高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí) 佳作誦讀5 講義

高考作文復(fù)習(xí)——佳作誦讀5第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文(滿分15分)假設(shè)你是江陰市第一中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你從官網(wǎng)得知，青少年藝術(shù)節(jié)（YouthArtFestival）組委會(huì)正在招募今年英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽的承辦學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校給組委會(huì)寫(xiě)一封郵件，申請(qǐng)承辦該活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.承辦條件；2.初步計(jì)劃。注意:1.詞數(shù)80~100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【審題】1、本篇應(yīng)用文是一封郵件(申請(qǐng)信)：要求考生代表學(xué)校給青少年藝術(shù)節(jié)(YouthArtFestival)組委會(huì)寫(xiě)一封郵件，申請(qǐng)承辦今年的英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽。2、文章分三段。第一段：表明寫(xiě)信目的：代表學(xué)校申請(qǐng)承辦英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽。第二段：承辦條件和初步計(jì)劃：本段首先介紹為什么有資格承辦這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，列舉出1-2個(gè)承辦理由，例如：成功舉辦過(guò)相類(lèi)似的活動(dòng)、有相應(yīng)的設(shè)施等。初步打算如何承辦這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，例如：邀請(qǐng)專(zhuān)家評(píng)審、做好宣傳策劃等。第三段：衷心期盼組委會(huì)給予機(jī)會(huì)考慮我校申請(qǐng)。Possibleversion:Towhomitmayconcern,IamLiHua,presidentofthestudentunioninJiangyinNo.1HighSchool.Onbehalfofourschool,Iamwritingtoyoutoapplytobethehostschoolofthisyear’sEnglishDramaCompetition.Duetothefactthatinthepastthreeyears,ourschoolhassuccessfullyheldthreeEnglishdramacompetitions,eachofwhichiswellreceivedandappreciatedbyallteachersandstudents,I’mfirmlyconvincedthatourschooliswellqualifiedforhostingthisactivity.Asforourarrangement,notonlywillwemakethebestoftheEnglishcornertowarmupinadvanceandpublicizethisdramacompetition,butwearealsointendedtoinviteprofessionalteacherstojoinusandgiveusguidanceonEnglishskills.IdobelievetheEnglishdramacompetitionheldbyourschoolisboundtobringavisualfeasttothisyear’sYouthArtFestival.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua我是李華，江陰第一中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席。我代表我們學(xué)校寫(xiě)信給您，申請(qǐng)成為今年英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽的主辦學(xué)校。由于在過(guò)去的三年里，我們學(xué)校成功舉辦了三場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽，每一場(chǎng)比賽都受到了所有老師和學(xué)生的歡迎和贊賞，我堅(jiān)信我們學(xué)校完全有資格舉辦這次活動(dòng)。至于我們的安排，我們不僅會(huì)充分利用英語(yǔ)角提前熱身，宣傳這場(chǎng)戲劇比賽，而且我們還打算邀請(qǐng)專(zhuān)業(yè)教師加入我們，為我們提供英語(yǔ)技能指導(dǎo)。我相信我們學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)戲劇比賽一定會(huì)為今年的青年藝術(shù)節(jié)帶來(lái)視覺(jué)盛宴。如果您能考慮我的申請(qǐng)，我將不勝感激。期待您早日回復(fù)。第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Hereisasecretthateveryoneknows:Idon’tliketoaskforhelp.Ofcourse,mydisabilitymeansthatIneedassistancewhenIgetdressedandhavetobedriveneverywhere,butthatispreciselymypoint.Onenightafewyearsago,aftermycaregiverhelpedmetobed,Ienjoyedmyfavoritepartofmyroutine—playingwithmyservicedogMarshall.Whentherestoftheworldmademefeel“l(fā)acking”,Marshallmademefeellike“enough”.Asusual,hejumpedoffthebedafterafewminutes,butthepaininhiseyestoldmesomethingwaswrong.Afewdayslater,atriptothevetconfirmedmyworstfears.Dr.Tomsaid,“Imustperformanoperationtotreathim.”