我手寫我心新目標(biāo)8下英語作文期末復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)課件

1、我手寫我心新目標(biāo)英語八年級(下)書面表達(dá)專題課件By Mr. Zhu星沙英語 Hello, dear friends! Are you afraid of writing English compositions? In fact, they are very simple. We neednt fear them. We all know, “英語作文不可怕，不過就是幾句話！” Right? Now, here are some of our compositions. Lets take a look together. And think how to correct the mista

2、kes. OK, lets begin! 八年級下Units 78定時作業(yè) 書面表達(dá)（10分）每個人在日常生活中都會遇到一些令人氣憤的事情。請你根據(jù)下面提示，以第一人稱英語寫一篇短文。要求包含下面提供的信息。不少于60詞。提示：你的鄰居喜歡聽音樂，甚至晚上音樂聲也很大，影響了你的生活和學(xué)習(xí)。為此，你很生氣。最后，你找到了你的鄰居，你的鄰居表示歉意。參考詞匯：neighbor, make noise, cant stand any more, would you mind? say sorry. 原文一：(08.2 2007-6-15 8 分)Dear neighborhood,I know y

3、oure very happy, but I cant stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please dont make noisy everyday. Your music sound is very big. Its infulus my life and learn. So Im angry with you. Im say sorry to you. Yours, sincelly,Mandy. 修改稿：Dear neighborhood (neighbor),I kn

4、ow youre very happy, but I cant stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please dont make noisy everyday (make any noise / so much noise every day). Your music sound (刪去) is very big (very / too loud). Its infulus (It infuences) my life and learn (study). So Im angr

5、y with you. Im say sorry to you. (I think you should say sorry to me.) Yours, (刪去逗號)sincelly,Mandy. (刪去句號) 原文二：(08.2 2007-6-15 7 分)My neighbors are like listening music. And they listening music everyday. That made a lot of noise. Its bad for my life and study.One night, my neighbors were listening

6、music. The music was very loudly. I cant sleep. So I was very angry. I cant stand it any more. So I found my neighbor: “Would you mind turning down the music?” “No, not at all.” And they say sorry to me. 修改稿：My neighbors are (刪去) like listening to music. And they listening music everyday (listen to

7、music every day). That made (It makes) a lot of noise. Its bad for my life and study.One night, my neighbors were listening music. The music was very loudly (loud). I cant sleep. So I was very angry. I cant (couldnt) stand it any more. So I found my neighbor: (went to my neighbors house and said,) “

8、Would you mind turning down the music?” “No, not at all.” And they say (said) sorry to me. 原文三：(08.2 2007-6-15 6 分)My neighbor like to listen to music. Sometimes, them make noise very lound. Influence my life and study. I cant stand it. I find my neighbor, told them “Would you mind turning down the

9、music?” Usually, Im mad at them. However neighbor say sorry. I dont ague with them. 修改稿：My neighbor (neighbors) like to listen to music. Sometimes, them make noise very lound (they make too much loud noise). Influence (It influences) my life and study. I cant stand it (any more). (So, one day, ) I f

10、ind my neighbor (went and found my neighbors.) (I) told them “Would you mind turning down the music?” Usually, Im mad at them. However (, my ) neighbor say sorry. (So) I dont ague (argue) with them. 原文四：(08.2 2007-6-15 7 分)I cant stand my neighborhood. Because my neighborhood like listenning the mus

11、ic. I think this music is noisy. So I say: “Dear Mr Green, Would you mind turning dwon the music.” Mr Green say: “Oh sorry. This music is very much. So I forget.” I say: “Dear Mr Green, thank you very much.” 修改稿：I cant stand my neighborhood (neighbor). Because my neighborhood (neighbor) like listenn

12、ing the (likes listening to) music. I think this (the) music is (too) noisy. So I say: “Dear Mr Green, Would you mind turning dwon (down) the music.” Mr Green say (says): “Oh sorry. This music (This piece of music) is very much (great / very beautiful). So I forget (forgot).” I say: “Dear Mr Green,

13、thank you very much.” 原文五：(08.1 2007-6-15 7 分)I have a neighbor. He very like to listen music. He often listen music all day. Ever at night. The music is make so much noisy that I cant stadly well.One day, I cant stand so londly noisy any more. So I went to his house and asked, “Would you mind turin

14、g down the music. Because I cant stadly well. And I dont have a good rest.” Finally, the neighbor said sorry to me and agree ture down the music.Im very happy. Because I have a good rest and I can stady quaitly now.修改稿：I have a neighbor. He very like to listen music (He likes to listen to music very

15、 much). He often listen (listens to) music all day. Ever (And he plays music even louder) at night. The music is (刪去) make (makes) so much noisy (noise) that I cant stadly (study) well.One day, I cant (couldnt) stand so londly noisy (the loud noise) any more. So I went to his house and asked, “Would

16、 you mind turing (turning) down the music. Because (刪去) I cant stadly (study) well. And I dont (cant) have a good rest (every night).” Finally, the neighbor said sorry to me and agree ture down (agreed to turn down) the music.Im very happy. Because (, because) I (can) have a good rest and I can stad

17、y quaitly (study quietly) now.二七年春期定時作業(yè)八年級英語（Units 12）學(xué)生作文書面表達(dá)（10分）每個人都有自己的理想，請以My Ideal為題寫一篇暢談理想的作文。要求：1、詞數(shù)80詞左右；2、寫出自己的真實感受；3、提示詞必須用上。提示：want to be, in the future, will, come true. 原文1：My Ideal (08.3 ) In ten years, I think Ill be a actress and live in Shanghai. Because I hard (heard / think) Shan

