山東高考十年英語(yǔ)寫作范文解析背誦

1、2013年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié)：寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回郵件：1. 未及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因；2. 你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120150；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。One possible version 范文詞數(shù)：171Dear Tom， How is everything going on with you? Im writing this letter to express my apology to you f

2、or not writing you back in time. In the first place, Ill be so happy if you could accept my apology. Its of great importance for me to make full preperations for the final exam last week. Therefore, I couldnt spare enough time to write you back in time . Whats more, I am willing to tell you that I a

3、m to do some part-time jobs in the summer holiday. No one can deny the fact that we can have our vision broadened in the process. Last but not least , it must be pointed out that I would love to go travelling during this holiday. I am looking forward to hearing from you. And Ill appreciate it very m

4、uch if you give me an early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua親愛(ài)的Tom： 你最近好嗎？我寫這封信是為了我沒(méi)有及時(shí)回信而道歉。 首先，如果你能接受我的道歉我將很開(kāi)心。在上周，全力準(zhǔn)備期末考試對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是很重要的。所以，我無(wú)法余出更多的時(shí)間來(lái)及時(shí)回信。而且，我想告訴你暑假做兼職的事情。無(wú)可否認(rèn)，在這個(gè)過(guò)程，我們能開(kāi)闊我們的視野。最后，必須指出，在這個(gè)暑假我喜愛(ài)去旅游。我期待著你的回信。 如果你能早點(diǎn)回信，我將不勝感激。 您真誠(chéng)的， 李華have sth. Done，即“ have + sth （賓語(yǔ)）+ 過(guò)去分詞（賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)）”意為“讓 /

5、叫 / 使 / 請(qǐng)別人做某事”強(qiáng)調(diào)一點(diǎn)，就是這件事并不是自己動(dòng)手來(lái)完成，賓語(yǔ)sth 后面用過(guò)去分詞作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明sth 與過(guò)去分詞表示的動(dòng)作之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。例如： I have my photographs taken. 我照了像(由別人拿著你的相機(jī)幫你照的） I have my photographs developed. 我洗了相片(也是由別人幫你洗的）2012年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié) 寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不久前在學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文：1. 參加英語(yǔ)角的益處

6、；2. 堅(jiān)持寫英語(yǔ)日記的作用；3. 英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（Enjoy Reading）對(duì)你的幫助。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。One possible version 范文詞數(shù)：171As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject1. In order to learn it well, apart from2 English class, I took an active part in3 English corner and other after-class4

7、English activities, which benefit me a lot.In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral5 English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries6. I keep on 7doing

8、 it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes8, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress9. Finally, some good English study websites10 contribute11 a lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic12 English passages13, poems and

9、stories. Whats more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies14, which play an important part in15 my study process16.All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work17 pays off18.作為一名高中生，我認(rèn)為英語(yǔ)是一門非常重要的科目。為了學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，在課外我積極參加英語(yǔ)角和其它課后英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)，這使我受益匪淺。 在英語(yǔ)角，我遇到許多志同道合的朋友。而且，有時(shí)一些外國(guó)人也很樂(lè)意加入我們

10、。通過(guò)與他們交談，我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)進(jìn)步了許多。我也發(fā)現(xiàn)，寫英語(yǔ)日記很有用。這些年我一直堅(jiān)持寫日記，這對(duì)我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)是有幫助的。俗話說(shuō)：熟能生巧。我們只有通過(guò)練習(xí)才能進(jìn)步。最后，一些好的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站也促使我的英語(yǔ)得到提高。 通過(guò)這些網(wǎng)站，我讀到了一些經(jīng)典的短文、詩(shī)和故事。 更重要的是，我能從網(wǎng)站上學(xué)到一些學(xué)習(xí)技巧和方法，它們?cè)谖业挠⒄Z(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)揮著重要作用?？傊瑮l條大道通羅馬，但努力總歸是不會(huì)白費(fèi)的（皇天不負(fù)有心人）。范文重難點(diǎn)詞匯及詞組注釋1. subject sbdkt n. 主題；科目2. apart from 遠(yuǎn)離，除之外3. take an active part in 積極參加 4. a

