BEC高級寫作常用

1、BEC高級寫作常用模板、句型總結(jié)1. Iamdelighted/glad/happytoannouncethat/notifyyouthat/informyouthat/tellyouthat/letyouknowthatformaltoinformal宣布好消息2. Pleasebeinformed/beadvisedthat/notethat/formaltoinformal但消息的類型比較中性3. Weareafraidthat/Wearesorrytoinformyou/Weregrettoinformyou宣布壞消息Allstaffwithcompanyarewelcomed。(wi

2、thcompany比withpartner更正式)Theprogrammesavailablearegiven/shownbelow:Athree-coursedinner,dance,andraffle.1. pleasedo./Iwouldlikeyoutodo上司對下屬2. would/couldyoupleasedo3. doyouthinkyoucouldpossiblydo2.3一般客氣4.wewould(greatly)appreciateitifyou5 .wewouldbeverythankful（grateful）ifyouDearBarry:Iamsorrytotelly

3、outhatIcouldntattendtomorrowsmeetingasscheduledduetoanurgentmeeting （unexpectedissue） .Pleaseacceptmyapologyforanyinconvenienceincurred （句型）.Shallwemeetat3pmtomorrowatmyoffice（句型）？Iwillappreciateitifyoucanletmeknowatyourearliestconvenience.RegardsMike3.道歉句型：A.Sorryforanytroublethishascaused.B.Weapol

4、ogisedforanyinconveniencecaused.C.Pleaseacceptoursincereapologyforanyinconvenienceincurred.程度升高。a.shallwedob.wouldyouliketoc.howaboutdoing（較casual一點）a.assoonaspossible/assoonasyou/Ican對下屬，對自己b.attheearliestopportunity較中性c.atyourearliestconvenience很客氣youarethesecretary,MicrosoftsalesMgr,John（同位語不但嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，

5、更提醒了john是誰）calledin.hesaidhewantedustotryourbesttofinishtheprojectbeforeFriday.Besttocallback.Nowpleaseleaveamessagetoyourmanager.To:Mr.IversonMessage:John,thesalesmanagerfromMicrosoft,justrangin.heneededustomakeeveryefforttocompletetheprojectbyFriday,10thOct.andacallbackwouldbepreferred/appreciated

6、（第三方對請求的復(fù)述）.1.fromwhentillwhenforyourannualleave2.needthereplybythedayaftertomorrow3.saysorry語氣：formal,polite,1-2-3To:Mr.James,LineManagerFrom:MikeLee,customerserviceoperatorDate:6th,SepSubject:annualleaveapplicationIamwritingtoapplyformyannualleavestartingfrom14th,Sep.till20th,Sep.Iwillgreatlyappre

7、ciateitifIcanhaveyourconfirmationbyFriday,8th,Sep.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesforanyinconveniencethisapplicationmayincurespeciallyduringthebusiestseason.ThanksMLWearesorrytonotifyyouthattheinterviewscheduledtodaywouldbeputoffduetoadecisionmadebythemanagement.Andtheexacttimeanddatewouldbere-confirm

8、ed/re-scheduledafterfurtherdiscussion.Pleaseacceptourappreciationforyourarrival.subject:thank-youWearewritingtoexpressourappreciationforyourdealingwiththeemergencyyesterdayappropriatelyasMaryspossibilitiesofrecoveringwouldhavebeenseriouslylimitedhadshenotbeensentintimeaccordingtotheDRsdescription.Th

9、ankstoyourpromptreaction,hercurrentprogressispositive.先說wearegladetotellyouthatMaryWongscurrentprogressispositive.HerpossibilitiesofrecoveringwouldhavebeenseriouslylimitedhadshenotbeensentintimeaccordingtotheDRsdescription.最后pleaseacceptforyourdealingwithDuringlastmonth,yourcontinuouspoorperformance

