廣東高考英語基礎寫作指導

1、廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導（系列1）第一講 記敘文：如何寫人一、寫作指導高考英語基礎寫作中的寫人側重人物的介紹，可以用第一人稱(如寫求職信)，也可以用第三人稱，時態(tài)常常用一般現在時和一般過去時，具體的人稱和時態(tài)要依據寫作的要求來確定。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面的問題：1人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學歷、經歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面，但英語基礎寫作需要嚴格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信息點，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。2對題目所給的信息要進行適當重組，安排好寫作順序，突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在，比如求職要重點突出學歷、經歷，新聞報道要重點突出

2、事跡，介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點，等等。3正確運用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。4注意運用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現在時，而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經歷、事跡常用一般過去時。二、常用詞語外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking， pretty，short，strong, tall， thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 me

3、tres tall, etc. 性格特點：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative， warm-hearted，wise，etc. 出生年齡：

4、a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in ones fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc. 興趣愛好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry

5、 about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in ones work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do

6、, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put ones heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc. 教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test， a masters degree, get on well with ones lessons, give sb.

7、a passing grade, ，go abroad to further ones study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctors degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an a

8、ctive part in classwhen at college, etc. 經歷事跡： become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to ones business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up ones life

9、 for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up ones mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try ones best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gol

10、d /silver/ bronze medal, etc. 他人評價：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most import

11、ant persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc. 參考范文：Dear Manager， I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City

12、 of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studiedcomputer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop

13、music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition. I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours Truely Li Hua參考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world fam

14、ous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He wonthe first prize in the Athens Olympic

15、 Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.參考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing

16、. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her wor

17、k and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2請根據下面的英文短詩，展開適當的想象，寫一篇短文。標題為：My Teacher Mr. MooreTheres a teacher Mr. Moore.Who is lovely and thirty-four.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of “why”.We all admire him more and more.要求：1. 不得照抄短詩原文。 2. 必須突出短詩的主題，結構完整，語意連貫。 3.

18、 短文不能寫成詩歌形式。 4. 只能使用價值個句子表達全部的內容。廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導（系列2）高考英語基礎寫作指導(II)第二講 記敘文：如何敘事？一、寫作指導敘事類記敘文通常要將時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結果等六個要素交代清楚。好的記敘文具有描述事件具體、人物逼真形象、故事生動感人、材料表現中心和寫作主旨明確等特征。高考英語基礎寫作中的敘事類短文也需要具有記敘文寫作的一般特點，但要求相對比較低，其考查重點在語言運用正確、句子連貫通順、信息點表述完整等方面。寫作時要注意以下幾個方面的問題：1. 嚴格按照基礎寫作的要求完成各個信息點，不要為了文章的生動而隨意添加信息。2. 信息點的表

19、述不要完全按照題目所給的順序，要適當重組信息點。3. 記敘文寫作的時態(tài)多數是用一般過去時，但也要注意靈活運用其它時態(tài)。4. 敘事類記敘文的話題通常和中學生的生活閱歷有關，如校園生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平時要注意積累這些方面的詞匯和短語。二、常用語句1. 表達時間a long time ago, at six oclock in the morning, at the end of, at the weekend, before he came here, by the end of last term, during the summer holidays, in a few years t

20、ime, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in August 2002, in winter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, notuntil, while , etc.2. 表達地點 at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the air

21、port, at the village, at the foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind the park, be situated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangdong Province, in the middle of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the bus, in front of the bus,

22、 in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, onthe other side of the street, on both sides of the road,on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.3. 表達因果as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since,

23、so, therefore,   It is clear that , It turns out to be , The primary reason is , etc. 4. 事件話題 (1)學校生活及學習成績 be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be good at ,be poor at , be tired of ones work, be weak in, do ones homework, do sports afterschool,do well in

24、; education for all-round development(素質教育), examination-oriented education system(應試教育), fail in the test, get a doctors degree, get on well with English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, give sb. a passing grade, have a good command of the language, have eight classes every day, h

25、elp with each other, lay a good foundation in, learnby heart, major in history, make friends with sb., make progress in, put ones heart into, pass the examination, study in groups, succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity,take several courses at school, work out a problem, work on