11、fter-class adj. 課后的5. oral rl adj. 口頭的 Orale English 英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)6. diary dari 日記 Keep diaries 寫日記 Dairy der 乳制品7. keep on doing 繼續(xù)做8. as a saying goes, 俗話說(shuō)，常言道，9. progress prgres 進(jìn)步 Make much progress 取得很大進(jìn)步 Make a progress 取得進(jìn)步10. website wbsat 網(wǎng)站 11. contribute kntrbjut vt. 貢獻(xiàn)，出力 Contribute to 有助于，促使12.

12、classic klsk adj. 經(jīng)典的；13. passage psd 一段文章，短文14. methodology medld 方法，方法論15. play an important part in 在中有重要作用16. process prses n. 過(guò)程，進(jìn)行17. hard work n.努力工作， 努力學(xué)習(xí) 18. pay off 償還，付清，回報(bào)重點(diǎn)句子1. 熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.2. 條條大路通羅馬。Every road leads to Roma.3. 皇天不負(fù)有心人。Hard work pays off.4. Only by pract

13、ice will we make more progress. 我們只有通過(guò)練習(xí)才能進(jìn)步。(only 句首虛擬部分倒裝) 要倒裝時(shí)一般是在虛擬語(yǔ)氣的時(shí)候。完全倒裝是把謂語(yǔ)的整個(gè)部分放到主語(yǔ)前面；部分倒裝是把謂語(yǔ)成分中的一部分放到主語(yǔ)前（情態(tài)動(dòng)詞什么的）。以下是ONLY在虛擬語(yǔ)氣中的基本用法：only所修飾的副詞、介詞短語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)從句位于句首時(shí)，要用倒裝語(yǔ)序。如：Only then did I realize the importance of health.到那時(shí)我才認(rèn)識(shí)到健康的重要性。Only in this way can you learn from your mistakes.只有用這種

14、方式你才能從你的錯(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。注意：only修飾主語(yǔ)時(shí)，句子不需要倒裝。Only he knows the truth.只有他知道真相。范文出彩處分析三段式，兩頭小，中間大；用到一個(gè)only在句首的虛擬部分倒裝句；用到多個(gè)諺語(yǔ)；句子之間的銜接詞用得好。難疑點(diǎn)自己補(bǔ)充2011年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié) 寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom上個(gè)月來(lái)到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子郵件： 1詢問(wèn)Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況； 2談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)Tom幫忙； 3告訴T

15、om你打算賽后去看他。注意： 1詞數(shù)：120150； 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。One possible version 范文詞數(shù)：146Dear Tom,Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable1 experience 2with you here.I am going to take part in3 an English speech 4contest5 for mi

16、ddle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance6, I am making preparations7 for it. However, I still have some trouble in 8collecting useful materials9. Meanwhile10, I find it hard to use English properly11. I would apprecia

17、te12 it if you could offer me a hand13. I also hope that the great effort14 I am making will pay off15.You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to16 see you again!Yours Sincerely17,Li Hua 親愛(ài)的Tom： 你上個(gè)月曾在北京學(xué)習(xí)?，F(xiàn)在一切順利嗎？跟你在一起

18、的日子真的很幸福、很難忘。 這個(gè)夏天七月份，我即將參加中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽。 這次機(jī)會(huì)對(duì)我很重要。為了能有一個(gè)好的表現(xiàn)，我正在做準(zhǔn)備。但是，在收集有用的資料時(shí)我遇到了困難。同時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)想要恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用英語(yǔ)真的很難。你如果能幫助我，我將不勝感激。我也希望我的巨大努力會(huì)有回報(bào)。你知道的，自從離開(kāi)我十分想念你，所以希望在英語(yǔ)比賽結(jié)束后和你見(jiàn)面。 我迫不及待想見(jiàn)你了！謹(jǐn)啟，李華范文重難點(diǎn)詞匯及詞組注釋1. unforgettable nfgetb()l adj. 難忘的2. experience ksprns n. 經(jīng)驗(yàn)；經(jīng)歷 vt. 經(jīng)歷；體驗(yàn)3. take part in參加4. speech spi