10、ofpunctualityhasbeenbroughttomyattention.Andthenegativeinfluenceonotheremployeesperformanceisspreadingoverandtheydontthinkthisisfair.Iwouldtakethisopportunitytoremindyouthatunlessyoutakeimmediateactiontosolvethisproblem,disciplinaryactionwillbetakenagainstyou.Thanks.a.wewouldliketocallyourattentiont

11、ob.wedliketotakethisoccasion/opportunitytoremindyouc.weinviteyourattentionto/thatDearall:Pleasenotethatduetohygienicreason/consideration,housekeepingwilltakeplaceat時間（復(fù)習(xí)）.Westronglyrecommendthatallstaffshouldtakeactiononheirremainingfoodintherefrigeratoraccordinglyaseverythingwillbediscardedbythen.T

12、hanksyouRegardsWearesodelightedtonotifyyouthatyourideaonthenewmodelpromotioncampaignhasbeenapprovedbythemanagementtodayandwilltakeeffectinnotime.Pleaseacceptourappreciationforyourdevotionandfindattacheda$100giftvoucherofBPasaformofencouragement.DearAllPleasenotethatthepromotioncampaignforournewprodu

13、ct,VIDEOPLAYER,willbelaunchedthroughRadio.Takingthecostintoaccount,radiohastobetheonlyoption.However,withthecreativityofthead,westilllookforwardtoagreatsuccess.BestregardsBusinessletterLettersstandardcontentHowtowriteabusinessemailHowtostart如果之前有聯(lián)絡(luò)，一定要提出，不然不禮貌Thanksforyouremail/thankyouforwritingtou

14、s/Withreferencetoyouradvertisement/yourphonecalltoday,/asperourcall/MainbodyTheReasonforWritingIamwritingtoenquireabout/apologizefor/confirm/requestRequestingCouldyoupossibly？Iwouldbegrateful/thankfulifyoucouldWewouldgreatlyappreciateitifAgreeingtoRequestsIwouldbedelightedtoannouncethatIwouldbegladt

15、ooffer/grantGivingBadNewsUnfortunately,wearesorrytoItisregretfultolearnof.EnclosingDocuments/attachmentIamenclosingPleasefindenclosedEnclosedyouwillfindReferencetoFutureContactIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon/meetingyounextFriday/seeingyounextThursday.TheFinishPleasecontactusagainifwecanhelpinanyway

16、./pleasedonthesitatetocontactusagainifanyproblemarises.這個特別對客戶的信，多數(shù)都有。Yoursfaithfully/regards/bestregardssignatureMrChenDirectorofITDepartment道歉信，P30Q11 .首先明白要寫什么內(nèi)容點，這題很明確，可是后面的可能就不太明確，需要自己總結(jié)了。2.語氣，因為是對客人，所以一定是客氣加正式。2-1-3or1-2-3Dear:Mr.TanaThankyouforcontactingus.Iamsorrytolearnthatyourorderoftwovid

17、eomachineshasntreachedyouyet(首先要用句型表示得知不好消息，但這不是道歉).Afterinformedbyourcustomerservicedepartment,thisisduetosomeunexpectedtransportationproblems,whichwearemakingcontinuouseffortstoavoidinthefuture.Inaddition,theexactdeliverydatewouldbereconfirmedby(nolaterthan)theendofnextweek.Youwillbeinformedassoon

18、asitisfixed.Again,pleaseacceptoursincereapologiesforanytroublethishasincurred.Andwepromisethattherewillnotbeanysimilarproblemsinthefuture.Shouldyouhaveanyproblemsregardingthisissue,pleasedonthesitatetocontactusagain.Yourstruly,Mike關(guān)于CV或推薦其他人的信先看p27的例子介名pprofessionalbackground的句型.三大要素：title,company,r

19、esponsibilities,但干你可以加上時間1. IhavebeenservingasasecretaryinIBM,giventheopportunityoftranslation.2. IworkedinIBMasaITconsultantinchargeofgivingtechnicaladvice.Educational的三大要素school,major,degree2.1graduatedfromzhongshanUniversitywithabachelordegreeinHumanResourceManagement.2.2completedmymasterdegreein

