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認(rèn)準(zhǔn)自己的優(yōu)Beproudofwhatyoucan2015-1- 博物館的功Inthepast,themajorityof museumsweresolemnplacesforvisitorstogaindeeperunderstandingofthehistory,culture,technologyandsoon.Nowadays,museumsarenotquitethesame.Theyare moreenjoyableandentertaining,whichhassparkedcontroversyoverthepurposeof2015-1- 發(fā)展中國家如何變富Inmyopinion,despitethepossiblerisksofinvitingforeigncompanies,Istronglybelievethathavingforeigninvestmentisabettermethodtogetridofpovertyforadevelocountry.Whatthe ernmentshouldconsideristolimitthenumberofforeigncompaniesandthequalityoftheirinvestmentprojects.2015-1- 我雅思過72015-1- 2015-1- 主語多樣1.人稱／具體名詞－與中文相2.動(dòng)名詞作為主語－一定要出4.抽象名詞－有可能一輩子2015-1- 1).Advocate-支持者和 AdvocatesofguncontrollegislationarguethatguncontrollawstheincidenceofviolentcrimesbyreducingtheprevalenceofOpponentsofanykindofgunrestrictionsarguethattheyaremeaningless,sincecriminalsbydefinitiondon'tfollowthelaw,andthereforewon'tallowgunlawstohamstringtheircriminalbehavior.2).Enthusiast-熱愛者,Participant-參與者,Fan-粉絲, Enthusiastsofextremesportsareabletoexperienceuniqueandexcitementthatcanneverbeprovidedbyso-calledsafeYoungparticipantsofcommunityservicesaremorelikelytoindependentinthinkingand2015-1- 的人Museumgoer-博物館5).Tourist-游客,Visitor-參觀者,Traveler-旅行者,Trekker-遠(yuǎn)途旅行者Hiker-徒步旅行者,Backpacker-背包旅行6).educationalist-教育學(xué)家,educator-老師,sociologist-社會(huì)學(xué)家 2015-1- 7).Resident-居民,Dweller-居住者,Citizen-城市/國家公民,Inhabitant-常8).Worker-工作者,Employee-雇員,Professional-專業(yè) ,Job-seeker-求職者,Job-hopper-跳槽的人,Superior-上級(jí)9).Student-學(xué)生,Pupil-年紀(jì)偏小的學(xué)生,Learner-學(xué)習(xí)者,Graduate-畢業(yè)生,Undergraduate-大學(xué)在讀,Postgraduate- Learningaforeignlanguageallowslearners eflexibleinthinkinggrowvariablein10).Donator-捐贈(zèng)者,Giver-給予者,Recipient-接受者11).Optimist-樂觀者,Pessimist-悲觀主義者,Activist-積極分子,Skeptic-懷疑者 2015-1- 動(dòng)名詞主3).Workingathomeallowspeopletospendtimebetterfittingindividual4).Employing ligentrobotworkersbringsdowncostof5).Livingalowcarbonlifemeansthatpeoplehavetosacrificetheconvenienceandcomfortintheirdailylife.2015-1- 6).Allowingemployeestohavelongervacationsisbeneficialforthemtomaintainaclosefamilybond.7).Allowingchildrenthefreedomtomakedecisionsishelpfultoforgegoodrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.–話8).Employingthesameproportionofmenandwomenseemstobeeffectivemethodtodiminishgenderdiscrimination.–避免重9).Educatingchildrentounderstandtheimportanceofobeying10).Beingabletosupportyourreasonsandideaswithdetailsishelpful2015-1- Itis形容1基本入門結(jié)構(gòu):Itis形容todoItiscommonforyoungadultstolivewiththeirparents.Itisnot montoseepeopleusetheirelectronicdevicesalldaylong.2015-1- 2復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)：Itis形容詞/thatItiscommonknowledgethatdrugabuseleadstoharmfulconsequences.Youngchildrenarefullofcuriosity,soitisnotsurprisingthattheirparentsmakemanyrulestorestricttheirbehavior.2015-1- 3再復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)：Itis過去分thatItissometimesarguedthatforeigntouristsshouldbechargedmorewhenvisitinghistoricandculturalattractions.Itisfrequentlysuggestedthatchildrenshouldnotbegivenanymoney.2015-1- 抽象名詞主popular-poor–happy–similar–different–difficult–various–avarietyilliterate–unable–2015-1- 進(jìn)化過A:MoreandmorepeoplechoosetoreadB:Readingonlineis ingincreasinglyC:Thepopularityofreadingonlinehasbeen2015-1- AB：TherebeD：用E：用therebe結(jié)合2015-1- A：FewerandfewerpeoplewritetraditionalB：TherearefewerandfewerpeoplewhowriteC：Writingtraditionalletters inglessandD：ThepopularityofwritingtraditionallettershasbeenE：Therehasbeenadeclineinthepopularityof2015-1- 練2015-1- 第二大類WhatdoyouthinkarethecausesWhatsolutionsdoyou1.Ithinkthat shouldberesponsibleforthis.2.Ithinkthat is/areto3.Ithinkthat shouldtakemajor2015-1- 結(jié)構(gòu)分1.