高中英語寫作---演講稿.ppt

1、,題目要求 (2011江西高考) 假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。 請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括： 1目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題； 2騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、 有利健康等。,參考詞匯：低碳生活 lowcarbon life節(jié)能 energy saving 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)： 120詞左右； 2演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出， 且該部分不計入總詞數(shù)。 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech

2、is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ Thank you !,技法指導(dǎo) 演講稿是人們在工作和社會生活中經(jīng)常使用的一種文體，它是在較為隆重的儀式上和某些公眾場所發(fā)表的講話文稿。寫好演講稿，應(yīng)注意以下三點： 1格式 演講稿一般由三部分組成，即：稱呼語(Greetings)、正文(Body)和結(jié)束語(Closing)。常見的稱呼語有Ladies and gentlemen, Friends, Boys and girls等，一般稱呼語前不使用Dear。,2內(nèi)容 演講稿的主題部分應(yīng)該闡述清楚事情的緣由、結(jié)果和要求。第一部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該以詳細完整地介紹事情為主，具體地講，包括事情的發(fā)生、

3、發(fā)展及結(jié)局。第二部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該提出發(fā)言稿的主題，如歡迎、歡送、號召、建議、個人看法等。,3語言 演講稿以簡單句為主要的表達形式。同時，演講稿的語言必須有感染力，所以演講稿可以使用祈使句、感嘆句、強調(diào)句等句式來達到這種目的。寫作時要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。,用英語演講，不要用太多的I feel，I think，老是用I 顯得很主觀，而且讓人覺得缺乏說服力。另外，perhaps，maybe這樣的詞，雖然客氣、謙虛，但是用太多會讓人覺得你演講的內(nèi)容有不可靠之處。 在演講中，少用you，多用we。用有等于把自己與觀眾對立起來，而用we則拉近了與聽眾的距離。比如“You

4、should not smoke”聽上去像教訓(xùn)人，而“l(fā)ets not smoke”聽起來是一個不錯的建議。,黃金模板 Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen, Its a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is _(自我介紹). The topic of my speech is _(發(fā)言主題),To begin with, many people suggest that . Secondly, . Thirdly .(話題或現(xiàn)象列舉) What I want to st

5、ress is that _ _(重申主題). For one thing, . For another, . Besides, .(原因或重要性列舉). In a word, _(總結(jié)) Thank you for your listening./Thank you.,第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文 謀篇布局,第二步打造亮句，增色文章 1我認(rèn)為，騎自行車是一個好的解決辦法。 In my opinion, it is a good solution to ride bicycles. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution

6、.,2眾所周知，隨著人們生活水平的提高，汽車已經(jīng)成為一種很受歡迎的交通方式。 Its known to all that with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport.,第三步串句成文，保證流暢 Good morning

7、, everyone, Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problem

8、s such as air pollution and traffic jams.,How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energysaving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas.

9、 Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you!,假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校學(xué)英語社團將舉辦主題為“Live a low carbon life”的演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備參賽，請你寫一篇100詞左右的發(fā)言稿。 寫作要點： 陳

10、述理由：為什么要過低碳生活； 如何過低碳生活？提出至少三條建議； 倡議同學(xué)們過低碳生活。 要求： 1.短文需寫在指定區(qū)域 2.內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整 3.書寫需要清晰、公正,注意：1.詞數(shù)120150； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫； 3發(fā)言稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。 Good morning, everyone! Its known that our school will choose some students to attend the model contest. In my opinion, _ _ _ Thank you for listening.,參考范文：

11、Good morning, everyone! Its known that our school will choose some students to attend the model contest. In my opinion, its a good idea for us students to enter for the model contest. Some of us are fond of fashion and modeling. We want to be fashion designers or professional models. We may well sei

12、ze the opportunity to make our dreams come true. Besides, not only do we show our figures and intelligence on the stage, but we also learn how to be,independent, how to behave in society and what to do for others while preparing for the competition. However, some of our parents think it possible for

13、 us to miss lessons and fall behind in study. No! On the contrary, being student contestants or prize winners, we are encouraged to study even harder and make rapid progress. Thank you for listening.,學(xué)生范文,I am very glad to stand here. The topic of my speech is “l(fā)ive a low-carbon life”. Its known to

14、all that with the improvement of peoples living standards, the pollution is becoming worse and worse now. So we should try our best to build a low-carbon society.,If we want to live a low-carbon life, we must keep the following points in our minds. Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no o