高考英語書面表達(dá)之贏取高分的方法與策略

1、書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)之之 贏取高分技巧與策略贏取高分技巧與策略 書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)之之 贏取高分技巧與策略贏取高分技巧與策略 Welcome to our classWelcome to our class 35% of us think that do some sports is 35% of us think that do some sports is a good way to release our stress, such a good way to release our stress, such as play football. But 45% of us think as pl

2、ay football. But 45% of us think music is the best way, it is good for us. music is the best way, it is good for us. At last, 20% think we would like turn to At last, 20% think we would like turn to teachers for help if we are convenient.teachers for help if we are convenient. doingdoingplayingplayi

3、ngwhichwhichtotoit isit isandand常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析1. 1. 句子謂語句子謂語The building like a match box.The building like a match box.Help them when they are need help.Help them when they are need help. Some students like the books that was Some students like the books that was written by Lu written by Lu XunXu

4、n. . It is the businessmans deed that It is the businessmans deed that really make people angry.really make people angry.2.2.主謂不一致主謂不一致is / looksweremakes3.3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 A girl is rescued by A girl is rescued by the soldiers from the the soldiers from the earthquake in Si- earthquake in Si- chuan.chuan

5、.4.4.短語誤用短語誤用 To my disappoint, Liu To my disappoint, Liu Xiang dropped out.Xiang dropped out.But all Chinese could But all Chinese could understand him and understand him and would still support would still support him.him.wasdiappointment5.5.冠詞誤用冠詞誤用 At Lantern Festival, a very funny thing At Lant

6、ern Festival, a very funny thing happened in Lian-yuan. A man asked for happened in Lian-yuan. A man asked for marriage in the street.marriage in the street.the2008,5,12, Sichuan happened an earthquake.2008,5,12, Sichuan happened an earthquake.There are many people complain that food There are many

7、people complain that food prices are so high.prices are so high.To students, own a cellphon is fashionable.To students, own a cellphon is fashionable.6.6.中式英語中式英語 An earthquake happened in Sichuan on May An earthquake happened in Sichuan on May 12th, 2008.12th, plainingowningowningManyManywhoTip One

8、:Tip One: likelikelove / enjoy / be interested inlove / enjoy / be interested inbe into / be fond of /be into / be fond of /prefer to / would like toprefer to / would like toIn order to release the stress, 35% In order to release the stress, 35% of us of us likelike playing football. 45% playing foo

9、tball. 45% likelike listening to music, while the listening to music, while the rest rest likelike turning to teachers. turning to teachers.Tip TwoTip Two詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少, ,也是也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。從衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)可知評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)可知, ,運(yùn)用運(yùn)用高級(jí)的詞匯高級(jí)的詞匯對(duì)提對(duì)提高書面表達(dá)的分?jǐn)?shù)至關(guān)重要。高書面表達(dá)的分?jǐn)?shù)至關(guān)重要。明顯的明顯的clear clear / / ob

10、vious obvious / / evident evident / / apparentapparent有才能的有才能的gifted gifted / / talentedtalented導(dǎo)致導(dǎo)致causecause/ /lead to lead to / / result inresult in/ /bring about bring about contribute tocontribute to意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的strong-willed strong-willed / / strong-determinedstrong-determinedPractice: Practice:

11、使用不同單詞表達(dá)下面詞語的意思使用不同單詞表達(dá)下面詞語的意思 1.In our school, there are seventy-three 1.In our school, there are seventy-three classes.classes.Our school _ seventy-three Our school _ seventy-three classes.classes. 2. As a result the plan was a failure.2. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan _ a failure.The

12、 plan _ a failure.3.The students neednt pay for their 3.The students neednt pay for their books.books.Books _ the students.Books _ the students.4.Suddenly I had a good idea.4.Suddenly I had a good idea.A good idea suddenly _me.A good idea suddenly _me.Practice: Practice: 使用高級(jí)詞匯替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容使用高級(jí)詞匯替換劃線部分的

13、內(nèi)容1.In our school, 1.In our school, there are seventy-threethere are seventy-three classesclasses. .2. As a result the plan 2. As a result the plan was a failurewas a failure. .Practice:Practice:Our school _ seventy-Our school _ seventy-three classes.three classes.is made up ofis made up ofconsists

14、ofThe plan _ a failure.The plan _ a failure.ended up withended up withturned out to / proved to beturned out to / proved to be3.The students 3.The students neednt pay for theirneednt pay for their booksbooks. .4.4.Suddenly I had a good ideaSuddenly I had a good idea. .Practice:Practice:Books _ the s

15、tudents .Books _ the students .are free forare free forA good idea suddenly _me.A good idea suddenly _me.occurred occurred totostrucstruck k35% of us think that35% of us think that sports is a good sports is a good way to release our stress. But way to release our stress. But 45%45% believe thatbeli

16、eve that music is a good way, which music is a good way, which is good for us. At last, is good for us. At last, 20% suppose20% suppose thatthat wed like to turn to our teachers if wed like to turn to our teachers if convenient.convenient.Sb. have/hold the idea/point/view thatWhat sb. think/believe/

