江雪英譯對(duì)比賞析

江雪千山鳥飛絕，萬徑人蹤滅。孤舟蓑立翁，獨(dú)釣寒江雪。江雪柳宗元題目的翻譯“江雪”Snow（1處）/RiverSnow（3處）RiverSnowfall（1處）Snowontheriver（2處）/Snowingontheriver（1處）FishinginSnow（2處）TheSnowboundRiver（1處）千山鳥飛絕AhundredmountainsandnobirdNosingingofbirdsinthemountainrangesFromhilltohillnobirdinflightFromathousandhills,birdflightshavevanishedOnathousandhillallbirdslifeiscutoffOvermountainsandmountainsnobirdisonthewing“萬徑”Athousandpaths/trails/thousandsoftrails/tenthousandpathsFrompathtopathEndlessroads/allroadsthousandlinesofthepathways“人蹤滅”withoutafootprint/nofootprint/nofootprintsofmennotatraceofmen/thereisnotraceofhumanfootstepsnomaninsight/Notamanhumantraceswipedoutnomoretravelerspassby“孤舟”aboat/alittleboat/onlyoneboat/aloneboat/alonelyboat“蓑笠翁”anoldman/anoldfisherman/AnoldanglerAstraw-cloak-oldmananoldmaninrustichatandcapeanoldmaninastrawraincape獨(dú)釣寒江雪1.Anoldmanfishinginthecoldriver-snow.2.Withanoldmaninrustichatandcapedanglingalineinthefrigidwaters——asolitaryfigureveiledinsilentsnow.3.Whostandsondeckandfishesbyhimself/wherethesnowfallsonthecoldriver.4.Isfishingontherivermidstthesnow-drift.5.Fishingonrivercladinsnow.6.Isfishingsnowinalonelyboat.7.Anglingsilentlyintherivercoveredwithsnow.8.Fishingaloneinthecoldriversnow.9.Fishingaloneonrivercoldwithsnow.10.Sitsbyhimselffishingtheriverinthewintersnow.11.Inpalm-barkcapeandstrawhat,dropshisanglestring.SnowingontheriverNotabirdoverthehundredsofpeaks,Notamanonthethousandsoftrails.Anoldangleraloneinaboat,Withhisrodandline,inrainingoutfit,Isfishingontherivermidstthesnow-drift.FishinginSnowFromhilltohillnobirdinflight;Frompathtopathnomaninsight.Astraw-cloak-oldmaninaboat,lo!Fishingonrivercladinsnow.RiverSnowfallAmidstallmountains,birdsnolongerfly;Onallroads,nomoretravele