中考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 人教版九年級英語全 Unit 4 Section B writing課件

Unit4

IusedtobeafraidofthedarkSectionB(3a-selfcheck)WritingUnit41Toknowhowtowritetheirchangesbyusingthesentencestructure“...usedto...,butnow...”Todescribethebiggestchangeandexplainhowithappened.Toencouragestudentstoimprovethemselves.ObjectivesToknowhowtowritetheircha2HowIhavechanged!5yearsagonowLead-inHowIhavechanged!5yearsago3Wherecanwefindourchanges?appearance(外貌)personality（性格）hobby（愛好）shy--serious--clever--silent--careful--polite--lazy--

mychangesoutgoingshort--fat--young--ugly--haveshorthair--wearglasses

tallexpressionstodescribeappearanceexpressionstodescribepersonalityexpressionstodescribehobbylike/hate/dislikedoingsth.beinterestedinsth.

thinoldbeautifulhavelonghairhumorousnoisystupidcarelessimpolitehard-workingHowtodescribeourchanges?...usedto...,butnow....Words

Wherecanwefindourchanges?4Thebiggestchangeinmylifeisthat_____________

mybiggestchangeI’mnotshyanymore.Imadeitby_______________________________speakinginpublic.我對英語的興趣更濃厚了。I’mmoreinterestedinEnglish.joiningtheEnglishclubandhavingconversationswithothers我再也不是一個(gè)小胖子了。I’mnotfatanymore.doingexerciseandeatinglessfoodSentencesThanksto…/...advisedmeto.../...hadagreatinfluenceonme...Thebiggestchangeinmylife5GroupworkTalkaboutyourbiggestchangewithyourpartnerandexplainhowithappened.

(講述你最重要的一個(gè)變化及其它是如何發(fā)生的)Thebiggestchangeinmylifeisthat_____________I’mnot….anymoreIbecomemuchthinner/heavier/moreoutgoing...Idobetter/worsein...I'mmore/lessinterestedin…….Imadeitbydoing…./Thanksto…/...advisedmeto.../...hadagreatinfluenceonme...

SentencesGroupworkTalkaboutyourbig6

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.Besides,Iusedtofailtheexams,butnowIgetgoodscoresonmyexams.

ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatIamnotafatboyanymore.Inthepast,Iwasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.MybestfriendJohnhadagreatinfluenceonme.Headvisedmetoswimwithhimeveryday.Athoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.HowIamproudofmyself!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Besides,Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatI'mnot

fatanymore.Inthepast,Iwasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.ThankstomybestfriendKate,sheadvisedmetoswimwithhereveryday.Althoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.HowIamproudofmyself!Inaword(總之),Ihavebecomemuchbetterthanbefore.Iwillkeepimprovingmyself.主旨句ChangeinpersonalityChangeinhobbyHowdidithappen?thebiggestchangeMeaningofthechangesStuctureHowIhavechanged!Mylifehaschangedal7StructureLeadinyourtopicBeginning

Body

EndingSetexamplestoshowhowyouhavechanged.Summarizeyourpassage.MychangeStuctureDividedpassagesGrammarmistakesClearhand-writingAttention!!StructureLeadinyourtopicBeg8WritingPracticeWhilewritingWritingPracticeWhilewriting9

HowIhavechanged!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

中考模擬訓(xùn)練2019中考英語作文預(yù)測：（滿分20分）

初中生活中，你有些什么改變？最大的變化是什么，你是怎樣改變的？請以“HowIHaveChanged”為題寫一篇英語小短文，描述你生活中發(fā)生的變化，寫作內(nèi)容可以包括外貌性格、興趣愛好和行為習(xí)慣等方面。要求：1.要求80-120詞；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名。whathowHowIhave10Polishyourwriting1.小組合作，按照《中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》互相評分，并用紅筆改出錯(cuò)誤，給出評分意見;2.每組挑選最佳的作文上臺展示。Groupwork

中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Structure:dividedpassages,coherenceContents:completeLanguage：spelling,grammar,accuracyHand-writing:beautifulPolishyourwriting1.小組合作，按照《11ShowyourwritingShowyourwriting12

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.Words:

Appearance/Personality/Hobbies...

