2022-2023學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit3FamilymattersSectionⅣWritingaboutafamilymemory學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊(cè)

1、 Section Writing about a family memoryStep 文本研讀.框架建構(gòu)：整體理解1Look through the passage, you will find that a narrative is told on the basis of _.2The passage is about _ ten years ago.文本剖析：細(xì)節(jié)探究 eq x(Opening（開篇）) I was tidying my room yesterday and 1._. As I was looking at it2._ of that day came back to m

2、e. eq x(Main body （主體）) It was my mothers birthday, and I decided to 3._ her with homemade scrambled eggs but 4._. After knowing what happened, she 5._ and said they werent bad! eq x(Ending （結(jié)尾）) 6_. We ended up laughing and ate them all.語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)1be about to do sthwhen.即將做某事，這時(shí)2end up burnt 結(jié)果燒糊了Step Wri

3、ting探究技法本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇有關(guān)家庭的敘事類記敘文。該類作文以敘述事件為主，要通過(guò)完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。在寫敘事性記敘文時(shí)要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1四定：定內(nèi)容確定敘述要點(diǎn)；定關(guān)鍵詞確定所用詞、詞組；定人稱第一還是第三人稱；定時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)還是一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2三步驟：(1)開頭(the beginning)交代必要的背景，如時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等。(2)主體(the body)交代故事情節(jié)(事情的主體)：如事件的發(fā)生、發(fā)展和前因后果(可以使用表示時(shí)間或空間的連接詞，使文章連貫，如at first.；then.；a few minute

4、s later.)。(3)結(jié)尾(the ending)事情的結(jié)果或感想、愿望等。所表達(dá)的感想或愿望應(yīng)與所記敘的內(nèi)容有關(guān)系，起到扣題或點(diǎn)題作用，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。好的結(jié)尾往往不僅有完美的結(jié)局，還能留下令人深省、回味的東西。3敘述方式：可根據(jù)不同情況采用順敘、倒敘或插敘等方式。常用表達(dá)1首段常用句型：I was doing.when I found an old photo/a card/a diary.我在做時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)一張舊照片/一張卡片/一本日記The lovely memory came flooding back.美好的回憶涌上心頭。.showed me a photo on my birth

5、day.在我生日那天給我看了一張照片。How time flies！時(shí)光飛逝！I couldnt wait to share them with you.我迫不及待想和你分享它們。2中間常用句型：It was a special day. years ago.那是年前的一個(gè)特殊的日子。I decided to surprise.我決定給一個(gè)驚喜。I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.我正準(zhǔn)備把所有東西都扔掉，這時(shí)媽媽進(jìn)來(lái)了。When I.，my eyes watered.當(dāng)我的時(shí)候，我的眼睛濕潤(rùn)了。3結(jié)尾常用句型

6、：Love is indeed a magical ingredient.愛(ài)確實(shí)是一種神奇的因素。I hope I will make.for her. 我希望我能為她做Remember that doing.can help deepen the understanding of.記住，做有助于加深對(duì)的理解。實(shí)踐應(yīng)用假定你是李華。你在整理書架時(shí)偶然看到媽媽曾經(jīng)寫給你的一堆卡片。剛進(jìn)入高中時(shí)，你的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，這些卡片是媽媽為了鼓勵(lì)你并幫助你減輕壓力，最后你開始快樂(lè)學(xué)習(xí)的見(jiàn)證。請(qǐng)你把這段美好回憶分享給你的好友Tom。注意：1.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步謀篇布局第二

7、步遣詞造句完成句子1這個(gè)周末我在整理我的書架時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一疊卡片。_ (clean up)2當(dāng)我讀每張卡片上的話語(yǔ)時(shí)我的眼睛濕潤(rùn)了。_ (water)3這些鼓勵(lì)卡片幫助我經(jīng)受住了挫折。_ (go through)4剛開始上高中的時(shí)候，我感到很有壓力，我一天中的每一分鐘都害怕會(huì)落后。_ (fall behind)5媽媽很周到。_ (considerate)6她發(fā)現(xiàn)了我的問(wèn)題。_ (find)7媽媽讓我明白壓力是無(wú)法避免的。_ (avoid)8重要的是如何恰當(dāng)?shù)靥幚硭绾伟阉兂蓸?lè)趣或挑戰(zhàn)。_ (deal with)句式升級(jí)9用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型改寫句3。_10用so.that.連接句5和句6。_第三步完美

8、成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語(yǔ)短文。_Section Writing about a family memory寫作精析技能提升Step 文本研讀.框架建構(gòu)：整體理解1time, place, characters, events, reason and result2the lovely memory of her mothers birthday.文本剖析：細(xì)節(jié)探究1found an old photo2.the lovely memory3surprise4.ended up burnt5.tasted them6Love is indeed a m

9、agical ingredientStep Writing第二步1While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend, I found a stack of cards.2When I read the words on each card, my eyes watered.3These encouraging cards helped me go through my frustration.4I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling

10、 behind every minute of the day.5Mum was very considerate.6She found my problem.7Mum makes me understand that pressure cant be avoided.8What counts is how to deal with it properly, and how to turn it into pleasure or a challenge.9It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustratio

11、n.10Mum was so considerate that she found my problem.第三步Dear Tom，While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend, I found a stack of cards. When I read the words on each card, my eyes watered. It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day. Mum was so considerate that she found my problem. From then on, I could find a special card on my desk every morning. Gradually, I became less anxious and began to find