的高度尊重。試問，這樣一份對于醫(yī)學的赤誠之心，有那位教授不會為之感動呢?2、開場：應該說，文章一開頭引用的一個實例是非常好的，因為對于那些被擱淺的鯨的拯救行動，完全是出于一種對于生命的尊重，并且每一個前去救助的人，都是出于自愿的。這樣的精神可以說是一名醫(yī)生的最高道德標準，也是對于立志向要做一名醫(yī)生的來說最難能可貴的精

50、神。3、中段：文中的一段實習經歷，對于一名智力低下的嬰兒的照顧，也很好地體現了這樣一種精神，那就是對于生命都有一種平等的尊重的態(tài)度?？偨Y：從整篇文章來看，作者強調的并非是自己學術上的東西，而最主要的是對醫(yī)德、對于醫(yī)生這個職業(yè)的理解，這一層面上來重點來描述的，而這樣寫的好處也就是能打動人心?？偟膩碚f，由于醫(yī)學是一門比較特殊的學科，它結合了科學的謹慎態(tài)度與人文的關懷，還需要一份社會責任感，所以在臨床醫(yī)學的Essay總，除了冰冷的學術闡述和探討，也非常需要有人性的溫暖參與其中，這樣寫出來的效果會好很多。譯文：生命的意義前不久，55頭巨頭鯨在位于科德角的一段海灘上擱淺了，周圍正在度假的人們以和行人都紛

51、紛前去解救。 在漲潮的幫助下，他們得以解救了46頭巨頭鯨。別人問起，究竟出于什么動機使得你們去解救這些鯨時，其中一個志愿者簡單的回答道：“因為生命”。是的，同樣是因為這個原因，使我想要成為一個醫(yī)生。對于生命的感激讓我對醫(yī)學產生了興趣，也促使我不僅學習人類的醫(yī)學也包括生物醫(yī)學。而這一切都是源于我對于生命的熱愛。過去我捕捉昆蟲并且觀察PBS，總是對于它們復雜的身體構造以及工作方式充滿了疑問，通過醫(yī)學的研究，我開始尋找答案。對于人體內部結構運作方式的熱忱，使我全身心地投入了醫(yī)學研究中，在這期間豐富了我對于醫(yī)學的眼界，同時也更堅定了想要投身醫(yī)學從而不斷的作相關研究的決心。在過去的兩年中，我通過運用MR

52、I，對大量肝硬化病人做了研究，學習了結構損傷以及臨床性防御機構，在Cranston 教授以及 Mahoney 教授的指導下，盡管對于這兩個因素是如何關聯的還不清楚，但目前的猜測是大腦在危急時刻所進行的信息重組。在最近的研究中，我研究了在遭受不明原因的撞擊后骨盆腔靜脈會有所變化，研究所用的基金是來自美國心臟協(xié)會的資助。目的是用來研究，對于遭受過不明撞擊并且是卵圓孔未閉的患者來說，是否骨盆腔靜脈是造成溶血栓栓賽物的原因。這些研究的結果不僅對于醫(yī)學進步做出了貢獻，并且很大程度上使遭受此類神經性損傷的患者造福。對醫(yī)學研究最好的回報就是能運用于實踐，再也沒有比在NICU更好的地方了，因而在這里總能發(fā)現生

53、命的奇跡。每一天，都有不少的新生嬰兒必須努力掙扎著才得以生存下去，醫(yī)學既有其進步的一面也有其局限性。我曾經親眼看到孕育了24周的早產兒，出生然后死亡。也曾經向患者解釋道，其實人類只不過是細胞和器官的累積生命是上天賜與我們的一份特別的禮物。作為我來說，在幫助和照顧這些患者的過程中，既充滿了挑戰(zhàn)也得到一種滿足感。我的第一個病人，是個早產9個星期來到人間的嬰兒，叫S。他在出生的第一個月里是在NICU度過的。由于存在染色體的多余片段，他有一些輕微的智力低下。他的母親，和他有同樣的病癥因此很少在S住院期間來看望他。每次母親到來都很短暫和匆忙。而我漸漸開始喜歡上了S，經常去看望他，看他在小小的籃子里努力掙

54、扎著。盡管他天藍色眼睛的轉動和一般人不同，上天賜與他生命卻給于他不太靈活的身體。他很少表現出任何的不舒適，比如饑餓或者需要換姿勢。有時我會給于他更多的照顧，而他會給我一個微笑作為回報;當然，更多的時候，他給我的是一片臟尿布?；仡櫸宜洑v的一切，我意識到醫(yī)藥的實際應用不僅僅對科學原理的熟識以及運用，還有對精神上以及內心的歷練，以及對生命發(fā)自內心的尊重。嬰兒S以及我在NICU的其他病人，讓我漸漸明白了生命是多么的珍貴，而我現在也正在進行急診醫(yī)師的實習，并且，我打算去東南亞的決定也可以證明我想要救助更多人的這份決心。職業(yè)醫(yī)師的職業(yè)讓我在對于知識的好奇以及對幫助別人的渴望之間找到一種平衡。在別人最好或

55、最壞的狀態(tài)下幫助他們，并且抱著對于科學知識探索之情以及對生命的熱情，我想我能幫助極撫慰別人的能力。我渴望在與患者的相處的過程中，尋找真理，而在這探索的過程中，同時也反過來造福患者。每當別人問我為什么選擇醫(yī)學作為一生的職業(yè)時，我會自信得回答：“因為生命”。篇三：金融工程專業(yè)自我陳述英文版：In my opinion, the Financial Engineering is a kind of creative technology to the Financial Instruments, Financial Means and system. It used to balance the b

56、enefits and venture as an interesting interdisciplinary subject. It covers many fields such as mathematics, computer science and finance, in which the mathematics and mathematical modeling are the two main aspects of the Financial Engineering. The Investment Portfolio Theory of Markowitz, the capita

57、l asset pricing model of the Sharp, Option Pricing Model of Black-Scholes and “Binomial” model of Cox can best reflect the critical position of the two subjects.I am glad to choose mathematics and applied mathematics. Three years study had deepened my understanding of them, especially of mathematica

58、l modeling. (It still occurs to me when I went to attend the class of XX department given by Professor Jiang qiyuan in Tsinghua University for the first time. “1 kilogram of flour added with 1 kilogram of stuffing can make 100 dumplings, but what if the stuffing is more than 1 kilogram?” He used a v

59、ery simple, vivid and interesting example which aroused my interest and led me into the mathematical modeling world.The first time I kissed the mathematical modeling was in the summer vacation of 2005, when I got a good opportunity to attend the mathematical modeling training organized by our school. Seasoned mathematics teachers told me what on earth the mathematical modeling is through some existing examples, in which the one about SARS i