旅游景點介紹寫作指導與范文[一類教資]

1、景點介紹類作文寫作指導,1,蒼松課資,介紹旅游景點 1. 整體介紹：地理位置、歷史背景、來此旅游的必要性。 2.介紹地方特色：風景名勝、人文。 3.衣食住行方面的信息。 1. 語言要生動形象 2. 語言表達多樣化 3. 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時,2,蒼松課資,必備詞匯,1 人口 2 面積 3 氣候 4 政治 5 經濟 6 文化 7 教育 8 交通 9 自然資源 10 名勝,population area climate politics economy culture education transportation natural resources a place of interest / to

2、urist attractions,3,蒼松課資,必備詞匯,11 景色 12 壯觀的 13 歷史珍寶 14 方便的 15 坐落于 16 因.而聞名 17 富有/盛產 18 具有.的歷史 19 有.的人口 20. 占地.的面積,scenery magnificent historical treasure convenient be located/situated in be known/famous for be rich in have a history of have a population of cover an area of.,4,蒼松課資,常見錯誤(句子表達) 1. Shao

3、lin Temple at the foot of Songshan mountain. 2. Shaolin Temple in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句問題：無謂語動詞 正確句子：Shaolin Temple _at the foot of Songshan mountain.,is / is located at,5,蒼松課資,常見錯誤(句子表達) 3. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded with forests and hills. 4. Shaolin Temple, which is located

4、 in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句問題：無主句，就無從句。 正確句子：見10班佳句欣賞。,6,蒼松課資,常見錯誤(句子表達) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel. 病句問題：一個簡單句中兩個謂語動詞，之間又無連詞連接，又不是從句，則為病句。 正確句子： (加連詞)Henan has very good weather and is fit for travel. (變從句)Henan has very good weather, which is fit for travel.,7,蒼松課

5、資,常見錯誤(句子表達) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel. 正確句子： (用with結構) With very good weather, Henan is fit for travel. (it形式賓語)The good weather there makes it fit for tourists to travel in Henan.,8,蒼松課資,表達升級,1. 少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名揚天下。 普通版： Shaolin Temple was

6、 located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It was built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty. It was famous for the Shaolin Kung Fu.,9,蒼松課資,表達升級,1. 少林寺 (1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名揚天下。 升級版： Located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, Shaolin T

7、emple was famous for its Shanolin Kungfu.,(非謂語結構巧結合),10,蒼松課資,表達升級,少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名揚天下。 升級版： Shaolin temple was built in 495 AD, so it has a long history. Built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty, Shaolin temple has a long history.,豐富內容加從句,11,蒼松課資,表達升級,少林寺(1) 位

8、于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名揚天下。 升級版： What attracts tourists all over the world is Shaolin Kung fu.,豐富表達加從句,12,蒼松課資,表達升級,2. 其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。 普通版： The weather there is pleasant and the transportation is convenient.,13,蒼松課資,表達升級,2. 其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。 升級版： Not only is the weather pleasant,

9、 but also the transportation is convenient. 并列結構運用not only.but also倒裝,14,蒼松課資,表達升級,2. 其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。 升級版： With the pleasant weather and convenient transportation, you can enjoy a wonderful trip there.,15,蒼松課資,10班佳句欣賞,一. 巧用從句要用對。(6句) 1.The Shaolin Temple is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain,

10、which is situated in Dengfeng city. 2.Many foreigners, who are from all over the world, come to learn Shaolin Kungfu. (有主句才有從句) 3. It is well known for Shaolin Kungfu, which is very popular all over the world. 3. Its my pleasure to be your guide. 4. Shaolin Temple is one of the best temples in China

11、.,16,蒼松課資,10班佳句欣賞,一. 巧用從句要用對。(6句) 4. The reason why it is so popular is that it is famous for Shaolin Kungfu. 5. One of the most important things is that Shaolin Temple is famous for its Shaolin Kungfu. 6. The traffic in Henan is convenient, because you can go wherever you want by bus.,17,蒼松課資,10班佳句

12、欣賞,二.思維開闊巧拓展。(6句) 1. Shaolin Temple is one of the best temples in China. 2. Apart from this, it will be convenient to go out because of the smooth transportation. 3. Because of Shaolin Kungfu, Shaolin Temple is becoming more and more popular all over the world.,18,蒼松課資,10班佳句欣賞,二.思維開闊巧拓展。(6句) 4. When

13、 you get there, you will be greatly impressed by its beautiful view. The weather is fine and the air there is pleasant to breathe. 5. The Shaolin Kungfu is a valuable treasure in our traditional culture. 6. It has a long history, because it was built in the Nothern Wei Dynasty.,19,蒼松課資,10班佳句欣賞,三. 學以

14、致用高境界。(3句) 1. You must keep your eyes open if you are want to make your trip to Songshan Mountain enjoyable and worthwhile. 2. It is convenient for you to visit Shaolin Temple. 3. If you want to go, Ill provide guide service for you and give you a warm welcome.,20,蒼松課資,書面表達(報紙第2期) 假定你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Tom將

15、于八月來中國的少林寺旅游，來信向你了解有關旅游景點的情況。請你用英語給他寫封回信，內容主要包括： 1. 少林寺相關情況: (1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名揚天下 2. 其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。 3.表示愿意提供導游服務。,21,蒼松課資,Dear Tom, I am glad to hear that youre coming to China in August. Im writing to tell you more about Shaolin Temple. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded by forests and hills, is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It is said to have been built,22,蒼松課資,in 495 AD, during the Northern Wei Dynasty. It is well known for shaolin Kungfu