第一段只需要將原題給出的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行改寫即可，Ithinkthat shouldberesponsibleforthis. 序：Onasimplisticlevel,Furthermore這兩個(gè)短語詞2015-1- 3).第三段的任務(wù)是提出切實(shí)可行的解決方4第四段的任務(wù)是總結(jié)整篇文章的內(nèi)容，2015-1- 2015-1- 犯2015-1-犯參考范1).PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsiblefor2).Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.Whentheygettoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyself-controlordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.2015-1- 3)Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.ButIthinkthesolutiontotheproblemlieswiththefamilies,whoneedtobemoreawareofthefutureconsequencesofspoilingtheirchildren.Iftheycouldraisethemtobemoreconsiderateofothersandtobesocial,responsibleindividuals,thewholecommunitywouldbenefit.4)Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolsshouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.The ernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.2015-1- 學(xué)生作品參LackofacquaintancewithneighborsisnowbelievedasacommonsocialphenomenonandIthinkthatmoderntechnologiesandstressfulworkingconditionsshouldbeprobablyresponsibleforthis.HighDefinition evisionwithdiversifiedprogramsandhighspeednetworkconnectiontotheInternetconsumeagreatdealofsparetimeratherthantalktopeoplelivingnextdoors.TVSeries,talkshows,andtalentcompetitionprogramdistractspeoplefromsocialactivities.Immersinginonlinegamesormobileapplications,ontheotherhand,hasbeenchangingthefocusonsurroundingstoscreens.Duetothepopularityofthesocialmedia,itisfarmoreconvenienttocommunicatethroughhigh-techdevicesthanface-to-faceinteraction.Swingersarelikelytoposttheirnewcarphotoson insteadofsharingthisgoodnewstotheirneighbors.2015-1- Despitetheseelectronicfactors,thehighpressureworkingcompetitioncausesemployeesto econsciousofthedemandforsavingtheirpositions,whichisthereasonwhyovertimeworkingaremorecommon altimehasbeenshortened.Especially,theincreasingnumberoftwo-careercouplesindicatesthatfewerpeopleareathomeduringthedaytime,whichleavesthemlesstimetomeettheirneighbors.Theabsenceofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisaworryingtrend,someasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.Communityeventsamongneighbors,suchasacompetitionofthebestdecoratedhousesforChristmas,orasmallgardenerskillsandinformationexchangecouldbeheldtohelppeopletoknoweachother.Itisalsotheernment’sresponsibilitiestoreducetheunemploymentrateandsupportcompulsorypaidleaves,inordertorisethestayinghometime.2015-1- Inconclusion,althoughtheshiftfromatraditionalwayoflivingtoamodernlifestyleisunstoppable,Istillbelievethatpeoplelivinginthesameneighborhoodshouldgettoknoweachotherasmuchasbefore.Thisisimportantnotonlytoindividualsbutthesocietyasawhole.2015-1- 第一段解析：痛快改寫原題+準(zhǔn)確回1原題：Theaverageweightofgeneralpopulationhasbeenincreasing.改：Inmanycountries,therehasbeenariseintheaverageweightofaconsiderableproportionofpeople.Ithinkthatexcessiveconsumptionofunhealthyfoodandsedentarylifestylearetoblame.2015-1- 2).原題：Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionhasbeenwidelyrealized,butveryfewpeoplearemakingcontributiontothisgoal.