Sentence:usedtodo…...butnow……

Passage:Dividedpassages/Grammar

mistakes/Clearhand-writingsummary遣詞造句成文Unit4Iusedtobeafraid13Peoplesurechange!Let’simproveourselvestobeabetterman.Peoplesurechange!14

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.

ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatI'mnot

fatanymore.Inthepast,I

wasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme..ThankstomybestfriendKate,sheadvisedmetoswimwithhereveryday.Althoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.How

I

amproudofmyself!

Inaword,Ihavebecomemuchbetterthanbefore.Iwillkeepimprovingmyself.

HowIhavechanged!知識遷移shehas

MymotherSheshe’sSheshe’shershe’ssheherherherherherselfherselfshesheShesheMylifehaschanged15HomeworkMakeasurveyonhowyourfamilymember/friendhaschanged.2.Writeapassageaccordingtoyoursurvey.HomeworkMakeasurveyonhowy16Peoplesurechange!Let’simproveourselvestobeabetterman.Thank

you!Peoplesurechange!Thankyou!171.高考作文不同于“自由寫作”高考作文為了達(dá)到一定的考察目的，考生要“根據(jù)要求寫作”，在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上鼓勵考生發(fā)揮想象和聯(lián)想寫出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要寫好高考作文，既不能不顧寫作要求信馬由韁，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏腳。2.而要既符合要求，又要有張揚(yáng)個(gè)性的出彩的地方。所以說高考作文不是自由寫作，既有限制又有開放的空間，既有考生必須完成的規(guī)定動作又要有彰顯特色的自選動作。3.一篇議論文如果能有幾個(gè)聯(lián)系密切并具有較強(qiáng)論證力度的主體段，那就會增加論證的深度、廣度和厚度，頗具層次感，使議論文富有說服力。因此，同學(xué)們寫好議論文的主體段至關(guān)重要。4.出現(xiàn)大量的敘述文字，而缺少相應(yīng)的議論性語言點(diǎn)睛，給人以羅列事例或者啰嗦敘事的感覺，并且暴露自己欠缺說理能力的缺點(diǎn)。5.空洞乏味的議論，缺乏必要的理論和事實(shí)支撐，車轱轆話繞來繞去，論述膚淺無力。6.段落中有事例有論述，但卻水是水，油是油，沒有分析融合，論點(diǎn)就如同生硬地貼在論據(jù)上面的標(biāo)簽，缺乏說服力。7.這是一則新材料運(yùn)用作文，先是列舉了古往今來中外青年成人禮儀和節(jié)日的沿革；接著從國際和國家層面，對青年提出了明確的希望和要求；最后指出“你們”成年，青年們前赴后繼，成就自我人生，勇作社會脊梁。8.在運(yùn)用部分，則指出結(jié)合材料進(jìn)行聯(lián)想和思考，致即將成年的自己。整道題條理明晰，從現(xiàn)象到本質(zhì)，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的寫作思維。1.高考作文不同于“自由寫作”高考作文為了達(dá)到一定的考察目的18Unit4

IusedtobeafraidofthedarkSectionB(3a-selfcheck)WritingUnit419Toknowhowtowritetheirchangesbyusingthesentencestructure“...usedto...,butnow...”Todescribethebiggestchangeandexplainhowithappened.Toencouragestudentstoimprovethemselves.ObjectivesToknowhowtowritetheircha20HowIhavechanged!5yearsagonowLead-inHowIhavechanged!5yearsago21Wherecanwefindourchanges?appearance(外貌)personality（性格）hobby（愛好）shy--serious--clever--silent--careful--polite--lazy--

mychangesoutgoingshort--fat--young--ugly--haveshorthair--wearglasses

tallexpressionstodescribeappearanceexpressionstodescribepersonalityexpressionstodescribehobbylike/hate/dislikedoingsth.beinterestedinsth.

