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Questions=Report原因分析+解決方案原因分析+有何影響原因分析+隨機(jī)(鬼才知道會(huì)問什么)造成的問題+解決方案---特別注意你有可能遇到其中任何一種組合2018-8-20Two

Questions=Report注意區(qū)分這兩個(gè)問題，經(jīng)常導(dǎo)致TR低分What

doyou

think

are

the

causes?What

problems

does

it

cause?2018-8-20往年很多人不認(rèn)識(shí)自己的鄰居。(原因+解決)全世界的城市越來越相似。(原因+影響)爸媽在家扮演的角色有很大不同。(原因+會(huì)不會(huì)有改變)人類

越來越長(zhǎng)。(導(dǎo)致的問題+解決)2018-8-20report類型的

段(原因+解決方案版本)改寫能力)

+

承上啟下(我認(rèn)為…和…1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(是主要原因/要為此負(fù)責(zé))第一個(gè)原因分析。(idea--support)Another

cause

is

that……,,第二個(gè)原因分析。(idea--support)(因?yàn)椤車?yán)重/因?yàn)椤瞿呈潞苤匾?~~~~so

measures

should

be

taken

to…….解決方案1+(so

that)結(jié)果解決方案2+(In

this

way,)結(jié)果總結(jié)重復(fù)原因/解決方案—可以用“因?yàn)?所以”或者“雖然,但是”的方法把兩部分分別放進(jìn)去。2018-8-20范文-1Task2：Nowadays,

we

are

producing

more

and

more

rubbish.Why

do

you

think

this

is

happening?

What

can ernments

doto

help

reduce

the

amount

of

rubbish

produced?2018-8-20It

is

true

that

in

almost

every

country

today

each

household

and

family

producea

large

amount

of

waste

every

week.

I

think

that

improved

living

standards

andincreasing

popularity

of

disposable

products

are

probably

responsible

for

this.The reason

why

we

have

an

increasing

amount

of

rubbish

is

that

weconsume

so

mu ore

on

a

daily

basis

than

families

did

in

the

past.

Withhigher es,

people

today

tend

to

frequently

buy

new

clothes

and

the

latestelectronic

devices.

As

a

result,

the

packaging

from

the

things

webuysignificantly

increases

the

amount

of

rubbish.2018-8-20范文-1Certainly

nobody

wants

to

see

our

planet

poisoned

by

waste,

so

measure

should

betaken

to

combat

this

situation. ly,

children

should

be

educated

aboutenvironmental

issues

at

school.

For

example,

knowledge

about

how

to

recyclewaste

should

be

factored

into

their

curriculum. ernments

c

so

encourageadults

to

take

action

by

putting

taxes

on

packing,

such

as

plastic

bags

and

by

fininghouseholds

and

shops

that

do

not

attempt

to

recycle

their

waste.2018-8-20范文-1The

increasing

amount

of

waste

produced

is

also

a

result

of

our

tendency

to

usesomething

once

and

throw

it

away.

More

specifically,

to

live

a

convenient

life,disposable

products,

such

as

bottled

water

or

p r

handkerchief,

have

beengaining

popularity,

which

contributes

to

a

larger

amount

of

rubbish

produced

on

adaily

basis.armingeasures

couldIn

conclusion,

the

pursuit

of

a

higher

quality

of

life

has

led

toincrease

in

the

amount

of

rubbish.

With

the

political

will,

sureally

mitigate

the

problem.范文-1?2018-8-20范文2分析A

lot

of

young

peopledonot

know

how

to

manage

their

moneywhen

graduating

from

high

school.

What

do

you

think

are

thereasons?

What

can

be

done

to

teach

them

this

important

skill??2018-8-20范文2分析這篇文章的兩個(gè)原因?qū)懗闪艘粋€(gè)段落，因?yàn)楦髯哉归_比較少。為了保持段落平衡，

一段比分開寫更合理。?2018-8-20Many

young

people

are

leaving

school

without

a

basic

and

vital

understanding

of

how

al

finances

ought

to

be

managed

in

the

adult

world.

