高中英語書面表達精品課件

1、高考考試說明高考考試說明 第第II卷書面表達部分的解讀與例證卷書面表達部分的解讀與例證關(guān)于寫作關(guān)于寫作 “寫作寫作的詞數(shù)要求提高到的詞數(shù)要求提高到120左左右詞匯，右詞匯，既要求表達事實信息，又要陳既要求表達事實信息，又要陳述個人觀點述個人觀點，相對以往試題而言，思維，相對以往試題而言，思維和表達的空間驟然增大，需要考生花大和表達的空間驟然增大，需要考生花大力氣進行有關(guān)訓(xùn)練。力氣進行有關(guān)訓(xùn)練。” 2006年年12月月19日日B2版版 例證例證當前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。當前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以原著。請你以“Film o

2、r book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：短文：看電影：省時、有趣、易懂看電影：省時、有趣、易懂讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由我的看法及理由注意：注意：1、詞數(shù)：、詞數(shù)：100-120 文章題目和開頭已文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。2、參考詞匯：、參考詞匯：original work 或或 book in the original （原著）（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think th

3、at it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.bad beginningsa. I dont think seeing a film is better than reading a book.b. As for me, c. Others hold th

4、e view that bad conclusionsa. I think both films and books have their advantages.b. I have no preference between the two.c. I first watch a film , then read the book. Good ConclusionsGood Conclusions：我的看法及理由：我的看法及理由：Revised film is just like one tree in the original works forest. I prefer to go acro

5、ss the forest rather than enjoy only one tree.Through reading, every reader will have a different Hamlet in mind. So dont give up reading. Lets taste the original flavor of art. Books introduce us into the best society.By reading a book, we hear what they said and did; we see them as if they were re

6、ally alive; we sympathize with them, enjoy withthem. 給出的參考答案給出的參考答案 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usuallymore interesting, and it is easier to follow.

7、Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally, I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, rea

8、ding quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original workis better than to see the film based on it. Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be

9、 seen as follows. First -(的優(yōu)點之一的優(yōu)點之一). Besides -（的優(yōu)點之二）（的優(yōu)點之二）.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一個缺點的第一個缺點)To make matters worse, -(的第二個點的第二個點)Through the above analysis, I believe that the positiveaspects overweigh

10、the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法我的看法) Studying AbroadAttending schools abroad has many advantages. Firstly, by looking at our own country form outside, we can widenour vision and broaden our minds. Secondly, we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local people.

11、thirdly, we can use the foreign language quickly. However, there are also some disadvantages in attendinga foreign school. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most students do not have adequate knowledge of language spoken there. On arriving there, they find it difficultto understand w

12、hat the teachers are saying. Furthermore, thecost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-time job to support themselves. On the whole, it is a good thing to study abroad. However,one must not lose sight of the disadvantages. On punctuality Punctuality m

13、eans observing regular or appointed time. There is no doubt that punctuality is of great importance inmodern world, and to be punctual is not only a good quality, but it is also to show respect for others and to win trust.As far as I am concerned, failure to be punctual in keeping ones appointment i

14、s invited to a dinner and arrives later than the appointed time, he keeps all the others guestswaiting. This is great discourtesy towards both the guests and the host. As a proverb says, “ Time flies never to berecalled”, this is true. If we lose something, we may find it again. But lost time can ne

15、ver be regained. In fact, timeitself is life. Therefore, wasting others time is the same as taking away time from others lives. Is the only way out to go to collegeWe had a discussion about whether it is the only way outfor senior students to go to college. Views vary from personto person. The major

16、ity of students consider it necessary to go to college. They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation. Very few students think it unnecessary to go to university, because the tuition is too high for their family to af

17、ford. Whats more, its rather hard for collegegraduates to find satisfactory jobs. Thirty percent of the students, however, believe “ All roads lead to Rome.” Therefore, it doesnt make any difference whether they go tocollege or not. In my opinion, we can receive a better educationat college so that

18、we can sever our motherland.形式上的一致也是運用英語進行表達時需要十分注意的形式上的一致也是運用英語進行表達時需要十分注意的a.a.主謂一致主謂一致 Twenty percent of the students in our class is Twenty percent of the students in our class is from the suburb.from the suburb.b. b. 人稱、指代要一致人稱、指代要一致 Bring your books here tomorrow and I will Bring your books her

19、e tomorrow and I will return it to the library.return it to the library.c. c. 平行平行( (對稱對稱) )關(guān)系要一致關(guān)系要一致 My teacher, MrMy teacher, Mr Wang, is patient as well as Wang, is patient as well as imagination. imagination. d.d.時態(tài)（語態(tài)）的起點要一致時態(tài)（語態(tài)）的起點要一致 Mary got up and dressing quickly.Mary got up and dressing

20、 quickly.eg: Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits._, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. ( 2006 福建卷福建卷)_ you didnt speak clearly, _ I didnt listen well.However, others prefer to go out for traveling, _ it can increase their knowledge and broadenth

21、eir horizons. (2006陜西卷陜西卷)However, this change has bad _ good effects, especially dependence on the Internet. (2006 廣東卷廣東卷)_ he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” (2006 遼寧卷遼寧卷)Howeveras well assinceEitherorWhen 主題句在段落中常出現(xiàn)的位置由兩種。主題句在段落中常出現(xiàn)的位置由兩種。1. 段落開端段落開端: 后面的句子提供支持信息或論證。后

22、面的句子提供支持信息或論證。 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting and it is easier to follow.2. 段落結(jié)尾：前面提供細節(jié)的支持句，最后用一句總結(jié)性的主段落結(jié)尾：前面提供細節(jié)的支持句，最后用一句總結(jié)性

23、的主 題句加以概括。題句加以概括。 Im a high school students in Beijing, where the Winter Asian Games will start. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. And I have other virtues. I like sports and Im familiar with Beijing. So I think Im suitable for serving the WAG. 2寫好段落主題句的三原則寫好段

24、落主題句的三原則1. 概括全段主要內(nèi)容，既不能以偏概全，也不能隨意擴大范圍概括全段主要內(nèi)容，既不能以偏概全，也不能隨意擴大范圍 如：在一段介紹如：在一段介紹“我在英語學(xué)習(xí)聽說讀寫方面發(fā)生的變化我在英語學(xué)習(xí)聽說讀寫方面發(fā)生的變化”的的 段落中，主題句應(yīng)該是：段落中，主題句應(yīng)該是： My spoken English has improved a lot. Great changes have taken place in my English study.2. 有體現(xiàn)中心思想的關(guān)鍵詞或短語。有體現(xiàn)中心思想的關(guān)鍵詞或短語。3. 以簡潔明了的句子為主，避免為追求使用以簡潔明了的句子為主，避免為追求使

25、用 復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)而導(dǎo)致理解錯誤或主題不鮮明的句子。復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)而導(dǎo)致理解錯誤或主題不鮮明的句子。 請根據(jù)下面選篇的結(jié)構(gòu)形式和內(nèi)容確定一個主題句。請根據(jù)下面選篇的結(jié)構(gòu)形式和內(nèi)容確定一個主題句。_ Firstly, the tuition is reasonable. Secondly, the university can help the students get a sum of loan from the banks, which reduces the load of peasant families like mine. Thirdly, its program in computer is

26、recognized as the leader in the country.A.Why do I choose to major in computer science in this university?B. There are several reasons why I have decided to attend this university.Learning a foreign language has changed. Not so long ago students would sit with pens in hand, writing the basic formsof a language, and the learning structures they would neverbe able to speak. In that same classroom today, pens and notebooks have been put away. The spoken sounds o