20、Humanresourcemanagementfromzhongshanuniversity3. IvegotaPhDfromCardiff,majoringinGeologicalEngineering.可以選擇性地說一下在cv里，用example或data說明問題。P30Q2語氣可以較為direct,因為是寫給朋友的。確定內(nèi)容包括：1.helenisgoingtoLondon,wilingtofindajob.2.HerCVinformation,and3askyourfriendtofindajobforherDear:Withreferencetoourcallyesterday,Iw

21、ouldliketointroduceoneofmyfriends,HelenKrebs（同位語）,whoisleavingforLondonsoon.Shemightpossiblystaythereforawhileandiswillingtohaveabusiness-relatedjob.HelenservedasajuniorclerkforNylain1992.shewasinchargeofthegeneralclericalwork.Aftertwo-yeargoodperformance,shewaspromotedtobeanassistantsalesmanager.On

22、topofhergoodexperience,shealsocompletedabachelordegreeineconomicsfromSingaporeUniversityin1992beforehercareer.ApartfromherfluencyinEnglishandFrench,hertwoyearsexperienceinUSwouldpossiblycontributetoyourbusinessaswell.Doyouthinkyoucouldpossiblyarrangeajobforher?Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourss

23、incerely,MikeP30q3這個題目是屬于travel類的題目。另外需要根據(jù)日程（補(bǔ)充資料）對已得信息的選擇。審題時，先讀題目，后讀附加資料；知道題目的要求后再有的放矢的看資料明顯這里是businesspartner,客氣，正式程度適中DearMr.RogersAsyouhavebeeninformed,IwouldbeinEuropeonabusinesstripnextweek.Duringthefirst4days,fromThursday,the5thtothe8th,IwouldneedtoattendthePragueFair（如果題目要求includeALLinforma

24、tion那么對次要的信息一筆帶過，但又不能完全不提）.Afterthat,IwillprobablyspendtwodaysinFrankfurt,thatis9th&10th.ItwouldbehelpfulthatyoucanfixameetinginFrankfurtaccordinglyinordertoreachtheagencyagreementwementionbefore.Duetothetightschedule,Imighthavedifficultiestoreservetheaccommodation.Iamverythankfulifyoucandomethi

25、sfavour.Lookforwardtomeetingyounextweek.KindregardsMikeP31Q4看完題目再看信。主要總結(jié)強(qiáng)調(diào)的說法這里是彳爾寫給supplier的信，客氣，但不需要太客氣，因為是他們就你跟他們做生意。1-2-3Dear般請求的信肯定需要這句。Thankyouforinformingusoftheoutfitinformation.Weconfirmthatthe12sampleoutfitsyoushouldsupplyareA,B,Casstatedinyouroriginalletter.Andpleasebeadvisedthatthecorrec

26、ttimeofthespringfashionhasbeensetatxxxonOctober20th.Andwewillkeepyouinformedofanychanges.Shouldyouhaveanyqueriesaboutthis,pleasedonthesitatetocontactusbyallmeansBestregardsMike如何強(qiáng)調(diào)1用強(qiáng)調(diào)句，itis+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+非強(qiáng)調(diào)部分例如：youneedtosupplyA,B,Ctous.強(qiáng)調(diào)A,B,C,itisA,B,Cthatyouneedtosupplytous.2雙重否定強(qiáng)調(diào)肯定3用what從句whatyoun

27、eedtosupplytousareA,B,C.P32Q5Wedontknowwhoyouare,但應(yīng)該是上司，正式點保險。1-2-3DearMillerInreplytoyourrecentmemo,pleaseacceptmysincereappreciationforyourcontributiontoachievethisoutstandingresult.Weallunderstandthatwecannothavethisaccomplishmentwithoutasolidcollaborationamongalldepartmentsinvolved.Sopleasepassm

