2020年中考英語作文專項訓練

1、中考英語作文專項訓練一、考點分析：在中考中，寫作占20 分，分值所占比例大，而寫作考察學生的英文綜合運用能力，因此非常關(guān)鍵?！?中考英語作文的評分標準】比較為學生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4 ”結(jié)構(gòu)，即：（一）內(nèi)容：7-8 分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。5-6 分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達基本清楚、但不夠完整。2-4 分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達不夠清楚、有些離題。0-1 分：文不對題，表達不清。（二）語言：詞數(shù)：每少5個字扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句不給分。拼寫：每錯扣0.5分，同一錯誤不重復計數(shù)。語法：同標點符號、大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分

2、總和不超過 1分。（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容充實、上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語者，可給3-4 分。內(nèi)容充實、不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無或少見語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語者，可給2 分。一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言累計得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。內(nèi)容和語言在15 分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表達，可酌情考慮給1 分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。通篇句型、句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。二、寫作中常見問題：內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達能力不強，表達生硬

3、呆板，甚至中式英語翻譯思維。議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，把議論當成的作文的重點，常常跑題。句式單一，都是簡單句，缺少復合句。結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，思維跳躍，文章缺乏條理性。連詞的使用較少，并且使用單一，句子之間的連接很生硬。文章平淡，無亮點短語和句型，連接詞等。三、寫作技巧分析：【 高分作文的必備元素】1. 書寫 工整， 書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。2. 不出現(xiàn)語法，拼寫，標點，大小寫等錯誤。3. 文章字數(shù)最好控制在80-100 字 之間，切記過長或者過短，8-10 句即可。4. 要點齊全。為了避免遺漏要點，可以將題目中給出的要點標注出來。5. 開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。6. 連接詞

4、使用恰當，不重復，上下文有連貫性，使之自然成一體。7. 應(yīng)用詞匯: 高級詞匯的合理使用、同義詞的變化使用、短語的恰當使用。8. 多用亮點短語，并且使短語多樣性，盡可能使用多種表達方式。比如：同一個意思幫助”，假如你就用一個動詞“help,”顯得詞匯貧乏。如果能在作文中不斷地變換方式，用help、 give sb. a hand、 do sb. a favor、 be in need of 等以表達“幫助 ”，表達更靈活生動。9. 句式多樣性，可適當使用陳述句，疑問句，祈使句及感嘆句，強調(diào)句，倒裝句，定語從句，狀語從句，賓語從句等。10. 能夠恰當使用諺語、格言、名言等給文章添彩。11. 語法結(jié)

5、構(gòu)多樣性,主動被動交叉用，原級比較級靈活用，非謂語動詞恰當用。12. 靈活使用萬能句型，增添文章亮點。四、中考經(jīng)典范文解讀：VII. Writing （ 作文 ） （共 20 分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic“ I want to invent ”（以 “我想要發(fā)明 ”為題，寫一篇不少于 60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）（注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。 ）The following is for reference only. （ 以下表達僅供參考）? It can be u

6、sed to ? It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to范文精選一及點評：I want to invent a flying carIt is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can dr

7、ive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What smore, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the prob

8、lems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource.Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.精彩亮點分析：亮點一：高分短語亮點二： it is a must 活用高頻詞亮點三：定語從句描述自己設(shè)計的汽車亮點四：高分短語亮點五：be of great use名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端亮點六：被動語態(tài)，豐富句式亮

9、點七： turn a new leaf of future life 翻開未來生活的新篇章 范文精選二及點評：I want to invent a time machineAs a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history andthe future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That s why if I cainv

10、entor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will bevisiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education.Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try di

11、fferent ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out. 精彩亮點分析：亮點一：定語從句修飾對學生現(xiàn)在的生活亮點二：用wou

12、ld rather than 表達學生的意愿 亮點三：用if 條件狀語從句表達主題亮點四：be famous for因而著名亮點五：not only but as w但 而且亮點六：用動名詞詞組做主語亮點七：用idiom 突出歷史的重要性亮點八：定語從句表達學生的期待 范文精選三及點評：I Want To Invent A Family Doctor RobotI want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far

13、as I m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations.Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients,

14、not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.精彩亮點分析：亮點一 ：全文巧用“ first, furthermore, in short 等連接詞，把家庭機器人醫(yī)生的好處寫的非常清晰，讓閱卷老

15、”師一目了然。亮點二：全文采用了定語從句、狀語從句、并列句等多種長難句，為文采分增色不少。亮點三：文中出現(xiàn)了“ extremely, make contribution to 這些超綱單詞及詞組，恰到好處地強調(diào)了家庭機器人醫(yī) ”生的重要性，且為文采再次進行潤色。VII. Writing （ 作文）（共20分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic" I以 m港施好了（”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標題符號不占格）你對明天一定有著美好的憧憬，為此，你已經(jīng)做好了哪方面的準？請結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷或特長等，選取一個角度具體談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫鰷蕚涞?。（注?/p>

