2019年中考英語真題分類專題21.3書面表達(咨詢建議類)(第02期)(解析版)

1、2019年中考真題英語分項匯編 專題21書面表達考點3咨詢建議類（一）【2019 ?四川省成都市】提示回一封email。要點如下:1.根據(jù)示例，概括介紹詞條構(gòu)成;2.如何用詞典解決詞匯學(xué)習(xí)中的問題（至少兩點）；3.介紹詞典對英語學(xué)習(xí)的好處（至少兩點）。(taken from an English- Chinese dictionary注意：l.截圖內(nèi)容僅供參考，可以引用，不能照抄;2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實學(xué)校和姓名;3.詞數(shù)：100左右。假如彳叫Ann,你的中國朋友小華發(fā)來email請教如何利用詞典學(xué)習(xí)英語。請參考截圖及注釋，根據(jù)dcfinitiOT)wordproiiuiici OLonti 屬

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3、 |usually before iu【參考范文】Dear Xiaohua,Glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of c

4、ourse, sometimes the same word has different parts of speech and definitions.Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit t

5、o English learning. First of all, it can help us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.I hope its helpful to you.Yours, Ann 【名師點評】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to use a dictiona

6、ry, such as, to learnEnglish, part of speech, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not only. but also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do 等。 而 You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dicti

7、onary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning./ I hope its helpful to you 等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是 本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏 輯性，也更富有條理。（二）【2019 ?安徽省】假定你是李華，彳的英國筆友Mike最近因視力減退而感到不安，請你用英文給他寫封電子郵件，談?wù)勀阍诒Ｗo視力方面的一些做法。要點如下：1 .經(jīng)常做戶外活動；2 .很少用電子產(chǎn)品；3 .堅持做眼保健操

8、；4 .注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3 .文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4 .開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.YoursLi Hua【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，給自己的英國筆友 Mike寫信，給他介紹一下你在保護視力方面的做法。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在是，第一人稱來敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先講述題目中Mike的視力減退問題，并引出文章的主題；然后具體介紹自己在保護視力方面的做法，這一部分是文章的主 體可以按照題

9、目中所列的內(nèi)容進行介紹，并對第四條進行補充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。寫作時應(yīng) 注意：短文按內(nèi)容表達的需要，分成三段，每一段一個主題；內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括題目中的所有要點，不能遺漏；課根據(jù)表達需要，增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實、豐富。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達，不能根據(jù)漢語思維 逐詞翻譯，句式應(yīng)符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合 句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使行文連貫， 表達流暢?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Mike,I m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker

10、. I like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give of

11、f is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you ll find wyys helpful.Yours, Li Hua 【名師點評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，對 Mike介紹了自己在保護視力方面的一些做法。短 文有以下幾個特點：首

12、先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，共分成三段：第一段將題目中的寫作背景進行了介紹，并引出了文章的話題；第二段具體介紹了自己的 做法，這一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照題目的提示進行表述，并對細節(jié)進行了拓展；第 三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整， 符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)比較復(fù)雜，使用了很多較高級的表達方式，包括動詞短語、介詞短語、 賓語從句、狀語從句、非謂語動詞等。如 I d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight i

13、n my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、 In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 等。（三）【2019 ?

14、胡南湘西州】湘西自治州正在進行“美麗湘西”建設(shè)，我們要積極參與“美麗湘西”建設(shè)活動，從小事做起，讓 我們家鄉(xiāng)變得更美。作為學(xué)生，請以“ Start out small”為題，用英語寫一篇倡議書。要點提示：1.多種植樹木和花草，不亂砍伐樹木。2 .購物時重復(fù)使用袋子。3 .不亂扔垃圾，保持河流等干凈。4 .遵守公共秩序，做文明學(xué)生。要求：1. 80詞以上。文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2 .文章須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文意思通順、語氣連貫、過渡自然。不得在作文 中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。參考詞7匚：protect the environment ; reuse bags;

15、plant; cut down； throw； wait in line ; be wie; oboeysart outsnalStart out smallHello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable.What can we do for our hometown?【參考范文】Hello , everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautifu

16、l and comfortable . What can we do for our hometown ? （1點題） In order to make our hometown more beautiful , as students, I think we should start from small things .【高分句型一】（從小事做起）First of all , we shouldknow the importance of protecting the environment . We should plant more trees and flowers and not

17、cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping.【高分句型二】We cant throw rubbishabout, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition , we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus , we should wait in line .（具體做法）【名師點評】能夠根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，能夠

18、圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫 地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務(wù)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄n order to make our hometown more beautiful , as students, I think we should start from small things.為了使我們的家鄉(xiāng)更美麗，作為學(xué)生，我認為我們應(yīng)該從小事開始。in order to do sth為了做某事；I think+賓語從句?！靖叻志湫投縎econd, we had better reuse the bag when shopping.第二，我們最好重用當(dāng)購物袋。had be

19、tter do sth最好做某事。（四）【2019 ?胡南省益陽市】最近，你美國的筆友Tony在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫郵件向你尋求幫助。請你以李華的身 份給他寫一封郵件一一提出你的一些建議。建議內(nèi)容包括：遇到問題多傾訴，多與他人分享情緒，尊重他人，與人為善，誠實守信要求：l.詞數(shù)60-80,開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息。參考詞7匚：share solve respect friendly be honest toDear Tony,Im sorry to hear that you have problems w

20、ith classmates: Im glad to help you.I hope everything will go well with you soon.Yours,Li Hua【寫作思路】本文的寫作要求是一封電子郵件。首先，對于朋友在交友過程中遇到難題表示歉意。用情態(tài)動詞提建議，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步驟給出另外四個建議處理和同學(xué)們的關(guān)系。最后希望一切 會好起來?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Tony,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. Im glad to help you. Here are some

21、 suggestions for you.First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and shareyour sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.Third, you should

22、be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.I hope everything will go well with you soon.Yours,Li Hua【名師點評】本文對于在和同學(xué)們交往中遇到的問題提出建議，分四步給出合理建議，最后指出對朋友要誠實，并希望能夠交到更多朋友。用到的短語有：share sth. with sb.; get a

23、long with和相處；be supposed to do應(yīng)該做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章豐富多彩；長短句搭配合理。(五)【2019金州省黔南州】每年的6月6日是我國的“愛眼日，可見保護中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語文化節(jié)期間舉彳T一場愛眼日英語演講比賽.請你寫一篇英語演講稿，談?wù)勀銓ΡＷo視力重要性的認識和建議.內(nèi)容：1 .保護視力的重要性(請寫 1點)4 .對保護視力的建議：(1)閱讀時注意用眼衛(wèi)生；(2)少用電子產(chǎn)品；(3)?？淳G色植物；(4)做眼保健操；(5)多做戶外運動.要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真

24、實的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3 .詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：Sight Day 愛眼日；electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操Dear friends,June 6 is our countrys Sight DayThank you!【參考范文】Dear friends,June 6 is our countrys Sight Day. As we know, Eyes are the windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance

25、 of the eyes.（保護視力的重要性）But now more and more students are gettingnear-sighted. So how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.First, we should be cautious on the health of using eyes. We should not keep your eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep

26、the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句型一】 Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight. 【高 分句型二】（對保護視力的幾條建議）（六）【2019陸林省】假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hina Daily舉辦白以夢想職業(yè)體驗”為主題的2019年夏令營活