英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)30篇-附答案

1、改錯(cuò)一I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doi

2、ng her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbours house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改錯(cuò)二I wen

3、t to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country.A

4、lthough I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改錯(cuò)三Dear Ralph, I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fa

5、llen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstto express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letterhe said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I teleph

6、oned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up? 改錯(cuò)四Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. Id like to your penfriend,

7、 and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on

8、 my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 推薦精選改錯(cuò)五Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents whi

9、ch were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an el

10、ectronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改錯(cuò)六Dear Li Ming, I have received your letter yesterday. Dont worry about you. Im getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is t

11、hat you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our da

12、ily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改錯(cuò)七Dear Sally,Now Id like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. Ive realized what hard my parents work to

13、support for the family. I was used to ask them for money, but now Ill never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. Ive learnt how to get along well with other. Whats more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something cant be learnt from textbooks. In the word, I had

14、 a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.改錯(cuò)八Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them liv

15、e happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.No. 9I went to the

16、 Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the pa

17、st few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English推薦精選No.10My classmate except me were in high spi

18、rits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasnt able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustb

19、in without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, youll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.No. 11Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should stu

20、dy by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer

21、 in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others. No. 12Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It use

22、d to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. Whats bad, the gre

23、at noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description. No. 13Now Id like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for

24、 our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our goo

25、d congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.No. 14In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their

26、families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should

27、 pay attention for the education of the children.推薦精選No. 15It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. Its reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Coun

28、tless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. Well have a voluntary contribution this week. Lets give away our pockets mon

29、ey.No. 16The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you w

30、ill find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On its east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.No. 17One morning, Mrs. Smiths dog was

31、hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butchers.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did

32、 so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!No. 18Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a

33、 bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his seco

34、nd son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”-the very mark on it.No. 19One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat t

35、he animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that Id like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can d

36、o what I like with what was mine.”推薦精選No. 20An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldnt go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for hi

37、m. Out of its expectation, the dog didnt even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?No. 21Show respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional mora

38、l value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Dos” have worked out for the stu

39、dents to follow clearly and easily. They includ: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully. No. 22Welcome to Holl

40、and! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. Im glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. Im sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You wont be able to stop taking photograph! We have many beautiful towns. I suggest you star

41、t by taking a boats trip on the Canals. Its a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You dont have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.No. 23This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man

42、 with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment?”

43、 “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you arent. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”No. 24I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates,

44、 I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachersdesk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didnt do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kin

45、ds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to. No. 25When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened that

46、 there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived for many years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countri

47、es there much tea and coffee are drunk.推薦精選No. 26My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldnt understand the bus routes, bu

48、t my wife didnt like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.No. 27One day I happe

49、ned to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would

50、 spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely. No. 28The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers aroun

51、d the world. Once youre connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You dont need know how the Internet works in order to

52、use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge !No. 29Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his

53、 classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his

54、students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.No. 30Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no ch

55、ild. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesnt care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and on her bed the doctor found a letter, in w

56、hich he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.推薦精選答案：改錯(cuò)一：who's 改為whose2.正確3.去掉but4.on改為in5.parents后加were6.homeworks改為homework7.stopped后加to8.find改為found9.immediate改為immediately10.fire前加t

57、he改錯(cuò)二： the改為a2.正確3.see前加to4.go改為going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8. 去掉had9.on改為at10.him改為her改錯(cuò)三：1.getting 后加on或along2.fallen改為been3.shy前加a4.feeling改為feelings 當(dāng)情感講時(shí)feeling常用單數(shù)5.study前加to或study改為studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改為watch9正確10.and改為or改錯(cuò)四：1. learn 改為 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 刪去more。

58、第一次告訴 Bob 關(guān)于自己的一些事情， 此處用 more 不合邏輯。 4. where 改為 which。在此非限定性定語(yǔ)從句中， 關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)， 故用 which。 5. 此行無(wú)錯(cuò)。 6. subject 改為 subjects。quits a few 意為“相當(dāng)多”， 修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。 7. use 改為 used。據(jù)下文 but now 可知， 此處應(yīng)用used to do 表示“過(guò)去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改為 interested。be interested in為固定短語(yǔ)， “對(duì)感興趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句無(wú)謂語(yǔ)。 10. hear 改為 h