This

lack

of

knowledge

is

dueto

a

lack

of

life

experience

and

limited

education

which

can

be

solved

in

two

simpleways.One

main

reason

why

so

many

young

people

are

unable

to

manage

their

own

financesupon

finishing

high

school

is

that

they

have

been

living

along

with

their

parents

for

free.As

a

result,

they

have

never

needed

to

earn

a

salary

or

save

their

money

in

order

to

paybills.

Another

cause

is

that

schools

do

not

factor al

financial

management

into

theircurriculum.

Schools

focus

instead

on

classic

subjects,

such

as

maths,

geography,

historyand

languages,

whi eans

important

life

skills

are

not

being

taught.

Both

teachers

andparents

are

failing

to

prepare

young

people

for

the

real

world.范文2分析?2018-8-20There

are

two

options

for

solving

young

people’s

inability

to

manage al

finances.ly,

parents

should

spend

time

with

their

children

teaching

them

how

money

is

earned,budgeted

and

used

for

either

savings

or

expenses.

One

simple

step

could

be

for

parents

tostart

by

teaching

young

children

how

to

manage

their

pocket

money

and,

as

their

childgrows

up,

expand

into

more

serious

household

expenses.

Secondly,

schools

shouldincorpora ife

skills

into

their

curriculum

for

final

year

students.

In

this

way,

childrenwill

be

able

to

learn

in

a

supportive

environment

how

their

finances

need

to

budgeted

andmanaged

to

avoid

debt

problems

later

in

life.In

conclusion,

young

people

lack

financial

management

skills

due

to

the

negligence

ofparents

and

schools,

which

can

only

be

solved

if

both

take

more

responsibility

forequipschool

leavers

with

the

right

skills.2018-8-20范文2分析分析原因的原則1.不能只局限；客觀的出發(fā)點(diǎn)；通過年代對(duì)比找到原因(至關(guān)重要)；范圍縮小一些；2018-8-20用來寫原因的topic

sentencesreason

for

the

shortage

of

younger

teachers

is

that

a

teaching

job

pays1.Thepoorly.The reason

why

bicycle

riding

is

no

longer

popular

is

that

people

today

havemu ore

choices

for

transportation.In

addition,

the

increase

in

the

amount

of

rubbish

is

also

a

result

of

people

usingmore

disposable

products.It

is

true

that

poor

healthof

t eral

population

is

associated

with

people's

badeating

habits.2018-8-20寫原因段的邏輯The reason

why

people

waste

food

inlargeties

is

that

they

arericher

than

ever

before.

With

higher es,

buying

food

has emucheasier,

so

people

prepare

ea eal

withmore

food

thanthey

really

needtosatisfy

theirdemands

for

more

flavors

and

better

nutrients.It

is

notmon

that

much

of

thefoodcannot

be

finished

andends

upinthetrashbin.2018-8-20寫原因段的邏輯Many

people

are

reluctant

to

live

a

greener

life

mainly

because

the

process

tobe

environmentally-friendly

causes

a

lot

of

trouble.

For

example,

people

whowant

to

practice

waste

sorting

have

to

spend

a

large

amount

of

time

learningto l

the

difference

between

recyclables

and

non-recyclables.

In

addition,people

who

try

to

reduce

carbon

emissions

must

leave

theircars

in

thegarageand

fight

theirway

in

overly

crowded

public

transport

vehicles.

In

mostcases,

the

optionto

livea

comfortable

is

more

attractive

th

ow-carbonone.2018-8-20不認(rèn)識(shí)鄰居的原因In

addition,

people

knowing

little

about

their

neighbours

is

because

technologyhas

greatly

changed

the

way

they

entertain

and

socialize.

Before

the

Internet,people

actively

participated

in

community

activities

to

have

fun

or

build

theirsocial

networks.

Today,

however,

neighbours

barely

meet

and

talk

with

eachother,

as

they

are

more

addicted

to

online

sharing

of

gossips

and

pictures.?2018-8-20The

increasingsimilarity

between

cities

is

a

result

of

the

growth

ofurbanpopulation.

As

more

and

morepeoplechoose

to

live

and

work

in

big

cities,the ernment

has

to

keep

building

modernhigh-rise

buildingsto

meet

theneeds

of

more

space

for

either

residence

or

business.