28、yappreciationtothem.Withthismonthssalesvolume,wehaveeveryreasontolookforwardtoafurthersuccessinthefuture.BestregardsMikeP35應(yīng)又complaint對客人，一定是客氣加正式dearWeregrettoknowthatyouhavequalityproblemswithourproduct,whichisnotuptoourusualstandard.Itwouldbehelpfulforustofindouttheproblemsifyoucandeliverthemback

29、andwewillcoverthefreightforyou.Youwillbeinformedoftheproblemsbypostassoonastheproductexaminationisfinished.BestregardsMike2-1-3DearHong:Wewouldliketocallyourattentionthatyourbalanceof$8500ispastdueon4thofMaythisyear,whichwas6monthsago.Wewillgreatlyappreciateyourpromptpaymentofthissum.Asthishasbeenal

30、ong-delayedpayment,itiswisetomakeapaymentarrangementonyouroutstandingaccountatyourearliestconvenienceinordertoavoidanyfurtheractionagainstyou.Ifyouhavealreadysentyourpayment,pleasedisregardthisnoticeandacceptourthanksforyourpayment.BestregardsMike1. .欠錢句型1.yourbalanceof$8500ispastdueonMay4th,2006,wh

31、ichwas6monthsago.2.Yourbillfor$8000isnow6monthspastdue.3.Wehavenotreceivedyourpaymentfor$548958,whichhasbeenoverduefor6months.2. .還錢句型a.settletheoutstandingaccountb.receiveyourpromptpaymentofthissumc.makeapaymentarrangementonyouroutstandingaccount.BusinessReporta. ReportsFormata. memo式的報告p36（寫分）b. l

32、etter式的報告p37（寫分）c.在考試?yán)锍Ｓ玫母袷剑簉eporton（title）introductionfindings/summaryofdata/discussionconclusion/recommendationintroduction把目的，主要內(nèi)容，對結(jié)果的預(yù)示。P36范例1,2,4Findings/summary/discussion內(nèi)容一定要有邏輯性的排列（時間，因果，遞進(jìn)。）如果你覺得太抽象，可以加小標(biāo)題，bulletpoint/numberingconclusiona.如果是報到性的報告，那這里只是對以上的內(nèi)容的再次總結(jié)，深化主題，與intro相似。b. .如果是分析

33、性的報告一一要得出結(jié)論和建議。給出方向）例子：p40conclusion,p42conclusion表的寫法，p51（寫分）Q4這里審題有點不同：a.確定材料是什么b. .目的是什么c. .還有什么要求材料是comparisonofproducts確定目的:recommendwaysofimprovingthequalityandmarketing要求：usetheinformationinthetable.title:ReportonProductComparison把之前講過的introduction應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容包含進(jìn)來，并應(yīng)用句型應(yīng)包含的是目的，或主要內(nèi)容。邏輯的順序應(yīng)該是，對內(nèi)容的總結(jié)

34、結(jié)論建議（解決問題,Theaimofthisreportistorecommendsomepracticalresolutionsofproductqualityandmarketingbasedontheproductcomparison（題目給出的資料）.Findings第一個內(nèi)容點：summarizetheinfo.這里遵循的原則很簡單，就是把內(nèi)容客觀，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來，出了照搬內(nèi)容外，加一點點自己的見解，讓考官不認(rèn)為你是照抄就可以了。套句型thekeyfindingsfromthetableareoutlinedbelow:nomatterin“valueformoney,areliab

35、ility”,“after-salesservice”oradvertising”,westillhavealotofspacetoimprovecomparedwithshikei（所謂的自己的見解） .Onlyinaproductavailability”,wearebetterthanthem.However,thisrevealsourproductislesspopularthanshikeifromtheotherside（自己的見解）.Conclusion&Recommendation這里要從每個點里出發(fā)，得出結(jié)論。如果好像答案里，得出這么綜合性的建議。其實對同學(xué)沒有什么