19、t n. 演講；講話 5. contest kntest n. 比賽6. be of great importance= be greatly important 很重要7. preparation ,prepre()n n. 準(zhǔn)備 Make preparations 做準(zhǔn)備8. have some trouble in doing 在有困難，有麻煩9. material mtrl 原料，材料，資料10. meanwhile minwal adv. 同時(shí)11. properly prpli adv. 恰當(dāng)?shù)?2. appreciate priet vt. 欣賞；感激 I would appre

20、ciate it if 如果我將不勝感激。13.offer sb a hand 幫助某人14. effort eft 努力 make great effort 十分努力15. pay off 償還，付清，回報(bào)16. cant wait to do 迫不及待做17. sincerely snsrli adv. 真誠(chéng)地重點(diǎn)句式1. Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. 距離你在北京學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候已過(guò)去一個(gè)月了?，F(xiàn)在完成式，It has been a month since2. How is everything going with you? 一

21、切順利嗎?口語(yǔ)問(wèn)候中常用。3. spend such an unforgettable1 experience 2with you 和你一起有這樣難忘的經(jīng)歷。4. To have a very good performance6, 為了能好好表現(xiàn)，不定式to do 表目的。5. I also hope that the great effort14 I am making will pay off15. 我也希望我的巨大努力會(huì)有回報(bào)。定語(yǔ)從句，I am making 來(lái)說(shuō)明 great effort的，省略引導(dǎo)詞that 或which。I am making great effort. 范文出

22、彩處分析郵件格式正確；用到定語(yǔ)從句；用長(zhǎng)難單詞及搭配；句子之間的銜接詞用得好。難疑點(diǎn)自己補(bǔ)充2010年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié) 寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解釋原因；3. 另約時(shí)間。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120150； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。One possible version 范文詞數(shù)：135Dear Tom, I am indeed1 very sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you next week,

23、 which I have promised2. I feel sorry about it and want you to know what happened.Just now3, my cousin4, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study5 last year, informed6 me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up 7at the airport8 with his family. You kn

24、ow, we havent seen each other for nearly a year.I sincerely hope you can accept9 my apologies10 and understand me. I would appreciate your allowing11 me to make another date12 to show you around 13Beijing. Once again14, Im sorry for any inconvenience15 caused16. Sincerely yours, Li Hua親愛(ài)的Tom： 我實(shí)在是很對(duì)

25、不起下周不能如約去北京陪你了。 對(duì)此十分抱歉，但我想讓你知道原因。我的表哥李瓊?cè)ツ耆グ拇罄麃喩钤炝?，剛剛得知他這個(gè)周六早晨回來(lái)，讓我開(kāi)車和他的家人一起去機(jī)場(chǎng)接他。 你懂得，我們快一年沒(méi)見(jiàn)了。我真誠(chéng)地希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我。如果允許另約時(shí)間讓我?guī)愎浔本?，將不勝感激?再一次為我所引起的任何不便道歉。 您真誠(chéng)的， 李華范文重難點(diǎn)詞匯及詞組注釋1. indeed ndid adv. 的確；實(shí)在；真正地；2. promise prms vt. 承諾3. just now, 剛才；眼下4. cousin kz()n n. 堂兄弟姊妹；表兄弟姊妹5. further f adv. 進(jìn)一步地；更遠(yuǎn)地

26、adj. 更遠(yuǎn)的（比較級(jí)）further study 深造（名詞性短語(yǔ)）6. inform nfm vt. 通知；7. pick up 撿起；（開(kāi)車）接，捎上8. airport ept n. 機(jī)場(chǎng)9. accept ksept vt. 接受10. apology pld n. 道歉11. allow la vt. 允許12. date det n. 日期；約會(huì)make another date 另約時(shí)間13. around rand prep. 四處；在周圍adv. 大約；到處；在附近around Beijing 在北京周圍14. once again 再一次15. inconvenienc

