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如何在作文中寫出閃光句型：作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會使你的作文如虎添翼！高分作文標(biāo)志 1、是否長短句交叉；2、是否會使用插入語；3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞； 4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞； 5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)： 1.適當(dāng)用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。 比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替換enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競爭力) 下面舉一篇某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and IBy Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth. google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular coincident with 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與一致”的意思，替換 With advancement 替換 development pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into current ( currently )替換 now appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth. Growing numbers of individuals 替換 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動 Additionally 替換 In addition / Besidesdeliver 替換 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , obscene, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm toEmerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào) positive 替換 important / good 等 a slice of 替換 a part of unfavorable 替換 bad impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入語 fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) facet 替換 aspect各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會不得高分呢！ 以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad 如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many。, if not most)替換many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all, 替換most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that) 7，affair ,business ,matter 替換thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits 10for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替換very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替換 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替換attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換.reasons for sth23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替換remember26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27. interaction替換communication28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible希望大家能夠在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中多總結(jié)精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點(diǎn)！常用連接詞To Add:and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, whats more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.),To Compare:whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be trueTo Prove:because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that isTo Show Exception:yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimesTo Show Time:immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then To Repeat:in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,To Emphasize:definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservationTo Show Sequence:first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soonTo Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, To Summarize or Conclude：in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole一、常用句型及單詞 A. 開頭 1、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: _. 2、_ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way. 3、Recently, _has been brought to such popular attention that _ (e.g. Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.). 4、One of our ancient philosophers said, _. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality. 5. No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny that. 或：Everyone would agree that. B 結(jié)尾 1) Only in this way/Only when/Only through, will/can we或：It is only if/whenthat we will It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want. 2) As long aswe will be able to/the problem is bound to As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life. 3) With a constant/steady improvement in (或With the gradual worsening of) sth. will With a steady improvement in our legal system, this problem will sure be solved earlier or later. 4) In a word there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that.in time to come.In one word, there is every chance that this Chinese traditon will continue to entertain millions of Chinese citizens. C. 中間 1建議和解決方法 1）. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that _. Others argue that _. 2）. But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _. For instance, _. Worst of all, _. 3）. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place,. Secondly,. Finally 4）. If we let the situation go as it is, . By that time, . 如果讓這種情況繼續(xù)發(fā)展下去，那么到那個時候，。 5） If, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我們怎么怎么做），那將沒有比這令我更高興的了。 2.It 結(jié)構(gòu) 1） It is advisable to exercise（擁有）patience in dealing with such complicated situations. 2） It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other. 3） It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine. 4） It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate. 5） It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure. 6） It pays in the long run （從長遠(yuǎn)的角度看）to introduce new technique. 3.動名詞或分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 1） Drinking, eating and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young persons health. 2） The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience. 4.遞進(jìn)式結(jié)構(gòu) 1） Fresh vegetables are nutritious（有營養(yǎng)的）；furthermore，they re cheaper than frozen ones. 2） Helping others will not only bring joy into other peoples lives，but also added happiness into our own. 5.表示重要性或必要性 1） Its important to set aside time for relaxation，hobbies ，and entertainment as well. 2） A harmonious atmosphere is essential（necessary / critical / indispensable）to achieve success. 3） Global warming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it. 6.表示目的 1） The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject. 2） The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the word. 3） Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business. 7.表示結(jié)果 1） Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health. 2） If you try to learn too many things at a time，you may get confused. 3） By consistent hard work we will be able to achieved our objectives （目標(biāo)）. 8.表示對比和比較 1） Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment. 2） Work is more than a necessity for most human beings；it is the focus of their lives，the source of their identity and creativity. 3） Rather than a punishment or a burden，work is the opportunity to realize ones potential. 4） The more scientists find out，the more questions they are unable to answer. 9.表示條件或假設(shè)的結(jié)構(gòu) 1） Without the distraction of TV，they might sit around together after dinner. 2） As long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keeps its power. 3） Were it left to me to decide whether we should _, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. 4） Without a degree and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim. 10.表示舉例 1） Take _ for example， 2） An illustration（例證）may make the point clear. 11.表示采取措施 1） The government should be taking effective（有效的）measures to overcome current difficulties. 2） As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help support the Olympic Games. 3） The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers. 12.表示讓步關(guān)系 1） While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and troublesome at times. 2） Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile. 13.表示因果或前提關(guān)系 1） Because of(owing to) the pressure（壓力）of examinations， many students are left with little or no free time. 2） Perhaps its because few of us know how to accept compliments（贊揚(yáng)）gracefully. 3） That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事）。 4） The reason for this is that 14.表示存在的問題 1）One of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world. 2） To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few can afford to do it. 3） Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities. 4） Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with