26、a maths problem , work hard at, etc. (2)師生關系及其活動 be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with ones pupils, be strict in ones work, be satisfied with , blame sb. for sth, correct the students homework carefully, devote all ones time to work, form a good habit of, get on well

27、with sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth, make ones lessonslively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrows lesson, question sb on, teach sb. English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.(3)課余活動及周末生活 do some reading, enjoy a family trip, enjoy doing sth., go swimm

28、ing, go for an outing, go to the cinema, have an outing at the seashore, have a swim, have dances on weekends, have a picnic at the weekend, have a party, hold a sports meeting, Internet bar, net friend, online love affair(網戀), play the piano, play chess (basketball), see the sights of Beijing, spen

29、d ones time in many different ways, teach in a family, etc. (4)交通情況a big traffic jam, a traffic accident, be very crowded in the street, be seriously injured, by bus (train / ship / boat), drive a car, flight No. 2130, in a small boat, give sb. a lift, keep right, lie on the street, meet sb. at the

30、station, on the bus (train),on board, on ones way to London, on the journey, one way only , pick up sb., ride a bike, ride a horse , see sb. off at the airport, self-service ticket , take a flight to New York, traffic light, travel through China, turn right, etc. (5)度假旅游 New Years Day, Womens Day, M

31、ay Day, Youth Day, Childrens Day, Teachers Day, Mid-Autumn Day, National Day, valentines Day, the Spring Festival, a hot spot, a place of interest, a tourist destination, a five-star hotel, a good restaurant, a return ticket, a single ticket, a city with a long history, a quiet village, a three-day

32、tour, an experienced guide, Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, beautiful scenery, in peak tourist seasons, natural attraction, on ones way to France, on the back way , one of the great wonders of the world, spend ones holidays on the sea , the 11th Asian Games, travel agency, the tour route, the inner-ring

33、 road, travel to England, the Great Wall , the Summer Place , Zhongshan Park , etc. (6)環(huán)境保護a good environment, area pollution, air pollution, air quality standard, Antarctic Circle, atmospheric chemistry, a heavy rain, a heavy snow, be polluted, be hot, be cold, be cool, be cloudy, be rainy, be sunn

34、y, be flooded, climate, carbon dioxide(CO2), chemical change, chemical cleaning of coal, climate change, dirty, drought, dry, flood, early warning system, environmental behavior, environmental quality, feel comfortable, global warming, minus 20 degrees centigrade(-20°), 30 degrees above zero(30

35、°)，sea level, warning center, wastes, water surface , water treatment, water pollution control, weather, windstorm , etc.三、典型例文參考范文：Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school. It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and i

36、t has a history of over 80 years. Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior students It has three teaching buildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all around, soits very beautiful. In our school we le

37、arn Chinese, maths, science, English, computer,PE, arts and some other subjects. We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 參考范文：A brief Introduction of the Chinese Spring FestivalThe Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chin

38、ese Lunar Year, which is usually in February. There is a name for each year, such as the dog, the monkey, the tiger or one of the twelve animals, and this year is the year of the pig. Before the New Years Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a good cleaning and on the last evening of th

39、e old year, all the members of a family will get together and have a big meal. On the first or second day of the new year, peopleusually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky money to children.I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival.參考范文1.On July 27th 2007, Frida

40、y, we 18 classmates, including John from Britain, Sinba from India and Keith from the USA, went to Lee Farm to help the farmers. We started off at 8 oclock in the morning, and after an hours ride on the bus, we walked for another 15 minutes. Lee Farm is about 60 kilometres northwest to our school. A

41、 few days ago it was hit by a strong tornado, and many apples were blown onto the ground, so we helped to pick up the apples and put the good ones in the baskets.We felt very tired after the work, but all of us thought it was a great help to the farmers.2. Last Wednesday I gave a lecture about China

42、s culture and history to the 7th students from 9-11:30 in the morning. This is the first time I gave a lesson, so I felt very nervous and great pressure. I presented for one and a half hours, introducing from the dynasties in ancient times to the revolutionary in recent times, but I spent a lot more

43、 time on present China, the renovation, the open policy and the economic development. In the following hour we exchanged ideas and had a good discussion, but I was sorry to find that they knew little about China and raised a lot of strange questions. I think we need more cultural exchange of this ki