36、實際作用，因為大家都不是專業(yè)人士，沒什么實際的工作經(jīng)驗。所以我們只需一條一條總結(jié)，并推導(dǎo)即可，記得用numbering/subject1. ”valueformoney”andareliability”應(yīng)用句型：Fromtheabovesummarization,（valueformoney是對客戶的性價比（cost-efficient是對生產(chǎn)商的性價比），性價比要提高提高質(zhì)量,降低價錢）weshouldurgetheR&Ddepartmenttomakemoreeffortsinimprovingtheproductquality.Atthesametime,wecouldpossi

37、blylowertheprice.（在這里你發(fā)現(xiàn)“1”其實包含了“2”）。提高質(zhì)量的方法：upgradefacility,updatetheproductiontheory（e.g,notfordism,but“justintime”），betterperformancefromR&D2. After-salesservice（提高表現(xiàn)，一般有提高remuneration/assignmorepersonnelormoreresource（support）/stricterpunishmentsystemweshouldsetupabonussystemforcustomerservi

38、cedepartmenttoboosttheirperformance.3. advertising（增加投入，找專業(yè)制作公司，擴(kuò)大投放的渠道，不同的promotionmethod,e.g.activitysponsor,discount）Itisessentialtoincreasetheadvertisementmediums,notjustTVC.講評：首先總結(jié)一下introduction的句型:theaim/purposeofthisreportistothereportIamsubmittingistorecommend,suggestbasedon后面跟題目給出來的資料，可以用fo

39、llowing代替Findings的開頭句型asmighthavebeenexpectedthekeyfindingsareoutlinedbelowthetableclearlyshowsthat寫report更像是一門數(shù)學(xué)課程，因為語氣已經(jīng)設(shè)定為客觀，正式。你需要做的只是1。在不同的地方，應(yīng)用句型；2。把給出來的數(shù)字資料用文字把它表達(dá)出來，同時加一點點的最簡單的見解；3。然后給出1+1=2的推斷。A比B好的表達(dá)方法：AhasalotofspacetoimprovecomparedwithBAisfarlesssuccessfulthanBintermsofmarketingandquali

40、tyFurthereffortsareurgentlyneededonmarketingandqualitytokeepupwithBAhasalongwaytogotoreach.AoutweighBintermsofRecommendation的句型：basedon/followingthediscussionabove(summariesabove),itiswiseforourcompanytodosth.itwouldbeadvisabletodosth.itisproposedthatweshoulddosth.piechart的寫法，p51Q5審題：你的任務(wù)：youareaske

41、dtoassessthelocalpurchasingpower.首先明白piechart說的是什么東西，localfamilyincomeaftertax然后要寫什么：1.interpretthecharttopurchasingpower.2.andthenwiththepurchasingpower,discussprospectofinvestment.3.Explainhowyoureachtheconclusionfromthechartincome-purchasingpower-prospectofinvestmentReportonfutureretailmarketinve

42、stmentIntroduction任務(wù)已知，套句型thereportIamsubmittingaimstohavesomeroughideasofthefutureinvestmentinthelocalretailmarket.Findings這種情況一般是先解決最高和最低Thechartshowsthatthereareapproximate37%ofthefamilieswithanincomeover10,000,whichisfairlyacceptable（對材料的見解）。However,wealsohave20%ofthefamilieshavinganincomeunder$

43、3,000,alowincomelevel（見解）。Betweenthesetwoextremes,thepercentageof$3,000-5000is10%;$5000-$7000,14%;and$7000-10,000,19%,whichisnotexceptionalcomparedwithotherareas（見解）。Conclusion（negativeanswer）Onthebasisofthefindingsabove,wecanseethatthegeneralfamilyincomeaftertaxisacceptableandpurchasingpower（一定要出現(xiàn)，

44、否貝U就偏題了）doesexist.However,Mark&Spencerisalwaystargetingupmarketcustomers,asaresult,theprospectoffutureinvestment（,點題）mightnotaspositiveasweexpect.Allthefindingsindicatedthatamoreextensivestudyisjustified.Conclusion句型allthefindingsindicate/imply/showinconclusion,p61Q47曲線圖的寫法審題：曲線圖是averageincome,要

