Unit 3 Section B writing課件-人教版八年級英語上冊

describeyourfriendWritingBrainstormWhatkindsofthingsareimportantinafriend?Agoodfriendissomeonewhomakesmehappy.Ithinkafriendshouldbekind.honestkindeasygoinghelpfulpatientfriendlywarm-hearted...goodfriendWhatshouldagoodfriendbelike?Talkaboutit.Preparing

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–1.Collectideasopen-minded,Generous慷慨的,good-tempered脾氣好的,trustworthy值得信任的,careful,fulloflove充滿愛心的,friendly,othergoodqualities:caring,interesting,easygoing,outgoing,warm-hearted熱心的,selfless無私的,intelligent聰明的…1)Heisofmediumheight/tall/short...2)He/Sheisofmediumbuild/heavy/thin...3)He/Shehasstraight/curlyhair...4)He/Shehaslonghair/shorthair...5)He/Shehasglasses.What

doeshe/shelooklike？Preparingforthetask–2.ExtendideasheightheightwearingbuildhairHeisofmediumheightwith…(glasses).1）He/Sheisfunny...2)He/Sheisfriendly...3)He/Sheisseriousaboutstudy.4)He/Shelovesnatureandlife5)He/Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.6)...Whatis

he/shelike？Preparingforthetask–2.Extendideaspersonality性格1）He/shelikesplayingsoccer...2)He/Shelovesplayingthepiano...3)He/Sheisinterestedinsinging...4)He/Sheisgoodatdancing...5)He/Shelovesreadingbooks...

Whatishis/herhobby？Preparingforthetask–2.Extendideas1）Wehavethesamehobbies.2)He/Sheisagoodlistener.3)He/Sheisfriendlytome.4)He/Shecanbringthebestinme.5)He/Shewouldliketospendtimewithme...Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourfriend？Preparingforthetask–2.ExtendideasShouldfriendsbethesameordifferent?

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Mybestfriend

MybestfriendisTom.Heis13.Iam13,too.Weareinthesameclass.Heistall.Hehasshortblackhair.Heisfriendlytoeveryone.Heismoreoutgoingthanme.Helikestellingjokes.Healwaysmakesmelaugh.Helikessports.Heoftenplaysbasketballafterschool.ButIdon’tlikebasketball,becauseIthinkit’sdifficultforme.Heisdifferentfromme.Wearefriendsbecausehealwayshelpsme.Preparingforthetask–3.sentencepattern

MybestfriendMybestfriendisTom.Heis13.Iam13,too.Weareinthesameclass.Heistall.

Hehasshortblackhair.Heisfriendlytoeveryone.Heismoreoutgoingthanme.Helikestellingjokes.Healwaysmakesmelaugh.Helikessports.Heoftenplaysbasketballafterschool.ButIdon’tlikebasketball,becauseIthinkit’sdifficultforme.Heisdifferentfromme.Wearefriendsbecausehealwayshelpsme.Preparingforthetask–3.sentencepattern

Canyouputthetwosentencesintoone?Heis13.Iam13,too.Iamasoldashim.Iamthesameageasheis.Heistall.Hehasshortblackhair.Heistallwithshortblackhair.Heisatallboywithshortblackhair.GoodsentencesaboutfriendsAgoodfriendislikeamirror.Friendsarelikebooks.—youdon’tneedalotofthemaslongasthey’regood.Mybestfriendhelpstobringoutthebestinme.Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Preparingforthetask-4structure

Howtobeagoodarticle?StructureBeginningEndingBodyIntroductionPara

1Para2MyfriendTomisquitefromme.Para3EndingexamplesandfeelingsRewritinganarticleTopic

sentenceMybestfriendTomisquitedifferentfromme.Topic

sentenceExamplesFeelingsHeismoreoutgoingthanme.Helikestellingjokes.WhenIamnothappy,healwaysmakesmelaugh.Helikesports.Heoftenplaysbasketballafterschool.ButIdon’tlikebasketball,becauseIthinkit’sdifficultforme.Preparing

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Agoodarticle*Sentencepattern*Goodsentences*Structure*LinkwordsPreparingforthetask

LinkwordsBesides(此外，而且）What’smore（而且)Inaddition(此外）Asthesayinggoes（常言道）RewritethepassageCombineideas--Rewritethepassage

MybestfriendisTom.Iamasoldashim.Weareinthesameclass.Heisatallboywithshortblackhair.Heisfriendlytoeveryone.

MybestfriendTomisquitedifferentfromme.Heismoreoutgoingthanme.Helikestellingjokes.WhenIamnothappy,healwaysmakesmelaugh.Helikessports.Heoftenplaysbasketballafterschool.ButIdon’tlikebasketball,becauseIthinkit’sdifficultforme.WhenIamintrouble,heisalwaysreadytohelpme.

Asthesayinggoes,Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.

Nogrammarmistakes?IndependentwritingHaveenoughideas?

Havesomeexamples?Havelinkingwords?Usegoodsentencepatterns?checklistSharingandevaluatingDoeshe/shehaveenoughideas?YesNo☆☆☆Doeshe/shegiveenoughexamplesorfacts?YesNo☆☆☆D