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HamburgerParagraphHowtoWriteaHamburgerParagraphHowtoWrit1DoYouKnow?ParagraphMainideaDetailwhatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetailsDoYouKnow?Paragraphwhatthe2IntroductionSentenceMainIdeaDetailsClosingSentenceIntroductionSentenceMainIde3TopBunIntroductorySentenceTheintroductorysentenceintroducesthereader

tothetopicofyourparagraph.Trytomakeitexciting!

Onwarmsummerdays,Ilovetryingtocatchbutterflies.Ihavesomuchfunrunningaroundinmybackyardchasingaftertheprettybutterfliesthatgozoomingby!IfIamluckyenoughtocatchone,Ineverkeepitforverylong.Afterall,butterfliesbelongintheirnaturalhabitat.Isurelycan’twaituntilnextsummersothatIcangrabmynetandcatchsomebutterflies!

TopBunTheintroductorysenten4Besuretoaddatleastthreereasons,examples,ormainpointsthatsupporttheintroductory/topicsentence.Thesereasons,examples,orpointsarethelettuce,tomato,cheese,andmeatoftheparagraph.MAINPOINTS,REASONS,OREXAMPLESBesuretoaddatleastthree5AddDeliciousDetailsBesureto…AgoodparagraphincludesdetailsthatDESCRIBEorTELLABOUT

themainpointsorreasons.Detailsshouldbe“delicious”orinteresting.Whenyouwriteahamburgerparagraph,compareyourdetailstoalloftheyummypartsofahamburgersuchas: *Lettuce *Tomato *Cheese *Meat(Elaboration)AddDeliciousDetailsBesuret6AddDeliciousDetailsAgain,yourelaborationshoulddescribeortellaboutyourmainpoints.

Theyshouldsticktothetopic.Whichdetaildoesn’tquitebelong?

Ireallylovemybrother!HisnameisJeffandheissuperfunny.Oneofmyfavoritethingstodowithmybrotherisplayvideogames.Healwaysbeatsme!Sometimesmysistercriesatnight.Maybemybrotherwillplayavideogamewithmetonight!

AddDeliciousDetailsAgain,yo7TooMuchDetailTheTroubleWithHowwouldahamburgertasteifithadketchup,

mustard,

mayonnaise,

pickles,

lettuce,

tomatoes,

barbecuesauce,

Swisscheese,

spicycheese,

andolivesontop?Toomuch,right?Awritercanaddtoomuchdetailtoaparagraphaswell.Paragraphsshouldbeabout5-8sentenceslong.Ifyourparagraphispagesandpageslong,youwilleventuallylosetheinterestofyourreader.TooMuchDetailTheTroubleWit8JustRightDetailAnExampleof

Myfavoriteschoollunchischickennuggetswithmashedpotatoes.OnereasonwhyIlovethislunchsomuchisthatittastessogreat!Ialsolovebeingabletosmelltheyummynuggetshoursbeforeit’sevenlunchtime.Thecreamymashedpotatoesandgravyjustslidedownmythroat.Ican’tWAITuntilthenextchickennuggetday!JustRightDetailAnExampleof9SofarwehavelearnedthatahamburgerparagraphneedsatopbunorINTRODUCTORYsentence.Theintroductionshouldintroducethereadertoyourtopic.Wealsolearnedthatgoodparagraphscontainthreetosixsupportingsentencesthattellmoreabouttheintroductorysentence.Thesemainpoints,examples,ordetailscanbecomparedtotheingredientsofahamburger,suchasthelettuce,tomato,cheese,andhamburgerpatty.Butwhat’smissing?Hmm…

Let'sReviewSofarwehavelearnedthata10BottomBunConcludingSentenceThebottombunofahamburgerhelpsholdalloftheingredientstogether.Itworkswiththetopbuntokeepthemeat,cheese,tomato,andlettucefromfallingonthefloor!Theconcludingsentenceofaparagraphhelpsholdallofthesentencestogether!Itworkswiththeintroductorysentencetokeepthedetailsfromfallingapart.Theconcludingsentenceshouldbeinterestingandletyourreaderknowthatyouarefinishedwriting.Itwrapseverythingup!

BottomBunThebottombunofa11Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.Myhometownisfamousforseve12Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.

Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.

Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.

Eventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.

Therearenotreesaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcanbeseenfrommanymilesaway.

ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.

Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.Myhometownisfamousforseve131.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertainprecautions.

2.Thereareseveraladvantagestogrowingupinasmalltown.

3.MostUSuniversitiesrequirea550pointTOEFLscoreforanumberofreasons.

4.Fixingaflattireonabicycleiseasyifyoufollowthesesteps.

