近五年湖北高考英語作文分析

1、文檔供參考，可復制、編制，期待您的好評與關注！ 近五年湖北高考英語作文分析1. 近五年高考寫作一覽 年份 考查形式 考查體裁 內容 詞數(shù)要求/范文 分數(shù) 教材相關內容 2009提綱書信指出英國朋友漢語成語使用不當100左右/15025分B7U52010英語提示開放結合事例說明微笑的作用100左右/13425分B7U12011英語提示開放結合事例談與人合作100左右/16025分B1U1(friendship)B7U3（teamwork）B3U3(cooperation)B7U4(sharing)2012英語提示開放結合事例談論人生觀：所得與所用120左右/11830分 2013英語提

2、示開放結合事例說明語言的力量120左右30分B1U2(English)二近五年高考寫作規(guī)律 1. 開放式作文為大趨勢2. 字數(shù)增加，從100字到120字左右3. 分值加重，從25分到30分4. 題材貼近學生生活，現(xiàn)實感強，易于動筆5. 話題與高中教材密切了解三2013評分原則 本題總分為30分，按5個檔次給分。詞數(shù)少于100，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分。評分檔次的確定應在內容符合題目要求的前題下側重于語言的表達。評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容切題，語言表達準確、多樣、連貫、得體。拼寫與標點符號是語言

3、表達準確的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。如書寫太潦草，以至影響辨認，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。四、各檔次的給分范圍和要求 第五檔25-30分 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。所有內容與提示吻合。應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯。語法結構與詞匯應用準確，雖有個別錯誤，但不影響意義的表達；具備較強的語言運用能力。恰當使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結構緊湊。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。第四檔19-24分完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內容與提示吻合。應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。語法結構與詞匯應用基本準確，個別錯誤對意義的表達有一定影響。較恰當?shù)厥褂昧苏Z句間的連接成分

4、，全文結構較緊湊。達到了預期的寫作目的。第三檔13-18分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內容與提示比較吻合。應用的語法結構和詞匯能基本滿足任務的要求。有一些語法結構與詞匯的錯誤，對意義的表達有較大影響?；灸苁褂谜Z句間的連接成分，全文結構比較松散。整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。第二檔7-12分僅完成試題規(guī)定的部分任務。主要內容與提示基本吻合。語法結構單調，應用詞匯有限。有較多語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了意義的表達。語句間的連接成分運用不當，缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。第一檔1-6分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內容與提示不太吻合。語法結構單一，應用詞匯十分有限。有較多語法結構或

5、詞匯方面的嚴重錯誤，嚴重影響了意義的表達。缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。五寫作步驟 審題考生動筆前要仔細閱讀試題，明確寫作要求。審題包括審寫作要求、審文體、審寫作核心內容、審寫作時態(tài)及語態(tài)和審人稱等方面的內容。 擬點就是通過審題，擬出寫作的基本的重難點，找出五六個動詞或動詞短語；有時還可構思一些寫作可能要用的句型、句式。然后再提煉要點，以備下一步使用。根據(jù)提示，理順要點，既可保證不遺漏所要表達的信息，又可使表達的內容條理清晰。 聯(lián)句將上一步列出來的要點逐句表達出來，這是書面表達

6、寫作時較為關鍵的一步。完成這個步驟要注意： 書面表達重在達意，千萬不要簡單直譯，要用自己最有把握的短語或句型將意思完整、準確地表達出來。 如果碰到漢語提示中有一時找不到相對應的英語詞語或句型時，不要輕易放棄，因為英語中常常會有一句多譯的現(xiàn)象。 盡可能多地運用較高級的詞匯和較復雜的語法結構，如復合句、倒裝句、并列句、強調句和分詞結構等。 選擇正確的人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)等進行表達。 如果是記敘文，還要寫明時間、地點和人物。 成文就是將寫好的句子組織起來，形成段落式短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、遞進、讓步、轉折、因果等意義的關聯(lián)詞語，以增強文章的連貫性和流暢性。 潤色就是有意識地將一些“低級詞匯”轉換成

7、“高級詞匯”，將一些“簡單結構”轉換成“高級結構”，以凸顯文章亮點，增加得高分的機會，例如使用新穎詞匯或句型等。 六提綱式作文的寫作方法 1特點 提綱式書面表達是把材料分割成信息塊，列成獨立的文字信息。此類試題中有較多的文字說明實際上是規(guī)定了考生表述的思路，對考生的寫作范圍作了明確的限定，試題中規(guī)定的要點一個也不能少。由于這類試題包含較多的文字說明，容易改變書面表達的性質，使作文成為了翻譯。因此，考生應靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將試題要求的要點完整的表達出來，力求準確、簡潔、禮貌、規(guī)范。此類試題主要學生的實際語言能力。2例題（2009年湖北高考作文） 假設你是華華，與英國網(wǎng)友湯姆約定