改：Althoughitisknownbythemajorityofpeoplethatsavingtheearthiscriticallyimportant,onlyatinyproportionofthemaretakingrealactionstomaketheworldbetter.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareresponsibleforthis.2015-1- 3原題Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.改:PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.2015-1- 4).原題：Therearesomeactivitiesthatareharmfultopeople'shealth,buttheyarestillpopularwithmanypeople.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?改：Itiscommonsensethatactivitieslikesmokingcigarettesorstayinguplateresultinhealthproblems.Unfortuna y,aconsiderableproportionofpeoplearestillobsessedwiththem.Inmyopinion,modernlifestylesshouldberesponsibleforthis.2015-1- 5).原題：Moreandmoreyoungpeoplearenotwillingtoworkasateacher.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?改：Thewillingness/desiretotakeateachingjobhasbeendecliningamongyoungadults.Inmyopinion,moderneducationshouldberesponsiblefor2015-1- 哪些東西可以為此負(fù)1.modern4.peer5.media6.thepursuitofaquality2015-1- 原因分析句型參1).Oneofthereasonswhypeopledonotgotomuseumsisthat………………2).Theotherreasonwhypeoplerarelyvisitamuseumisthat3).Theincrease/decreaseinobesityisduetothelackof4).Aleadingreasonbehindthewideningwealthgapisthat5).Sedentarylifestyleofmodernpeoplehascontributedalottodeclininglevelof6).Livingalow-carbonlifemeansthatpeoplehavetosacrificemostofthecomfortandconvenienceintheireverydaylife,whichisthereasonwhymostofpeopleareunwillingtotakeearth-savingactions.2015-1- 1.keysentence+2keysentenceForexample,總3高端InotherwordsFor2015-1- Theotherreasonwhypeopledonotknowabouttheirneighboursisthatcommunicationthroughhightechnologydevicesisfarmoreconvenientandinterestingthanface-to-faceinteractionwiththelivingnextdoor.Forexample,instantcommunicationappsconnectpeopleacrosstheworldtogethersothattheycantalkaboutsomehottopicsorsharetheirphotostakenrecentlywhenevertheywant.Ifyoucandoallthecommunicationinyourbedroom,whywouldyoubothertoleavethehouseandknockatyourneighbor'sdoor?2015-1- 解決方案段過渡1)Theabsenceofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisaworryingtrend,someasuresshouldbetakentocombatthissituation.2)Merelylimitingthepopulationofbigcitiescannotbethesolutiontothisproblem,becausepeople’spursuittoliveaqualitylifewillnotjustdisappear.Instead,everyeffortshouldbemadebythe ernmenttowardnarrowingthegapbetweenruralandurbanregions.3).Theriseinaverageweightofthegeneralpopulationisusuallyfollowedbyaseriesofproblems,suchasaddingtofinancialburdenofthe ernmentadministration.Therefore,measuresshouldbetakentocombatthissituation.2015-1- 解決問題句1).Oneofthesolutionstothisproblemlieswiththeparentswhomustbemoreawareoftheimportancetosparesometimefortheirchildren.2).Aneffectivestrategytodealwiththisproblemisthatthe ernmentshouldencourageyoungadultstostarttheirownbusinessesafterleavingschool.3).Also,byorganizingentertainingandappealingactivities,residentsarehighlylikelytogetinvolved.Forexample,…………4).Besides,whatyoungadultsshoulddoistolowertheircareerexpectationsontoareasonablelevelsothattheiremployabilitycanbegreatlyincreased.2015-1- 合理的結(jié)尾1).Inconclusion,althoughtheshiftfromatraditionalwayoflivingtoamodernlifestyleisunstoppable,Istillbelievethatpeoplelivinginthesameneighborhoodshouldgettoknoweachotherasmuchasbefore.2).Inconclusion,measuresproposedaboveshouldbetaken