As

a

result,

therehasbeena

decrease

in

thenumberof

traditional

buildings,which

leadstotheconsequence

th ity

does

not

look

unique

anymore.寫原因段的邏輯?2018-8-20孩子學(xué)校表現(xiàn)糟糕的原因The reason

for

students’

poor

behavior

is

that

the

birth

rateisdecreasing

so

thatfamiliesare ingsmaller

with

fewer

children.

Thesechildren

are

often

spoilt.Theyare

allowed

tohave

whatever

theywantregardless

of

price

and

to

behaveas

they

please.

This

meansthatthechildren

grow

up

without

consideration

for

others.When

they

begin

togo

toschool,

they

have

not

learntto

respect

others

and

obeyrules.?2018-8-20解決方案--切實(shí)可行1.1)

The---至關(guān)重要(收稅/花錢/頒布法律)；ernment

could

impose

higher

taxes

on

……so

that

…….2)What

the ernment

should s

to

invest

in…../financially

support…../spendmoney3)

Theng……….ernment

ought

to

require

…..to

…...家長(zhǎng)學(xué)校公司authorities2018-8-20report類型的

段(原因+有何影響版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴(kuò)充或者縮減原題)

+

承上啟下(提前總結(jié)原因/空話過渡)Oneof

the

reasons

is

that第一個(gè)原因分析。(idea--support)In

addition,

第二個(gè)原因分析。(idea--support)過渡句---Tomy

knowledge,

there

are

完全取決于你自己(好/壞/雖然….但是…..)總結(jié)(重復(fù)原因/影響)2018-8-20More

and

more

people

want

to

buy

famous

brands

of

clothes,cars

and

other

items.

What

are

the

reasons?

Do

you

think

it

is

apositive

or

negativedevelopment?2018-8-20For

a

variety

of

reasons,

there

has

been

an

increase

in

the

number

of

people

whoare

obsessed

with

famous

brands

when

buying

new

clothes,

cars,

watches

andother

items.

In

my

opinion,

this

is

largely

detrimental

to

many

people.The reason

for

such

an

obsession

with

purchasing

brand

name

products

isthe

influence

of

modern

advertising.

On

a

daily

basis,

we

are

bombarded

bycountless

TV

commercials

and

magazine

advertisements

that

encourage

us

toassociate

certain

brands

with

a

higher

social

status.

As

a

result,

an

increasingnumber

of

people

are

convinced

that

owning

and

using

those

advertised

productsis

a

symbol

of

success.2018-8-20Another

cause

is

the

rising

living

standard

in

most

countries.

With

many

people

earning

abetter

salary,

the

pursuit

of

higher

quality

of

life

has

been

popular.

This

stimulates

consumerswith

more

affordability

to

choose

products

of

prestigious

brands,

which

are

widely

believed

tobe

more

durable,

creatively

designed

and

well

produced.Although

being

a

loyal

customer

to

famous

brands

allows

people

to

enjoy

both

material

andspiritual

satisfactions,

I

strongly

believe

that

this

kind

of

shop preference

has

significantnegative

impacts. ly,

as

the

concept

that

big

brands

represent

wealth

and

success

prevails,people

living

on

a

tight

budget

are

also

likely

to

be

lured

to

follow

this

trend,

which

will

causethem

to

spend

the

money

borrowed

from

the

bank

and

finally

end

up

with

serious

debttroubles.

In

addition,

being

addicted

to

famous

brands

leads

people

to

buy

things

that

may

notsuit

them

best.

For

example,

to

follow

the

latest

trend

set

by

influential

brands,

many

peoplewould

buy

shoes

and

clothes

that

neither

fit

their alities

nor

their

lifestyles.2018-8-20In

conclusion,

due

to

the

influence

of

advertising

and

the

rise

inpeople’s es,

the

popularity

of

buying

famous

brand

goods

hasbeen

increasing,

which,

from

my

point

of

view,

generates

undesirablees.2018-8-20report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴(kuò)充或者縮減原題)

+

承上啟下(我認(rèn)為這會(huì)導(dǎo)致……的問題，他們能夠被解決)第一個(gè)問題擴(kuò)展(idea--support)In

addition,第二個(gè)問題擴(kuò)展。(idea--support)針對(duì)這兩個(gè)問題提出解決方案5.總結(jié)(問題+解決)2018-8-20A

rise

in

the

standard

of

living

in

a

country

often

only

seems

tobenefit

cities

rather

than

rural

areas.

