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1、 Fang XianNo.1 Middle School審題Logic（邏輯性）（邏輯性）Key words（信息詞）（信息詞）Key sentences(信息句）信息句）Genre(體裁）Person(人稱(chēng)）Tense(時(shí)態(tài)）請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀(guān)看左邊漫畫(huà)，結(jié)合請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀(guān)看左邊漫畫(huà)，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，寫(xiě)一篇自己的實(shí)際生活，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于關(guān)于“節(jié)能環(huán)保節(jié)能環(huán)?！钡挠⒄Z(yǔ)短文。的英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1 簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的現(xiàn)象；簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的現(xiàn)象；2 分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的 原因（如：沒(méi)有良好原因（如：沒(méi)有良好的習(xí)慣等）；的習(xí)慣等）；3提出你的建議。提出你的建議。提示：圖中在睡覺(jué)的是提示：圖中在睡覺(jué)的是

2、小明，婦女是他的母親小明，婦女是他的母親 As can be seen in the picture, Late at mid-night, Xiao Ming_asleep with TV _, which always annoys his mother. And his mother enters, _ him for forgetting to turn TV off. Task1:A model with some missing key words. Answers varies.fallsoncomplainingPara.1casesense / awarenessPara.2

3、 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity and ignore the importance of saving _ resources. What is it that accounts for the _ above? Firstly, Lack of _ of saving energyis a major cause, which, of course, leads to such a bad habit. Secondly, there being no strict

4、 laws to obey in society, the public will easily forget their duty. energyenvironmentallyPara.3 Therefore, if we intend to live an _friendly life, we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. In a word, what we should do is to _our environment through small things in our daily life.

5、 Every tiny action tectWith the development of science, our earth is becoming dirtier than before, But many people have not realized the problem now. To judge whether they can be used in the writingillogicalThe picture is talking about mother and the son. The son is sleeping and the mother

6、 is trying to turn off the TV.Hearing the sound of “ZZZ”, Xiaomings mother came to the TV and shouted angrily, “ Why do you always forget to turn off TV!” But the reply from Xiaoming was just more “ZZZZZ.”too simpleinformalTask2: Make a list of key sentences in the model writing. As can be seen in t

7、he picture, The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that. What is it that accounts for the above case? Firstly, .Secondly,. Therefore, if you intend to. In short, / In a word, what we should do is . Every tiny action counts.be valuableTask3: Lets imitate more key sentences!1 Xiao Ming falls a

8、sleep with/ leaving TV on, which always annoys his mother.模仿要點(diǎn)：模仿要點(diǎn)： with +n. +賓補(bǔ)賓補(bǔ)模仿模仿1：Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open. Somebody is sleeping in the class now, _.with his eyes open模仿模仿2：The pig is standing here, _.with sunglasses on2 his mother entered, complaining him for

9、forgetting to turn TV off。模仿要點(diǎn)：主句模仿要點(diǎn)：主句 + 現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）模仿模仿1：The children watched the game and stood for an hour.The children stood for an hour,_the game.watching模仿模仿2：The baby jumps into the air, _score a goal.score a goal 進(jìn)球進(jìn)球hoping to/ attemptingto/ aiming to模仿模仿3：男孩手拿一本書(shū)坐在桌邊，正努力在書(shū)中男孩手拿一本書(shū)坐

10、在桌邊，正努力在書(shū)中尋找如何解開(kāi)粽子的方法。尋找如何解開(kāi)粽子的方法。The boy is sitting at the table _, _find how to _ zongzi.模仿要點(diǎn)：模仿要點(diǎn)： with復(fù)合句，復(fù)合句，+ 現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）with a book in his handtrying tounwrap3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity .模仿要點(diǎn)：句型模仿要點(diǎn)：句型 The picture is trying to convin

11、ce us of a fact that (同從）同從）模仿模仿1：這幅畫(huà)試圖讓我們相信這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)：這幅畫(huà)試圖讓我們相信這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)：很多年輕人正失去日常生活中的動(dòng)手能力很多年輕人正失去日常生活中的動(dòng)手能力The picture is trying to _ that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.convince us of a fact模仿模仿2：老師想要讓我們相信：通過(guò)努力：老師想要讓我們相信：通過(guò)努力我們可以成為最棒的學(xué)生。我們可以成為最棒的學(xué)生。The teach

