四級(jí)真題2012年12月作文講評(píng).ppt

1、1,CET4,2012年12月,2,Part I Writing Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it .You sh

2、ould write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,3,Education: A Worthy InvestmentWeekly earnings in 2010($),4,三段論 第一段：概述圖表反映的主題思想 第二段：分析產(chǎn)生的原因 第三段：展望未來(lái)或提出方法或建議,5,圓形圖 pie chart 曲線圖 line graph 條形圖 bar graph 增加increase grow rise jump (詞性) 減少decrease drop decline fall reduce (詞性) 不變r(jià)emain the sa

3、me 程度slight small slow gradual steady sharp rapid sudden dramatic marked,6,圖表作文常用的句型 開(kāi)頭 According to the table / pie chart / line graph / bar graph, we can see / conclude that 根據(jù)該表/圖，我們可知 The table / graph reveals (shows / indicates / illustrates / represents / points out) that 該表/圖表明 As we can see

4、from the table As can be seen from the line/bar graph As is shown (illustrated / indicated) in the pie chart 如表/圖所示，,7,描述增減變化 The number of grew / rose from to An increase is shown in ; then came a sharp increase of In the number remains the same / drops to There was a very slight (small/slow/gradua

5、l) rise/increase in 2006. There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dramatic) drop (decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in 2006 / compared with that of last year.,8,范文一 Education Pays The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that one with higher education background

6、earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid$712 per week whereas those with a Bachelors degree can earn $1038.,9,Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those wit

7、h comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. Also, the higher on

8、es education degree is the bigger platform he will have to show his ability. For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for them to communicate face to face with employers.,10,This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore,

9、substantial education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to build our country and strive for a better life for ourselves.,11,范文二,Education Pays Judging from the table, we can see that peoples income increases along with their education levels. Above

10、all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.,12,The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I dont think so because, on the on

11、e hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which wou