一篇高中的書面表達指導

1、書面表達指導寫作基本步驟：寫作基本步驟：仔細審題，列舉大綱。仔細審題，列舉大綱。圍繞要點，寫出句子。圍繞要點，寫出句子。添加過度，確保連貫。添加過度，確保連貫。先求正確，再求靈活。先求正確，再求靈活。認真眷寫，卷面整潔。認真眷寫，卷面整潔。假如你正在參加學校舉辦的一個英語演講比賽，就如何應對全假如你正在參加學校舉辦的一個英語演講比賽，就如何應對全球變暖這個話題發(fā)表自己的見解，號召同學們過低碳生活，為球變暖這個話題發(fā)表自己的見解，號召同學們過低碳生活，為減少二氧化碳排放做貢獻。請就這個話題寫一篇演講稿，陳述減少二氧化碳排放做貢獻。請就這個話題寫一篇演講稿，陳述你自己的觀點。你自己的觀點。演講稿應

2、包括以下內容：演講稿應包括以下內容：1 節(jié)能減排，低碳生活，人人可為節(jié)能減排，低碳生活，人人可為2 改變以往的家庭生活習慣。（用電，用水）改變以往的家庭生活習慣。（用電，用水）3 出行使用公共交通或騎自行車。出行使用公共交通或騎自行車。4 -要求：要求：1 詞數；詞數； 100左右左右2 可適當增加細節(jié)內容，以使行文連貫可適當增加細節(jié)內容，以使行文連貫3 提示：提示： 低碳生活低碳生活 low carbon life 碳排放碳排放carbon emission 燃料燃料 fuelSample(示例）Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Concl

3、usion文章層次結構文章層次結構The outline (輪廓）輪廓）:Para. 1 - introduction 1. To present your topic directly2. To briefly explain the meaning of such an actionPara. 2 - body1. What/ how to do? Para. 3 - conclusion1. To emphasize/ sum up your pointElectricityWaterTransportation meansKey words and sentence patterns低

4、碳生活二氧化碳減少二氧化碳排放生活習慣公共交通方式節(jié)約能源的私家車環(huán)保low carbon lifecarbon dioxidereduce carbon dioxide emission / reduce producing carbon dioxideliving habitspublic transportation meansenergysaving private carsenvironmentally friendly (adj.)Para. 1 2. To briefly explain the meaning/reason of such an action1. To pres

5、ent your topic directly句型：句型： my topic today is - to fight Global warming . What is it? how does it come about? And its bad effects?句型： the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to-/ because - it bring about some bad natural consequences ,such as -Para. 1 the ending sentence :therefor

6、e, we must reduce carbon emission. Para. 1Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone My topic today is living a low carbon life. As is known, the earths temperature is becoming warmer and warmer due to quantities of carbon emission. (說出問題和原因）It brings about some bad natural consequences ,such as , fam

7、ine, draught, terrible diseases and the disappearance of species. (說出后果）Therefore, we must fight global warming and reduce carbon emission. (結束句，接下文，點出主題）Key points (要點）1. 選個選個topic sentence 來統(tǒng)領第二段來統(tǒng)領第二段2. 寫出要點句寫出要點句：用電：用電/ 用水用水/交通工具交通工具- Turn - off, when dont use electricity Wear clothes instead of

8、 turning up heat Keep waster water for toiletChoose bike or our feet instead of driving private cars-如：That goal needs everybodys effortPara. 2 3. 注意注意語句間的連貫語句間的連貫，使用連接詞，使用連接詞：for example; and；what s more, however, in addition, on the one hand; on the other hand, thereforeas a consequence (of) , 4.

9、寫個結束句寫個結束句 ending sentence, 強調自己的觀點，如：please believe it that small actions make great difference.Para. 2. That goal need everyone s effort. （that goal 承接上文；主題句，統(tǒng)領后面的文句）Actually, everyone can do small things in daily life to make great difference to that big problem. （對主題句的具體解釋）In our homes, for exam

10、ple, we should save energy. (次主題句） When we dont use TV, the lights, computers and so on, turn it off! And wear more clothes instead of turning up the heat! (活用課本語句）And its a good idea to keep waste water during washing vegetable for toilet cleaning. （后幾句是用電用水的節(jié)約方法，起到對次主后幾句是用電用水的節(jié)約方法，起到對次主題句的支撐作用題句的支

11、撐作用） Another important energysaving aspect lies in what transportation means to choose. Since Cars contribute a lot to carbon emission, we can avoid using them if necessary, and choose bike or just our feet to go to school or office. That way is healthy and environmentally friendly. ( 此句此句開頭就用開頭就用en

12、ergysaving , 和前面的關鍵詞和前面的關鍵詞energysaving成對照，形成一種語義成對照，形成一種語義連貫連貫）（高級詞匯加分：高級詞匯加分： lie in; contribute to）Please believe it that small actions make great difference (總結句總結句）(對主題句的強調，加強論點效果對主題句的強調，加強論點效果） Para. 3I think, if everyone adjusts their behaviors to use energy economically , and when our efforts ad