27、e nknvinns n. 不便16. cause kz vt. 引起n. 原因；事業(yè)重點(diǎn)句式1. I would appreciate your allowing11 me to make another date12 to show you around 13Beijing. 如果允許另約時(shí)間讓我?guī)愎浔本瑢⒉粍俑屑ぁppreciate 感謝vt.，后接名詞性詞語(yǔ)。2. Once again14, Im sorry for any inconvenience15 caused16. 再一次為我所引起的任何不便道歉。（過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)） Caused 是動(dòng)詞的ed式 做inconven

28、ience的后置定語(yǔ)，修飾inconvenience ，cause與inconvenience是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。范文出彩處分析格式正確；用到長(zhǎng)難句；用到高級(jí)詞匯。難疑點(diǎn)自己補(bǔ)充2009年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié) 寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國(guó)。你想聯(lián)系你的美國(guó)老師Mr. Smith,但沒(méi)有其聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國(guó)同學(xué)Tom寫一封信：1. 感謝Tom對(duì)你英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；2. 詢問(wèn)Mr. smith 的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；3. 邀請(qǐng)Tom在春節(jié)期間來(lái)中國(guó)感受中國(guó)文化。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)120-150；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。One possible version

29、范文詞數(shù)：206 Dear Tom, I am now back China and sound1. In this letter I would like to convey 2my heartfelt3 appreciation4 to you for your kind5 assistance6in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally7, your generous8 help and tender 9care made me feel warmly welcomed10 and transformed 11m

30、y first American trip into a unforgettable memory. I have been missing our English professor12, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast13 of mind14, wide and varied15 knowledge16, together with 17a singular18 personal 19charm20, combined to exert21 a strong influence22 on me. What about him recently? I desire

31、23to contact 24him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available25. So would you mind 26delivering27 it to me via28 the online29 mailbox30? I am more than31 delighted 32to invite you to join us to celebrate33 the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar34

32、New Year so that I can repay 35your friendship. You can partner36 with me to have a try37 in lion dances, which is extremely 38exciting. And the grand39 lantern 40festival parade41 will be bound to42 impress43 you. I assure44 you that you would enjoy45 visiting here as I did at your home.With my bes

33、t regards 46! Yours cordially47, Li Hua親愛(ài)的Tom： 我現(xiàn)在已回到中國(guó)并身體康健。在這封信中，我想對(duì)在紐約時(shí)你友好地幫助我學(xué)英語(yǔ)表達(dá)我衷心的感謝。而且，你慷慨的幫助和溫柔的照料讓我感覺(jué)自己受到熱情地歡迎，這使我第一次的美國(guó)之旅十分難忘。 我十分想念我的英語(yǔ)老師史密斯先生，他的獨(dú)特的思維、廣博的知識(shí)以及非凡的個(gè)人魅力都深深地影響了我。他最近怎樣？我希望與他聯(lián)系，讓他給我一些提高聽(tīng)力的建議。但是，他的電子郵件地址不對(duì)。你能通過(guò)網(wǎng)上郵箱發(fā)給我他的郵件地址嗎？ 我愉快地邀請(qǐng)你加入我們一起慶祝春節(jié)中國(guó)農(nóng)歷新年，以便答謝你的盛情。你可以和我搭檔一起嘗試令人十分興奮的

34、舞獅。盛大的元宵節(jié)游行也必定令你印象深刻。我保證你的拜訪會(huì)像我拜訪你家一樣盡興。獻(xiàn)上我最好的祝福！ 您真誠(chéng)的， 李華范文重難點(diǎn)詞匯及詞組注釋1. sound sand adj. 健全的，健康的2. convey knve vt. 傳達(dá)；3. heartfelt htfelt adj. 衷心的；真誠(chéng)的4. appreciation prie()n n. 感謝5. kind kand adj. 友好的；和藹的；6. assistance sst()ns n. 幫助assist sst vt. 幫助7. additionally dnli adv. 而且，此外；加之8. generous den()

