2021屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)強(qiáng)化專練考點(diǎn)13書面表達(dá)概要寫作含解析

1、2021屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)強(qiáng)化專練考點(diǎn)13書面表達(dá)概要寫作含解析2021屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)強(qiáng)化專練考點(diǎn)13書面表達(dá)概要寫作含解析2021屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)強(qiáng)化專練考點(diǎn)13書面表達(dá)概要寫作含解析考點(diǎn)13 書面表達(dá)概要寫作Writing 1（2020上海市大同中學(xué)高三期中）Directions: Read the following passage。 Summarize the main idea and the main point(s） of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own wors as far as possible。P

2、edestrians onlyThe concept of trafficfree shopping areas goes back a long time。 During the Middle Ages, trafficfree shopping areas were built to allow people to shop in comfort and， more importantly， safety. The modern, traffic-free shopping street was born in Europe in the 1960s, when both city pop

3、ulations and car ownership increased rapidly. Dirty exhaust fumes from cars and the risks involved in crossing the road were beginning to make shopping an unpleasant and dangerous experience. Many believed the time was right for experimenting with car-free streets， and shopping areas seemed the best

4、 place to start。At first, there was resistance from shopkeepers. They believed that such a move would be bad for business. They argued that people would avoid streets if they were unable to get to them in their cars。 When the first streets in Europe were closed to traffic， there were even noisy demo

5、nstrations, as many shopkeepers predicted they would lose customers.However， research carried out afterwards in several European cities revealed some unexpected statistics. In Munich, Cologne and Hamburg, visitors to shopping areas increased by 50 percent。 On Copenhagens main shopping street， shopke

6、epers reported sales increases of 25-40 percent。 Shopkeepers in Minneapolis， USA， were so impressed when they learnt this that they even offered to pay for the construction and maintenance costs of their own traffic-free streets.With the arrival of the traffic-free shopping street, many shops， espec

7、ially those selling things like clothes, food and smaller luxury items, prospered. Unfortunately, it wasnt good news for everyone, as shops selling furniture and larger electrical appliances actually saw their sales drop. Many of these were forced to move elsewhere, away from the city centre. Today

8、they are a common feature on the outskirts of towns and cities, often situated in out-of-town retail zones with their own car parks and other local facilities.【答案】The idea of traffic-free shopping areas appeared long ago。 In the 1960s, the modern, pedestrian shopping street came into existence for a

9、 cleaner and safer shopping environment. At first， shopkeepers objected that it would affect business. Actually， the idea resulted in better sales and gained support later。 However， shops selling large products lost customers and had to move to outskirts.【分析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文.文章介紹說(shuō)，無(wú)交通的購(gòu)物區(qū)在很久以前就出現(xiàn)了,步行街的出現(xiàn)追溯到

10、20世紀(jì)60年代。起初步行街的概念遭到了很多店主的反對(duì)，認(rèn)為會(huì)影響生意，但后來(lái)銷售量的增長(zhǎng)讓他們改變了看法。但是售賣大型商品的商店不得不搬到了郊區(qū).【詳解】1。要點(diǎn)摘錄The concept of traffic-free shopping areas goes back a long time.The modern， trafficfree shopping street was born in Europe in the 1960s， when both city populations and car ownership increased rapidly.Dirty exhaust f

11、umes from cars and the risks involved in crossing the road were beginning to make shopping an unpleasant and dangerous experience.At first， there was resistance from shopkeepers.They believed that such a move would be bad for business。In Munich, Cologne and Hamburg, visitors to shopping areas increa

12、sed by 50 percent。On Copenhagens main shopping street， shopkeepers reported sales increases of 2540 percent.Unfortunately， it wasnt good news for everyone， as shops selling furniture and larger electrical appliances actually saw their sales drop.Many of these were forced to move elsewhere, away from

13、 the city centre. Today they are a common feature on the outskirts of towns and cities， often situated in outof-town retail zones with their own car parks and other local facilities.2?？b密構(gòu)思將第1個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重組，將第2、3個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合，將第4、5個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合，將6、7個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合,將第8、9、10個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。3.遣詞造句The modern， trafficfree shopping street f

14、or a pleased and safe shopping environment.At the beginning, shopkeepers resisted it with the reason that it will influence their business.Shops selling furniture and larger electrical appliances actually saw their sales drop, which were forced to move to outskirts of towns and cities for it is conv

