專升本寫作句型練習(xí)

章句式優(yōu)化

不同的思想內(nèi)容當(dāng)然應(yīng)該用不同的句式來表達(dá)．而同一思想內(nèi)容也可以用不同句式來表達(dá)．句式不同，表達(dá)的效果就不同．一篇文章中如果反復(fù)使用同一句式，就會(huì)顯得單調(diào)乏味，毫無生氣，寫作時(shí)一定要注意句式的變換，避免單一重復(fù)．1.長句和短句變換

長句使文章富有氣勢(shì)，卻容易產(chǎn)生語法錯(cuò)誤或造成理解障礙；短句不容易出錯(cuò)，但是短句的堆砌容易讓人感覺語言技巧不成熟，不老練．在實(shí)際寫作中，一味地采用長句或短句都是不可取的，要注意長短句的交錯(cuò)使用．通常簡(jiǎn)單而又實(shí)用的長短句交錯(cuò)方法是：以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配以適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)合句．簡(jiǎn)單句可長可短，一般要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語，不定式短語，介詞短語，副詞短語等．專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第1頁!章句式優(yōu)化1.短句變長句１．[原文]Liesdoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies.Liesalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.１．[優(yōu)化]Liesnotonlydoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies,butalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.

受漢語思維習(xí)慣影響，很多考生往往會(huì)直接將腦子里的意思議程英語，而忽略句與句之間的聯(lián)系，導(dǎo)致寫出來的句子無法體現(xiàn)英語作為“形合語言”的特點(diǎn)．因此，在平時(shí)寫作時(shí)，考生要注意前后句之間的聯(lián)系，用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將簡(jiǎn)單句連接起來，組成準(zhǔn)確地道的復(fù)雜長句．增加文章的氣勢(shì)．一．長句和短句變換專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第2頁!1.短句變長句３．[原文]Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.３．[優(yōu)化]Pressuredbyschoolwork.andencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,thoughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.２．[原文]Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth.Thetruthcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.２．[優(yōu)化]Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth,somethingthatcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第3頁!1.短句變長句4．[原文]WhenIturnedrightonthecorner,amotorbikeknockedintoasmallcar.Themotorbikewasred.Thereweretwopersonsonthemotorbikes.Thecarwasyellow.Themotorbikefelldown.Thetwopersonsonthemotorbikewereslightlyinjured.Thedrivercameoutofthecaratonce,andaskedaboutthetwoperson’sinjuries.AssoonasIsawthat,Imadeatelephonecallto110.thetrafficpolicearrivedinashorttime.4．[優(yōu)化]WhenIturnedrightonthecorner,aredmotorbikewithtwopersonsknockedintoasmallyellowcar.Immediately,themotorbikefelldown,andthetwopersonsonthemotorbikewereslightlyinjured.Atthattime,thedrivercameoutofthecar,andaskedaboutthetwoperson’sinjuries.Seeingthis,Idialed110.inashorttime,thetrafficpolicearrived.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第4頁!2.長句變短句３．[原文]Hedidn’thaveenoughexperience,whichisthereasonwhyhedidn’tdotheworkwell.３．[優(yōu)化]Hedidn’tdotheworkwellforlackofexperience.２．[原文]Perhapstheybasicallydistrustedourcapacitytojudgecorrectly.２．[優(yōu)化]Theydistrustedourjudgment.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第5頁!章句式優(yōu)化

與漢語相比，英語更注重動(dòng)作本身，而不是動(dòng)作的執(zhí)行者，因此在英語中被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用相對(duì)多一些，但這并不表明要以為地追求被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用．事實(shí)上，什么時(shí)候用主動(dòng)，什么時(shí)候用被動(dòng)，主要是由陳述對(duì)象而定．英語寫作特別強(qiáng)調(diào)陳述對(duì)象的一致性，因此在選擇主動(dòng)和被動(dòng)時(shí)一定要慎重．1.主動(dòng)變被動(dòng)１．[原文]Weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheelderlywhohaddevotedtheiryouthandenergytoourcountry.１．[優(yōu)化]Moreattentionshouldbepaidtotheelderlywhohaddevotedtheiryouthandenergytoourcountry.二．主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句變換專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第6頁!章句式優(yōu)化１．[原文]Nothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadreallymatters.１．[優(yōu)化]Itisnothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadthatreallymatters.三．強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句變換2．[原文]Bymakinggooduseofinternetwecanmakeadifferenceinourlife.2．[優(yōu)化]Onlybymakinggooduseofinternetcanwemakeadifferenceinourlife.

