關(guān)于書面表達的探討

1、2 2015015高考備考書面表達高考備考書面表達【考綱解讀考綱解讀】 書面表達是一個高度綜合性的題目，旨在書面表達是一個高度綜合性的題目，旨在考查考生的英語表達能力，看其是否能夠運用考查考生的英語表達能力，看其是否能夠運用所學(xué)的英語知識和掌握的技能進行思想交流。所學(xué)的英語知識和掌握的技能進行思想交流。該題要求考生根據(jù)所給圖表、提綱等，應(yīng)用所該題要求考生根據(jù)所給圖表、提綱等，應(yīng)用所學(xué)知識將所提示的信息組成行文連貫、文理暢學(xué)知識將所提示的信息組成行文連貫、文理暢通、語言得體的文章。它不但要求考生有豐富通、語言得體的文章。它不但要求考生有豐富的的語言語法知識語言語法知識，而且要有，而且要有較強的語

2、言表較強的語言表達能力和邏輯思維能力達能力和邏輯思維能力，是一種復(fù)合型的題，是一種復(fù)合型的題型。型。 今年全國新課標今年全國新課標I卷高考英語作文的題目為：卷高考英語作文的題目為： 假定你是李華，你校英文報假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化外國文化”欄目擬欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿。給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿。 一、要點如下：一、要點如下： 1、欄目介紹；、欄目介紹； 2、稿件內(nèi)容、稿件內(nèi)容 3、稿件長度：約、稿件長度：約400字字 4、交稿日期：、交稿日期：6月月28日前日前 Dear Peter, How a

3、re you doing? Recently, our school newspaper will start a column about western life and culture in order to develop our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. Here are some details about it. To begin with, you

4、may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. Whats more, your article should

5、 be at least 400 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. Hopefully, you could do me the favor. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. Im looking forward to your reply and your article. Best wishes, Yo

6、urs, LiHua Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about th

7、e culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we h

8、ave your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you.假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容） Dear Sir/ Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the v

9、acation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course

10、and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 2013年高考英語書面表達真題及范文：新課標全國卷年高考英語書面表達真題及范文：新課標全國卷1 第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分) 假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明: 李明：高個子，戴

11、眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【范文賞讀】 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bri

12、ng you the Chinese painting youve asked for before. Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My unc

13、le is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2013年高考英語書面表達真題及范文：新課標全國卷年高考英語書面表達真題及范文：新課標全國卷2 來源：天星 更新日期：2013-07-09 點擊： 1034 第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分) 假定你是李華,自制了一些中國結(jié)(Chinese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友Tom寫封信,請他代賣,要點包括: 1.外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料) 2.象征意義象征意義 3.價格 注意

14、:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3.開頭語已為你寫好。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? Li Hua 【范文賞讀范文賞讀】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, ab

15、out 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me

16、know if you need further information. Thank you! 2012課標卷書面表達課標卷書面表達(滿分滿分25分分) 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。 內(nèi)容主要包括內(nèi)容主要包括: I.自我介紹自我介紹(包括英語能力包括英語能力); 2.參加意圖參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家介紹中國、了解其他國家); 3.希望獲準希望獲準. 注意注意: 1.詞數(shù)

17、詞數(shù)100左右左右: 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。 Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different count

18、ries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IlI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to

19、your reply! Regards, Li Hua 2011全國一卷書面表達（滿分全國一卷書面表達（滿分25分）分） 假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你須書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點寫一封信：你須書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點寫一封信： 1.本人簡介；本人簡介； 2.求助內(nèi)容；求助內(nèi)容； 3.約定時間；約定時間； 4.你的聯(lián)系方式你的聯(lián)系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678） 注意：注意：1

20、.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；使行文連貫； 3.結(jié)束語以為你寫好結(jié)束語以為你寫好 Dear Sir/Madam, Im LiHua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no i

21、dea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:

22、 ;12345678. Look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2010年高考英語真題之書面表達（全國卷年高考英語真題之書面表達（全國卷1） 假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將舉辦假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。 英語演講比賽英語演講比賽 主題：人與自然主題：人與自然 時間：時間：6月月15日下午日下午2：005：00