35、rs adj. 慷慨的，大方的；9. tender tend adj. 溫柔的；柔軟的；10. welcome welkm vt. 歡迎vt. 歡迎sb be welcomed 某人受到歡迎11. transform trnsfm vt. 改變，轉(zhuǎn)換transform into 把變成12. professor prfes n. 教授；教師；公開(kāi)表示信仰的人13. cast kst n. vt. 投擲，拋14. mind n.思維; 理智，精神；cast of mind 思維模式vt. 介意15. varied verd adj. 多變的16. knowledge nld n. 知識(shí)17. t

36、ogether with和；連同18. singular sgjl adj. 單數(shù)的；非凡的19. personal ps()n()l adj. 個(gè)人的20. charm tm n. 魅力21. exert gzt vt. 運(yùn)用，施以影響22. influence nflns n. 影響 vt. 影響exert a strong influence on sb 對(duì)某人產(chǎn)生影響23. desire dza vt. 想要；希望desire to do 希望24. contact kntkt n. 接觸，聯(lián)系vt. 使接觸, 聯(lián)系，25. available velb()l .有效的，可得的；26.

37、 mind mand vt. 介意mind doing 介意27. deliver dlv vt. 交付；遞送28. via va prep. 通過(guò)；經(jīng)由29. online nlan n. 在線30. mailbox melbks n. 郵箱31. more than 多于；超出 (在文章中修飾形容詞=very)32. delighted dlatd adj. 高興的33. celebrate selbret vt. 慶祝34. lunar lun adj. 月亮的，陰歷的35. repay ripe vt. 回報(bào)；付還36. partner ptn vt. 與合伙n. 伙伴partner

38、with 與搭檔37. have a try 嘗試38. extremely kstrimli adv. 非常，極其39. grand grnd adj. 宏偉的；極重要的40. lantern lntn n. 燈籠41. parade pred n. 游行42. bound band adj. 受約束的vt. 束縛；使跳躍n. 范圍；跳躍be bound to 必定43. impress mpres vt. 給予某人深刻印象44. assure vt. 保證45. enjoy nd doing 喜歡46. regards riga:dz n. 致意，問(wèn)候47. cordially krdli

39、 adv. 誠(chéng)摯地 重點(diǎn)句式1. I would like to convey 2my heartfelt3 appreciation4 to you for your kind5 assistance6in my English learning when I was in New York. 在這封信中，我想對(duì)在紐約時(shí)你友好地幫助我學(xué)英語(yǔ)表達(dá)我衷心的感謝。 Would like to 想要, 愿意2. I assure44 you that you would enjoy45 visiting here as I did at your home. 我保證你的拜訪會(huì)像我拜訪你家一樣盡興.D

40、id 在這里是代替作用，還原為 as I enjoy visiting at your home.范文出彩處分析格式正確；用長(zhǎng)難句；用高級(jí)詞匯及地道的搭配；句子之間的銜接詞用得好。難疑點(diǎn)自己補(bǔ)充2008年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié) 寫作 （滿分30分）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明，他一時(shí)無(wú)法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫封信：*幫他分析原因*給他提出建議*陳述你幫助他的具體打算注意：詞數(shù)120-150Dear Li Ming，_Best regards，Zhang HuaOne possible version 范文詞數(shù)：165Dear LiMi

41、ng, I know you are now having trouble1 communicating2 with others, and you may often feel lonely3. Thats because you are new here and people dont know about you. But I think you can make it4 if only5 you can follow the advice6 below16. First, you should take an active part in the discussions and sho

42、w your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views7. Second, you should learn about8 your classmates likes and dislikes9. Then you can have much in common with10 them. In this way, you can get to know11 more different people and show them that you are

43、 just as12 friendly. Last but not least13, Im always here ready14 to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce15 you to others. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with17 you if you can do as the above18. Best regards, Zhang Hua親

