如何寫(xiě)好讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)中的主題句

1、 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)段落之主題句讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)段落之主題句評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作（讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作（25分）分）概括（概括（5分）分）寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容（20分）分） Lead-in 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒(méi)有詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒(méi)有（或較少）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。（或較少）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。 得得18-2018-20分；分；2.2.包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容包含題目

2、所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。得得14-17分。分。 3.3.包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。用合適的語(yǔ)

3、言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。 得得11-1311-13分。分。 4.4.包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。得得7-117-11分。分。5.5.只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。文章有些地方照抄原文。詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大文章有些地方照抄原文

4、。詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大多數(shù)多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。得的句子出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。得4-6分。分。2013年廣東高考年廣東高考讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)，第二部分讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)，第二部分部分部分(20分分)評(píng)分細(xì)則評(píng)分細(xì)則評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作（讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作（25分）分）概括（概括（5分）分）概括全面，表述清晰概括全面，表述清晰寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容（20分）分）:主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富2007-2013的廣東高考卷中，都給出三條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。的廣東高考卷中，都給出三條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。因讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)因讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)“寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容”所列要點(diǎn)的順序已具有所列要點(diǎn)

5、的順序已具有內(nèi)在內(nèi)在的邏輯性的邏輯性，所以應(yīng)該按照試題所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)順序?qū)懽?。，所以?yīng)該按照試題所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)順序?qū)懽鳌Ｒ话闶敲總€(gè)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)安排為一般是每個(gè)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)安排為一個(gè)自然段一個(gè)自然段，且將寫(xiě)作內(nèi)，且將寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的容的每個(gè)要點(diǎn)作為各段的主題句每個(gè)要點(diǎn)作為各段的主題句，將主題句放，將主題句放在在各段各段的開(kāi)頭的開(kāi)頭，這樣既可以避免在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，這樣既可以避免在寫(xiě)作時(shí)跑題或遺漏要點(diǎn)跑題或遺漏要點(diǎn)，又方便閱卷老師落實(shí)要點(diǎn)是否齊全又方便閱卷老師落實(shí)要點(diǎn)是否齊全 。 As for me, what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous univer

6、sity, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dorm and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the

7、college life. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括： (1) 對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受； (2) 理想的大學(xué)生活； (3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。 My ideal college life is that I become mature both physically and mentally. I can also obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well p

8、repared for society. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括： (1) 對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受； (2) 理想的大學(xué)生活； (3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。 As we all know，college is different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to

9、the real society. So an active part in activities，associations as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括： (1) 對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受； (2) 理想的大學(xué)生活； (3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。What is a top

10、ic sentence? A topic sentence is a sentence to tell the reader what the paragraph is mainly about.How to write a topic sentence？2. Answer the question directly1. Repeat the content3. Share the experience 4. Express your viewSkill 1 Repeat the content 復(fù)述內(nèi)容 要點(diǎn)要求說(shuō)明某事的重要性、意義、重要作用、差別、影響、利弊等。這類(lèi)主題句直接翻譯要點(diǎn)作為

11、段落的主題句。According to the information, write a topic sentence.1. (NMET2010要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)2) 你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵(lì)你學(xué)習(xí)的；My _ used to _like this.2. (NMET2011要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)2) 想家給學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的影響；Being homesick _ my life.affected / influencedhad an influence /effect onTask 1 Finish all the exercises in Skill 1 parents/relativeencourage m

12、e to study3. (NMET2013要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1) 描述清潔工工作的艱辛; 1)Cleaning the street is a kind of hard job.2) There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is hard.important/of importance play an important role in.affect/influence have an effect/influence onadvantages and disadvantagesbe beneficial/of benefit to; do good to

