pollution作文

1、pollution作文 篇一：environmental pollution英語作文 environmental pollution with the continuous development of world economy and the growing world population, environmental pollution attracts our attentions. environmental pollution is one of the most serious problems that mankind faces today. air, water and

2、soil are necessary to the survival of all living things, but they all harmed by pollution. polluted air can cause illness, and even death. polluted water kills fish and other marine life. pollution of soil reduces the amount of land on which we can grow food. environmental pollution also brings ugli

3、ness to mans naturally beautiful world. there are a lot of reasons causing the problem. for example, exhaust from automobiles causes air pollution. factories discharge much of the material that pollutes air and water. too much fertilizer or pesticide can ruin soil. so we should be responsible for th

4、e environment around us. we can take effective measures to protect our environment. firstly, its best for us to ride a bike to school, dont take a bus or a taxi. secondly, scientists and engineers should work to find ways to lessen the amount of pollution that such things as automobiles and factorie

5、s cause. thirdly, government should pass and enforce laws that require businesses and individuals to stop or cut down on certain polluting activities. and lastly, we had better not cut down the trees. i think solving the problem depends largely on our responsibility to society and environment. if th

6、e sense of responsibility is greatly aroused ,harmony between man and the environment will not be far away.篇二：初中英語作文 water pollution(水污染) 初中英語作文 water pollution(水污染) water pollution with the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. the polluted water not only kills fish

7、, it is also harmful to our health. many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. in some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants. we should fight against the pollution. we should stop using harmful things. i wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can hav

8、e clean rivers again.篇三：英語作文the fight against air pollutionthe fight against air pollution recently, the air pollution has become a matter of a public concern. it, is obvious that the air pollution brings too much troubles to us all. additionally, it also makes the environment around us worse and wo

9、rse. so it is high time to fight against air pollution. the following ways can be adopted to solve the problem. first of all, the government should make some plans to reduce the factory which is bad for air.secondly, the teacher should also teach their students to fight against air pollution. thirdl

10、y, we should plant more trees to get more fresh air. in fact, more than three ways can be adopted. it is undeniable that fighting against air pollution is necessary. as for me, we should do our best to deal with this problem. when everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, i

11、 firmly believe the environment we are living in will be more beautiful. 字數(shù):156 提交次數(shù):6 顯示: 選擇詞匯 ? ? 作文評分 標題要求 81.5 排名:第116(共205)，最高分:94.5，最低分:0 詞匯: : 篇章構造: 內容相關: ： 拼寫特別棒，可適當增加學術詞匯的使用；作者句法不錯，但是文章整體句子略微偏短；行文稍顯不流暢，應增加文中銜接詞的使用 按句點評標簽詳解 第1段 1.1 recently, the air pollution has become a matter of a public

12、concern. ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。1.2 it, is obvious that the air pollution brings too much troubles to us all. ? ? ? 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 bring.trouble 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 131 次學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。修正提示 obvious的近義表達有conspicuous 。 1.3 additionally, it also makes the environment around

13、 us worse and worse. ? ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: surroundings, environment 均含“環(huán)境”之意。 bad在寫作中使用的太泛，在某些語境下可考慮換為unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。 1.4 so it is high time to fight against air pollution. ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。 第2段 2.1 the following ways can be adopted to solve the problem.

14、 ? ? ? 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 adopt.way 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 95 次 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 blem 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 15482 次 學習提示 易混詞匯: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“征詢題”之意。 2.2 first of all, the government should make some plans to reduce the factory which is bad for air. ? ? ? ? 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 reduce.factory 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 4 次搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 make.plan 在

15、教材中出現(xiàn)過 3156 次學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。 bad在寫作中使用的太泛，在某些語境下可考慮換為unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。 2.3 secondly, the teacher should also teach their students to fight against air pollution. ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。 2.4 thirdly, we should plant more trees to g

16、et more fresh air. ? ? 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 plant.tree 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 806 次學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。 2.5 in fact, more than three ways can be adopted. ? ? 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 adopt.way 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 95 次修正提示 in fact的同義表達有in reality。 第3段 3.1it is undeniable that fighting against air pollution is necessary. ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: atmosphere, air, gas 均與“空氣”有關。 3.2 as for me, we should do our best to deal with this problem. ? ? 學習提示 易混詞匯: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“征詢題”之意。修正提示 留意d