5.ThereareseveralenjoyablewaystotravelbetweentheUSandQueretaro.

6.Effectiveleadershiprequiresspecificqualitiesthatanyonecandevelop.

7.IndustrialwastepouredintoPearlRiverhasledtodramaticchangesinitsabilitytosupportmarinelife.

8.InordertofullyexplorethewreckoftheTitanic,scientistsmustaddressseveralproblems.

1.Peoplecanavoidburglaries14HamburgerParagraphHowtoWriteaHamburgerParagraphHowtoWrit15DoYouKnow?ParagraphMainideaDetailwhatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetailsDoYouKnow?Paragraphwhatthe16IntroductionSentenceMainIdeaDetailsClosingSentenceIntroductionSentenceMainIde17TopBunIntroductorySentenceTheintroductorysentenceintroducesthereader

tothetopicofyourparagraph.Trytomakeitexciting!

Onwarmsummerdays,Ilovetryingtocatchbutterflies.Ihavesomuchfunrunningaroundinmybackyardchasingaftertheprettybutterfliesthatgozoomingby!IfIamluckyenoughtocatchone,Ineverkeepitforverylong.Afterall,butterfliesbelongintheirnaturalhabitat.Isurelycan’twaituntilnextsummersothatIcangrabmynetandcatchsomebutterflies!

TopBunTheintroductorysenten18Besuretoaddatleastthreereasons,examples,ormainpointsthatsupporttheintroductory/topicsentence.Thesereasons,examples,orpointsarethelettuce,tomato,cheese,andmeatoftheparagraph.MAINPOINTS,REASONS,OREXAMPLESBesuretoaddatleastthree19AddDeliciousDetailsBesureto…AgoodparagraphincludesdetailsthatDESCRIBEorTELLABOUT

themainpointsorreasons.Detailsshouldbe“delicious”orinteresting.Whenyouwriteahamburgerparagraph,compareyourdetailstoalloftheyummypartsofahamburgersuchas: *Lettuce *Tomato *Cheese *Meat(Elaboration)AddDeliciousDetailsBesuret20AddDeliciousDetailsAgain,yourelaborationshoulddescribeortellaboutyourmainpoints.

Theyshouldsticktothetopic.Whichdetaildoesn’tquitebelong?

Ireallylovemybrother!HisnameisJeffandheissuperfunny.Oneofmyfavoritethingstodowithmybrotherisplayvideogames.Healwaysbeatsme!Sometimesmysistercriesatnight.Maybemybrotherwillplayavideogamewithmetonight!

AddDeliciousDetailsAgain,yo21TooMuchDetailTheTroubleWithHowwouldahamburgertasteifithadketchup,

mustard,

mayonnaise,

pickles,

lettuce,

tomatoes,

barbecuesauce,

Swisscheese,

spicycheese,

andolivesontop?Toomuch,right?Awritercanaddtoomuchdetailtoaparagraphaswell.Paragraphsshouldbeabout5-8sentenceslong.Ifyourparagraphispagesandpageslong,youwilleventuallylosetheinterestofyourreader.TooMuchDetailTheTroubleWit22JustRightDetailAnExampleof

Myfavoriteschoollunchischickennuggetswithmashedpotatoes.OnereasonwhyIlovethislunchsomuchisthatittastessogreat!Ialsolovebeingabletosmelltheyummynuggetshoursbeforeit’sevenlunchtime.Thecreamymashedpotatoesandgravyjustslidedownmythroat.Ican’tWAITuntilthenextchickennuggetday!JustRightDetailAnExampleof23SofarwehavelearnedthatahamburgerparagraphneedsatopbunorINTRODUCTORYsentence.Theintroductionshouldintroducethereadertoyourtopic.Wealsolearnedthatgoodparagraphscontainthreetosixsupportingsentencesthattellmoreabouttheintroductorysentence.Thesemainpoints,examples,ordetailscanbecomparedtotheingredientsofahamburger,suchasthelettuce,tomato,cheese,andhamburgerpatty.Butwhat’smissing?Hmm…

Let'sReviewSofarwehavelearnedthata24BottomBunConcludingSentenceThebottombunofahamburgerhelpsholdalloftheingredientstogether.Itworkswiththetopbuntokeepthemeat,cheese,tomato,andlettucefromfallingonthefloor!Theconcludingsentenceofaparagraphhelpsholdallofthesentencestogether!Itworkswiththeintroductorysentencetokeepthedetailsfromfallingapart.Theconcludingsentenceshouldbeinterestingandletyourreaderknowthatyouarefinishedwriting.Itwrapseverythingup!

BottomBunThebottombunofa25Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.Myhometownisfamousforseve26Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.

Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.

Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseit

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