ytominimizetheadverseeffectsofincreasingjuveniledelinquency.Thisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butthesocietyasawhole.3).Inconclusion,thesoonerhumanbeingsbegintotakeactions,thefewerspecieswilldisappearfromtheearth.Therefore,measuresproposedaboveshouldbetaken ytominimizetheadverseeffectsofmassiveextinctionoflivingcreatures.2015-1- 練習(xí)題目- Today,manypeopleknowlittleabouttheir Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionhasbeenwidelyrealized,butveryfewpeoplearemakingcontributiontothisgoal. Theaverageweightofgeneralpopulationhasbeen4.Thenumberofspeciesoflivingcreatureshasdecreasingrapidlyinthelast2015-1- Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegative或Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe2015-1- 結(jié)構(gòu)分析：貌似2:2，其實(shí)有偏1)改寫原題或者描述和題目相符的事實(shí)，然后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)(可以偏向/也可以既有好也有壞)—40—50詞2).一方面，好處的描述。一般兩個(gè)論據(jù)。--90—1003).另一方面壞處的描述。一般兩個(gè)論據(jù)。--90—1004).總結(jié)自己的偏向。---2015-1- 范1).Traditionally,childrenhavebegunstudyingforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butintroducingthemearlieris educationalists.Thispolicyhasbeenadoptedbysomeeducationalauthoritiesorindividualschools,withbothpositiveandnegative2).Theobviousargumentinitsfavouristhatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanteenagers.Theirbrainsarestillprogrammedtoacquiretheirmothertongue,whichfacilitateslearninganotherlanguage,andunlikeadolescents,theyarenotinhibitedbyself-consciousness.Thegreaterflexibilityoftheprimarytimetableallowsformorefrequent,shortersessionsandforaplay-centredapproach,thusmaintaininglearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Theircommandofthelanguageinlaterlifewillbenefitfromthisearlyexposure,whilelearningotherlanguagessubsequentlywillbeeasierforthem.Theymayalsogainabetterunderstandingofothercultures.2015-1- 3).Thereare,however,somedisadvantages.Primaryschoolteachersaregeneralists,andmaynothavethenecessarylanguageskillsthemselves.Ifspecialistshavetobebroughtintodeliverthesesessions,theflexibilityreferredtoaboveisdiminished.Ifprimarylanguageteachingisnotstandardized,secondaryschoolscouldbefacedwithagreatvarietyoflevelsindifferentlanguageswithintheirintake,resultinginaclassroomexperiencewhichundoestheearliergains.Thereisnoadvantageifenthusiasticprimarypupils edemotivatedassoonastheychangeschools.However,theseissuescanbeaddressedstrategicallywithinthepolicyadopted.4).Anythingwhichencourageslanguagelearningbenefitssocietyculturallyandeconomically,andearlyexposuretolanguagelearningcontributestothis.Youngchildren’sinnateabilitiesshouldbeharnessedtomakethesebenefitsmoreachievable.2015-1- 第一段：改原題：Somepeoplethinkthatvisitingamuseumshouldbefreeofcharge.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe2015-1- 改寫1：Thereare ingviewsonwhethermuseumsshouldchargeadmissionfeesornot.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative 改寫2：Itisfrequentlyarguedthatmuseumsshouldchargenoadmissionfees.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative 2015-1- 改寫3：IntheUKitisfreeofchargetovisittheGreatBritishMuseumandtheNaturalHistoryMuseum.Also,inmanyothercountries,somemuseumschargenoadmissionfees.Inmyopinion,thispolicywouldhavebothpositiveandnegative2015-1- 好壞句1).Oneobviousargumentagainst/infavorofhostingtheOlympicGamesisthat…………2).Peopleagainst/infavorofgivingchildrenmoneyarguethat3).Oneofthereasonswhypeopledonotgotomuseumsisthat4).Anotherreasonwhypeoplerarelyvisitamuseumisthat4)