23、 地點：地點：501教室教室 參賽選手：參賽選手：10名學(xué)生名學(xué)生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655） 歡迎大家光臨歡迎大家光臨 注意：詞數(shù)注意：詞數(shù)100左右。左右。 Dear Mrs. Smith, Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our s

24、chool on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward

25、 to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua 2009全國卷全國卷1書面表達書面表達 假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在不在家，你準備外出，請給家，你準備外出，請給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言條，寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：內(nèi)容包括： 1.外出購物外出購物 2.題房東還書題房東還書 3.Tracy 來信留言：來信留言：1）咖啡屋（）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消見面取消 2）此事已告知）此事已告知Susan 3）盡快回電盡快

26、回電 注意：注意：1 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Mrs. Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolt

27、on Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. 2008全國全國1書面表達（滿分書面表達（滿分25分）分） 假定

28、你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳蘇琳”和她的母親和她的母親“白白云云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：物園工作人員寫一封信： 自我介紹；自我介紹； 祝賀蘇琳生日；祝賀蘇琳生日； 感謝工作人員感謝工作人員； 索取蘇琳三歲生日照索取蘇琳三歲生日照。 注意：注意：1、詞數(shù)、詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

29、； 3、開頭語已為你寫好。、開頭語已為你寫好。 Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from China! Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website. Now shes going to be

30、 there. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, L

31、i Hua Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from China! Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since my childhood. In the past three years I have been paying close attention to Baiyun and her daughter Sulin who was born in America on your website. Now Sulins third birthday is approaching, and

32、Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for taking good care of them. But for you, Sulin and her mother wouldnt be living such a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could you do me a favor to send me a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very

33、much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 2007全國全國1 書面表達（滿分書面表達（滿分25分）分） 假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找到找到一位英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想一位英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：體條件包括： 1年齡；年齡； 2性別；性別； 3愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）。愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）。 注意：注意：1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連

34、貫；貫； 3開頭語已為你寫好。開頭語已為你寫好。 Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mineIn my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennisBesides, i

35、t would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some timeWith such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in commonAnd I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country

36、I look forward to hearing from you soon Best regards, Li Hua學(xué)生習(xí)作 Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor Id like to ask you to help me find a pen friend of my age, who shares the same interest with me ,such as traveling, playing football and tennis. Besides, it would be

37、better if he loves keeping pets, as I have been keeping a pet dog for 3 years. Once we become pen friends, we will be able to write to each other regularly, talking about our common interest and exchanging our experiences of traveling and keeping pets. More importantly, my English will also improve

38、in this way. Best wishes. Li Hua 2006全國全國1書面表達：書面表達： 假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求，的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。 假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求，的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。借閱規(guī)則：借閱規(guī)則：每人每次借閱每人每次借閱5 5本，借期本，借期101

39、0天。天。開館時間：開館時間：周一至周五上午周一至周五上午9 9點到下午點到下午7 7點。點。 分析近分析近8年的高考試題，可以看出高考書面表達有如年的高考試題，可以看出高考書面表達有如下特點：下特點： 1命題理念命題理念 “源于生活，高于生活源于生活，高于生活”是英語書面表達近年來始是英語書面表達近年來始終保持的主旋律。近終保持的主旋律。近8年高考書面表達題年高考書面表達題貼近學(xué)生實貼近學(xué)生實際生活，寫作話題真實，學(xué)生有話可寫際生活，寫作話題真實，學(xué)生有話可寫。書面表達。書面表達情景情景實用性實用性程度高，每一份試卷都符合學(xué)生的程度高，每一份試卷都符合學(xué)生的認知認知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷水平和日