17、suppose is thatTip ThreeTip Three在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句型，要靈活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)。句型，要靈活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)。運(yùn)用運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章而因此生色不少，從而使整篇文章而因此生輝并最終獲得高分輝并最終獲得高分 。Task :Task : 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式 小沈陽出生于遼寧省一小沈陽出生于遼寧省一個(gè)農(nóng)民家庭，是一個(gè)很有天個(gè)農(nóng)民家庭，是一個(gè)很有天賦的演員。雖然他很貧窮，賦的演員。雖然他很貧窮，他卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。小學(xué)畢業(yè)后，他卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。小學(xué)畢業(yè)后，他不得不放

18、棄學(xué)業(yè)。他不得不放棄學(xué)業(yè)。 從那以后，他開始學(xué)習(xí)從那以后，他開始學(xué)習(xí)表演。他的天賦和努力以及表演。他的天賦和努力以及老師的幫助，尤其趙本山的老師的幫助，尤其趙本山的指導(dǎo)，使他獲得了成功。他指導(dǎo)，使他獲得了成功。他以幽默的表演贏得了大家的以幽默的表演贏得了大家的喜愛。喜愛。方法一方法一. . 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔 小沈陽出生于遼寧省一個(gè)農(nóng)民家庭，是小沈陽出生于遼寧省一個(gè)農(nóng)民家庭，是一個(gè)很有天賦的演員。一個(gè)很有天賦的演員。 Xiao Shenyang, who was born in a farmer family of Liaoning, is a gifted ac

19、tor. Xiao Shenyang, bornborn inin a farmer familyof Liaoning, is a gifted actor. Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. 非謂語動(dòng)詞非謂語動(dòng)詞雖然他很貧窮，他卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。雖然他很貧窮，他卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。 Poor though/ asthough/ as he was, he is strong-willed/strong-determined.方法二方法二. . 使用省略和倒裝使句子生動(dòng)使用省略和倒裝使句子生動(dòng) Alt

20、hough/Though he was poor, he was strong-willed/strong-determined. Although/Though poor, he was strong-willed/strong-determined.省略省略倒裝倒裝 是他的天賦和努力以及老師的幫助是他的天賦和努力以及老師的幫助, 尤其尤其趙本山的指導(dǎo)趙本山的指導(dǎo), 使他獲得了成功。使他獲得了成功。It is his talent , diligence and teachershelp, especially Zhao Benshans, that make him successful.

21、方法三方法三. . 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使句子明朗使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使句子明朗（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型） 是是他的天賦和努力以及老師的幫助他的天賦和努力以及老師的幫助, 尤其尤其趙本山的指導(dǎo)趙本山的指導(dǎo), 使使他獲得了成功。他獲得了成功。高考大綱中常用的高考大綱中常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進(jìn)表示遞進(jìn)；在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the

22、 contrary.3. 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所以因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; now that; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要如果，只要: if ; on condition ( that ); as long as 除非除非: unless=if not 否則: or else5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng)當(dāng) 的時(shí)候的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 一一就就 :

23、 as soon as 后來，后來， 然后然后: later; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近來近來: lately; recently 自從自從 :since 從那時(shí)起從那時(shí)起: from then on6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先，首先， 最主要的最主要的: above all 其次其次: secondly 然后然后: then; next 最后最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如例如，比如: for instanc

24、e; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳述事實(shí)用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 說實(shí)話說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth10. 對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word11. 其它常用到的副詞其它常用到的副詞 therefore; otherwise; finally; furthermore; thus; namely;

25、 although; afterwards; personally; 怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET

26、2001 范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文) Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. Poor as Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. Poor as he was, he was strong-willed. he was, he was strong-willed. AfterAfter graduating fro

27、m the primary school, he graduating from the primary school, he had no choice but to drop out. had no choice but to drop out. Since Since thenthen, he has begun to learn acting. It is , he has begun to learn acting. It is his talent, diligence and teachers help, his talent, diligence and teachers he

28、lp, especially Zhao Benshans, that make especially Zhao Benshans, that make him successful. him successful. Because ofBecause of his hishumorous performance, he is loved by humorous performance, he is loved by many people.many people.SampleSampleconnecting words connecting words 過渡詞過渡詞Tip FourTip Fo

29、ur從行文需要出發(fā)運(yùn)用從行文需要出發(fā)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞、恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞、過渡詞過渡詞可以使文章增色不少。使用可以使文章增色不少。使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞能使整篇文章銜接自恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞能使整篇文章銜接自然、渾然一體、文句流暢。然、渾然一體、文句流暢。 PracticePractice 1 1 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語。1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in th

30、e west .3. It was not long _ the police came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of i

31、nterest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse 聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況： 1)大小：近大小

32、：近100戶人家，約戶人家，約500口人?？谌恕?2)變化：過去很窮，變化：過去很窮，78年后變年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?；艽?。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。 注意：注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：）詞數(shù)：100- -120之間。之間。Practice 2 書面表達(dá)：書面表達(dá)：Ladies and gentlemen,

33、Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built te

34、aching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 p