45、analyzeandpredict的是livingconditionreportonlivingconditionofchinapeasantsIntroductionThepurposeofthisreportistodiscussandpredictthechangesoftheChinesepeasantslivingconditions(basedonagraphoftheiraverageincome).Findings(這里有幾點可以選擇，總的幅度，最大最少的幅度.)Fromthediagramattached,wecanseethatwithinthe8years,1978-19

46、86,theincomeofChinesepeasantshasincreaseddramatically:from133.57in1978to500in1986,nearly4times.Itcanbeexplainedthatlivingconditionisimproving.這句不能少，否貝4就不是在討論changeoflivingcondition.Conclusion&PredictionBasedontheanalysisabove,withthepromisingaverageincome,thelivingconditionofChinesepeasantswillk

47、eepimprovinginthefuture.Inaddition,arelativelystablegrowthisexpectable.Aslightincrease,asuddencollapse,adramatic/sharp/strongrise,asteadydecline,agradualrise,ajump,remainstable/steady,stay/leveloff總結(jié)：猛升：Skyrocket,Soar,jump猛降：plunge,dive,collapse下降：fall,drop,decline,上升：increase,grow,rise,升幅：growthrat

48、e,scaleofincrease/decline平穩(wěn)：stable,steady,same,leveloff,stay,remainp64,Q47審題：youareresponsibleforarrangingtravelinglines.資料：differentpercentageofpeoplespendtheirholidayindifferentway目的：EmphasizechangesofthemainbusinessforyourcompanyreportonchangeoftourismbusinessIntrotheaimofthisreportistoanalysethe

49、changesoftourismbusinesstrendinordertoshedsomelighton(illustrate/illuminate)ourownbusiness.Findings(合并同類項，因為字?jǐn)?shù)不允許你一個一個來)ThetableofwherepeoplespendtheirholidaysshowsthatthenumberofpeoplewhochooseT”andCbothincreasesharply.Onthecontrary(incontrastwith),thepopulationstayingathomeduringholidaydropsdramat

50、ically.OnlythefigureforGstays.Allofthemshow(imply/indicate)thatpeoplearemoreandmorewillingtogooutduringholiday(見解).ConclusionFollowingthestudyofthetable,itisnecessarythatweshouldarrangemoreforeigntravellinglines(回應(yīng)身份)，morecampingactivitiesinordertomovewiththetrend.thenumberofpeoplewhochoose,這里還可以說th

51、epercentageoft”and“c”movewiththetrend還可以說movewithtimes/respondtothemarketchange.p59Q47針對信的report.這種類型的題比圖表簡單，因為對概括能力要求不高，基本是有碗數(shù)碗，有碟數(shù)碟。目的:recommendifyoushoulddealwiththesupplier.ReportonLudovaTechnologiesSlovenskoIntroThereportIsubmitistoseeifweshoulduseLudovaTechnologiesasoursupplier.Summaryoftheinf

52、o(事實羅列，稍加見解)FromwhatIhavenoticed,Ludovasproductionequipmentisobsolete(outofdate/outdated)tosomeextent,althoughfacilitiesupgradehasbeenscheduledbythemanagement.或者說Thelatestmachineshaventbeenputtouse(putintopractice)yet,althoughsuchideaisbeingconsidered.Asaresult(duetothis),lowproductioncapacityisexpe

53、cted.Nevertheless,theproductrangeisbroadandtheirqualityexplaintheirgoodreputation,althoughinconvenientlocationreallyaffecttheirdeliveryefficiency(這個理由可以隨便編，航班少，notenoughdemand).RecommendationOnthebasisofmyresearch,肯定的答案:Thoughtheirproductioncapacityislimited,wecanstillgivethematrialperiodbecauseoftheplannedupgradeandtheirgoodquality.However,lessdeliverytimemustberealized(achieved)beforeacontractisgranted.否定答案：Wehavetogivethemamissduetodisappointedproductioncapacitythoughoffset(balanced)bygoodquality&broadprodu