概要寫作116-From-Page-to-Screen(課件)-高考英語作文新題型

1、 Summary Summary 概要寫作文本主題、體裁與結(jié)構(gòu)解讀文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀表達(dá)微技能之高度概括篇牛刀小試參考范文欣賞 概要寫作體裁：主題：結(jié)構(gòu)：1.文本主題、體裁與結(jié)構(gòu)解讀體裁：主題：結(jié)構(gòu)：1.文本主題、體裁與結(jié)構(gòu)解讀主題AdaptationsA. authors opinion on adaptationsB. the origin of adaptationsC. causes for adaptations failureD. some experts opinions主題AdaptationsA. authors opini體裁：A. argumentation（議論文）B.

2、 exposition(說明文) C. narration（記敘文）主題：結(jié)構(gòu)：1.文本主題、體裁與結(jié)構(gòu)解讀the authors opinion on adaptations and the causes for adaptations failure 體裁：A. argumentation（議論文）主題：結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)Cause 1issue Cause 2Cause 3Cause 4結(jié)構(gòu)Cause 1issue Cause 2Cause 3C體裁：A. argumentation（議論文）B. exposition(說明文) C. narration（記敘文）主題：結(jié)構(gòu)：the authors

3、 opinion on adaptations and the causes for failure Para 1Para 3Para 2Para 5Para 4argumentation1.文本主題、體裁與結(jié)構(gòu)解讀體裁：A. argumentation（議論文）主題：結(jié)構(gòu)Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences, but its normal to have high expectations when a film of a favourite book is made. There are

4、very many times I have been disappointed by a film of a book I love. The films can be adapted from classic novels, short stories, comic books and stage plays, as well as non-fictions, even those written by ghostwriters. All can work well, but why do many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences a

5、nd critics?2.文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀A. All the films are very good.B. All kinds of books can be adapted to fimls.C. All the books are very good.Main idea:Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which may arise from different reasons.關(guān)注連詞Reading a book and watching aA key question is obviousl

6、y how close to the original the film is. Since a typical film is only around two hours long, it becomes a question for the screenwriters to decide what to leave out and how to write the dialogue. Sometimes there may be changes to the plot, additions, and even different endings. I, like many people,

7、have often left the cinema feeling “the film is not like the book”.2.文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀Main idea: The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes.becauseA key question is obviously h Another problem is the cast. Finding act

8、ors acceptable to film audiences can mean the difference between success and failure. Readers have their imaginations about how characters look and sound. This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.Main idea:Another reason is the cast, because readers have their imaginations about how cha

9、racters look and sound.2.文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀關(guān)注代詞 Another problem is the cast.Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons, although movies like The Life of Pi are very successful. CGI (Computer Generated Image) technology has had a huge impact on the movie industry. It allowed the previousl

10、y unfilmable to become a reality.Main idea: Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons, although CGI technology allowed the previously unfilmable to become a realilty.2.文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀關(guān)注連詞和代詞Some books are just too diffi One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best posi

11、tion to do film adaptations. In fact, this can actually be a bad thing because they may be too close to the material and find it difficult to adapt. Also, some writers have been very unsatisfied with the film versions of their work. Roald Dahl and Stephen King are examples of this. For me, anyway, i

12、t is always a bad idea to watch a film of a book you love.Main idea:The book writer is not the best to do film adaptations, because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to adapt, and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions.2.文本各段落要點(diǎn)精讀關(guān)注連詞和代詞 One may think that it is t

13、heMany adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which may arise from different reasons. The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes. Another reason is the cast, because readers have their imagin

14、ation about characters. Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons,although CGI technology allowed the previously unfilmable to become a realilty. The book writer is not the best to do film adaptations, because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to

15、 adapt, and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions. (108 words)點(diǎn)評：該概要完全覆蓋了文章全部要點(diǎn)，但是字?jǐn)?shù)嚴(yán)重超標(biāo)，有多處表達(dá)抄襲原文，此外，有些表達(dá)過于冗長，又缺乏連貫性。仔細(xì)觀察，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)，有些表達(dá)的解釋其實沒有必要，有些解釋有必要但又太繁瑣。點(diǎn)評：該概要完全覆蓋了文章全部要點(diǎn)，但是字?jǐn)?shù)嚴(yán)重超標(biāo)，有多處概要寫作原則4C+NOcompletecoherentobjectivecorrectconciseno copyCover all the key points.Make sure theres no grammar

16、 mistakes.Be brief and to the point.Use proper transitions.Use your own words.Noextraideasoremotions.概要寫作原則4C+NOcompletecoherentob3.表達(dá)微技能之高度概括篇1. 描述性詞匯變概括性詞匯。我們可以考慮把含有定語的短語通過轉(zhuǎn)換詞性、精簡詞匯等方式，把描述性的語言概括成一個或幾個詞。2. 短語變詞匯。在短語變詞匯時，可以重點(diǎn)關(guān)注有多個變形的單詞，往往會有意外的收獲。3. 短句變短語。通過使用高度概括性的詞匯，或轉(zhuǎn)換某些核心詞的詞性并進(jìn)行一定的篩選，可以將句子變短語。4.

17、長句變短句。復(fù)雜的長句變精簡的短句，其核心在于抓住句子的主干，即抓住句子的主語、謂語和賓語，盡可能用主語+謂語+賓語的形式來改寫句子。Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics, which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people, which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations failures arise from different reasons. Many adapt

18、ations fail with both cinema audiences and critics for different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons.概要寫作1.16 From Page to Screen（課件）-高考英語作文新題型概要寫作1.16 From Page to Screen（課件）-高考英語作文新題型3.表達(dá)微技能之高度概括篇1. 描述性詞匯變概括性詞匯。我們一、根據(jù)要求完成下列句子的改寫或翻譯。1. The key reason is that the film is

19、not like the original, since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes. The key reason is that the film is not like the original, since _ _ and there may be many changes.(描述性詞匯變概括性詞匯) The key reason is that the film is not like the original since there may be many changes

20、 because of _. (短句變短語) The key reason is that the film is not like the original because of _ and _.(短句變短語)The key reason is that the limited time and changes _ _. (長句變短句)5.牛刀小試a typical films time is limitedthe limited timelimited time many changesmake the film not like the original概要寫作1.16 From Pag

21、e to Screen（課件）-高考英語作文新題型概要寫作1.16 From Page to Screen（課件）-高考英語作文新題型一、根據(jù)要求完成下列句子的改寫或翻譯。5.牛刀小試a typ參考范文欣賞1Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons. （要點(diǎn)1）The key one is that the film is not like the original as there may be many changes because of the limited time.（要點(diǎn)2） Besides, readers have their own imagination about the cast. （要點(diǎn)3）And its really hard work to film some books for technology limit. （要點(diǎn)4）Additionally, the book author is not the best choice for adaptation because of their very close connection to the material. （要點(diǎn) 5）（78 words）概要寫作1.16 From Page to Sc