適當(dāng)運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句可以起到突出，強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用，達(dá)到較強(qiáng)的修飾效果，給讀者留下深刻印象．專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第7頁!章句式優(yōu)化１．[原文]WhenIlookintothefuture,IwilltrymybesttoservemyfellowstudentsifIamluckytobepresidentofthestudentunion.１．[優(yōu)化]Lookingintothefuture,IwilltrymybesttoservemyfellowstudentsifIamluckytobepresidentofthestudentunion.四．非謂語句和從句變換非謂語動(dòng)詞包括不定式／動(dòng)名詞／現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞．使用非謂語動(dòng)詞可以在有限的空間內(nèi)表達(dá)更多的信息，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，邏輯嚴(yán)密．專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第8頁!章句式優(yōu)化１．[原文]Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.Becauseeverypersonhashisorherownway,theythinkseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantness.Wehavethechancetoadjustthesubtlerelationship.１．[優(yōu)化]Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.theythinkseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisorherownway.Wehavethechancetoadjustthesubtlerelationship.五．松散句和掉尾變換松散句主要用來陳述觀點(diǎn)和羅列事實(shí)，因此文中絕大多數(shù)句子都是松散句，正是由于這個(gè)緣故，偶爾使用掉尾句會(huì)起到突出的效果，但如果頻繁的使用掉尾句，則會(huì)使文章的意思表達(dá)不夠直接名了，給讀者做作的感覺．專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第9頁!章句式優(yōu)化１）justas…,so…(正如…，…也一樣)e.g.justasfoodisnecessarytolife,soarebookstoourspirit.六．比較句變換１．表示相似性2）share/have…inmon(在…方面有共同點(diǎn))e.g.chinaandtheu.s.havesomeinterestsinmoninforeigntradearea..3）bearsimilarities/resemblancesto…(和…具有相似之處)e.g.lotsofancientconstructionsbearstrikingresemblancetothatinotherpartsoftheworld,whichdisclosesthesimilarityinhumancivilization.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第10頁!章句式優(yōu)化１）…theoppositeof…(…與…恰恰相反)e.g.hehopesthathiswifecangivebirthtoamaleinheritortosuchalargefortune;whereashiswife’swishisjusttheoppositeofhis.六．比較句變換2．表示差異性2）…itisjusttheotherwayround,…(…，相反，…)e.g.heisnotyourfriend.Itisjusttheotherwayround.Heisyourrival.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第11頁!章句式優(yōu)化１）表轉(zhuǎn)折but,however,nevertheless,instead,ontheotherhand…七．松散到緊湊變換如果遺篇文章只具有意義上的連貫，而形式上比較松散，就很難突出主題，較好的表達(dá)作者的意圖．為了能使文章主題明確，線索明了，而句式富有變化，句與句之間，段與段之間需要一定的連接手段，寫作中常用的連接手段有：2）表讓步although,though,despite,evenso,evenif/though,regardlessof,inspiteof…１．使用過度性詞語專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第12頁!章句式優(yōu)化六．比較句變換７）表比較和對(duì)比While,whereas,likewise,similarly,equally,inparisonwith,paredwith,onthecontrary,inthecontrast,bycontrast…６）表強(qiáng)調(diào)Indeed,ofcourse,inparticular,aboveall,mostimportant,infact…專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第13頁!章句式優(yōu)化七．松散到緊湊變換與段落中句與句之間的連貫一樣，一篇文章中各段落之間也需要以一定的方式來明確各段間的邏輯關(guān)系,從而使整篇文章形成一個(gè)統(tǒng)一連貫的整體.段與段之間除了借助一些篇章層次上的連接詞語外,如:however,similarly,therefore,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,incontrast,inconclusion,inshort等，還經(jīng)常需要使用一些表示過度的句子來確保其連慣性．2．使用過度性句子例：everystudentwillbefacedwiththesamequestionwhenhepassesthecollegeentranceexamination:shouldhechooseagoodmajororagooduniversity?Angersdifferasfordifferentgroupsofpeople.Somestudentsgiveprioritytoagoodmajor.Whattheycherishisaspecialtytheylikemost.Intheirmind,…專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第14頁!章句式優(yōu)化一．長句和短句變換2.長句變短句１．[原文]Hisfather,whoisasalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.１．[優(yōu)化]Hisfather,asalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.

