英文寫作之裸奔法TMSTREEC$

1、英文寫作之裸奔法tm streec $主體段分論點(diǎn)提煉方法一裸奔法tm streec $這個(gè)三個(gè)符號(hào)可以幫助我們快速記憶以下九組共18個(gè)英文單詞。請(qǐng)各位同學(xué)先把下面每一 行詞匯的第一個(gè)單詞看一遍，每行的第二個(gè)詞先不看：tech no logy&efficiencymind&soulsociety&crimetime&spacerights&responsibilitiesenvironment &healthemployment &competitionculture&populationmoney&fun你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，每行的

2、第一個(gè)單詞首字母拼在一起，就是tm streec $這三個(gè)符號(hào)。把三個(gè)符 號(hào)多寫幾遍，同時(shí)回憶對(duì)應(yīng)的9個(gè)單詞，幾次下來(lái)，每行的第一個(gè)詞就記住了。再看每行第二個(gè)詞，它們和每行的第-個(gè)詞都有嚴(yán)格的邏輯對(duì)應(yīng)關(guān)系，這樣記憶起來(lái)很快。 請(qǐng)看：科技提高效率頭腦對(duì)應(yīng)精神社會(huì)犯罪嚴(yán)重時(shí)間對(duì)應(yīng)空間權(quán)利對(duì)應(yīng)義務(wù)環(huán)境影響健康就業(yè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈文化人口創(chuàng)造金錢買到樂(lè)趣這樣我們通過(guò)tm streec $這三個(gè)符號(hào)就記住了這幾個(gè)詞。在考場(chǎng)里再緊張，有了這些提 示也不會(huì)忘了。運(yùn)用第一題：many people are optimistic about the 21th century and see it as an oppor

3、tunity to make positive changes to the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? what change would you like to be made in the new century?分析：這道題就是問(wèn)我們21世紀(jì)利大于弊還是弊大于利。那么，21世紀(jì)的利弊各有哪些呢？立即用裸奔法分析。21世紀(jì)在technology, efficiency, rights, money, fun等方面明顯取得了積極的進(jìn)展；而21世紀(jì)在soul, crime, envir

4、onment, competition, population等方面明顯存在令人擔(dān)憂的狀 況。素材確定，分析完畢。如此大的一個(gè)話題，立即被“裸奔法”具體化了。第二題：some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken int

5、o account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（劍 7 teat2）分析：這是劍7第二套的作文題，難度相當(dāng)大。那么到底是該對(duì)犯罪分子給予固定的量刑還 是應(yīng)該有靈活度，充分考慮罪犯的處境和犯罪動(dòng)機(jī)來(lái)決定量刑呢？這個(gè)問(wèn)題即使在法律界也 存在爭(zhēng)議，否則也不會(huì)出現(xiàn)西方媒體對(duì)海地地震中的難民哄搶食品事件“判還是不判''的爭(zhēng)議 to那么在時(shí)間和心理都極為緊張的考場(chǎng)條件下應(yīng)該如何決斷呢？固定量刑的好處可以有：efficiency （提高司法效率），cr

6、ime （有效控制犯罪），money （減少司法過(guò)程的費(fèi)用）等。量刑過(guò)程中充分考慮罪犯處境和犯罪動(dòng)機(jī)的好處則可以有：soul （更人道），society （有利于社會(huì)和諧）,rights （罪犯也是公民,公民有權(quán)得到尊重）等。不管正著說(shuō)還是反著說(shuō)都很輕松。第三題：as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. what factors contribute to job satisfac

7、tion? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction of all workers?(劍 7 test 3)分析：第一個(gè)問(wèn)題問(wèn)的是有哪些因素會(huì)影響員工的工作滿意度呢？第二個(gè)問(wèn)題的本質(zhì)是問(wèn)從 現(xiàn)實(shí)情況說(shuō)雇主可以在哪些方面提高員工的滿意度？?jī)蓚€(gè)問(wèn)題可以分別在兩個(gè)主體段里冋 答，而且劍7中的考官范文也確實(shí)這樣寫的。影響員工滿意度的因素可以從 efficiency, soul （例如 stress）, rights, environment, health, competition, money等很多方面里選擇2-3個(gè)來(lái)論述。而雇主可以為

8、改善員工滿意度所做的事則可以通過(guò)money, space, fun, culture （比如企業(yè) 文化corporate culture）等方面瞬間搞定。練習(xí)1 填空technology&& soul& crimetime&& responsibilitiesenvironment &employment &culture& population& fun分析請(qǐng)用tm streec $法快速思考出下面兩題的主體段各自的分論點(diǎn)，并用英文簡(jiǎn)要表述出來(lái)。some people think students should focu

9、s on few subjects while others think they should study a wide range of subjects. discuss:efficiency focusing on certain subjects allows them to better concentrate on the specialized knowledge, which enhances their efficiency in study.mind focusing on specific subjects enables them to grasp these subjects bette匚mind -studying on a wide range of subjects gives students the opportunity to expand their outlook（開 i闊 眼界）.employment understanding a wide range of subjects helps students to fi