Festival 課件

1、濱城六中 張瑩Christmas dinnerSanta ClausstockingsDec.25th Christmas Skim and compare the letters. Which letter do you think is the better? (你認(rèn)為這兩封信你認(rèn)為這兩封信哪封更好？你可以從信的哪封更好？你可以從信的篇章篇章層次層次、段落結(jié)構(gòu)段落結(jié)構(gòu)及及遣詞造句遣詞造句等方面等方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。)Tom a middle school studentJerry a primary school student Advantage 1(優(yōu)點(diǎn)一)文章架構(gòu)層次美Para.

2、2Para.1Para.3Dear Mary,Christmas is a popular festival in U.S. It is celebrated on Dec.25th.Its really a busy and exciting festival. Usually my parents go shopping and get lots of food ready before Christmas. We decorate the Christmas tree with colorful lights and red cards. The most exciting part i

3、s Christmas Eve. The whole family get together, singing and dancing around the Christmas tree. For Christmas dinner, we enjoy the most delicious food, such as Christmas pudding, turkey, fruit, dessert, roast suckling pig and so on. An amazing thing is that my daddy puts a red apple in the mouth of t

4、he roast suckling pig. Do you know why? Its just a decoration. We cant wait the coming morning because we are eager to know what our gifts are-gifts are usually put in stockings by Santa Claus.I love Christmas not only because of the food and gifts. Whats more, it means that I can spend time with my

5、 family and share the happy moment. Tell me something about Spring Festival in your country. Tom Advantage 2(優(yōu)點(diǎn)二)段落結(jié)構(gòu)條理化Para.2topic sentence 中心句supporting sentences 支撐句Its really a busy and exciting festival. Usually my parents go shopping and get lots of food ready before Christmas. We decorate the

6、 Christmas tree with colorful lights and red cards. The most exciting part is Christmas Eve. The whole family get together, singing and dancing around the Christmas tree. For Christmas dinner, we enjoy the most delicious food, such as Christmas pudding, turkey, fruit, dessert, roast suckling pig and

7、 so on. An amazing thing is that my daddy puts a red apple in the mouth of the roast suckling pig. Do you know why? Its just a decoration. We cant wait the coming morning because we are eager to know what our gifts are-gifts are usually put in stockings by Santa Claus. Advantage 3 (優(yōu)點(diǎn)三 )語(yǔ)句構(gòu)成豐富性Chris

8、tmas is a festival in U.S. - Jerry Christmas is a popular festival in U.S. - TomFor Christmas dinner, we have a lot to eat. - JerryFor Christmas dinner, we enjoy the most delicious food,such as Christmas pudding, turkey, fruit, dessert, roastsuckling pig and so on. - TomWe cant wait the coming morni

9、ng because we are eager to know what our gifts are. - Tom形容詞及關(guān)聯(lián)詞等的使用會(huì)使語(yǔ)句信息更加豐富，語(yǔ)句銜接更加自然 Whats the biggest festival in our country?Write a letter to Tom or Jerry for me.Spring Festivalmeaning activitiesfooddateWhen is Spring Festival?Spring Festival is the biggest festival that iscelebrated on the fi

10、rst day of the first lunar month.on January 1st of Chinese calendar. Spring Festival is a busy festival.What do your family do before Spring Festival?clean the housedecorate the house withstick coupletsgo shoppingOn New Years Eve, _.What do you do on New Years Eve?watch spring gala have family reuni

11、on dinner stay up all night What do we have for family reunion dinner? For family reunion dinner on New Year Eve, we enjoy the most delicious food, such as _and so on. On the first day of the Chinese New Year, I am the happiest in the world because _.Are you the happiest on the first day of Spring F

12、estival? What does Spring Festival mean to you? 春節(jié)對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)意味著什么？Spring Festival means that I have a long holiday.Spring Festival means _.What is the true meaning of Spring Festival? (春節(jié)的真正內(nèi)涵是什么？) Spring Festival means being together with our family. Spring Festival carries our love towards people around

13、 us. Spring Festival shows our hope towards new life.Groupwork: Introduce Spring Festival . (小組活動(dòng)，介紹春節(jié)小組活動(dòng)，介紹春節(jié)。)meaningactivitiesfooddateFor family reunion dinner, we enjoy a lot of delicious food, such as_.Spring Festival means that _. Spring Festival is a festival that is celebrated on_. Spring F

14、estivalBefore Spring Festival, _;On New Years Eve, _;On the first day of Spring Festival, I am the happiest because_Write a letter to Tom or Jerry and tell him something about Spring Festival in China. Dont forget their identities. Dear _, Spring Festival is_ Its really a busy and exciting festival ._ Mary評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目分值分值得分得分書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔 3文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理，有層次文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理，有層次 3無(wú)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤無(wú)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤 4語(yǔ)句準(zhǔn)確，通順，語(yǔ)句間過(guò)渡自然語(yǔ)句準(zhǔn)確，通順，語(yǔ)句間過(guò)渡自然 4主要語(yǔ)段有中心句主要語(yǔ)段有中心句 1習(xí)作互改評(píng)價(jià)表習(xí)作