2017-2018學(xué)年高中英語 UnitComputers Section Ⅴ Writing-想象類作文教學(xué)案 2

1、學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精unit 3 computers section writing-想象類作文想象類作文是作者根據(jù)已有的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)和知識(shí)，超越現(xiàn)實(shí)生活來勾畫出從未見過或者不曾出現(xiàn)過的生活圖景的文章。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)想象類作文可分為三段:首段，進(jìn)行概述；中間部分,具體描述；結(jié)尾，對文章進(jìn)行總結(jié)。二、增分佳句1my ideal robot in the future will be like .and .。or perhaps it will help me 。.。2my ideal robot in the future is called .。3he/she does all the wor

2、k around the house。4he/she is very patient and never complains .5he/she can be with me whenever i feel lonely。6my ideal robot in the future can work as/serve as/be used as 。.。7great changes will take place in the future。8i believe our dream will come true some day。9have you ever thought about .。 in

3、the next 30 or 50 years?10in addition, there will be super computers or robots which can help us do 。.。 題目要求你們班進(jìn)行了一次關(guān)于未來機(jī)器人的討論。作為你們小組的代表，請你以“my ideal robot in the future”為題寫一篇英語短文，向同學(xué)們介紹你心目中的理想機(jī)器人。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為說明文;2確定人稱:本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱；3確定時(shí)態(tài)：本文的主要時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。二、構(gòu)思開頭：對我理想的機(jī)器人進(jìn)行總體說明。主體：對我理想的機(jī)器人

4、的形態(tài)、功能作細(xì)致描述。結(jié)尾：再次概括評價(jià)。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1look_like看上去像2remind_sb._of_sth.提醒某人某事3feel_lonely感到孤獨(dú)4emotion情緒5share_the_joys_and_sorrows分享快樂和痛苦第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)開頭:總體說明1我未來理想的機(jī)器人是個(gè)漂亮的小女孩，她是藍(lán)色的，身高一米六。my ideal robot in the future is a beautiful little girl, and she_is_blue_and_ about_1.6_metres_tall。主體：描述形態(tài)、功能用途2她是世界上最

5、新的,并且看上去像一個(gè)真正的女孩。she is the newest in the world， and she looks_like_a_real_girl.3她很聰明,并且能懂我所說的全部，能做我讓她做的事。she is very clever, and can understand all i say and do what_i_ask_her_to_do.4不管我什么時(shí)候遇到困難，她都可以幫助我寫作業(yè)并給我一些建議。she can help_me_with_my_homework and give me some_advice_whenever_i_meet_with_difficul

6、ties.5她能提醒我任何重要的事，比如:考試，甚至是我的生日。she can remind_me_of_anything_important，_such as exams and even my birthday。6她干的家務(wù)最多且不用休息。she does the most of the housework without_having_a_rest。7有了這樣的機(jī)器人，我就不會(huì)再感到孤獨(dú)，因?yàn)椴还芪沂裁磿r(shí)候需要,她都能給我唱歌，還會(huì)和我一起跳舞。with such a robot， i wont_feel_lonely_any_longer because she can sing an

7、d dance to me whenever_i_need。8她會(huì)和我一起打網(wǎng)球，并能用話語和手勢表達(dá)她的感情。她也會(huì)分享我的快樂與痛苦。she can play_tennis_with_me and can express her emotions with words and gestures. she shares my joys and sorrows as_well。結(jié)尾：再次概括評價(jià)9在將來擁有這樣一個(gè)機(jī)器人一定會(huì)很有趣。it will be very interesting to_own_such_a_robot in the future.第四步：句式升級造亮點(diǎn)1用非限制性定語

8、從句改寫句1my_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl，_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_metres_tall。2用反問句改寫句9wouldnt_it_be_very_interesting_to_own_such_a_robot_in_the_future?第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇my ideal robot in the futuremy_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl，_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_met

9、res_tall。she_is_the_newest_in_the_world，_and_it_looks_like_a_real_girl。_she_is_very_clever，_and_can_understand_all_i_say_and_do_what_i_ask_her_to_do。_she_can_help_me_with_my_homework_and_give_me_some_advice_whenever_i_meet_with_difficulties。_she_can_remind_me_of_anything_important，_such_as_exams_and_even_my_birthday._she_does_the_most_of_the_housework_without_having_a_rest._with_such_a_robot，_i_wont_feel_lonely_any_longer_because_she_can_sing_and_dance_to_me_whenever_i_need._she_can_play_tennis_with_me_and_can_express_her_emotions_with_words_and_gestures._she_shares_my_joys_and_sorrows_as