定語從句在寫作中的運用課件

TheAttributiveClauseusedinwriting

定語從句在寫作中的運用TheAttributiveClauseusedin1Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Sheisabeautifulwoman.Sheisabeautifulwomanwhoabandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Itisalovelyanimal.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,whichfeedsoncarrots.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Guessing3.Itisafestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestivalwhen

peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.Mid-autumnDayGuessing3.Itisafestival.MGuessing4.It’sanobject.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,withoutwhichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.Mini-loudspeakerGuessing4.It’sanobject.MiniTheAttributiveClause1.Sheisabeautifulwoman_______abandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.

2.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,______feedsoncarrots.3.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival_____peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.4.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,________whichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.who/thatwhichwhenwithout定從:先行詞(名,代,句)+關(guān)系詞(代,副)

找先行詞--還原法—判成分---確定關(guān)系詞TheAttributiveClause1.Sheis3.判斷成分Heusedthetelescope___hismothergavehimtoseethemountainclearly.thetelescopeHismothergavehimthetelescope物物1.找到先行詞2.還原法4.確定關(guān)系詞(that/which)賓語3.判斷成分Heusedthetelescope__定語從句在寫作中的運用課件1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,anditisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Thefilmthat/whichiscalledTitanicisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Rewritethesentences1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,2.Jackisapoorpainter.Hewonashipticketbyplayingcards.Jack,whowonashipticketbyplayingcardsisapoorpainter.Rewritethesentences2.Jackisapoorpainter.He3.TheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanic.TheyhadahappytimeonTitanicTheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanicwheretheyhadahappytime.Rewritethesentences3.Theymetandfellinlovewi4.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorm,andJacklosthislifeforsavingLucyinthestorm.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorminwhich/whereJacklosthislifeforsavingLucy.Rewritethesentences4.Sadly,thenicejourneywas

Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof26girlsand10boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof26girlsand10boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.Ourclassisabigfamily.TranslatethesentencesintoEnglish1.昨天他賣了他的車，一個月之前他剛買的。Yesterdayhesoldhiscar,whichheboughtamonthago.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish2.所有的鄰居都羨慕這個家庭，在這個家庭里,父母把孩子當(dāng)做朋友。Alltheneighborsadmirethisfamilywheretheparentstreattheirchildrenlikefriends.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish3.中國政府已經(jīng)把中秋節(jié)定為法定假日（make...alegalholiday),在那天人們可以休假一天。TheChinesegovernmenthasmadetheMid-AutumnFestivalalegalholiday,whenpeoplecanhaveadayoff.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish4.就是在昨天我們吃飯的餐館我把我的包丟了。

ItwasintherestaurantwherewehaddinnertogetherthatIlostmybag.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish5.耐心是一種品質(zhì)，沒有它你不可能把工作做好。Patienceisakindofquality,withoutwhichyoucan’tworkwell.TranslatethesentencesintoE定語從句在基礎(chǔ)寫作中的運用內(nèi)容：公共場所禁煙實施時間：2011年1月1日起實施范圍：全國目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙措施：張貼禁煙標(biāo)志相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)：（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年定語從句在基礎(chǔ)寫作中的運用內(nèi)容：公共場所禁煙實施時間：2011年1月1日起實施范圍：全國目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙Thisdecision,_____aimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof2011.which實施時間：2011年1月1日起Thisdecision,（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among_____75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億CurrentlyChinah（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,_____causes100,000deathsperyear.定語從句在寫作中的作用:1.整合信息,使意思更為明確2.使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更為緊湊which（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億Around540miPractice2008背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。1896：第一次成為奧運項目1904：中斷1928：中斷1932：重回奧運會1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目，現(xiàn)今有17項。Shooting,______wasameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.whichPractice2008Shooting,______waPractice2011基本信息：⑴書名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，耶魯大學(xué)教授⑶出版時間：2010年⑷內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)方式教育兩個女兒的故事⑸效應(yīng)：引發(fā)中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論相關(guān)報道：⑴中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售⑵意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法⑶最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛和耶魯錄取Practice2011⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，