13、; do harm to；be harmful to；the reason whyis that/ The reasons for this are as follows. Useful expressionsSkill 2 Answer the question directly回答問(wèn)題回答問(wèn)題 要點(diǎn)的題干是要點(diǎn)的題干是問(wèn)句問(wèn)句或含或含“是否是否”的句子的句子, ,可直接回答可直接回答, ,作為主題句。作為主題句。1. (NMET2007要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1) 以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：讀信后的感受；After reading the letter, I _by your de

14、epest love for me.2. (NMET2011要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3) 你（或你的朋友）是如何應(yīng)對(duì)的。 (材料內(nèi)容：上寄宿學(xué)校材料內(nèi)容：上寄宿學(xué)校,想家了需要適想家了需要適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境應(yīng)新的環(huán)境)Task 2 Discuss in your group and finish all the exercises in Skill 2 According to the information, write a topic sentence.As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment.was moved/ touched 3. (

15、NMET2013要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)2) 假如沒(méi)有清潔工，環(huán)境會(huì)變得如何？If there were no cleaners in the city, it would be filled with rubbish.Skill 3 Share the experience引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 需要需要講述、舉例講述、舉例時(shí)，引出記敘文的具體時(shí)，引出記敘文的具體事例。事例。It reminds me of my experienceI also experience such a before. I also have a similar experience (of.).It occurred to me t

16、hat my friend had a similar experience.Sentence patterns about sharing the experience According to the information, write a topic sentence. (NMET2011要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1)以約120個(gè)詞講述一次你（或你的朋友）想家(homesick)的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括： 時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和起因； (Tips:我也有像Tom那樣想家的經(jīng)歷。/ 使我想起了我的經(jīng)歷。)Task 3 Finish all the exercises in Skill 3 1) I also have a

17、similar experience of feeling homesick like Tom.2) It reminds me of my experience.2. (NMET2012要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1) 上文使你想起哪位對(duì)你幫助最大的老師;It reminds me of my favourite teacher, Miss Li. Skill 4 Express your view表明觀點(diǎn)表明觀點(diǎn) 要點(diǎn)的題干含要點(diǎn)的題干含“認(rèn)為認(rèn)為”、“的看的看法法”等時(shí)等時(shí), ,可明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支可明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支持、贊同或反對(duì)、不贊同作為主題持、贊同或反對(duì)、不贊同作為主題句。句。Useful expr

18、essions 依我看來(lái)， In my opinion/view, As far as Im concerned From my point of view Personally (speaking), As for me,建議建議suggest doing sth / thatadvise sb to do sth/thatsuggestion/ advice采取有效的措施采取有效的措施take effective measures/ steps/ action to do sth1. (NMET2010要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1 ) 你對(duì)用金錢(qián)鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法；Task 4 Discuss in you

19、r group and finish all the exercises in Skill 4 According to the information, write a topic sentence.From my point of view, it is not a good idea to encourage children with money./Personally, I dont agree that parents encourage kids with cash because it will make them gradually lose their sense of r

20、esponsibility.2. (NMET2010要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3 ) 你認(rèn)為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)。 In my view, parents should use helpful things to make their children study instead of money.3. (NMET2013要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3 )你對(duì)平凡工作的看法。 In my opinion, we should respect ordinary workers. Summary（2014屆惠州一調(diào)）然后以約120個(gè)詞，就“夢(mèng)想”發(fā)表你的看法，包括如下要點(diǎn)： (1)夢(mèng)想在我們成長(zhǎng)的道路上所起的作用； (2)列舉一

21、個(gè)為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想而奮斗的事例； (3)為了實(shí)現(xiàn)“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”，你能做些什么？Homework (1)夢(mèng)想在我們成長(zhǎng)的道路上所起的作用 A dream plays quite an important role in our life, providing us with guidance and motivating us to overcome all kinds of difficulty. A person without a dream is like the world without the sun. We students may face may many challenges, such as endless homework, failures in exams, pressure from parents. When these drown us in sadness, dreams will cheer us up. Only those who have a dream and pursue it regardless of any obstacle can own success in the end.(2)列舉一個(gè)為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想而奮斗的事例 The passage re