thinoldbeautifulhavelonghairhumorousnoisystupidcarelessimpolitehard-workingHowtodescribeourchanges?...usedto...,butnow....Words

Wherecanwefindourchanges?22Thebiggestchangeinmylifeisthat_____________

mybiggestchangeI’mnotshyanymore.Imadeitby_______________________________speakinginpublic.我對英語的興趣更濃厚了。I’mmoreinterestedinEnglish.joiningtheEnglishclubandhavingconversationswithothers我再也不是一個(gè)小胖子了。I’mnotfatanymore.doingexerciseandeatinglessfoodSentencesThanksto…/...advisedmeto.../...hadagreatinfluenceonme...Thebiggestchangeinmylife23GroupworkTalkaboutyourbiggestchangewithyourpartnerandexplainhowithappened.

(講述你最重要的一個(gè)變化及其它是如何發(fā)生的)Thebiggestchangeinmylifeisthat_____________I’mnot….anymoreIbecomemuchthinner/heavier/moreoutgoing...Idobetter/worsein...I'mmore/lessinterestedin…….Imadeitbydoing…./Thanksto…/...advisedmeto.../...hadagreatinfluenceonme...

SentencesGroupworkTalkaboutyourbig24

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.Besides,Iusedtofailtheexams,butnowIgetgoodscoresonmyexams.

ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatIamnotafatboyanymore.Inthepast,Iwasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.MybestfriendJohnhadagreatinfluenceonme.Headvisedmetoswimwithhimeveryday.Athoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.HowIamproudofmyself!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Besides,Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatI'mnot

fatanymore.Inthepast,Iwasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.ThankstomybestfriendKate,sheadvisedmetoswimwithhereveryday.Althoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.HowIamproudofmyself!Inaword(總之),Ihavebecomemuchbetterthanbefore.Iwillkeepimprovingmyself.主旨句ChangeinpersonalityChangeinhobbyHowdidithappen?thebiggestchangeMeaningofthechangesStuctureHowIhavechanged!Mylifehaschangedal25StructureLeadinyourtopicBeginning

Body

EndingSetexamplestoshowhowyouhavechanged.Summarizeyourpassage.MychangeStuctureDividedpassagesGrammarmistakesClearhand-writingAttention!!StructureLeadinyourtopicBeg26WritingPracticeWhilewritingWritingPracticeWhilewriting27

HowIhavechanged!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

中考模擬訓(xùn)練2019中考英語作文預(yù)測：（滿分20分）

初中生活中，你有些什么改變？最大的變化是什么，你是怎樣改變的？請以“HowIHaveChanged”為題寫一篇英語小短文，描述你生活中發(fā)生的變化，寫作內(nèi)容可以包括外貌性格、興趣愛好和行為習(xí)慣等方面。要求：1.要求80-120詞；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名。whathowHowIhave28Polishyourwriting1.小組合作，按照《中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》互相評分，并用紅筆改出錯(cuò)誤，給出評分意見;2.每組挑選最佳的作文上臺展示。Groupwork

中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Structure:dividedpassages,coherenceContents:completeLanguage：spelling,grammar,accuracyHand-writing:beautifulPolishyourwriting1.小組合作，按照《29ShowyourwritingShowyourwriting30

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.Words:

Appearance/Personality/Hobbies...

Sentence:usedtodo…...butnow……

Passage:Dividedpassages/Grammar

mistakes/Clearhand-writingsummary遣詞造句成文Unit4Iusedtobeafraid31Peoplesurechange!Let’simproveourselvestobeabetterman.Peoplesurechange!32

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.

ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatI'mnot

fatanymore.Inthepast,I

wasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme..ThankstomybestfriendKate,she