耶魯大學(xué)教授⑷內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)方式教育

兩個女兒的故事ItsauthorisAmyChua,aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale,____tellsstoriesinherbookabouthowsheeducatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway.who⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，ItsauthoriPracticemakesperfect.根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容,運用定語從句寫一篇五句話的文章介紹中國.1.眾所周知,中國有960萬平方公里的土地,是世界第三大國.2.中國有56個民族,其中漢族人(theHanEthnic)占94%3.中國有許多大河流,其中長江,黃河是最重要的河流.4.曾有一段時間,中國的經(jīng)濟落后于世界

許多國家.5.隨著經(jīng)濟的增長,中國人被歧視的日子一去不復(fù)返,所有中國人都為此感到自豪.Practicemakesperfect.根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容,話題運用______isknowntoall,Chinawithanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers,isthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,among______theHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.Besides,therearemanybigriversinChina,themostimportantof_____aretheYangtzeRiverandtheYellowRiver.Therewasatime_____Chineseeconomywasfarbehindmanyothercountriesintheworld.However,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,thedaysaregoneforever______theChinesepeoplewerelookeddownupon,______allChineseareproudof.Aswhichwhichwhenwhenwhich話題運用______isknowntoall,Ch寫作中存在問題一、詞語的錯用：有:have/has

therebebemadeupof/consistof2.長江、黃河

theYangtzeRiverandthe

YellowRiver3.第三大

thethirdlargest寫作中存在問題一、詞語的錯用：4.經(jīng)濟

finance:Financeisthecommercialorgovernmentactivityofmanagingmoney,debt,credit,andinvestment.

economy:Acountry'seconomyisthewealththatitgetsfrombusinessandindustry.5.發(fā)展:develop

改進:improve財政;金融經(jīng)濟4.經(jīng)濟財政;金融經(jīng)濟6.民族

people/nationality7.落后

latter:Youuselattertodescribethelaterpartofaperiodoftimeorevent.（一個時期或事件）后一半的，接近終了的fallbehind/dropbehind8.makeup占比例takeup占據(jù)時間空間IknowhowbusyyoumustbeandnaturallyIwouldn'twanttotakeuptoomuchofyourtime.6.民族二、詞性develop(v.)development(n.)economic(adj.)economy(v.)strength(n.)strong(adj.)discrimination(n.)discriminate(v.)三、短語第三大國thethirdlargestcountry瞧不起lookdownupon驕傲beproudof/takepridein令人高興的是toone’sdelight二、詞性四、主謂不一致TheYangzeRiverandtheYellowRiveristhemostimportantriver.TheHanEthnicmakeup94%...Chinahave…Chinesewaslookdownuponareriversmakeshaswere四、主謂不一致areriversmakeshaswere四.定語從句錯用ThedayofChinesbeenlookdownuponhasgoneaway,allofwhomareproudofit.Having56ethnics,amongwhichtheHanEthnicare94%TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,amongwhichtheHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.句子一定要有謂語動詞Chinawith9.6millionsquarekilometerslandandthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.ItisallofChinesethatproudofit.Peoplebelookdownupon.…whicheveryonemoreandmoreconfidence.四.定語從句錯用五、句型TherewasatimewhenAs連詞+句子