8、用對方的母語通信，以提高各自的外語水平。最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件（附后），發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個成語使用不當。請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文回一封電子郵件。 要點： 1. 不應使用“無所不為”，應使用“無所事事”； 2. 說明這兩個成語的用法； 3. 給予鼓勵。 注意：1.詞數(shù)為100左右； 2.參考釋義：無所不為- do all kinds of bad things無所事事- have nothing to do;3.除以上兩個成語外，郵件中不得使用其他漢字或拼音； 4.電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數(shù)），但不得抄入答題卡。附（湯姆的郵件）： 華華，你好！ 近幾天在忙什么事？有什么有意思的事嗎

9、？我們的學校放假了，所以這幾天我在家無 所不為，飽食終日，只好上網(wǎng)發(fā)伊妹兒。沒意思，我決定找份工作，做個自食其力的人。祝好！ 3范文欣賞 Hi! Tom,Nice to read your e-mail today. I notice youve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, Im afraid there is one mistake Id like to point out. It is “無所不為”. This idiom means “do all kinds of bad th

10、ings”. Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that youve got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use “無所事事”. We usually use “無所不為” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “無所事事” to describe the situation in whi

11、ch people have got nothing meaningful to do. Have I made myself clear?Anyway, Im amazed at the progress youve made.Hope youll find a job soon.Huahua4常用句式(書信)Im writing to tell you about.Im very much delighted to inform you that.I apologize to for not writing to you for a long time.It was so good to

12、hear from you and I shall be very pleased to let you have the information you need.Im very have to hear that you are all enjoying good health.Give my regards to.Im looking forward to your early reply.Please remember me to your parents/ family.5即學即練習 假如你叫陳宇，你的英國筆友Mike在上次來信中談到了低碳生活這個話題。最近幾個月校倡導學生過低碳生活

13、、過節(jié)約生活、做有責任感的公民，引導學生從出行、購物、用水、家電和餐具使用方面反省自己的生活方式。請你用英文給Mike回信?；匦乓c如下：1你對低碳生活的理解2你校開展的活動3你最近生活方式的改變（至少選取三個方面）注意：                                1詞

14、數(shù)為100左右；2參考詞匯  低碳生活 low carbon life (style)3信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數(shù)）Dear Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now Id like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months. Im really glad to communicate with you about this to

15、pic. Yours Chen Yu范文： Dear Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now Id like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protec

16、t our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.Interest tingly, our school called on students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I

17、have made some changes in my way of life, which ranges from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to re

18、use water, even though it is not so convenient. TV and computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.Im really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours Chen Yu6趨勢 提綱式作文考查的機率已不再大，因為提綱式的作文不能反映

19、出學生的真實水平，只是進行中文要點的翻譯而已，也不符合高校選拔人才的要求。 七開放式作文的寫作方法 1特點 開放式作文類似語文考試中的材料作文，試題給出考生一定的素材或主題，讓考生在此基礎上自由發(fā)揮，自由創(chuàng)作，不受“文體形式，內容要點”的限制，甚至不受短文詞數(shù)的限制。這種開放式作文和目前其他形式的書面表達相比，難度更大，要求更高 2例題（2011年湖北高考作文） We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too

20、. 注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語； 除詩歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。 3范文欣賞 Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life.One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed sev

21、eral chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates comfort and persuasion as well as Peters apology and explanation tha

22、t helped me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasnt long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever.From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get

23、 through and get along well.4寫作方法 例：請你根據(jù)以下提示，結合生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文，談談微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意： 無須寫標題； 內容只

24、需涉及一個方面； 詞數(shù)為100左右。 1）步驟 第一段：引出話題 開頭第一段引出話題，點出觀點，可用到主語從句和定語從句。 It is well-known that smile is the most pleasant expression in life, from which we can benefit a lot, for example, getting encouragement and building up confidence.也可運用諺語格言的方式吸引讀者注意，同時引出話題，點出觀點。 There is a saying that goes, “l(fā)ife is much

25、like a mirror. If you smile upon it ,it smiles back upon you.”, with which you can get along well with others. 第二段：寫一個事例，舉例論證法，記敘文段落 正文部分，則可運用寫記敘文的方式結合事例進行敘事論證自己的觀點。要注意連詞的使用，使敘述有邏輯條理，連貫通順。 Take myself as an example, When I first learned English, I found it was not as easy as I had thought before. Di

26、sappointed, I decided to quit. At this time My English teacher came to me, saying, “I believe you can do it." After that, she gave me a big shining smile. Suddenly, I was full of confidence again. Since then, a confident smile has always been on my face whenever a challenge comes to me. 第三段：你的觀

27、點，議論文段落。 結尾部分，重申話題和觀點，回應開頭，對好的方面要有提倡，利弊都有的方面要進行度的把握。 2）總結：作文模版可為 It is well-known that . is the most . in life, from which we can . for example. Take myself as an example, When I first . Disappointed.Suddenly.Finally.Since then.In conclusion, . can bring us . with which .It is advocated that we shou

28、ld Only with can we 3）即學即練：（2011年湖北高考英語作文） 請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你校園生活中的一個事例，就與人合作這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：無

29、須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；內容必須結合校園生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱；詞數(shù)為100左右。范文： It is well-known that teamwork is the most important way of solving problem in life, through which we can complete the task efficiently.Take myself as an example, I was the leader of a football team. Once in a match, our team fai