15、enient to park cars?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型1 In the 1960s, the modern, pedestrian shopping street came into existence for a cleaner and safer shopping environment.（用for加兩個(gè)名詞短語(yǔ)的形式概括了第2、3個(gè)要點(diǎn)，簡(jiǎn)潔明了且概括準(zhǔn)確）高分句型2 At first, shopkeepers objected that it would affect business。（用that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句概括了起初店主們反對(duì)步行街的理由）高分句型3 However， shop

16、s selling large products lost customers and had to move to outskirts。（用however轉(zhuǎn)折句表明此處與前文的對(duì)比關(guān)系） Writing2(2020上海金山區(qū)高三一模）Directions： Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point（s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible。Will people reduc

17、e car use in 20 years？Nowadays， the ownership of cars is no longer being recognized as a symbol of ones wealth and social position. Tracking back to the past when only the rich were qualified to possess private cars， we couldnt help marveling at the historic change such a convenient invention brough

18、t to peoples daily lives. Nevertheless， the increase in the number of car owners is spelling many negative effects。 These rising problems also cause some people to predict that the use of cars might be reduced in two decades。Above all, the use of cars remarkably threatens our environment, if such a

19、tendency is not brought under control in time， the Earth will no longer be a suitable place for humans to survive in the future. People have to face the consequence。 It is a reality from which no one is able to escape。 Every day， thousands of private cars are emitting tons of exhausted gas that seri

20、ously pollutes the air. The carbon dioxide leads to the worldwide greenhouse effect， which causes the sea level to rise and produces negative impacts on weather. In addition, more energy is being wasted because of the production of private cars。 In order to build a resource-conserving and environmen

21、tfriendly society, people ought to reduce the use of cars。In fact, diversified measures are being taken by the government to limit the use of cars。 If such a tendency continues, the effect will be shown in the near future。 For example, to reach the goal of building a safe and harmonious society, Bei

22、jing Traffic Management Bureau has restricted regional traffic in rush hours on working days。 A number of private cars are prohibited on no-drivingdays.Last, the advancement of public transportation systems also helps change car owners way of travelling. Efforts are being made to construct more agre

23、eable networks of buses, subways, trains and airplanes. In the meanwhile， advances in technology might help cut down the cost of travelling in public vehicles.【答案】Despite its symbolization of wealth in the past and great changes to peoples life， cars have caused many negative effects. First， by emit

24、ting greenhouse gases， they threaten the environment. Besides， energy-consuming cars are not sustainable to the society. Therefore, the government has taken various measures like restrictions. Last， public transport is a good remedy thanks to the high-tech. （58words）【分析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文.文章介紹了擁有汽車已不是財(cái)富和社會(huì)地位的

25、象征,有車一族數(shù)量的增加帶來(lái)了許多負(fù)面影響，威脅著我們的環(huán)境，浪費(fèi)了更多的能源,并提出人們應(yīng)該減少汽車的使用,通過(guò)政府采取措施，公共交通系統(tǒng)進(jìn)步改變?nèi)藗兂鲂蟹绞?，技術(shù)進(jìn)步降低乘坐公共交通成本等方法減少私家車的使用?！驹斀狻? 要點(diǎn)摘錄Tracking back to the past when only the rich were qualified to possess private cars， we couldnt help marveling at the historic change such a convenient invention brought to peoples da

26、ily lives. Nevertheless, the increase in the number of car owners is spelling many negative effects。 Every day, thousands of private cars are emitting tons of exhausted gas that seriously pollutes the air. In addition， more energy is being wasted because of the production of private cars。 In fact， d

27、iversified measures are being taken by the government to limit the use of cars.In the meanwhile, advances in technology might help cut down the cost of travelling in public vehicles.2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1、2兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重組；將3、4兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合；將5、6兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。3.遣詞造句Despite its symbolization of wealth in the past and great changes

28、to peoples life， cars have caused many negative effects。 By emitting greenhouse gases， they threaten the environment. Energyconsuming cars are not sustainable to the society. the government has taken various measures like restrictions.public transport is a good remedy thanks to the high-tech?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句

29、型1 Despite its symbolization of wealth in the past and great changes to peoples life， cars have caused many negative effects。 運(yùn)用介詞“Despite+名詞”表示“即使”，對(duì)原文第一段進(jìn)行了概括。表達(dá)高級(jí)。高分句型2：By emitting greenhouse gases, they threaten the environment. 用介詞短語(yǔ)作方式狀語(yǔ)對(duì)第二段的大量使用私家車造成空氣污染的消極影響進(jìn)行了概括，表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。Writing3（2020上海浦東新區(qū)高三