With介詞AstheeconomyofChinadevelopingfastlyAstheeconomyofChinadevelopsfastWiththeeconomydevelopWiththedevelopmentofeconomy五、句型ThedayswhenChinesewerelookeddownuponwentbyandneverreturned.SuchabigcountryisChinathatithas56nationalities,amongwhich94%aretheHanEthnic.ThedayswhenChinesewerelookeddownuponwillnotcomeback.ItwasnotuntileconomicgrowththatChinesepeoplerealizedtheywouldnolongerbediscriminated.SofastisthecountrydevelopingthatChinastandupandfacetotheworldbeyondyourimagine.ThedayswhenChinesewerelooItisknowntoeverybodythatChinaisthethirdlargestcountryoftheworld,with9.6millionsquarekilometers.TherearemanyriversinChina,mostimportantofwhichareChangjiangandHuanghe.ChangjiangRiverandHuangheRiverrunningacrossChinaliketwohugedragonsarethemostimportantriversinChina.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,allChinesepeopleareproudofisthattheyarenolongerlookeddownupon.ItisknowntoeverybodythatThankYou!ThankYou!TheAttributiveClauseusedinwriting

定語從句在寫作中的運用TheAttributiveClauseusedin38Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Sheisabeautifulwoman.Sheisabeautifulwomanwhoabandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.Guessing1.Sheisawoman.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Itisalovelyanimal.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,whichfeedsoncarrots.Guessing2.Itisananimal.Guessing3.Itisafestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival.It’saChinesetraditionalfestivalwhen

peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.Mid-autumnDayGuessing3.Itisafestival.MGuessing4.It’sanobject.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,withoutwhichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.Mini-loudspeakerGuessing4.It’sanobject.MiniTheAttributiveClause1.Sheisabeautifulwoman_______abandonedallherfamily,flewtotheskyandlivedaloneinanisolatedpalace.

2.Itisalovelyanimalwithtwolongears,______feedsoncarrots.3.It’saChinesetraditionalfestival_____peoplegettogethertowatchthemoonandenjoymooncakesdelightedly.4.It’sanobjectinourclassroomnow,________whichIcan’tmakemyvoiceloudenoughastobeheardbyyouclearly.who/thatwhichwhenwithout定從:先行詞(名,代,句)+關(guān)系詞(代,副)

找先行詞--還原法—判成分---確定關(guān)系詞TheAttributiveClause1.Sheis3.判斷成分Heusedthetelescope___hismothergavehimtoseethemountainclearly.thetelescopeHismothergavehimthetelescope物物1.找到先行詞2.還原法4.確定關(guān)系詞(that/which)賓語3.判斷成分Heusedthetelescope__定語從句在寫作中的運用課件1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,anditisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Thefilmthat/whichiscalledTitanicisabeautifulandsadlovestory.Rewritethesentences1.ThefilmiscalledTitanic,2.Jackisapoorpainter.Hewonashipticketbyplayingcards.Jack,whowonashipticketbyplayingcardsisapoorpainter.Rewritethesentences2.Jackisapoorpainter.He3.TheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanic.TheyhadahappytimeonTitanicTheymetandfellinlovewitheachotheronTitanicwheretheyhadahappytime.Rewritethesentences3.Theymetandfellinlovewi4.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorm,andJacklosthislifeforsavingLucyinthestorm.Sadly,thenicejourneywasdestroyedbyanunexpectedstorminwhich/whereJacklosthislifeforsavingLucy.Rewritethesentences4.Sadly,thenicejourneywas

Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof26girlsand10boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof26girlsand10boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.GuoZhiyongisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.Ourclassisabigfamily.TranslatethesentencesintoEnglish1.昨天他賣了他的車，一個月之前他剛買的。Yesterdayhesoldhiscar,whichheboughtamonthago.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish2.所有的鄰居都羨慕這個家庭，在這個家庭里,父母把孩子當(dāng)做朋友。Alltheneighborsadmirethisfamilywheretheparentstreattheirchildrenlikefriends.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish3.中國政府已經(jīng)把中秋節(jié)定為法定假日（make...alegalholiday),在那天人們可以休假一天。TheChinesegovernmenthasmadetheMid-AutumnFestivalalegalholiday,whenpeoplecanhaveadayoff.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish4.就是在昨天我們吃飯的餐館我把我的包丟了。