What

problems

might

thisdifference

cause?

How

might

these

problems

be

reduced?report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)2018-8-20report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)There

has

been

a

significant

rise

in

living

standards

of

people

in

manycountries,

such

as

better

education

quality

and

smaller

edisparity.

However,

it

seems

that

such

improvements

are

mostlyenjoyed

by

urban

dwellers

rather

than

those

living

in

the

countryside,which,

in

my

opinion,

will

result

in

many

undesirable es

forboth

cities

and

rural

areas.2018-8-20report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)As

urban

lives

kee increasingly

appealing,

anoverwhelmingly

large

number

of

people

will

be

drawn

to

cities

eitherin

search

of

more

employment

opportunities

or

seeking

superior

levelof

medical

care

services.

This

will

defini y

pose

tremendous

pressureon

both

locals

and

new

comers

of

big

cities,

such

as

rising

living

costs,frustrating

traffic

congestion,

and

intense

competition

for

jobs.2018-8-20report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)As

for

rural

areas,

the

problems

caused

are

also

significant.

To

bespecific,

there

will

be

a

severe

shortage

of

labour

force

working

inagricultural

industry,

with

too

many

people

migrating

from

villages

totowns

and

cities.

As

a

result,

farming

land

would

be

left

uncultivatedand

crop

yields

would

significantly

decline,

possibly

followed

by

a

risein

food

prices

nationwide.2018-8-20report類型的

段(問題+解決方案版本)I

think

that,

therefore,

measures

should

be

taken

to

narrow

the

quality

of

life

gapbetween

urban

and

rural

areas. ly,

tax

reduction

and

exemption

could

be

apossible

solution

to

the

problem

of

labour

drain.

In

other

words,

both

individuals

andbusinesses

would

choose

to

stay

if

there

is

such

a

favorable

(preferential)

policy.Secondly,

the ernment

could

also

make

people

willing

to

stay

where

they

wereborn

and

grew

up

by

improving

local

living

conditions,

such

as

budgeting

moremoney

towards

education

and

health

services.In

conclusion,

the

problems

caused

by

the

disparity

between

cities

and

villages

areconcerning

people

of

both

places.

They

can

only

be

solved

if

the

ernment

takesmore

responsibility

for

closing

the

gap.2018-8-20Report類型的第一段一般不需要背景句，題目中的現(xiàn)象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接開始改寫的工作就可以了。2018-8-20report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語(yǔ))1)

In

many

countries

schools

have

severe

problems

with

students'

behavior.

Whatdo

you

think

are

the

causes?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Poor

student

behavior

seems

to

be

an

increasingly

widespre

roblem

in

many

countries.I

think

that

modern

lifestyles

are

probably

responsible

for

this.

（提前總結(jié)型過渡）2018-8-20report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語(yǔ))2).

Children

and

teenagers

are

committing

more

crimes

than

before.

What

do

youthink

are

the

causes?

How

should

they

be

punished?The

number

of

crimes

committed

by

children

and

teenagers

has

been

increasing.

Ithink

that

there

could

be

several

reasons

why

this

is

happening.（空話型過渡）2018-8-20report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語(yǔ))3).

Some

employers

think

that

formal

academic

qualifications

are

more

importantthan

life

experiences

and al

qualities

when

they

look

for

an

employee.

Why

isit

the

case?

Is

it

a

positive

or

negativedevelopment?Formal

educational

qualifications

are

believed

to

be

more

important

than

lifeexperiences

and ality

traits

when

a

company

is

recruiting

new

staffs.

From

mypoint

of

view,this

criterion

of

choosing

employees

can

be

explained

bythe

followingreasons.（空話型過渡）2018-8-20report類型的介紹段(基本句型的切換)4).

The

average

weight

of

citizens

has

been

increasing

in

many

countries.

What

doyou

think

are

the

causes?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Many

countries

across

the

world

are

faced

with

the

problem

of

obesity.I

think

thatunhealthy

lifestyles

of

today's

people

are

the

causes

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