一篇高中的書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)

1、書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作基本步驟：寫(xiě)作基本步驟：仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出句子。圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出句子。添加過(guò)度，確保連貫。添加過(guò)度，確保連貫。先求正確，再求靈活。先求正確，再求靈活。認(rèn)真眷寫(xiě)，卷面整潔。認(rèn)真眷寫(xiě)，卷面整潔。假如你正在參加學(xué)校舉辦的一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，就如何應(yīng)對(duì)全假如你正在參加學(xué)校舉辦的一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，就如何應(yīng)對(duì)全球變暖這個(gè)話題發(fā)表自己的見(jiàn)解，號(hào)召同學(xué)們過(guò)低碳生活，為球變暖這個(gè)話題發(fā)表自己的見(jiàn)解，號(hào)召同學(xué)們過(guò)低碳生活，為減少二氧化碳排放做貢獻(xiàn)。請(qǐng)就這個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，陳述減少二氧化碳排放做貢獻(xiàn)。請(qǐng)就這個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，陳述你自己的觀點(diǎn)。你自己的觀點(diǎn)。演講稿應(yīng)

2、包括以下內(nèi)容：演講稿應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1 節(jié)能減排，低碳生活，人人可為節(jié)能減排，低碳生活，人人可為2 改變以往的家庭生活習(xí)慣。（用電，用水）改變以往的家庭生活習(xí)慣。（用電，用水）3 出行使用公共交通或騎自行車(chē)。出行使用公共交通或騎自行車(chē)。4 -要求：要求：1 詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)； 100左右左右2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫3 提示：提示： 低碳生活低碳生活 low carbon life 碳排放碳排放carbon emission 燃料燃料 fuelSample(示例）Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Concl

3、usion文章層次結(jié)構(gòu)文章層次結(jié)構(gòu)The outline (輪廓）輪廓）:Para. 1 - introduction 1. To present your topic directly2. To briefly explain the meaning of such an actionPara. 2 - body1. What/ how to do? Para. 3 - conclusion1. To emphasize/ sum up your pointElectricityWaterTransportation meansKey words and sentence patterns低

4、碳生活二氧化碳減少二氧化碳排放生活習(xí)慣公共交通方式節(jié)約能源的私家車(chē)環(huán)保low carbon lifecarbon dioxidereduce carbon dioxide emission / reduce producing carbon dioxideliving habitspublic transportation meansenergysaving private carsenvironmentally friendly (adj.)Para. 1 2. To briefly explain the meaning/reason of such an action1. To pres

5、ent your topic directly句型：句型： my topic today is - to fight Global warming . What is it? how does it come about? And its bad effects?句型： the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to-/ because - it bring about some bad natural consequences ,such as -Para. 1 the ending sentence :therefor

6、e, we must reduce carbon emission. Para. 1Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone My topic today is living a low carbon life. As is known, the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to quantities of carbon emission. (說(shuō)出問(wèn)題和原因）It brings about some bad natural consequences ,such as , fam

7、ine, draught, terrible diseases and the disappearance of species. (說(shuō)出后果）Therefore, we must fight global warming and reduce carbon emission. (結(jié)束句，接下文，點(diǎn)出主題）Key points (要點(diǎn)）1. 選個(gè)選個(gè)topic sentence 來(lái)統(tǒng)領(lǐng)第二段來(lái)統(tǒng)領(lǐng)第二段2. 寫(xiě)出要點(diǎn)句寫(xiě)出要點(diǎn)句：用電：用電/ 用水用水/交通工具交通工具- Turn - off, when dont use electricity Wear clothes instead of

8、 turning up heat Keep waster water for toiletChoose bike or our feet instead of driving private cars-如：That goal needs everybodys effortPara. 2 3. 注意注意語(yǔ)句間的連貫語(yǔ)句間的連貫，使用連接詞，使用連接詞：for example; and；what s more, however, in addition, on the one hand; on the other hand, thereforeas a consequence (of) , 4.

9、寫(xiě)個(gè)結(jié)束句寫(xiě)個(gè)結(jié)束句 ending sentence, 強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)，如：please believe it that small actions make great difference.Para. 2. That goal need everyone s effort. （that goal 承接上文；主題句，統(tǒng)領(lǐng)后面的文句）Actually, everyone can do small things in daily life to make great difference to that big problem. （對(duì)主題句的具體解釋?zhuān)㊣n our homes, for exam

10、ple, we should save energy. (次主題句） When we dont use TV, the lights, computers and so on, turn it off! And wear more clothes instead of turning up the heat! (活用課本語(yǔ)句）And its a good idea to keep waste water during washing vegetable for toilet cleaning. （后幾句是用電用水的節(jié)約方法，起到對(duì)次主后幾句是用電用水的節(jié)約方法，起到對(duì)次主題句的支撐作用題句的支

11、撐作用） Another important energysaving aspect lies in what transportation means to choose. Since Cars contribute a lot to carbon emission, we can avoid using them if necessary, and choose bike or just our feet to go to school or office. That way is healthy and environmentally friendly. ( 此句此句開(kāi)頭就用開(kāi)頭就用en

12、ergysaving , 和前面的關(guān)鍵詞和前面的關(guān)鍵詞energysaving成對(duì)照，形成一種語(yǔ)義成對(duì)照，形成一種語(yǔ)義連貫連貫）（高級(jí)詞匯加分：高級(jí)詞匯加分： lie in; contribute to）Please believe it that small actions make great difference (總結(jié)句總結(jié)句）(對(duì)主題句的強(qiáng)調(diào)，加強(qiáng)論點(diǎn)效果對(duì)主題句的強(qiáng)調(diào)，加強(qiáng)論點(diǎn)效果） Para. 3I think, if everyone adjusts their behaviors to use energy economically , and when our efforts ad