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1、高三復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作講評(píng)課 Assessment take it as; open it for Places of interest/tourist attractions Attract tourists/appeal to visitors/ be attraction for visitors,Give to/Rentto/be rented to Sport company/companies which organize matches/organizing matches Make/ create money; bring in money/make more profits,Open/
2、be opened to the people/public/open them to public. Be used for/as; be made to; Do some exercise/build our bodies/strengthen our bodies,信息2 信息3 信息4,向公眾開(kāi)放,用于健身,租給體育公司,創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益,開(kāi)辟成旅游景點(diǎn),吸引游客,正 文,2.列提綱/要點(diǎn),.,信息5,總結(jié),意愿,結(jié)尾,In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view. I would appreciate I w
3、ould you will think of /takeinto consideration.,開(kāi)頭信息1,08年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕. 征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議. 你想寫(xiě)一些建議.,.,3.連詞成句,The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games were over/finished. The 29th Olympic Games were held successfully in Beijing. Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games with a great success.,The 29th Olympic Games wer
4、e hosted in Beijing with a great success. Beijing achieved its dream of hosting the 29th Olympic Games successfully.,Collect some advice How to use/make use of /make the best of the stadiums. After the Olympic Games After Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .,You are collecting some advice on how
5、to make use of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games . I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully.,Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice Contribute some suggestions t
6、o you.,I would like to give you some advice. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you,4.Use it as/be used for/as;take it as;open it for Places of interests/tourist attractions Attract tourists/appeal to visitors/ be attraction for visitors,3.Give to/Rentto/be rented to Sport compa
7、ny/companies which organize matches/organizing matches Make/creat mony; bring in money/make more profits,信息2 信息3 信息4,向公眾開(kāi)放,用于健身,租給體育公司,創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益,開(kāi)辟成旅游景點(diǎn),吸引游客,正 文,3.連詞成句,2.Open/be opened to the people/public/open them to public. Be used for/as; be made to; Do some exercise/build our body/strengthen our
8、bodies,2.The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can build their bodies/strengthen their bodies,3.The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in more money/make more profits,4.They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,.,信息
9、5,總結(jié),意愿,結(jié)尾,In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view. I would appreciate I would you will think of /takeinto consideration. In a word,3.連詞成句,From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use of the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into de
10、ep consideration,4.連句成篇,Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.,Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public
11、can build their bodies/strengthen their bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in more money/make more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,Para.3: From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full
12、 use the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration,4.連句成篇,Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following sugge
13、stions to you.,Para.1: I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.,4.連句成篇,Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The
14、 public can strengthen their bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,Para.2: First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public.The public can strengthen t
15、heir bodies. Secondly,The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,First of all Firstly, To begin with,In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats more,Finall
16、y, Whats worse,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least,and; too; as well as; along with; together with,for example; for instance; like; such as; as to,but; however; while; though; on the contrary,because; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore,in a wor
17、d; in short; to sum up; in conclusion,whats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; furthermore,4.連句成篇,I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to
18、 contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly, The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as touri
19、st attraction. It can attract many visitors. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it very much if you would take my advice into deep consideration,5.潤(rùn)色修正,二. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔,三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力,四. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,5. 潤(rùn) 色 修 正 方 式,一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,Wit
20、h短語(yǔ)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),定語(yǔ)從句,名詞性從句(主賓表同從句),各種狀語(yǔ)從句,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful.,Many people are dying to visit the stadium.(唐珊),The stadium is of great value.(王淑敏),一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力,5.潤(rùn)色修正,1.The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many stadiums unused,The
21、29th Olympic Games were successfully ended, leaving many stadiums unused(孫詒).,二. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔,5.潤(rùn)色修正,1.we can let stadium make sense Only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. they can be the places to appeal vis
22、itors to pay a visit.,Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense(張文雪).,Not only can the stadiums be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits, but also they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.(張蕾),5.潤(rùn)色修正,三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力,We should take
23、 the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives,It is the Olympic stadiums that we should take into consideration after Beijing hosted the
24、 games successfully.,With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives.,5.潤(rùn)色修正,四. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,With短語(yǔ)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise.,You can open the stadiums which can be use
25、d to take exercise for the public.(高玉華).,5.潤(rùn)色修正,四. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,定語(yǔ)從句,各種狀語(yǔ)從句,我們鍛煉的越多,我們就越健康。,The more exercises we take, the healthier we will become.,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),We should pay more attention to the stadiums.,More attention should be paid to the stadiums.(潘暢),I heard you are collecting some advice on how to ma
26、ke the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly, The stadiums can be rented
27、 to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it very much if you would take my ad
28、vice into deep consideration,5.潤(rùn)色修正,高考書(shū)面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求,第五檔(21-25分) 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): 準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容,要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式 所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。,第四檔(16-20分) 完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): 比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容 應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù) 雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句
29、間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。,2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕,一家英文報(bào)刊在其網(wǎng)站上征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議假設(shè)你叫李華,是該報(bào)的一名讀者,請(qǐng)給該報(bào)編輯部寫(xiě)一封信,談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh和理由內(nèi)容包括 向公眾開(kāi)放,用于健身 租給體育公司,創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益 開(kāi)辟成旅游景點(diǎn),吸引游客 Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. ,With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, What we should do now is how to make full use of the stadium
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