“Isheinpain?”Iheldmybreath.ThenIgottheanswer“Yes.”Ifeltheartbroken.Icouldn’tremembertalkingaboutthedetails.Ihadonehugequestion:“Howmuchwouldtheoperationcost?”“About$2,500.Itmightaswellhavebeenamillion.”Icouldn’taffordit.Eachday,Isearchedforwaystoraisemoneyforthisoperation.Abeautifulbiketrailwasclosetotheapartmentwherewelived.Onmostofthedaysofoureightyearstogether,MarshallandIusedit.Ilovedthetrees,thefreshairandbeingoutside.Overtheyears,manyoftheneighborsgotfamiliarwithus.EveryonelovedMarshall.Thenoneday,anideaoccurredtome.CouldIaskthesepeopletocontributetothecostofMarshall’soperation?IfIcouldpushmywheelchairacertainnumberoflaps(圈)andgetmoneyforeverylapthatIcompleted,mightIraiseenoughmoneyforMarshalltohavehisoperation?Ourregularroutewasamileandahalflong.Mygoalwastopushmywheelchairtenlaps,atotaloffifteenmiles.Next,feelingveryboldandalittlenervous,Isetadate.ThenImadepostersandpostedthemaroundmyapartmentandalloverthebiketrail.MyneighborswereconcernedforMarshall.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！緦忣}】1、本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了身患?xì)埣驳淖髡卟⒉幌矚g尋求幫助。然而當(dāng)他的愛(ài)犬Marshall身患重病需要大筆錢(qián)做手術(shù)時(shí)，作者想到一個(gè)主意：推動(dòng)輪椅15英里去籌錢(qián)。作者戰(zhàn)勝身體的疼痛，刻苦訓(xùn)練，最終實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的既定目標(biāo)。在好心人的幫助下，成功籌到錢(qián)的故事。2、段落續(xù)寫(xiě)①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“帶著希望，我開(kāi)始訓(xùn)練自己。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者戰(zhàn)勝疼痛刻苦訓(xùn)練。艱難的開(kāi)始~~信念的堅(jiān)持~~最終成功。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“重要的一天終于來(lái)了，我在早上6:30出門(mén)。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者成功地推著輪椅，完成了15英里，為馬歇爾的手術(shù)籌集了足夠的資金?？朔щy~~眾人支持~~籌款成功~~愛(ài)的力量Withhope,Istartedtotrainmyself.Forthefirstfewdays,itwasevenharderthanIhadexpected.PushingmywheelchairtenlapswassuchaconsiderablechallengetomethatwhenIpracticedit,Ifeltgreatpaininmybackandshoulders,withmyheartpoundingrapidlyandhandstremblingterribly.EverytimeIwasonthevergeofgivingup,itwasmyloveforMarshallthatboostedmydetermination.Insteadofsurrenderingtomybody,Ifocusedonthevoiceinmyheart.“Marshallneedsyou.Onemorelap,andyouwillsucceed.”Afterweeksofpersistenttraining,Icouldfinishallfifteenmiles.ThebigdayfinallycameandIwentoutat6:30a.m.NervousasIwas,Icautiouslypushedmywheelchairforthefirstfewlaps,whichseemedtobelongandlonely.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,surprisingly,anincreasingnumberofneighborscametocheermeon,afeelingofwarmthemergingfromthebottomofmyheart.Witheverymile,morepeoplejoinedanddonationsfromtheneighborscontinued.Manyhourspassed,andIfinishedallfifteenmilesaswellassucceedinginraisingenoughmoneyforMarshall’soperation.Tearsofhappinesstrickleddownmycheeks.Icouldneverhavemadeitwithouttheselovelypeople’ssupport.Itistheirselflessnessandkindnessthatmademefeellike“enough”insteadof“l(fā)acking”andenabledmetosaveMarshall.懷著希望，我開(kāi)始訓(xùn)練自己。在最初的幾天里，這比我想象的還要難。推輪椅十圈對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)相當(dāng)大的挑戰(zhàn)，當(dāng)我練習(xí)時(shí)，我感到背部和肩膀都很痛，我的心怦怦直跳，雙手顫抖得厲害。每次我瀕臨放棄時(shí)，都是我對(duì)馬歇爾的愛(ài)增強(qiáng)了我的決心。我沒(méi)有屈服于自己的身體，而是專(zhuān)注于內(nèi)心的聲