18、ghai is very nice. As a actress, I think Ill act a lot of interesting movies. And I think Ill become famous. I want to keep pets. I love pets very much. And my best pets are cat and dog. I think them are very cult. I might even want to travel the world. But niw, I have to finish high school and will

19、 finish college. (詞數(shù)：85詞；作文得分：8分；全卷得分：88分) 修改稿：My Ideal (08.3 ) In ten years, I think Ill be a actress (an actress) and live in Shanghai. Because I hard (heard / think) Shanghai is very nice. As a actress (an actress), I think Ill act a lot of interesting movies. And I think Ill become (very) famous

20、. I want to keep pets. I love pets very much. And my best pets are cat and dog (cats and dogs). I think them (they) are very cult (cute). I might even want to travel the world. But niw (now), I have to finish high school and will finish (刪去) college. 原文2：My Ideal (08.1 ) I want to be a famous basket

21、ball player. I will make a lot of money. I will buy some gitfs for my friend, family and teacher. I will travel around the world. I will meet lots of people. I will have any pets. I am like parrot very much. I will live in Shanghai in the future. I hope my dream will come true in the future. (詞數(shù)：67詞

22、；作文得分：9分；全卷得分：分) 修改稿：My Ideal (08.1 ) I want to be a famous basketball player. I will make a lot of money. I will buy some gitfs for my friend (friends), family and teacher (teachers). I will travel around the world. I will meet lots of people. I will have any pets (pet). I am (刪去) like parrot very

23、much. I will live in Shanghai in the future. I hope my dream will come true in the future. 3My Ideal (08.3 ) I is a student. My Ideal very poorly. I want to be a doctor. But I in doctor very I will is good doctor. (可以這樣把話寫通順：I am a student. I have a good ideal. I want to be a doctor in the future. I

24、 must study very hard now. I will be a good doctor. And I can help many sick people. I believe that my dream will come true. ) (詞數(shù)：24詞；作文得分：3分；全卷得分：43分)范文My Ideal (Mr. Zhu寫的范文) Hello, dear friends! Let me tell you something about my ideal, OK? I think I want to be a computer programmer in the future

25、. Then I will be very famous. Ill work and live in Beijing because its a very beautiful city. Ill meet many interesting people there. And Ill live in an apartment with my family, because I love my family very much. Ill keep many pets. But now, my house is too small, and my sister hates them very muc

26、h. Well, this is my ideal. I hope my dream will come true soon. What about yours? Can you tell me? (字?jǐn)?shù)：102詞；作文得分：9.99999分；全卷得分：99.99999分)8下半期考試書面表達(dá) 八、書面表達(dá) （5分）“英語作文不可怕，不過就是幾句話！”同學(xué)們，只要你們平時注意英語知識的積累，多讀多寫，英語作文就肯定能拿高分！現(xiàn)在，就請用你們的最熟悉的單詞和最簡單的句子，向大家介紹一下你自己吧，題目就用“Myself”，至少寫5句話。 原文一：Myself (08.2 ) My name is

27、Mary. I am a outgoing gril. I have long black hear and I have black big eyes. I think I popular at school. I have too munh frinds. And My best frinds is Lily. She very shy. Many pepole said we both look like. But I dont thik so. This is me. If you want to know me, pleace write a letter for me. (字?jǐn)?shù)：6

28、7詞；作文得分：3.5分（滿分為5分）；全卷得分：60分) 修改稿：Myself (08.2 ) My name is Mary. I am a (an) outgoing gril (girl). I have long black hear (hair) and I have black big (big black) eyes. I think I (am) popular at school. I have too munh frinds (too many friends). And My best frinds (friend) is Lily. She (is) very shy

29、. Many pepole (people) said (say) we both look like (look the same). But I dont thik (think) so. This is me. If you want to know me, pleace (please) write a letter for (to) me. 原文二：Myself (08.1 )Hello, everyone! I am is a middle school student. I live in Yue jiang twon. Im is a good student. I like

30、English every much. I think Is good at write. I like math, too. I usually read books in classroom. I like make friends. If you want to become my friends, you can meet me at Yuejiang Middle School. My name is Mary. (字?jǐn)?shù)：64詞；作文得分：3.5分（滿分為5分）；全卷得分：85.5分) 修改稿：Myself (08.1 )Hello, everyone! I am is (刪去) a

31、 middle school student. I live in Yue jiang twon (Yuejiang Town / the town of Yuejiang / a town called Yuejiang). Im is (刪去) a good student. I like English every (very) much. I think Is (Im) good at write (writing). I like math, too. I usually read books in (the) classroom. I like make (making) frie

32、nds. If you want to become my friends, you can meet me at Yuejiang Middle School. My name is Mary. 原文三：Myself (08.3 )Hello! My name is Selia. Im a student. Im 14 years old. And Im a Chinese. I like playing ping-pong and basketball. I like eat some healthy food. my favorit stars are 183 club. I love

33、them very much. I love listening to music and watching TV. I think its very interesting. I like English, and I like my English teacher too. Are you like me, I want to make friends with you. (字?jǐn)?shù)：73詞；作文得分：4.5分（滿分為5分）；全卷得分：85.5分) 修改稿：Myself (08.3 )Hello! My name is Selia. Im a student. Im 14 years old.

34、 And Im a (刪去) Chinese. I like playing ping-pong and basketball. I like eat (eating) some (刪去) healthy food. my (My) favorit (favorite) stars are 183 club. I love them very much. I love listening to music and watching TV. I think its very interesting. I like English, and I like my English teacher too. Are (Do) you like me, (?) I want to make friends wi