英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)“修改檢查”有效途徑

1、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)“修改檢查”有效途徑英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)往往要經(jīng)過(guò)認(rèn)真審題、擬出表達(dá)要點(diǎn)、根據(jù) 要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成文、修改檢查這幾個(gè)步驟才能完成。而修改檢查 是寫好一篇文章、提高表達(dá)質(zhì)量、取得高分的關(guān)鍵。那么， 在書面表達(dá)時(shí)，我們?nèi)绾芜M(jìn)行修改檢查呢？一、修改在書面表達(dá)中，對(duì)一篇文章的修改，我們應(yīng)注意以下幾 個(gè)方面。1恰當(dāng)使用同義詞或近義詞，避免因詞語(yǔ)的重復(fù)使用而 造成的文章表達(dá)的單一性請(qǐng)看下面一段描寫與他人聯(lián)系方式及接受新聞信息的 今昔對(duì)比文字：over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life take my

2、family for example my parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we get in touch with them by telephone at home and once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, now we watched the news and other programs on tv instead.以上一小段文字中，在表達(dá)“聯(lián)系”時(shí)用了 con

3、tact與get in touch with、 “過(guò)去” 用了 in the past 與 once、“但是”用了 but與instead,從而避免了單詞的前后重復(fù) 使用，使得句子的表達(dá)靈活多變，且無(wú)煩瑣之感。2.適當(dāng)增加修飾語(yǔ)句，使得句子的表達(dá)有血有肉，更加 豐滿，避免句子表達(dá)的枯燥、干癟請(qǐng)看下面一組描寫住房條件的今昔對(duì)比的句子：(1) about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room, but now we have moved into a large house.(2) when they got married abou

4、t twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a large new three-room apartment比較之下，第(2)句無(wú)論在句子結(jié)構(gòu)上，還是在語(yǔ)句 的修飾方面，顯然比第(1)句更自如、更有文采。3刪除冗余詞語(yǔ)，使句子顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔、利落有些考生在進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)時(shí)，擔(dān)心文章的詞數(shù)不足，便 刻意在句中增加一些修飾成分。這樣，反而適得其反，會(huì)大 大影響文章的表達(dá)效果。體會(huì)一下下面的一段文字，看看刪 除了括號(hào)中的詞語(yǔ)以后，是否給人一種要

5、言不煩、簡(jiǎn)潔流暢 的感覺呢？when they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room (and it was ) crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a large new three-room apartment (in a new building) .in short, changes (tha t have taken place) in our life i nt he pas t twenty years have b

6、rought us comfort and convenienee.4. 適當(dāng)轉(zhuǎn)換句式，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)長(zhǎng)短交錯(cuò)，生動(dòng)活潑 例如：(1) mike doesn， t like swimming in summer, and his biother doesn" t like swimming, either.可轉(zhuǎn)換成：mike doesn' t like swimming in summer, and neither does his brother(倒裝句)(2) we should do some thing to preve nt such a mis take from b

7、eing made again.可轉(zhuǎn)換成：some thing should be done to preve nt such a mistake from being made again.(被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu))以上兩句通過(guò)轉(zhuǎn)換，意義沒變，但表達(dá)效果大不相同。5. 盡量運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或句式，來(lái)增加文章表達(dá)文采，提 高文章得分檔次高級(jí)詞匯的選擇主要體現(xiàn)在用高中所學(xué)詞匯來(lái)代替初 中所學(xué)詞匯，用書面語(yǔ)詞匯來(lái)代替口語(yǔ)詞匯，并能運(yùn)用課本 外所掌握詞匯來(lái)代替課本中所學(xué)詞匯。高級(jí)句式主要是指分 詞、定語(yǔ)從句、介詞短語(yǔ)、省略句、修飾性狀語(yǔ)等。請(qǐng)?bào)w會(huì) 一下下面幾個(gè)句子中的劃線部分被句后括號(hào)中的詞匯或句 式替代后的效果。例如：(1) i m wr iting to t ell you some thing abo ut a f la t for you. (inform you of )(2) the bathroom and the kitchen are very good. (well furnished)(3) the flat has an area of 25 square meters and has a bedroom, a bathroom and a k