ItwasintherestaurantwherewehaddinnertogetherthatIlostmybag.TranslatethesentencesintoETranslatethesentencesintoEnglish5.耐心是一種品質(zhì)，沒有它你不可能把工作做好。Patienceisakindofquality,withoutwhichyoucan’tworkwell.TranslatethesentencesintoE定語從句在基礎(chǔ)寫作中的運用內(nèi)容：公共場所禁煙實施時間：2011年1月1日起實施范圍：全國目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙措施：張貼禁煙標(biāo)志相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)：（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年定語從句在基礎(chǔ)寫作中的運用內(nèi)容：公共場所禁煙實施時間：2011年1月1日起實施范圍：全國目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙Thisdecision,_____aimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof2011.which實施時間：2011年1月1日起Thisdecision,（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among_____75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億CurrentlyChinah（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,_____causes100,000deathsperyear.定語從句在寫作中的作用:1.整合信息,使意思更為明確2.使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更為緊湊which（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億Around540miPractice2008背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。1896：第一次成為奧運項目1904：中斷1928：中斷1932：重回奧運會1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目，現(xiàn)今有17項。Shooting,______wasameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.whichPractice2008Shooting,______waPractice2011基本信息：⑴書名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，耶魯大學(xué)教授⑶出版時間：2010年⑷內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)方式教育兩個女兒的故事⑸效應(yīng)：引發(fā)中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論相關(guān)報道：⑴中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售⑵意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法⑶最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛和耶魯錄取Practice2011⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，

耶魯大學(xué)教授⑷內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)方式教育

兩個女兒的故事ItsauthorisAmyChua,aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale,____tellsstoriesinherbookabouthowsheeducatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway.who⑵作者：AmyChua，美籍華人，ItsauthoriPracticemakesperfect.根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容,運用定語從句寫一篇五句話的文章介紹中國.1.眾所周知,中國有960萬平方公里的土地,是世界第三大國.2.中國有56個民族,其中漢族人(theHanEthnic)占94%3.中國有許多大河流,其中長江,黃河是最重要的河流.4.曾有一段時間,中國的經(jīng)濟落后于世界

許多國家.5.隨著經(jīng)濟的增長,中國人被歧視的日子一去不復(fù)返,所有中國人都為此感到自豪.Practicemakesperfect.根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容,話題運用______isknowntoall,Chinawithanareaof9.6millionsquarekilometers,isthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,among______theHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.Besides,therearemanybigriversinChina,themostimportantof_____aretheYangtzeRiverandtheYellowRiver.Therewasatime_____Chineseeconomywasfarbehindmanyothercountriesintheworld.However,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,thedaysaregoneforever______theChinesepeoplewerelookeddownupon,______allChineseareproudof.Aswhichwhichwhenwhenwhich話題運用______isknowntoall,Ch寫作中存在問題一、詞語的錯用：有:have/has

therebebemadeupof/consistof2.長江、黃河

theYangtzeRiverandthe

YellowRiver3.第三大

thethirdlargest寫作中存在問題一、詞語的錯用：4.經(jīng)濟

finance:Financeisthecommercialorgovernmentactivityofmanagingmoney,debt,credit,andinvestment.

economy:Acountry'seconomyisthewealththatitgetsfrombusinessandindustry.5.發(fā)展:develop

改進:improve財政;金融經(jīng)濟4.經(jīng)濟財政;金融經(jīng)濟6.民族

people/nationality7.落后

latter:Youuselattertodescribethelaterpartofaperiodoftimeorevent.（一個時期或事件）后一半的，接近終了的fallbehind/dropbehind8.makeup占比例takeup占據(jù)時間空間IknowhowbusyyoumustbeandnaturallyIwouldn'twanttotakeuptoomuchofyourtime.6.民族二、詞性develop(v.)development(n.)economic(adj.)economy(v.)strength(n.)strong(adj.)discrimination(n.)discriminate(v.)三、短語第三大國thethirdlarge