30、一模)Directions： Read the following passage。 Summarize the main idea and the main point（s) of the passage in no more than 60 words。 Use your own words as far as possible。Solving the Problem of E-WasteOne of the problems damaging our planet is the number of things we throw away. A more recent addition

31、to the list of things we chuck away is ewaste - electronic items that are broken and not recycled.Tonnes of televisions, phones， and other electronic equipment are discarded chiefly because we lack the skills to repair them. Fortunately， now solutions are being found to give ewaste a new life。Theres

32、 a growing trend for repair events and clubs which could be part of a solution to the growing amount of electrical and electronic junk。 A Restart Project in London， is one that many found around the world. One of its volunteers, Francesco Calo， said that this project allows you to reduce waste, exte

33、nd the life of objects, and it helps people who cannot afford to get rid of items that have developed a fault.As many electrical items contain valuable metals, another idea is e-waste mining. An experiment at the University of New South Wales involves extracting these materials from electronic appli

34、ances. Its thought that doing this could be more profitable than traditional mining。These projects make total sense - collections of ewaste for recycling are depressing or even decreasing according to Ruediger Kuehr， of the United Nations University. And in countries where there is no laws， much of

35、it just gets dumped。 However, the European Union, for example， is trying to tackle the problem by insisting manufacturers have to make appliances longerlasting and will have to supply spare parts for machines for up to 10 years._【答案】One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw awa

36、y, especially broken and not recycled electronic items. Fortunately， people are finding solutions to give e-waste a new life。 Repair events as well as club could be of help, and ewaste mining is also a new way to deal with the problem of ewaste. Besides， there are even laws insisting manufacturers m

37、ake appliances longer-lasting in some countries。【分析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文.文章介紹說(shuō)，破壞人類地球環(huán)境的問(wèn)題之一是我們?nèi)拥舻臇|西太多了.近年來(lái)，在我們?nèi)拥舻臇|西清單上又增加了一項(xiàng)壞了、無(wú)法回收的電子產(chǎn)品。本文介紹一些用來(lái)處理電子垃圾問(wèn)題的新方法?！驹斀狻? 要點(diǎn)摘錄 One of the problems damaging our planet is the number of things we throw away。. now solutions are being found to give e-waste a new life.There

38、s a growing trend for repair events and clubs which could be part of a solution to the growing amount of electrical and electronic junk. As many electrical items contain valuable metals， another idea is ewaste mining. the European Union, for example, is trying to tackle the problem by insisting manu

39、facturers have to make appliances longer-lasting2?？b密構(gòu)思 將第1、3兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重組,將第2、3兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。 3.遣詞造句 One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw away， especially broken and not recycled electronic items。Fortunately， People are finding solutions to give e-waste a new life。 Repair events as

40、well as club could be of help, and ewaste mining is also a new ways to deal with the problem of e-waste。 Besides, there are even laws insisting manufacturers make appliances longer-lasting in some countries?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型1 One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw away, especially br

41、oken and not recycled electronic items. 運(yùn)用一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句對(duì)原文第一段進(jìn)行了概括. 高分句型2： Repair events as well as club could be of help, and e-waste mining is also a new way to deal with the problem of ewaste. 用并列句對(duì)三四段內(nèi)容進(jìn)行概括. Writing 4（2020上海楊浦區(qū)高三期末)Directions： Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the

42、 main point(s） of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible。What Is Zero Waste？The goal of the “zero waste” movement is to get rid of all waste from products. “Zero waste” means using every part of a product。 Today, the zero waste idea can be found everywhere from f

43、ood to fashion。Creating a zero waste restaurant is a challenge. It is very difficult to use every part of produce and leave nothing behind. Creating a soup from unused ingredients is a popular way to use up extra food items. Other ways are more advanced。 Some restaurants use coffee grounds（咖啡渣)to fl

44、avor dishes. Some cooks also crush shrimp shells and reuse them in sauces. While its challenging, zero waste restaurants appear to be on the rise.In the fashion industry, zero waste isnt a new idea。 But in todays world of fast fashion, zero waste is growing more popular。 Usually, cutting cloth creat