16、：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）The following is for reference only.（ 以下內(nèi)容及供參考）Independentbe good at.Responsibletake part in.Hardworking it helps me to.范文精選一及點評：I'MREADYSummer holiday is coming, all my classmates are preparing to have a wonderful holiday, including me. I am ready to go to Bei Da

17、ihe, the seaside holiday resort, for swimming and having a good time on the seaside. I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery but also breathe the fresh air. It looks good, isn't it?Before I go to the seaside, I think it's important to take something useful with me such as sunglasses,

18、 bathing suit, suntan oil and my homework and so on. Well, the last I want to carry is some medicine, which can keep me safe.After that I shouldIn conclusion, I do 精彩 亮點一：非 亮點二：同謂語的 亮 點 三 ： not only 亮點四： 亮點五plan where believe I 亮謂語動恰當使用，I stay, play can do it 點 詞 including 說明目的地but also 表達度假不僅可以欣貴用反

19、義疑問句運用定語從句，and how to get there. perfectly and enjoy myself.析的巧妙使用一個海濱度假圣地景還可以呼吸新鮮空氣。加強語氣。修 飾 medicine 。亮點六：巧妙使用“do這個詞，加強語言表達力度。范文精選二及點評：I'MREADYAre you a person who always likes to get ready for everything? Do you often make a full preparation for something before doing? I am such a guy due to

20、an unforgettable experience.I still remember it was a final exam, I had been playing all day before it, believing that I am clever enough to get a high score, however, the result was very awful. From then on, I know if you want to succeed, the most importantthingistogetreadyforit.Therefore, during t

21、he last whole year, I devote all my time to reviewing my lessons. The only reason is that I knowthere isn ' taluckydogintheworld,and ontheway tosuccess, hardworking is thekey.精亮點一鳧 點 二：彩過: 4去完走成亮 問 進句行時點開的使頭用使文分析引發(fā)閱讀興章意思表達的更清:趣晰鳧 點 三:分詞做伴隨 狀語使 文 章 檔 次 提升亮 點 四鳧點鳧點鳧點七:五:be+adj.+enough:條件六：devoteon

22、e' sto狀不timedosth.語定(in)to 足 夠 做 某從句的使式做表把奉獻 給事 用 語亮點八：表語從句的使用五、連接詞匯總：1. 表起始：first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as 等2. 表時間：first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the nex

23、t moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally 等3. 表空間：on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of on the other side of ，at the f(middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of 等4. 表因果:for, because of, one reason is that another reason is that,sinc e,asu a s ahereuoreo f),soas a result 等

24、5 .表轉(zhuǎn)折:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, instead of, unlike,although,after all等6 .表歹U舉:for example, such as, like, in other words, and so on 等7 .表推進:what ' s morfejrthermore ,on one hand on the otherhand, inaddition to, aswell, still, also, in otherwords, not only but also ，besides,m

25、oreover 8 . 表總結(jié)：genera111y speaking,in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all 等9 .表示目的： for this purpose , for this reason , so that, in order that, so as to, in order to10 .表示讓步： although , though , even though/if, no matter wh 六、從句在寫作中的使用(It is)- =needless to say (that)1 .不用說 It goes witho

26、ut saying that=It is obvious that例：不用說早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2 .在各種之中， Among various kinds of , /= Of all the , 例：在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.3 .就我的看法 ；我認為In my opinion, =To my mind,=As far as I am concerned, =I

27、am ofthe opinion that 例： In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打電動玩具既花費時間也有害健康。4 .隨著人口 的增加 With the increase/growth ofthe population,隨著科技的進步 Withthe advance of science and technology, 例： With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lo

28、t of social problems have come to pass. 隨著臺灣經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。5 . 是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that是適當?shù)?It is proper (for sb.) to do / that 是緊急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that 例： It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.I

29、t is proper that we ( should) keep the public places clean.我們應(yīng)當保持公共場所清潔。6 .花費 spend on sth. / doing sth.例：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.7 . how 引導的感嘆句例：那至少可以證明你很誠實。At least it will prove how honest you are.8 . 狀語從句A)如果你不,你就會 Ifyo

30、udon't ，you'll 例：Ifyou don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。B)如此,以至于 sothat 例： At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.當時，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。C)每當我聽到 我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear Icannotbut feel excited.每當我做我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I do ； I cannot but

31、 feel sad.每當我想到 我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous.每當我遭遇 我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with I cannot but feel frightened.每當我看到 我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see I cannot but feel surprised.例： Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of th

32、e clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。9 . 賓語從句我認為， / 我認為不 I think / I don't think that我想知道是否 I wonder whether 例： He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.他認為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。10 . Since + S + 過去式，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。例： Since he went to senior high school, he has worked