30、led although all the members had tried their best. Later the coach told us the with key point was teamwork, which means we should cooperate with each other. Realizing the importance of teamwork, finally we succeed.In conclusion, teamwork can help us play the role of every member at best. Only with t

31、eamwork can we make our complicated work easier.4常用詞匯短語 1occur 替換 think ofSuddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2devote替換spendHe spends all his spare time in r

32、eading. He devotes all his spare time to reading.3seek替換want / look forThey sought (wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4average 替換ordinaryI m an average ( ordinary ) student.5but替換veryThe film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.Th

33、e film we saw last night was anything but boring.6seat 替換sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.7be supposed to 替換shouldHe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8appreciate 替換thankThank you very much for you help. We appreciate your he

34、lp very much. / Your help is much appreciated.9the case替換 trueI dont think it is the case ( true ).10on替換as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he began his research. On his arrival, he began his research.11due to替換because ofHe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm. 12cover替換walk/readAfter covering

35、 (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.13contribute to替換  be helpful/usefulPlenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14round the corner 替換 coming soon/ nearby The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming

36、). Do you have any plans? Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 15aaae to light替換discoverThe family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16have a ball替換have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the wo

37、rkshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).17aaae up with替換think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18set aside替換saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books. 19be of + n. 替換adj.The prod

38、ucts are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.20refer to  替換talk about/of, mentionThe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.21can not but / can not help but替換have to doI could not but (had to) go home.22more often than not替換usuallyMore often than not

39、(Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.23lest替換so that /in order thatI wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.24be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替換want to do sth./wish forI want to see you ve

40、ry much. I am long to see you.25be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替換be interested in He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.26more than替換very Im very glad to learn that you are coming in September. Im more than glad to learn that you are coming in Septe

41、mber.  If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.27perfect (ly) 替換good/ very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).28do sb a/the favor 替換helpWould you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?29the othe

42、r day替換a few days agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. 30in the course of替換during In the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31the majority of替換mostThe majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer wat

43、ching TV at home to going to the cinema.32consist of替換be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.33be worn out替換 be tired / broken After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired). My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.34become of替換 happenWhat do

44、think has become of ( happened to ) him ?35attend to替換look after 36on condition that替換as long as37nevertheless替換however38express ones satisfaction with替換be satisfied with 39spare no efforts to do替換try ones best to do40many a 替換many41be rushed off ones feet  替換be busy in doing42a handful of替換a l

45、ittle / some43meanwhile替換at the same time44get to ones feet替換stand up 45beneath替換under46occasionally替換sometimes /once in while47for instance替換for example48seldom替換not often49wealthy替換 rich50amazing替換surprising 51as a matter of fact 替換in fact5常用習語 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.God helps those who

46、 help themselves. 天助自助者。 3.Easier said than done. 說起來容易做起來難。 4.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，謬之千里。 6.Slow and steady wins the race. 穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打無往而不勝。 7.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。 8.Experience is the mother of wisdom

47、. 實踐出真知。 9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。 10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無德之美猶如沒有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。 11.More hasty, less speed. 欲速則不達。 12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，學到老。 13.All that glitters is not gold. 閃光的未必都是金子。 14.A journey of a thousand miles begi

48、ns with a single step.千里之行始于足下。 15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 16.Rome was not built in a day. 偉業(yè)非一日之功。 17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所見略同。 18.well begun, half done. 好的開始等于成功的一半。 19.It is hard to please all. 眾口難調。 20.Out of sight, out of mind. 眼不見，心不念。 21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事實勝于雄辯。 22.

49、Call back white and white back. 顛倒黑白。 23.First things first. 凡事有輕重緩急。 24.Ill news travels fast. 壞事傳千里。 25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真情。 26.live not to eat, but eat to live. 活著不是為了吃飯，吃飯為了活著。 27.Action speaks louder than words. 行動勝過語言。 28.East or west, home is the best. 金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。 29.It

50、s not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。 30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能當飯吃。 31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。 32.The older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。 33.Do as Romans do in Rome. 入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。 34.An idle youth, a needy age. 少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。 35.As the tree, so the fruit. 種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。 36.To live is to

51、 learn, to learn is to better live.活著為了學習，學習為了更好的活著。 6常用句式 It句型 It will be + some time + beforeIt wont be long before humans visit the Mars. It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model

52、in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. It is + 被強調部分 + that1)  It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2) Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge. more than any other 表示最高級Among the optional courses, sp

53、oken English and computer study are more popular than any one else. 名詞從句 It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. My hometown is no longer what it used to be.（非限制性）定語從句 It was quite an experience for us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of

54、 my life. 分詞結構 I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. Born in American, Thom

55、as Edison was a great scientist and inventor. with結構 A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured. He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. 倒裝句 The time is so precious that we cant afford to waste

56、it. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. Although we are tired, we are happy.Tired as we are, we are happy. Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. 被動語態(tài) Opinions are divided on the question. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students

57、. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 巧妙的改寫（1）Only 改成no one but   Only Tom passed the exam last week. No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）as soon as 改成No soonerthan/Hardlywhen/Immediately/The  moment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）have sb/sth do/done The girl was knocked off her bicycle and ha