40、常生活經(jīng)歷； 題目設(shè)計關(guān)注學(xué)生成長，注題目設(shè)計關(guān)注學(xué)生成長，注意培養(yǎng)學(xué)生良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格；意培養(yǎng)學(xué)生良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格； 另外，另外，所涉及話題關(guān)注社會，富有新時代特色，能喚起學(xué)所涉及話題關(guān)注社會，富有新時代特色，能喚起學(xué)生強烈的主人翁意識和責(zé)任感。生強烈的主人翁意識和責(zé)任感。 這種這種貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚個性、關(guān)注環(huán)境貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚個性、關(guān)注環(huán)境的的設(shè)題理念仍將是未來幾年高考書面表達的基本思路。設(shè)題理念仍將是未來幾年高考書面表達的基本思路。 2命題方式命題方式 試題設(shè)置均為試題設(shè)置均為半開放式半開放式，給考生一定提示的同，給考生一定提示的同時，也給考生提供了更

41、為寬廣的思維空間，使考生時，也給考生提供了更為寬廣的思維空間，使考生留有很大的自由發(fā)揮的余地，這樣更能全面和客觀留有很大的自由發(fā)揮的余地，這樣更能全面和客觀地考查考生的語言組織和書面表達的能力。要寫出地考查考生的語言組織和書面表達的能力。要寫出一篇好的文章，考生不僅要精煉地表達所給信息，一篇好的文章，考生不僅要精煉地表達所給信息，更加重要的是在自由發(fā)揮部分，要有自己獨到的見更加重要的是在自由發(fā)揮部分，要有自己獨到的見解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分體現(xiàn)出思維的廣解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分體現(xiàn)出思維的廣度和深度。度和深度。 3文章體裁文章體裁 主要的體裁有記敘文、應(yīng)用文、說明主要的體裁有記敘文

42、、應(yīng)用文、說明文和議論文，尤以文和議論文，尤以應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文獨占鰲頭。歷年獨占鰲頭。歷年的高考書面表達處處體現(xiàn)了新課改對高考的高考書面表達處處體現(xiàn)了新課改對高考“體現(xiàn)英語教學(xué)的體現(xiàn)英語教學(xué)的交際性、實用性和應(yīng)用交際性、實用性和應(yīng)用性性，提高考生的綜合語言運用能力，提高考生的綜合語言運用能力”的要的要求。依然沿襲以往的風(fēng)格，強調(diào)寫作的目求。依然沿襲以往的風(fēng)格，強調(diào)寫作的目的性和實用性。的性和實用性。 試題特征試題特征 提綱式作文分為短文（進來出現(xiàn)提綱式作文分為短文（進來出現(xiàn)英語短文英語短文）提）提示、要點提示和表格提示。第一種是用漢語給出一示、要點提示和表格提示。第一種是用漢語給出一段短文提示，要

43、求根據(jù)提示寫一篇段短文提示，要求根據(jù)提示寫一篇100詞左右的短詞左右的短文，所考查的形式靈活多樣，如人物介紹、地點介文，所考查的形式靈活多樣，如人物介紹、地點介紹等。第二種是要點提示，這是比較常見的一種寫紹等。第二種是要點提示，這是比較常見的一種寫作方式，此類題目用漢語提綱列舉幾個要點，提出作方式，此類題目用漢語提綱列舉幾個要點，提出寫作要求。寫作時要首先根據(jù)要點確定文章的中心寫作要求。寫作時要首先根據(jù)要點確定文章的中心思想，然后圍繞中心思想和要點展開合理和適當?shù)乃枷?，然后圍繞中心思想和要點展開合理和適當?shù)穆?lián)想。第三種是表格提示，出題人用表格的形式給聯(lián)想。第三種是表格提示，出題人用表格的形式給

44、出要點，寫作時我們首先要將表格中的要點擴展成出要點，寫作時我們首先要將表格中的要點擴展成一個個完整的句子，然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要一個個完整的句子，然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求，把這些要點連句成文。求，把這些要點連句成文。 提綱式書面表達一般都只給出提綱式書面表達一般都只給出只言片語只言片語的提示，的提示，而不是完整的表達。此時我們就必須在大腦中將而不是完整的表達。此時我們就必須在大腦中將各信息點補充完整，適時使用一些短語和句型，各信息點補充完整，適時使用一些短語和句型，以及各種從句。此時要記住，以及各種從句。此時要記住，“有話好好說，有有話好好說，有話慢慢說話慢慢說”，不要想著一蹴而就。我