12、er is trying to convince us of afact that we can be top students throughhard work/efforts.4 What ( is it that) accounts for the case above?模仿要點(diǎn)：強(qiáng)調(diào)句的特殊疑問(wèn)模仿要點(diǎn)：強(qiáng)調(diào)句的特殊疑問(wèn)句句模仿模仿1：到底誰(shuí)愿意借這么大一筆錢(qián)呢？到底誰(shuí)愿意借這么大一筆錢(qián)呢？_ _ _ _is willing to lend you such a large sum of money?Who is it that模仿模仿2：到底在哪兒你才能借到這么大一筆錢(qián)呢？到底在哪兒

13、你才能借到這么大一筆錢(qián)呢？_ _ _ _ you can borrow such a large sum of money?Where is it that5 we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment.模仿要點(diǎn)：模仿要點(diǎn)：（feel. think, make, find, consider）itadj. / n. to do sth.think it necessary feel it urgent.make it a rulemake it our dutymake it a habit模仿模仿1：我規(guī)定自己每天

14、晚飯后散步我規(guī)定自己每天晚飯后散步I make _ _ _to have a walk after supper every day.it a rule模仿模仿2：我們有責(zé)任培養(yǎng)自我獨(dú)立意識(shí)我們有責(zé)任培養(yǎng)自我獨(dú)立意識(shí)We should make _ _ _to develop ourselves to be independent.it our duty隨著生活的不斷現(xiàn)代化，很多年輕人逐漸失去了動(dòng)手實(shí)踐隨著生活的不斷現(xiàn)代化，很多年輕人逐漸失去了動(dòng)手實(shí)踐的能力。仔細(xì)觀(guān)察下圖，結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫(xiě)一篇的能力。仔細(xì)觀(guān)察下圖，結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫(xiě)一篇120-150詞的英語(yǔ)短文，詞的英語(yǔ)短文，描述漫

15、畫(huà)內(nèi)容，分析原因，提出描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，分析原因，提出你的建議。你的建議。(動(dòng)手能力動(dòng)手能力 hands-on ability) 1. paragraph 1: to describe the picture paragraph 2: to analyze the reasons paragraph 3: to give your opinions 2. key words? 3. key sentences?Suggested drafting:隨著生活的不斷現(xiàn)代化，很多年輕人逐漸失去了動(dòng)手實(shí)踐隨著生活的不斷現(xiàn)代化，很多年輕人逐漸失去了動(dòng)手實(shí)踐的能力。仔細(xì)觀(guān)察下圖，結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫(xiě)一篇的能

16、力。仔細(xì)觀(guān)察下圖，結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫(xiě)一篇120-150詞的英語(yǔ)短文，詞的英語(yǔ)短文，描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，分析原因，提出描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，分析原因，提出你的建議。你的建議。(動(dòng)手能力動(dòng)手能力 hands-on ability) Key Words & Phrasesinteresting / ridiculoushave no idea / be at a lossunwrapno chances/ opportunitiesover-protective : care too muchindependentpractice/ experienceawarenesson ones ownhand

17、s-on ability Key Words & PhrasesCan you use the sentence patterns to write the composition1 with +n. +賓補(bǔ)賓補(bǔ)2 主句主句 + 現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）現(xiàn)在分詞（作狀語(yǔ)）3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that.（同從）（同從）4 what is it that? 5 we should make it our duty to Key sentences:6 so.that.7 What we should do is示例示例

18、:1 The boy is sitting at the table with a book in his hand, trying to find how to unwrap zongzi.2 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.3 We should make it our duty to develop ourselves to be independent. As can

19、 be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life. What is it accounts for the i

20、nteresting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, parents are such over-protective that their children had no chances to deal with problems independently in daily life. However, if we intend to live a

21、n independent life, we should make it is our duty to explore things on our own. Meantime, what our parents should do is give us more chances to improve our basic skills through small things. Every tiny action counts.Ten mistakes!Ten mistakes!As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongz

22、i, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life. sittingunwraptheirWhat is it accounts for the interesting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, pa