Module 1 外研版英語九年級上冊模塊主題寫作詳解與訓練

1、PAGE PAGE 5外研版英語九（上）Module 1模塊主題寫作詳解與訓練模塊主題寫作整體感知 話題分析本模塊以“Wonders of the world”為話題，向我們展示了中國的秦始皇兵馬俑、三峽大壩、非洲的維多利亞瀑布、美國的科羅拉多大峽谷等世界奇觀，它們是人們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪薪?jīng)常談論的話題。本模塊的作文類型以“奇觀或景點”為話題的書面表達形式，靈活多變，體裁豐富，可以描述旅游經(jīng)歷，還可以介紹某個奇觀或景點。描寫旅游時往往涉及具體的行程安排、所做的事情和旅游感想。描寫奇觀或景點時，主要是是描寫該奇觀或景點的特點，抓住該奇觀或景點的具體位置和特色，對某一奇觀或景點進行描述或簡單評價。通過本模

2、塊的學習，同學們應該學會描寫某一奇觀或景點。 常用表達1. I had a wonderful visit/trip. 我經(jīng)歷了一次愉快的旅行。2. I have never been to such a beautiful place before. 我以前從未到過如此美麗的地方。3. The beauty of nature keeps me from going home. 大自然的美使我流連忘返。4. A lot of visitors come to visit it every year. 每年有許多游客來參觀它。5. I believe it will attract more

3、and more people. 我相信它會吸引越來越多的人。6. I would remember the visit to. 我會記住去的旅行。7. I hope I will come here one day again. 希望有一天我會再次來到這里。實例分析 典型例題世界第一大水利工程三峽大壩，2007年被國家旅游局評為首批國家5A級旅游景區(qū)。假設你是導游，根據(jù)以下提示，向游客展示三峽大壩“高峽出平湖”的雄姿。提示：1. 位于湖北省宜昌市，距葛洲壩38千米；2. 壩長約2 300米，底部寬115米，頂部寬15米，最大壩高185米；3. 于1994年動工修建，工期17年；4. 建成后，

4、形成了長達600千米的巨型水庫，成為世界罕見的新景觀；提示詞匯： HYPERLINK 葛洲壩Gezhou Dam，最大壩高maximum height，巨型水庫giant reservoir，罕見的rare，景觀scenery。 思路點撥1. 體裁：說明文；2. 人稱：第三人稱；3. 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時。寫作模板開篇點題The Three Gorges Dam is one of the most fantastic man-made wonders in the world.分層介紹位置lies in Yichang, Hubei Province. .38 kilometres

5、away from Gezhou Dam.事實.began to be built in 1994. .took 17 years規(guī)模.a maximum height of 185 metres .2, 300 metres long, 115 metres wide at the bottom and 15 metres wide at the top. .a giant reservoir with a length of 600 kilometres .作用.produces electricity for.作出評價.a new rare scenery in the world 連句

6、成篇Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very glad to be your guide for the one-day tour to the Three Gorges Dam. Welcome to the Three Gorges Dam. The Three Gorges Dam is one of the most fantastic man-made wonders in the world. It lies in Yichang, Hubei Province. Its only 38 kilometres away from Gezhou Dam. T

7、he Three Gorges Dam began to be built in 1994 and it took 17 years to finish the project. The dam with a maximum height of 185 metres is about 2, 300 metres long, 115 metres wide at the bottom and 15 metres wide at the top. As the dam was built, a giant reservoir with a length of 600 kilometres form

8、ed. It produces electricity for millions of people in China. In my opinion, its also a new rare scenery in the world. I know you are looking forward to the visit. Wish you have great fun for the whole day.范文欣賞（一）請你根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。中文提示要點不要逐條 HYPERLINK /html/c168 l #更多英語學習資料盡在英語聯(lián)盟；歡迎訪問：

9、英語聯(lián)盟-# o 翻譯，可適當發(fā)捧。要求字數(shù)在60個左右，開頭部分已給出，不計入字數(shù)總數(shù)。（桂林市2003中考）中文提示：假設你是Li Lei，作為一名導游，現(xiàn)在向你的游客們介紹一下桂林。要點可包括：1. 位于廣西北部；2. 市區(qū)人口六十多萬；3. 以風景美麗而聞名于世；4. 山青水秀，環(huán)境干凈、整潔；5. 每年有許多游客；6. 坐船游覽漓江風光，免費公共汽車游覽市區(qū)各景點；7. 在桂林過得愉快。英語提示：population人口；environment環(huán)境；tourist游客；scene風景；scenic spot景點；on free buses坐免費公共汽車。Ladies and gent

10、lemen,Welcome to Guilin.Guilin is in the north of Guangxi. The population in the city of Guilin is over (more than) six hundred thousand (600,000). Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world.The hills are HYPERLINK /html/c257 l #更多英語學習資料盡在英語聯(lián)盟；歡迎訪問：英語聯(lián)盟-# o green and the water is clear.

11、The environment here is clean and tidy.Every year a lot of tourists come to visit Guilin.You can see the scenes of the Li River by boat.You can visit the scenic spots in the city on free buses.I hope youll enjoy yourselves in Guilin. （二）假如你住在海南島，請用英語寫一篇介紹海南島的短文。詞數(shù)：80詞左右。內(nèi)容包括以下要點：1. 位于中國南部，中國第二大島；2.

12、氣侯溫暖，空氣清新；3. 有海灘和高大的椰子樹；4. 可以游泳、釣魚、劃船等；5. ?？谑惺呛Ｄ蠉u的省會，也是海南島最大的城市；6. 可以品嘗各種海鮮。參考詞匯：climate氣侯；coconut palm tree椰子樹。Hainan Island is in the south of China. It is the second largest island of China.The climate is warm. You can enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery on Hainan Island. You w

13、ill never forget that.There are many beautiful beaches and tall coconut palm trees here. You can go swimming, go fishing or go boating in the sea. Haikou is the capital of Hainan Province and it is also the biggest city on the island. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious seafood here. Wecome to Hain

14、an Island! Im sure youll have a good time here.（三）你的朋友Peter看到了你國慶期間游覽天馬山時拍的相片，詢問你游天馬山的經(jīng)歷。請你根據(jù)以下提示，將游覽經(jīng)歷寫成一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求語句通順，可適當發(fā)揮，不能逐句翻譯。提示：1. 天馬山空氣清新，以其優(yōu)美的景色而著稱，如：瀑布、綠草、花朵；2. 你和家人一個小時就爬上了山頂, 并在山頂玩游戲、唱歌、野餐；3. 下午五點回到家，感覺累，但很開心。During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. Mount Tianma is a famous place that has many beautiful views, such as waterfalls, green grass and nice flowers. And the air in Mount Tianma is quite clear. It took us an hour to climb up to the top. What