MBA小作文思路

1、以2011年的小作文為例:CousinLiMing考上大學第一步:定位恭喜信第二步:歸納要求1.恭喜2.建議和指導第三步:模具對號入座1.開門見山就說事恭喜2. 打拳夸復旦,為你驕傲3. 肥肉（2個萬能句）-建議指導:好好學習4. 結束語祝福前程似錦DearLiMing,IamhappytohearthatyouwillgotoFuDanUniversity.（開門見山就說事）Asweallknow,FuDanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld,soweareproudthatyoubecomeapartofi

2、t.（夸復旦,也就是夸LiMing）Itisbelievedthatonessuccessdependsinlargemeasureonhishardworkanddedication.SoIdosuggestthatyourtoppriorityshouldbegiventolearnusefulandhelpfulknowledgeincollege,whichmakesiteasierforyoutobecomeanexcellentcandidateaftergraduation.（建議指導）Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillhaveabrightfuture/

3、greatprospect.（祝福）Yourssincerely,Zhangwei知識點:五點一.五種頭:1. Itisbelieved/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledgedthat2. 眾所周知Asweallknow,/Asisknowntoall,3. 我認為:We/Icometorealize/believe/thatIamfirmlyconvincedthatAsfarasIamconcerned,Intheeyesofmostpeople,Istronglyfeel/dosuggestthatIhavereasonstobelievethat4.

4、 Iamhappytolearn/hearthatIamsorrytosay/tellthat5. Everyone(inbusiness/intheworld)hasbeentoldthat二.換詞思維:1. 換頭:會的人:IamwritingthislettertoyoutocongratulateyouonthesuccessfuladmissiontoFudanUniversity不會的人:IamsohappytolearnthatyouwillgotoFudanUniversity2. 換詞:e.g錄取:會的人:youhavebeenadmittedby/gainedadmissio

5、nto/enrolledbyFudanUniversity不會的人:youwillgotoFudanUniversity3 .變長句的訣竅:3個字變成30個字-建議童鞋們要多練習長句=頭+身體+尾巴+垃圾以復旦很有名為例:FudanUniversityispopular如何變長句頭:Asisknowntoall,身體：FuDanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularity一主句垃圾:allovertheworld-介詞結構尾巴:so,weareproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.-從句推薦使用從句:When/if假設邏輯關系bec

6、ause/so因果but,轉折,which,who4 .靜態(tài)動態(tài)語言(be動詞的轉化問題)Bepopular/famous:enjoygreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworldBecheap:enjoyalowandcompetitivepriceinthemarket.Beimportant:playacrucialroleindoingsomething:qualityplaysacrucialroleinboostingacompanyspopularityandreputationinthemodernmarket.5 :肥肉部分萬能句(2句

7、話)-熟記1. 因果關系2. 首要任務放哪里,whichmakesiteasierforsbtodo.因果關系幾種表達法:(1) Successdependsinlargemeasureononeshardworkanddedication.(2) Lackofcommunicationislikelytogiverisetosocialconflicts.可能:belikelyto=may應該:besupposedto=should能:beableto=can(3) Thelowprice,goodquality,superiorserviceareasignificantcauseofthepopularityofdomesticcars.(4) Lackofenvironmentalconservationawarenessissupposedtocontributetoglobalwarming.本文肥肉部分,萬能句造句-建議對方好好學習,天天向上因果:努力造就成功建議:你的首要任務放在學習,whichmakesiteasierforyoutodo.Itisbelievedthatonessuccessdependsinlargemeasureonhishardworkanddedication.SoIdosuggestthatyourtoppriori