44、nd, because we can get more practice and the foreign students can understand more about China.廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導（系列3）                      第三講 如何寫圖表類說明文 一、寫作指導 圖表類作文一直是高考的熱點，其體裁可以是記敘文、議論文或說明文。本篇介紹如何備考

45、圖表類說明文。 圖表類說明文要求根據圖示、表格等所給的信息，通過定義、描述、數字對比和分類比較等方式，介紹圖表所顯示對象的特征，如形狀、構造、性質、變化、功能、因果和方位等。圖表類說明文常見的話題有：產品介紹、地點描述、方位描寫、觀點對比、變化分析、購物指南和操作說明等。寫作這類文章需注意以下幾點： 1 正確解讀表格，不能添加或遺漏信息。 2 寫作內容要條理清楚，層次分明。說明科技方面的內容常用定義法、比較對比法、分類法和因果法等；說明自然環(huán)境方面的內容常用時空次序法與分類法等。 3 說明文的語言要簡練，用詞要準確，避免夸張華麗的辭藻。 4 時態(tài)常用一般現在時，語態(tài)常用被動語態(tài)，有時用虛擬語氣

46、。 二、常用句型 1. 介紹產品 The company has modern equipment and lots of senior experts. This kind of product contains much top and new technique. Its convenient to carry and easy to operate. Its about six feet long and nine feet high. It cost me 100 yuan to buy this dictionary. 2. 介紹學校 There were many subject

47、s in our school, such as Chinese, history, drawing and so forth. Our school is located at the foot of a green hill. In the middle of the flower bed there is a fountain with many colored flowers around it. In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its

48、 right. At the back of the school are the students dormitory and the dinning-hall, in front of which lies the large sports field. The teachers dormitory stands between the teaching building and the students dormitory. 3 行路指引 It is not very difficult to find your way from the Dongfang Hotel to the ra

49、ilway station. When you get out of the station, turn left and walk down the street until you see the traffic lights. Turn right at the third turning, and you will see a post office at the corner. Go eastward and you will see the museum opposite to the library. Bus No.2 will take you right there. It

50、will take you about 10 minutes to get there by subway. 4 介紹地方 Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of one million square metres. Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong Province, lies in the south of China. It has an area of 10,000 square kilometers with a population of over

51、 2 million. It is rich in natural sources, such as coal, oil and gold. The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. Built in the18th century, the tower has witnessed too much coming and going in history. 5 新舊對比 Our hometown used to be a beautiful place, with thick trees and green

52、 grass everywhere. Nowadays some students cannot go to college because of high tuition fees. Great changes have taken place in the past few years. It is known to us all that the living standard of the Chinese people has greatly improved.In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made i

53、t possible for people to live longer than in the past. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past. 6 數量表達 Output is up 30% last year. Unemployment more than doubled in 1996. The population here is increasing year by

54、 year. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. From the table we can see that the world population is increasing rapidly. The latest survey shows that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. An investigation shows that

55、 many emigrants think that working at city provides them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills. Statistics show a 20% rise (reduction) in traffic accidents compared with last year. Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train

56、for speed and comfort. 三、實例分析 【例文1】父母為子女選擇小學的情況調查 最近學校研究性學習小組對3000多名年輕的父母做了一個調查，調查主題、結果等內容如下表所示，請用英文給校英文廣播站寫一篇簡介，介紹調查的情況。 寫作要求： 1 簡介必須包括圖表所給的全部內容； 2 只能使用5個句子。 參考范文： Recently a survey was done to investigate what parents care most in choosing primary schools. The survey shows that location is the key

57、 factor in choosing schools for their childrenhalf of those interviewed said that being close to their homes was the most important factor in their choice. Teaching quality came second, with nearly 40% of the parents worrying about their childrens future career. The survey also shows that one-tenth of them expect that schools have advanced facilities. More than 3,000 parents were surveyed in the research. 【例文 2】樓盤介紹 假設暑假你到某樓盤打工，正好有幾名外國客人想買一套公寓樓，公寓樓及其周邊的一些基本信息如下。請書面用英文向這幾位客人介紹一下這套公寓樓