高考英語寫作專題經(jīng)典講座二十二 句子美化技術(shù)1

1、PAGE 第PAGE 頁碼5頁/總NUMPAGES 總頁數(shù)5頁Evaluation Warning: The document was created with Spire.Doc for .NET.寫作專題二十二 句子美化技術(shù)1：同位語句子美化技術(shù)1：同位語同位語表示與前面的名詞處于同一關(guān)系，在語法上是“名詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，在意義上，后一個(gè)名詞解釋前一個(gè)名詞。例如，在句子“我們的語文老師，陳老師，教書非常出色”中，劃線部分就是同位語。英文“Mr. Chen, our teacher of Chinese, teaches us excellently”，劃線部分就是同位語。中英思維方式有差異，

2、所以位置有所不同。一 學(xué)會(huì)使用同位語的多種表達(dá)技巧我們認(rèn)真的觀察下面同位語與它所修飾的名詞之間的關(guān)系：技巧1：I am looking forward to visiting Beijing, a city with many famous places of interest. 小概念 大概念 其他修飾成分技巧2：I am looking to visiting Beijing, capital of china. 被修飾詞 表示特征的名詞短語He paid a visit to Mr. Bush, president of the United States of America. 被修飾

3、詞 表示身份的名詞短語Mr. Bush saw a pair of little pandas in the zoo, a kind of animal only alive in China. 被修飾詞 補(bǔ)充意義的名詞短語二 定語從句與同位語的轉(zhuǎn)化。1 China, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing very fast. （定語從句）改為：China, a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing ver

4、y fast. 2 Finally, Su Dongpo, who was a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, which was then a city famous for its beautiful lakes.改為：Finally, Su Dongpo, a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, then a city famous for its beautiful lakes.3 Egypt, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts man

5、y tourists from all over the world. （定語從句）改為：Egypt, a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts many tourists from all over the world. 4Finally, Li Bai, who was a great poet, arrived in Xian, which was then the capital of the Tang Dynasty and also an international city.改為：Finally, Li Bai,

6、a great poet, arrived in Xian, then the capital of the Tang Dynasty and also an international city.練習(xí)三 運(yùn)用同位語的方法進(jìn)行翻譯1 Marty Fielding患有一種特殊的肌肉疾病，行動(dòng)笨拙，經(jīng)常碰到家具上。Marty Fielding, _, moves very clumsily and keeps bumping into furniture. 2. 我渴望去北京，一個(gè)擁有4000年歷史的城市。I am eager to go to Beijing, _. 3. 昨天，我去拜訪了Joh

7、n, 一個(gè)樂于幫助別人的人。Yesterday I visited John, _.4. Larry是機(jī)器人公司的工程師，送妻子一臺(tái)名叫Tony機(jī)器人做家務(wù)，以檢測(cè)它的性能。Larry, _, gave a robot called Tony to his wife Claire, who tested out the machine. 5.第二天早上，我把一個(gè)內(nèi)壁和外壁裝有果凍的，冰凍過的碗罩在蛇窩上方。The next morning, I placed the frozen bowl, _.練習(xí)四 運(yùn)用同位語的方法合并句子例題: Most students cannot wait unt

8、il semester break.Semester break is a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams.合并為: Most students cannot wait until semester break, a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams.The ski trip1 Sammy found herself bored on her winter break from school. Sammy was a short, red-haired dr

9、ama major.2 So Sammy called her friend Rhoda. Rhoda was a tall, brown-haired physics major.3 Finally, Sammy and Rhoda decided to go on a ski trip. The trip was a fun, fantastic, fantasy escape.4 First, they made reservations at the Big Bear Hut. The Hut was a ski lodge in Bear Valley.5 Then, Sammy a

10、nd Rhoda rented their supplies. The supplies were skis by Rossignol and boots by Fischer.練習(xí)五 運(yùn)用同位語的方法合并句子例題: Most people enjoy music.The people are those of any age.Music is a kind of medicine for the soul.合并為:Most people, those of any age, enjoy music, a kind of medicine for the soul.1. Heavy metal

11、 is supposed to attract crowds of long-haired, maladjusted teens. Heavy metal is music with loud electric guitars and drums. The maladjusted teens are young people who rebel against their parents. 2. But my Uncle Walter enjoys listening to Heavy Metal. Uncle Walter is a 40-year-old, bald accountant.

12、 His Heavy Metal is usually some song by Arrows and Petunias.3. On the other hand, modern rock is supposed to attract hordes of modern teenagers. Modern rock is music featuring vocals and acoustics. The teenagers are boys who are addicted to MTV and girls who dream of dating the lead singers.4 But m

13、y Aunt Wilma listens to modern rock. Aunt Wilma is a 50-year-old housewife. Modern rock is any new release by D-Fresch Load.5. Soft music is supposed to attract people like Walter and Wilma. Soft rock is background music often played in elevators. Walter and Wilma are people who wear polyester suits

14、.練習(xí)答案：練習(xí)一 運(yùn)用同位語的方法進(jìn)行翻譯1. a boy suffering from a kind of muscle disease2. a city with a history of 4000 years.3. a man always ready to help those in need.4. an engineer for a robot company5. the one with some jelly between its outside and inside walls.練習(xí)二 運(yùn)用同位語的方法合并句子The ski trip1 Sammy，a short, red-

15、haired drama major，found herself bored on her winter break from school.2 So Sammy called her friend Rhoda，a tall, brown-haired physics major.3 Finally, Sammy and Rhoda decided to go on a ski trip，a fun, fantastic, fantasy escape.4 First, they made reservations at the Big Bear Hut，a ski lodge in Bear

16、 Valley.5 Then, Sammy and Rhoda rented their supplies，skis by Rossignol and boots by Fischer.練習(xí)三 運(yùn)用同位語的方法合并句子1. Heavy metal, music with loud electric guitars and drums, is supposed to attract crowds of long-haired, maladjusted teens, young people who rebel against their parents.2. But my Uncle Walter, a 40-year-old, bald accountant, enjoys listening to Heavy Metal, usually some song by Arrows and Petunias.3. On the other hand, modern rock, music featuring vocals and acoustics, is supposed to attract hordes of modern teenagers, boys who are addicted to MTV and girls who dream of datin