【課件】讀后續(xù)寫情緒描寫-無靈主語句課件-2023屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

Continuationwriting——Emotion讀后續(xù)寫之人物情緒描寫WritingFearAngerJoyDisgustSadnessShewassosadthatsheburstintocrying.Shewasstandingbythedoor,cryingsadly.PleasemakeasentencetodescribehowZhenHuanfelt.Shewassoangrythatshecouldn’thelpshouting.ShewasshoutingatMarukoangrily.PleasemakeasentencetodescribehowMaruko’smotherfelt.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedher,andshefellsobbingbythedoor.痛苦和絕望擊垮了她，她靠在門上哭泣。Maruko’smotherfeltthatawaveofangersweptoverher.小丸子的媽媽感到一陣憤怒。Shewassosadthatsheburstintocrying.She

wasstandingbythedoor,cryingsadly.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedher,andshefellsobbingbythedoor.Shewassoangrythatshe

couldn’thelpshouting.ShewasshoutingatMarukoangrily.Maruko’smotherfeltthatawaveofangersweptoverher.“無靈”主語句情緒名詞擬人化運用“無靈”主語句，突出人物的心理、情感，使續(xù)寫語言更加生動形象、栩栩如生。句式①(aburst/wave/surge/sense/feelingof+)表情感狀態(tài)的名詞+有靈動詞+sb.

表“某人感到...”或“一陣/一種...向某人襲來”。Sufferinganddespair

defeated

her.Awaveofanger

sweptover

Maruko’smother.“無靈”主語句Checkyouranswers情緒名詞情緒名詞高興后悔激動、興奮焦慮不安驚訝、震驚厭煩失望孤獨傷心痛苦驚慌失措沮喪害怕、恐懼困惑絕望惡心擔(dān)心、擔(dān)憂生氣內(nèi)疚寬慰happinessexcitementsurprisedisappointmentsadnesspanicscaredespairworryguiltregretanxietyboredomlonelinesssufferingdepressionconfusiondisgustangerrelief襲來：sweep/flood/rushover擊垮：defeatgetthebetterof掠過：flash/cross把...撕碎：opieces吞噬；淹沒：swallow“有靈”動詞抓?。簊eizeget/takeholdof使失望；有負于：fail逃離：escape>>>Practicemakesperfect!I.根據(jù)漢語和提示用無靈主語或有靈動詞填空，并背誦。1.她感到一陣驚慌，但是強迫自己鎮(zhèn)靜地離開了房間。___________________________(主語)_______________________________(動詞)her,butsheforcedherselftoleavetheroomcalmly.2.她站在門口,絕望得說不出話來。Shestoodbythedoor,and___________________(主語)choked

herwords.3.她慢慢走出屋子，內(nèi)疚和擔(dān)憂一陣陣涌上她的心頭。Sheslowlywalkedoutoftheroom,and__________________________(主語)_________________________________(動詞)herinwaves.Awave/burst/senseofpanicseized/tookholdof/sweptoverdespair/hopelessnessguiltandworryrushedover/floodedover/sweptover>>>Practicemakesperfect!4.她焦慮不安，在比賽前突然失去了信心。_________________(主語)toreherintopieces,andbeforethecompetitionher_________________(主語)suddenly___________________________(動詞)her.5.意識到小男孩說了謊時，

她的臉上掠過失望的神情。Whensherealizedthelittleboyhadlied,_________________________(主語)____________________(動詞)herface.Anxietyconfidenceescaped/failedalookofdisappointmentcrossed/flashed>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根據(jù)I中各句進行一對一仿效寫句，并背誦。1.她忽然怒從心頭起，但她強迫自己鎮(zhèn)靜下來。2.我抱著禮物，興奮得什么話也說不出來。3.他開車駛過那座橋時，陣陣孤獨與痛苦涌上心頭。4.她壓力很大。她想堅持，卻鼓不起勇氣。5.他注視著那個沉默的男孩，一臉驚訝。>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根據(jù)I中各句進行一對一仿效寫句，并背誦。1.她忽然怒從心頭起，但她強迫自己鎮(zhèn)靜下來。

Asuddenwaveofangerseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher,butsheforcedherselftocalmdown.2.我拿著禮物，興奮得什么話也說不出來。

Iheldthepresent,andexcitementchokedmywords.>>>Practicemakesperfect!3.他開車駛過那座橋時，陣陣孤獨與痛苦涌上心頭。Whenhedrovebythebridge,lonelinessandgriefrushed/flooded/sweptoverhiminwaves.4.她壓力很大。她想堅持，卻鼓不起勇氣。Stresstoreherintopieces.Shewantedtoinsist,buthercouragefailed/deserted/escaped/abandonedher.5.他注視著那個沉默的男孩，一臉驚訝。Hestaredatthesilentboyandalookofsurprisecrossed/flashedhisface.句式②

表示身體部位/音容笑的名詞+有靈動詞Myfingersshook

withanger.Iwasrelievedwhenabright,sweetvoice

interruptedus.常見名詞：eye,face,heart,hand,finger,laughter,smile,tears,voice...常用動詞：照亮：brighten/lightup

涌出：wellup

浮現(xiàn)：spreadacross

掠過：flash

用...裝滿：fill...with...

顯得陰沉(恐懼、憤怒、憂愁等):cloudover“無靈”主語句>>>Practicemakesperfect!I.根據(jù)漢語和提示用無靈主語或有靈動詞填空，并背誦。1.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,_______(主語)___________(動詞)inhiseyes.2.激動人心的時刻到了，她的心提到了嗓子眼兒。Thencametheexcitingmomentwhen__________(主語)___________(動詞)hermouth.3.看到那頭可怕的狼，我嚇得喉嚨發(fā)緊，兩腿發(fā)軟。Atthesightofthefrighteningwolf,Ifeltsoscaredthat__________(主語)________(動詞)and__________(主語)feltweak.tearswelledupherheartflewupmythroattightenedmyknees>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根據(jù)I中各句進行一對一仿效寫句，并背誦。1.當(dāng)老人多年后回到家鄉(xiāng)時，激動得熱淚盈眶。

Whentheoldmanreturnedtohishometownaftersomanyyears,tearsofexcitementwelledupinhiseyes.2.接著到她表演了，她的心都快跳到嗓子眼兒了。

Thencameshetoperform,andherheartflewuphermouth.

3.看著那頭發(fā)怒的北極熊，我們嚇得心臟狂跳，兩腿發(fā)軟。Atthesightoftheangrypolarbear,wefeltsoscaredthatourheartswerepoundingandourkneesfeltweak.III.微續(xù)寫：根據(jù)漢語提示利用無靈主語句填寫空白部分，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Ittook8hourstorebuildKelly’sinjuredface.Duringthelong8hours,Rockywaswaitingaloneoutsidetheoperationroom.①____________________________________(他的小臉蒼白，愁云滿面).Fear,depression,anxiety,②______________________________________(他心中涌現(xiàn)這些負面情緒)ashewaited.③___________________________________________(因為痛苦和絕望將他撕成碎片),thefive-year-oldboyjustcouldn’tstopcryinghisheartout.NosoonerhadthedoctortoldRockyhismotherwasfinethanherushedintotheroom.Whatfirstenteredhiseyeswashismother’sfacecoveredwithbandage.HislittlefacewaspaleandcloudedoverallthesenegativefeelingssuddenlysweptoverhimAssufferingandhelplessnesstorehimintopiecesAstearsstream