44、愛(ài)的李明： 我知道現(xiàn)在你在交流方面遇到了麻煩，你也許會(huì)經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)。這是因?yàn)槟闶切聛?lái)的學(xué)生，人們并不了解你。但是我認(rèn)為只要遵循下面的建議，你一定會(huì)成功的。 第一，你應(yīng)該積極參加討論，表達(dá)自己對(duì)事情的看法，同時(shí)要傾聽(tīng)他人的觀點(diǎn)。第二，你應(yīng)該了解一下同學(xué)們的喜惡。那么，你就會(huì)和他們有許多共同之處了。通過(guò)這個(gè)方法，你就可以認(rèn)識(shí)更多不同的人并向他們表示你的友好。最后，我會(huì)很樂(lè)意幫助你的。我們可以一起參加活動(dòng)，我可以將你介紹給其他人。 假如你能做到以上幾點(diǎn)，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更好的了解你并樂(lè)意和你交朋友。致敬， 張華 范文重難點(diǎn)詞匯及詞組注釋1. have trouble doing=have tr

45、ouble in doing 在方面有困難/麻煩2. communicate kmjunket vt. 交流；傳達(dá)communicate with 和交流3. lonely adj. 孤獨(dú)的n. 孤獨(dú)者4. make it 成功；達(dá)到；好轉(zhuǎn)5. if only 只要6. advice dvas n建議7. view vjun. 意見(jiàn)8. learn about 了解，學(xué)習(xí)9. likes and dislikes n. 喜惡10. have much in common with 和有很多共同點(diǎn)11. get to know 了解，認(rèn)識(shí)12. just as 正像，正如 （可修飾形容詞）13.

46、 last but not least 最后（最后但并不是最不重要的）14. ready red adj. 準(zhǔn)備好的；情愿的be ready to do 愿意做.15. introduce ntrdjus vt. 介紹； introduceto把介紹給16. below bl adv. 在下面prep. 在下面17. make friends with 和交朋友18. above bv n. 上文prep. 在上面adv. 在上面adj. 上文的重點(diǎn)句式1. I know you are now having trouble1 communicating2 with others, and y

47、ou may often feel lonely3. 我知道現(xiàn)在你在交流方面遇到了麻煩，你也許會(huì)經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)。 Feel lonely 感到孤獨(dú) feel是系動(dòng)詞，與be的用法相似，后面可以直接跟形容詞。2. Thats because you are new here and people dont know about you. 這是因?yàn)槟闶切聛?lái)的學(xué)生，人們并不了解你。 Thats because這是因?yàn)?，后面可以加句子?. Second, you should learn about8 your classmates likes and dislikes9. 第二，你應(yīng)該了解一下同學(xué)們

48、的喜惡。 classmates 復(fù)數(shù)的所有格形式。4. In this way, you can get to know11 more different people and show them that you are just as12 friendly. 通過(guò)這個(gè)方法，你就可以認(rèn)識(shí)更多不同的人并向他們表示你的友好。Just as 后面可接形容詞。5. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above18. 假如

49、你能做到以上幾點(diǎn)，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更 好的了解你并樂(lè)意和你交朋友。With time going on ,隨著時(shí)間推移，常用表達(dá)法。范文出彩處分析格式正確；用到定語(yǔ)從句；用長(zhǎng)難單詞及搭配；句子之間的銜接詞用得好。難疑點(diǎn)自己補(bǔ)充2007年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文第二節(jié)：寫作(滿分 30 分) 閱讀下面的文字，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 120150 詞的短文。今年，教育部直屬師范大學(xué)將招收一批免費(fèi)師范生，學(xué)生畢業(yè)后須回生源所在省份的中小學(xué)任教十年以上，你愿意成為一名免費(fèi)師范生嗎？請(qǐng)陳述理由。One possible version 范文詞數(shù)：179Recently I learned 1from the new

50、spaper that normal2 universities belonging to3 the Education Department 4 would recruit5 some students free. As a return6, the students must serve as7 a primary8 school teacher for at least 10 years in his hometown. I feel that is a good news for me and I will contact the universities to get enrolled9. First of all, as a farmers child, my familys living condition10 is not so good; I can hardly afford 11the high tuition 12of regular13 universities. I am so happy to get this chance 14to become a college student15 and continue my study. Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream