高中英語短文改錯(cuò)及寫作講評(píng)課件新人教版必修1.ppt

,高一寫作指導(dǎo),無論從詞法還是句法上講，英語中動(dòng)詞是最關(guān)鍵的。而在高考英語書面表達(dá)評(píng)分中，動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤往往又是扣分的重點(diǎn)。所以同學(xué)們在寫作時(shí)要特別注意動(dòng)詞的正確使用。一般來說，中學(xué)生在寫作中出現(xiàn)的動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤主要有以下幾個(gè)方面：,一、時(shí)態(tài)誤用,二、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤,三、詞形錯(cuò)誤,四、詞性錯(cuò)誤,五、詞義錯(cuò)誤,六、句式錯(cuò)誤,一、時(shí)態(tài)誤用,一般來說，根據(jù)寫作要求能夠非常明確地判斷出 應(yīng)該主要用什么時(shí)態(tài)，像寫日記、看圖書面表達(dá)， 講述發(fā)生的一件事，其主要時(shí)態(tài)就是一般過去時(shí)。 出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤的主要原因是：（1）對(duì)各種時(shí)態(tài)的 基本概念不清楚（2）時(shí)間立足點(diǎn)把握不準(zhǔn)（3）母 語干擾 由于漢語動(dòng)詞沒有時(shí)態(tài)變化，許多同學(xué)缺乏 時(shí)態(tài)概念（4）考場時(shí)間不夠,He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college. The teacher explained that light trvaeled faster than sound.,has been working,travels,二、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤,Mary was dressing in white. The story was happened long long ago. We watched the train till it was disappeared.,dressed,英語中seat， dress，devote 等動(dòng)詞常用被動(dòng)語態(tài),belong to, break out, disappear, happen, occur, take place, 等詞無被動(dòng)語態(tài),三、詞形錯(cuò)誤,動(dòng)詞有過去式、過去分詞、現(xiàn)在分詞、單數(shù)第三人稱形式。 In short, things have began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I was studiing in my room when the telephone rang. The driver drived so fast that the car knocked into a truck. The balloon bursted suddenly.,begun,studying,drove,burst,四、詞性錯(cuò)誤,1.及物動(dòng)詞與不及物動(dòng)詞混用 The teacher entered into the classroom. We all agreed Marys idea. The suggestion was come up at the meeting. My hometown has taken place great changes in the past twenty years.,with,came,Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.,易用錯(cuò)的這類不及物動(dòng)詞有happen, take place, occur, break out, run out, come up, come true, go out, belong to, remain, disappear等 及物動(dòng)詞有marry, enter, serve, reach等,2. 實(shí)意動(dòng)詞和系動(dòng)詞的誤用,The music sounds well. This record is sold good.,good,英語中l(wèi)ook, sound, taste, smell, feel等 表示感覺的連系動(dòng)詞后接形容詞作表語,sells,well,英語中有些說明主語自身特性的動(dòng)詞常用 主動(dòng)語態(tài)表被動(dòng)含義，如sell, wash, write等 This cloth _.(好洗） This pen _.(書寫流利) The door _.(好關(guān)),washes easily,writes smoothly,closes well,3. 動(dòng)詞形容詞介詞的混用,Our PE teacher is ill. Who will instead of him? They all against your plan. I favourite English.,instead of 為介詞，應(yīng)改為take the place of, 或者說Who will take his class instead?,are,favourite 可用作形容詞或名詞不能做謂語， 應(yīng)改為My favourite is English. 或English is my favourite (subject).,4. 瞬間動(dòng)詞和延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞的混用,英語中瞬間動(dòng)詞不能語“段”時(shí)間連用應(yīng)將其替換為狀態(tài)動(dòng)詞或延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞 He lent me a book and told me that I could borrow it for a week.,keep,注意此類動(dòng)詞的替換arrive-be;buy-have; die-be dead;join-be in;leave-be away; fall in love-be in love; get married-be married,B. 瞬間動(dòng)詞與till或until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句或構(gòu)成的短語連用時(shí)，應(yīng)使用否定形式，否則應(yīng)使用狀態(tài)動(dòng)詞或延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞 He went to bed until eleven oclock. He stopped talking until the teacher came. He fell asleep until 9 oclock the next morning.,didnt go,或改為He worked until 11 oclock.,didnt stop,或改為He kept talking until the teacher came.,slept,五、詞義錯(cuò)誤,We all persuaded Father to give up smoking, but he wouldnt listen. The young man pointed to a policeman over there, explained and said, “He stopped us an hour ago.”,tried to persuade,and explained,六、句式錯(cuò)誤,My classmates suggest me to study hard. Welcome you to visit our school. There used to have two trees in the yard.,advise,My classmates suggest that I (should) study hard.,studying,You are welcome to (come to) our school for a visit,有些動(dòng)詞不能接不定式作補(bǔ)語，這類動(dòng)詞有 agree, demand, hope, insist, suggest, welcome等,be,What is a sentence?,1. The rain stopped him from going to school.,主語+謂語（+賓語+賓補(bǔ)+狀語）=簡單句,2.The rain stopped and then he went to school.,主句+從句=復(fù)合句,簡單句+簡單句=并列句,3.The rain stopped when I got home.,I believe that everything is going on well. She was reading a novel when I came in. She is the girl who sings best in my class. What we need is time. The question is where we should go tomorrow.,賓語從句,狀語從句,定語從句,主語從句,表語從句,主句+從句=復(fù)合句,1. This earthquake was very large. 2. Many people was lost their houses and parents. 3. luckily, with the help of goverment, we can eat delicious food and live good houses. 4.In a world, we are determined to rebuilt our country.,III. Errors in your writing,terrible,government,in,word,rebuild,5. To my sad, thousands of people lost their families or seriously injured. 6. After