(新)高考英語作文指導

1、我們一路奮戰(zhàn)，不是為了改變世界，而是為了不讓世界改變我們1高考英語作文指導(一)怎樣才能得高分從高考閱卷來看，低分作文往往是：書寫潦草凌亂，胡亂涂畫，簡單低級錯誤較多(詞不達意，語法錯誤， 行文沒有層次性或層次感差，邏輯性混亂等等) ，再就是詞數不足，缺少亮點。高分作文：首先是書寫干凈利 落，視覺美感強；文章結構勻稱，不頭重腳輕。其次是用詞好，過渡自然流暢，句式豐富，亮點多。 平時老師在講評作文時，經常告訴學生說，作文要得高分，就得有高級句型和高級詞匯；但很多同學在寫作 文時，總認為高級句型和高級詞匯很神秘，高不可及。高級句型也是 “難于上青天 ”。其實，未必如此！通過 研讀一些優(yōu)秀的學生習作

2、和歷年高考高分作文，我們發(fā)現，很多所謂的高級句型和高級詞匯正是我們老師反 復講解和訓練的。下面列舉一些常見且高級的詞匯和句型，供參考。一高級詞匯1 occur 替換 think of/have an ideaSudde nly I had an idea that some one had broke n into my house.An idea occurred to me thatsome one had broke n into my house. It occurred to me that some one had broke n into my house. 2 devote 替

3、換 spendHe spe nds all his spare time in readi ng.He devotes all his spare time to readi ng.He spe nds half of his money on books.He devotes half of his money to books(bu ying books).3 seek 替換 want / look forThey sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4 average 替換 ordinaryIm an average

4、 ( ordinary ) student.5 but 替換 veryThe film we saw last ni ght was very in teresti ng.The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6 seat 替換 sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.7 supp

5、ose 替換 shouldHe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8 appreciate 替換 thankThank you very much for you help.We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.9 the case 替換 trueI don tthink it is the case ( true ).10 on 替換 as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he bega n his re

6、search.On his arrival, he began his research.11 due to 替換 because ofHe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.12 cover 替換 walk/readAfter covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.13 contribute to 替換 be helpful/usefulPle nty of memory work is un doubtedly helpful to En glish study.Plenty o

7、f memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14round the corner 替換 coming soon/ nearby1The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?2Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).15 come to light 替換 discoverThe family were so pleased whe n they disco

8、vered the lost jewels.放棄很簡單，但你堅持到底的樣子一定很酷！放棄很簡單，但你堅持到底的樣子一定很酷！2我們一路奮戰(zhàn)， 不是為了改變世界， 而是為了不讓世界改變我們The familywere so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16 have a ball 替換 have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time

9、 ).17 come up with 替換 think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18 set aside 替換 saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.19be of + n. 替換 adj. be of great importance/necessary/valueThe products are of high quality (very

10、good ) and are sold everywhere in China.20 refer to 替換 talk about/of, mentionThe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.21 can not but / can not help but 替換 have to doI could not but (had to) go home.22 more often than not 替換 usuallyMore often than not (Usually), the meaning of man

11、y words can be easily guessed.23 lest 替換 so that /in order thatI wrote dow n his telepho ne nu mber so that I would not forget it.I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.24be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替換 want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much. I am long to s

12、ee you.25 be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替換 be interested inHe is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.26 more than 替換 very1Im very glad to lear n that you are coming in September.Im more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.2If there is a

13、nything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.27 pe rfect (ly) 替換 good/ very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).28 do sb a/the favor 替換 helpWould you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?29 the other day 替換 a few days

14、 agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.30 in the course of 替換 duringIn the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31 the majority of 替換 mostThe majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at h

15、ome to going to the cinema.32 consist of 替換 be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.33be worn out 替換 be tired / broken1After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired).2My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.34 become of 替換 happenWhat do think h

16、as become of ( happened to ) him ?35attend 替換 look after :He has to attend his little brother/his sick mother.36 on condition that 替換 as long as37 nevertheless 替換 however38express one s satisfaction with 替換 be satisfied with放棄很簡單，但你堅持到底的樣子一定很酷！339 spare no efforts to do 替換 try one s best to do40 man

17、y a 替換 many41be rushed off one s feet 替換 be busy in doing我們一路奮戰(zhàn)，不是為了改變世界，而是為了不讓世界改變我們放棄很簡單，但你堅持到底的樣子一定很酷!442 . a handful of 替換 a little / some43 . mean while 替換 at the same time44 . get to one feet 替換 stand up45 . beneath 替換 under46 . occasi on ally 替換 sometimes /once in while47 . for instanee 替換 fo

18、r example48 . seldom 替換 not often49. wealthy 替換 rich50 . amazing 替換 surprising51 . as a matter of fact 替換 in fact二.高級句型結構It 句型1It will be + some time + before It won be long before humans visit the Mars.2It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very importa nt for us to lear n computer well, because

19、it has cha nged our life so much.He said since it was a new model in Chin a, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.3It is +被強調部分 + that1) It is what Yang Liwei has done that en courages us a lot.2) Those who like readi ng exte nsively say it is through readi ng that we get our kn

20、o wledge.more than any other 表示最高級Among the opti onal courses, spoke n En glish and computer study are more popular tha n any one else.名詞從句(特別是同位語從句)1It would mea n a great deal to me to liste n to the tape and lear n what is covered in the talk._2My hometow n is no Ion ger what it used to be.3What

21、I want to make clear is that 4The suggestion that we should take actions to fight against pollution was appreciated by(非限制性)定語從句1The flat is in a buildi ng on Fan gcao Street. It is not far from Jia nxin Chin ese School.The flat is in a buildi ng on Fan gcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chi

22、nese School._2It was quite an experie nee for both of us. I will n ever forget (it) for the rest of my life.It was quite an experienee for us both, which I never forget for the rest of my life.分詞結構1I don tknow about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and atten

23、ding classes as well.2We mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people._3Hearing this, a few people bega n to run after him.4Born in America n, Thomas Edis on was a great scie ntist and inven tor.with 結構 A terrible accide nt happe ned yesterday, with nine people k

24、illed and almost eighty injured._2He was carry ing a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand._3With a lot of work to do/With a lot of problem to settle,etc.4We found the house easily with the little boy leading the way5She left the room with all the lights on.

25、倒裝句1The library is to the east of the teach ing buildi ng.我們一路奮戰(zhàn)，不是為了改變世界，而是為了不讓世界改變我們放棄很簡單，但你堅持到底的樣子一定很酷!5East of the teach ing buildi ng is the library.2Although we are tired, we are happy.Tired as we are, we are happy.3Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.4May all your dreams come true

26、! May our frien dship last till the end of the uni verse.!巧妙的改寫(1) Only 改成 no one butOnly Tom passed the exam last week.No one but Tom passed the exam.(2) as soon as 改成 No sooner than /Hardly when /Immediately /The moment No sooner had wearrived at the cinema than the film started.(3) have sb/sth do

27、/doneThe girl was kno cked off her bicycle and had her leg broke n (her leg was broke n.).其它注重句子的開頭1用 with 復合結構開頭With the sun sett ing in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problems.With the functions of in sert ing, deleti ng, moving and copy in g, it en a