寫好主題句公開課 (2)

1、Have a quiz 1、我遲到的原因是沒趕上公共汽車。、我遲到的原因是沒趕上公共汽車。 2、讀完這篇文章的那一刻，我陷入了沉思。、讀完這篇文章的那一刻，我陷入了沉思。 3、我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的經(jīng)歷。、我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的經(jīng)歷。 4、我們必須刻不容緩采取有效措施。、我們必須刻不容緩采取有效措施。 5、讓我印象最深刻的是、讓我印象最深刻的是.1、The reason why I was late is that I missed the bus.2、After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.3、It occurred to

2、 me that my friend had a similar experience.4、Effective measures should be taken without delay.5、 What impressed me most is that2013年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容 1. 以約以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。 2. 以約以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓ζ椒补ぷ鞯南雮€詞談?wù)勀銓ζ椒补ぷ鞯南敕?，法?內(nèi)容包括內(nèi)容包括 （1）描述清潔工工作的艱辛；）描述清潔工工作的艱辛； （2）假如沒有清潔工，環(huán)境會變得）假如沒有清潔工，環(huán)境會變得如何？如何？ （3）你對平

3、凡的工作的看法）你對平凡的工作的看法 There is no denying that the cleaners are the most ordinary workers who are confronted with numerous hardships. On one hand, they must get up earlier every day to clean the street while we are still in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respec

4、t and lower pay, working all day on the street . It is the cleaners who sweep the floors or streets in spite of the chilly wind or the heavy rain. Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in. Undoubtedly, the streets would be full of disgusting rubbish with rats or flies here and th

5、ere. Whats worse, diseases would spread at a very quick speed without the cleaners hard work. It is not until then that people will realize that cleaners play an important role in our daily life. When it comes to the ordinary jobs, opinions vary from person to person. From my point of view, ordinary

6、 jobs are anything but ordinary in contemporary society. For one thing, these jobs contribute to the development of our society. For another, these jobs, which are worth our enthusiasm and respect, also provide a chance for us to realize our value or fulfill our dream. Only when every one of us is a

7、ware of the importance of these ordinary jobs can we build up a more harmonious and beautiful society. There is no denying/doubt that the cleaners are the most ordinary workers who are confronted with numerous hardships. On one hand, they must get up earlier every day to clean the street while we ar

8、e still in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street . It is the cleaners who sweep the floors or streets in spite of the chilly wind or the heavy rain. Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live. Undo

9、ubtedly, the streets would be full of disgusting rubbish with rats or flies here and there. Whats worse, diseases would spread at a very quick speed without the cleaners hard work. It is not until then that people will realize that cleaners play an important role in our daily life. When it comes to

10、the ordinary jobs, opinions vary from person to person. From my point of view, ordinary jobs are anything but ordinary in contemporary society. For one thing, these jobs contribute to the development of our society. For another, these jobs, which are worth our enthusiasm and respect, also provide a

11、chance for us to realize our value or fulfill our dream. Only when every one of us is aware of the importance of these ordinary jobs can we build up a more harmonious and beautiful society.(要點要點1主題句主題句)(要點要點2主題句主題句)(要點要點3主題句主題句)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求讀寫任務(wù)寫作（讀寫任務(wù)寫作（25分）分）概括（概括（5 5分）概括全面，表述清晰分）概括全面，表述清晰寫作內(nèi)

12、容（寫作內(nèi)容（20分）分）:主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富 五年來的寫作內(nèi)容五年來的寫作內(nèi)容2都是三個要點都是三個要點, 三個三個要點最好依次用三個段落來寫要點最好依次用三個段落來寫, 每個段落前每個段落前最好用一個主題句最好用一個主題句, 這樣做既不會漏掉要點這樣做既不會漏掉要點, 又層次清楚又層次清楚, 能讓閱卷老師一目了然能讓閱卷老師一目了然如何如何寫好寫好主題主題句？句？2.總述原因總述原因 1.假設(shè)處境假設(shè)處境3. 引出建議、原因、引出建議、原因、 方法、措施、步驟等方法、措施、步驟等4.引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 . . 假設(shè)處境假設(shè)處境 If I were an animal in

13、the wildlife park, I would feel unhappy when people keep taking photos with me.(然后說明理由然后說明理由) Model: 假如你處在那些動物的處境假如你處在那些動物的處境,你會有什么反應(yīng)？你會有什么反應(yīng)？ 模式模式1 1主題句的四種模式主題句的四種模式 及鞏固練習(xí)及鞏固練習(xí) topic sentence：假如我是野生動物園離里的動：假如我是野生動物園離里的動物物，當(dāng)當(dāng)游客游客一直一直與我拍照，與我拍照， 我會不開心我會不開心。（2009廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點2）句型提示句型提示1、If I wer

14、e a, I would2、If I had a chance to do, I would即學(xué)即練即學(xué)即練 11.假如你是那個讓座的男孩，面對那位老人的行假如你是那個讓座的男孩，面對那位老人的行為你會怎么做？（為你會怎么做？（15年江門一模讀寫任務(wù)要點年江門一模讀寫任務(wù)要點2） If I were the boy, I would not choose to escape quickly when faced with the rudeness of the old man. (subjunctive mood) 總述原因總述原因 The reasons can be listed as f

15、ollows The reason why+句子句子 is that+句子句子 When it comes to why+句子，句子，I can list a few reasons as follows. To begin withBesides Last but not least模式模式2 2. . topic sentence:人們在參觀動物園時喜歡和動物拍人們在參觀動物園時喜歡和動物拍照的原因是照的原因是.The reason why zoo-visitors love to take photos with animals when they visit zoos or wildl

16、ife parks is that they just want to show their great love and interest in animals.句型提示句型提示 Model: 人們?nèi)藗冊趨⒂^動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照？在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照？ （09高考讀寫任務(wù)）高考讀寫任務(wù)） _.即學(xué)即練即學(xué)即練 2 Model: 我們我們?yōu)槭裁匆袷匾?guī)則？為什么要遵守規(guī)則？ The reasons why we should obey the rules can be listed as follows. To begin with, Besides,.Last but

17、not the least,引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 常用句型：常用句型： It reminds me of my own experience when After reading the story, I cant help remembering It occurred to me that my friend had a similar experience. One of my friends experiences is a convincing example. I still remember the day when用來引出記敘文的具體用來引出記敘文的具體事例。事例。模式模式3 3.

18、 .The story reminds me of my similar experience ofbeing homesick. Model: 講述一次你（或你朋友）想家的經(jīng)歷。（講述一次你（或你朋友）想家的經(jīng)歷。（11年高考）年高考） It reminds me of my similar experience of being forgiven by a friend. 即學(xué)即練即學(xué)即練 3 Take my personal experience of learning English as an example. Model: 敘述一次你寬恕他人或被寬恕的經(jīng)歷。敘述一次你寬恕他人或被寬

19、恕的經(jīng)歷。 Model: 敘述你學(xué)英語的經(jīng)歷。敘述你學(xué)英語的經(jīng)歷。常用句型：常用句型： We should take some effective measures/ take immediate action to solve the problem. It is necessary that proper action should be taken to end the phenomenon. I would like to share some advice/suggestions on+名名詞或短語詞或短語引出引出措施措施、方法、方法、步驟步驟、建議建議等等模式模式4 4. .My parents often adopt some effective ways to encourage me to study hard. Model: 你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵你學(xué)習(xí)你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵你學(xué)習(xí)的？的？ As far as I am concerned, the government should take action to solve the housing problem. 即學(xué)即練即學(xué)即練 4Luckily, more and more measures are being taken to protect the environment. M