45、es lots of waste. In zero waste fashion, designers try to avoid this。 One way to do so is by adding these extra pieces of cloth to the final design. Another way is to design clothing without wasteful cuts。Beyond restaurants and fashion, there are many other possibilities for zero waste products。 All

46、 restaurants need utensils（器皿）。 Bakeys is a company that is developing edible(可食用的）utensils. After using them, you can eat them! Their spoons are made of flour and come in all kinds of flavors. While these spoons are not hard enough to cut meat, they are perfect for rice dishes. Meanwhile, Air New Z

47、ealand is experimenting with edible coffee cups that are made by the company Twice。 They have already introduced a line of flavored cups. After you finish your coffee, you eat the cup, just like a cookie!Whether products are made to be edible or reusable, hopefully the movement will help reduce wast

48、e all over the world。【答案】Zero waste means eliminating all the wastes from a product and the movement is gaining popularity。 Some restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or food leftovers. Fashion designers either avoid unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra c

49、uts. Besides， Many companies are creating edible products especially utensils。 Hopefully, zero waste campaign can help reduce waste worldwide。【分析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。文章講述了什么是零浪費(fèi)。零浪費(fèi)意味著從一個(gè)產(chǎn)品中消除所有的浪費(fèi),這個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)越來(lái)越流行。一些餐館正在創(chuàng)造性地使用未使用的配料或食物殘羹剩飯。時(shí)裝設(shè)計(jì)師要么避免不必要的裁剪布料，要么尋找額外布料的新用途。此外，許多公司正在創(chuàng)造食用產(chǎn)品，特別是餐具.希望零浪費(fèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)可以幫助減少全球的廢物?！驹斀狻?

50、 要點(diǎn)摘錄1)“Zero waste” means using every part of a product。 Today, the zero waste idea can be found everywhere from food to fashion。2）Some restaurants use coffee grounds（咖啡渣)to flavor dishes. Some cooks also crush shrimp shells and reuse them in sauces。 While its challenging， zero waste restaurants app

51、ear to be on the rise.3)One way to do so is by adding these extra pieces of cloth to the final design。 Another way is to design clothing without wasteful cuts。4)Beyond restaurants and fashion, there are many other possibilities for zero waste products.5)Whether products are made to be edible or reus

52、able， hopefully the movement will help reduce waste all over the world。2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1、2、3、4、5五個(gè)要點(diǎn)分別概括。3。遣詞造句 Zero waste means eliminating all the wastes from a product and the movement is gaining popularity。Some restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or food leftovers. Fashion desi

53、gners either avoid unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra cuts. Besides， Many companies are creating edible products especially utensils. Hopefully， zero waste campaign can help reduce waste worldwide.【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型1 Some restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or

54、food leftovers。運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞不定式作定語(yǔ)修飾way，對(duì)第二段進(jìn)行概括.高分句型2：Fashion designers either avoid unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra cuts.用avoid加動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)，用either or連接并列成分，對(duì)第三段進(jìn)行概括，表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。Writing5(2020華東師范大學(xué)附屬東昌中學(xué)高三月考）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point（

55、s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible。The greatest recent social changes have been in the lives of women。 During the twentieth century there has been a remarkable shortening of the proportion of a womans life spent in caring for the children. A woman marry

56、ing at the end of the nineteenth century would probably have been in her middle twenties and would be likely to have seven or eight children, of whom four or five lived till they were five years old。 By the time the youngest was fifteen, the mother would have been in her early fifties and would expe

57、ct to live a further twenty years, during which custom， opportunity and health made it unusual for her to get paid work。 Today women marry younger and have fewer children。 Usually a womans youngest child will be fifteen when she is fortyfive years and is likely to take paid work until retirement at

58、sixty。Even while she has the care of children， her work is lightened by household appliances and convenience foods.This important change in womans lifepattern has only recently begun to have its full effect on womens economic position. Even a few years ago most girls left school at the first opportu

59、nity, and most of them took a fulltime job. However， when they married， they usually left work at once and never returned to it。 Today the school leaving age is sixteen， many girls stay at school after that age， and though women tend to marry younger， more married women stay at work at least until s

60、hortly before their first child is born。 Very many more afterwards return to fullor-parttime work. Such changes have led to a new relationship in marriage, with the husband accepting a greater share of the duties and satisfactions of family life, and with both husband and wife sharing more equally i