長句固然能表達(dá)出復(fù)雜而縝密的思想，但如果片面最求復(fù)雜句式，反而會(huì)顯得華而不實(shí)，累贅．寫作中句子的長短應(yīng)根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要而定，有話則長，無話則短．短句不僅指句子長度較短，也指句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)精練，簡(jiǎn)潔是寫作的一個(gè)重要原則，用詞累贅則是寫作的忌．專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第15頁!1.短句變長句4．[原文]Abasicreasonfordivorceisthatsomepeoplearenotreallyreadyformarriage,perhapsbecausetheyarestillestablishingthemselvesintheircareersandhaven’thadenoughtimetogettoknowthemselvesandmanymembersoftheoppositesex,butfamilypressuresmakethemfeelthatsomethingiswrongwiththemsincetheyarenotmarried,andsotheymarryinhastewithoutknowingeachotherwell.4．[優(yōu)化]Abasicreasonfordivorceisthatsomepeoplearenotreallyreadyformarriage.Astheyarestillestablishingthemselvesintheircareers,theyhaven’thadenoughtimetogettoknowthemselvesandmanymembersoftheoppositesex.However,familypressuresmakethemfeelthatsomethingiswrongwiththemsincetheyarenotmarried.Sotheymarryinhastewithoutknowingeachotherwell.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第16頁!2.長句變短句３．[原文]Whentheprimeministerarrivedattheairport,hundredsofreporterssurroundedhimimmediately.３．[優(yōu)化]Whentheprimeministerarrivedattheairport,hewasimmediatelysurroundedbyhundredsofreporters.

２．[原文]TheemployeeselectedMr.lichairmanofthemitteelastweek.２．[優(yōu)化]Mr.liwaselectedchairmanofthemitteebytheemployeeslastweek.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第17頁!1.短句變長句3．[原文]WehavegrownsooldbecausethebirthratefellearlierinwesternandnorthernEuropethanelsewhere,ratherthanbecauseofanychangeinthedeathrate.3．[優(yōu)化]ItisbecausethebirthratefellearlierinwesternandnorthernEuropethanelsewhere,ratherthanbecauseofanychangeinthedeathrate,thatwehavegrownsoold.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第18頁!1.短句變長句2．[原文]Thelawcanpunishthosewhoproduceorsellfakemodities.2．[優(yōu)化]Thelawcanpunishthoseproducingorsellingfakemodities.3．[原文]Becauseoneofmyparentsislaidoff,myfamilywon’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.3．[優(yōu)化]Withoneofmyparentsbeinglaidoff,myfamilywon’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第19頁!1.短句變長句2．[原文]Anewpatternofurbanlivinghasemergedinmostbigcities,asmanyofurbandwellershavemovedtothesuburbanringsinsearchofcleanerair,greaterprivacyandahigherqualityoflife.2．[優(yōu)化]Asmanyofurbandwellershavemovedtothesuburbanringsinsearchofcleanerair,greaterprivacyandahigherqualityoflife,anewpatternofurbanlivinghasemergedinmostbigcities.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第20頁!章句式優(yōu)化六．比較句變換5）viceversa/theverseistrue(反之亦然)e.g.ifyouarefriendlytoothers,theywillholdhospitableattitudetowardsyouandviceversa.6）noless(…)than/nomore(…)than(不比…多／強(qiáng))e.g.thefatherisanambitiousman,theson’sambitionisnolessthanthefather.4）thesameistrueof/with…(…也是如此)e.g.peoplewhoarefinanciallydependentwillbebulliedbytherichones.Andthesameistruewithcountries.7）as…as(和…一樣…)e.g.someofthedoctorsarepaidalmosttwiceasmuchasthenurses.專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第21頁!章句式優(yōu)化六．比較句變換4）less(…)than(比…少／差）／more(…)than(比…多／強(qiáng))e.g.moreandmorepeoplearebuyingnewcarsthaneverbefore.3）…different/differfrom…inthat…(…和…的不同之處在于…)e.g.hischaracterisdifferentfromhisbrotherinthatheisintrovert.2．表示差異性專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共25頁，您現(xiàn)在瀏覽的是第22頁!章句式優(yōu)化六．比較句變換4）表舉例或列舉Forexample,forinstance,asanillustration,suchas…3）表層進(jìn)first,tobeginwith,furthermore,besides,moreover,inaddition,what’smore,alsoandthen,andequallyimportant,lastbutnottheleast…５）表總結(jié)insummary,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,toconclude,inshort,onthewhole…專升本寫作句型練習(xí)共2