45、們有這樣的，不要想著一蹴而就。我們有這樣的體驗：體驗：提綱式書面表達的寫作中，我們還沒寫幾提綱式書面表達的寫作中，我們還沒寫幾句，就感覺所有要點都已經(jīng)表達完了句，就感覺所有要點都已經(jīng)表達完了。我們需要。我們需要依據(jù)要點，緊扣要點，用自己最熟悉、最有把握依據(jù)要點，緊扣要點，用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞匯、句型，適當增加細節(jié)，擴充要點，運用的詞匯、句型，適當增加細節(jié)，擴充要點，運用合理的過渡句，短語，過渡詞，使文章連貫。最合理的過渡句，短語，過渡詞，使文章連貫。最后，加上言簡意賅的結(jié)尾。后，加上言簡意賅的結(jié)尾。最忌諱自己創(chuàng)造句子最忌諱自己創(chuàng)造句子。 注意：注意：英漢兩種語言差距很大，有時看似很難的英

46、漢兩種語言差距很大，有時看似很難的漢語譯成英語其實很簡單漢語譯成英語其實很簡單。例如：。例如： 父母之恩永難忘，含辛茹苦把兒養(yǎng)； 如今二老年歲長，兒女適時當報償。 Our gratitude should first go to our parents, for it is they who have taken great trouble to bring us up. Now they are aging, and it is time for us to take good care of them and do something for them. 戀雨卻怕繡衣濕，喜日偏向樹下倚。戀

47、雨卻怕繡衣濕，喜日偏向樹下倚。 欲風(fēng)總把綺窗關(guān)，叫奴如何心付伊。欲風(fēng)總把綺窗關(guān)，叫奴如何心付伊。 You say that you love rain, but you open your umbrella when it rains. You say that you love the sun, but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines. You say that you love the wind, but you close your windows when wind blows. This is why I am afraid; Y

48、ou say that you love me too.當今寫作教學(xué)的現(xiàn)狀當今寫作教學(xué)的現(xiàn)狀 （一孔之見）（一孔之見） 1.教師對高考考綱及考試說明研究不到位；教師對高考考綱及考試說明研究不到位； 2.對所教學(xué)生應(yīng)得分檔次定位不準，對所教學(xué)生應(yīng)得分檔次定位不準， 3.寫作教學(xué)不知從何開始，如何訓(xùn)練，仍在沿襲把寫作教學(xué)不知從何開始，如何訓(xùn)練，仍在沿襲把重點放在寫作技巧的講練上，如：練習(xí)書寫，翻譯重點放在寫作技巧的講練上，如：練習(xí)書寫，翻譯句子，如何寫出高級句式，如何使用高級詞匯，如句子，如何寫出高級句式，如何使用高級詞匯，如何使用過渡詞等等，講了很多，但學(xué)生仍然無話可何使用過渡詞等等，講了很多，

49、但學(xué)生仍然無話可說，整篇文章幾乎沒有可讀的句子。說，整篇文章幾乎沒有可讀的句子。 4.現(xiàn)行的高考提示越來越少，之所以無話可說，是現(xiàn)行的高考提示越來越少，之所以無話可說，是因為學(xué)生腦子中無素材，腦海中已有的點滴英語詞因為學(xué)生腦子中無素材，腦海中已有的點滴英語詞匯句型寫作時出現(xiàn)匯句型寫作時出現(xiàn)“打架忘把式打架忘把式”，所以書面表達，所以書面表達的訓(xùn)練重點應(yīng)放在讓學(xué)生有話可說，什么場景說什的訓(xùn)練重點應(yīng)放在讓學(xué)生有話可說，什么場景說什么話么話既話題訓(xùn)練。既話題訓(xùn)練。個人建議：僅供拍磚個人建議：僅供拍磚 1. 背誦范文，朗讀產(chǎn)生語感 2. 平時積累，詞，句，短語，句型 3.教師替學(xué)生總結(jié) 4.把近幾年的

