（浙江專用）高中英語(yǔ)Unit4WildlifeProtectionPeriodFiveWriting—Persuasivewriting：letterofadvice課件新人教版.pptx

1、,PART 1,技法點(diǎn)撥,PART 2,寫作訓(xùn)練,Period FiveWritingPersuasive writing：letter of advice,PART 1,技法點(diǎn)撥,文體分析 把握寫作動(dòng)脈,本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫建議信，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。建議信的目的是向有關(guān)組織或個(gè)人提出建議，所提建議旨在針對(duì)某種事物或現(xiàn)象，提出一些改進(jìn)的措施，這種建議帶有勸說(shuō)性。建議信寫成書信或電子郵件的格式，一般由稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾和署名四個(gè)部分組成。 建議信的正文部分分為三部分： 第一部分：提出寫建議信的緣由； 第二部分：寫出建議的具體內(nèi)容，并指出你所提出的建議可能會(huì)帶來(lái)的好處； 第三部分：表明希望自己的建議被

2、采納的想法。,寫作指導(dǎo),1.反映現(xiàn)象的常用開頭句式： (1)Im writing to tell you that. (2)Recently we have made a survey that. (3)Many people are worried about. (4)It worries more and more people that. 2.提出措施的常用句式： (1)We intend to.to help/save/protect. (2)We are ready to call on people to.,常用表達(dá),(3)We feel like doing.to teach t

3、he illegal hunters a lesson. (4)Wed rather not.but do. (5)Wed like to.to punish those who do harm to wildlife. 3.希望建議被采納的結(jié)尾句式： (1)I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. (2)I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. (3)I would be more than happy

4、 to see improvement. (4)I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details. (5)We need your support to make more and more people.,PART 2,寫作訓(xùn)練,弄清文絡(luò) 寫作妙筆生花,假如你叫李華，你所生活的城市周圍有很多動(dòng)植物正逐漸減少，對(duì)此你向有關(guān)部門寫一封80詞左右的信，分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因，并根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提出切實(shí)可行的幾條建議。但以下幾條要點(diǎn)要包括在內(nèi)： 1.野生動(dòng)植物的現(xiàn)狀； 2.分析造成許多野生動(dòng)植物瀕臨滅絕的原因； 3.

5、提出幾條保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的具體措施。 注意： 1.不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,審題 1.確定體裁：本文為建議信； 2.確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱； 3.確定時(shí)態(tài)：本文的主要時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 謀篇 本文可以分為三部分： 第一部分：描述現(xiàn)狀； 第二部分：分析原因，提出措施； 第三部分：提出希望。,審題謀篇,必備詞匯 1.在危險(xiǎn)中_ 2.滅絕；消亡_ 3.采取措施_ 4.保護(hù)免受_,遣詞造句,查看答案,in danger of,extinction,take measures,protect.from.,關(guān)鍵句式 1.它們不僅缺乏食物，而

6、且有時(shí)還會(huì)被人獵殺。 They have little to eat and also can be killed by human beings. 2.我們應(yīng)該采取更多的措施保護(hù)它們免遭傷害。 More measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt. 3.必須制定更多的法律以阻止人們砍伐樹木。 More laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees. 4.所有工廠在廢水排入河流或湖泊之前必須進(jìn)行凈化。 All the factories must clean

7、 the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes.,5.應(yīng)當(dāng)建立更多的動(dòng)植物保護(hù)區(qū)以便它們安全地生活。 More reserves should be set up so that they can live safely. 6.我希望我的建議有幫助。 I hope my suggestions are helpful/of help.,句式升級(jí) 1.用not only.but also.改寫句1。 _ 2.用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡語(yǔ)連接句3、4、5。 _，more laws must be made to stop people from

8、 cutting down trees._, all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes._, more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.,They not only have little to eat，but also can be killed by human beings.,查看答案,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Lastly,用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式

9、，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。,組句成篇,As we know，many species of wildlife are in danger of extinction.This is because the environment that they are living in has been destroyed greatly.,參考范文,查看答案,Dear Sir or Madam， Im writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.,They not only have little to eat，but also can be killed by human beings.Personally，more measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt.Firstly，more laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees.Secondly，all the factories must clean the waste water before it is pour