50、高考題讓學(xué)生重寫 5.每次練習(xí)學(xué)生寫，教師也要寫 6.一定要選擇與高考類似的形式，題材，體裁，根據(jù)學(xué)生實際，不要拿來就寫 7.不僅要歸納整理學(xué)生好的句子，表達方式，更重要的是好的思路，以開闊其他學(xué)生的思維 8.分主題訓(xùn)練，分主題訓(xùn)練，A（21個話題訓(xùn)練）個話題訓(xùn)練） 1）如何預(yù)約）如何預(yù)約 2) 如何給別人提建議如何給別人提建議 3）如何征求意見，）如何征求意見， 4）如何告知開會的時間地點）如何告知開會的時間地點 5）如何對別人提出要求）如何對別人提出要求 6）如何表達空間地理位置）如何表達空間地理位置 7）如何問班容量，如何問課程設(shè)置）如何問班容量，如何問課程設(shè)置 8）如何表達感謝，如何道

51、歉）如何表達感謝，如何道歉 9）如何表達祝福祝愿）如何表達祝福祝愿 10）如何談?wù)撎鞖猓┤绾握務(wù)撎鞖?11）如何表達同意，贊成或不贊成）如何表達同意，贊成或不贊成 12）如何表達批評，不滿意，失望）如何表達批評，不滿意，失望 13）如何表達同情，滿意，遺憾）如何表達同情，滿意，遺憾 14）如何表達愿望，打算）如何表達愿望，打算 15）如何表達喜愛偏愛，優(yōu)先選擇）如何表達喜愛偏愛，優(yōu)先選擇 16）如何表達邀請，聘請）如何表達邀請，聘請 17）如何表達勸告，提醒注意）如何表達勸告，提醒注意 18. 如何描述人物性格特征如何描述人物性格特征 19）如何號召人們行動起來做某事）如何號召人們行動起來做某

52、事 20）熱門話題）熱門話題1： 學(xué)校生活學(xué)校生活 21）熱門話題）熱門話題2：環(huán)境保護：環(huán)境保護 一一,如何表達預(yù)約：如何表達預(yù)約： 1.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. 2.I have no classes on Saturday afternoon. Are you available/free then? (will it be convenient to you then?) 3.May I make an a

53、ppointment for sometime early this afternoon? 4.Could we make it Friday afternoon? 5. Can we meet sometime next week? Ill be free after the exam. 二，如何給別人提建議 1. It is important/ necesary for you to take a Chinese learning course. 2. It is also a good idea to learn to sing Chinese songs. 3. Making fri

54、ends with Chinese is very helpful to you. 4.You may as well turn to your teacher for help. 5.You should/are supposed to/ought to travel by bike or on foot. 6. I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals. 7.We should be given more good advice on how to memorize n

55、ew words. 8.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. 9.To change the situation, I will give the following advice. 10. In my opinion, youd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with them after class. 11. Sharing happiness and sadness with them is also very important. 12.

56、And I also think its better for you to take part in all kinds of activities with your classmates, such as birthday parties. 13.Here I d like to put forward some suggestions. To students, it is important for them to choose what interests and suits them. To the school, we would appreciate it if our te

57、achers could assign less homework so that we can have more time to take part in after-class activities. In Addition, I suggest an English corner be set up to make sure that English lovers can have more chances to practice speaking English. 14. Here are my suggestions on how to solve this problem. 15

58、. I think it is very important to keep a balanced diet in our daily life. For example, eating enough vegetables and fruit every day is a good idea. Whats more, doing sports at least one hour a day plays a very important role in helping you lose weight as well. 16. Spending too much time playing onli

59、ne games is not only a waste of time, but also a damage to your health. I think youd better quit it as soon as possible. You can develop other good habits, such as reading or stamp collecting. You love sports. Why not join some sports club? There are so many ways for you to enrich your life. What do

60、 you think about my suggestions? 三，如何征求意見 1. Ill be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements. 2. Could you give me some advice on? 3.How do you like your new English teacher? 4. What do you think of our plan? 5. I wonder how you find our arrangements? 6. Could you make som