高考改錯(cuò)課件

高考改錯(cuò)課件RebeccaZangSomedayIhappenedtofindachattingroominmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised,IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.surpriseminewherewasOne1IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.SowithpractisingAsIfIhavethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglishsothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympicsasmuchasthe2008OlympicGames.to/withthe去掉choosen2Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfindtheirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryorcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.

wayourtoandammakeWhenAmmiewas8yearsolder,shehadanaccident.Sheknockedthepotofhotwaterwhileshewasrunninginthesittingroom.Thehotwaterpouredoverhisbody.Hermotherandfathersenthertohospitalimmediate,butAmmiewassoseriouslyinjuringthatshehadtoreceiveamajoroperation.oldherimmediatelyainjured2Theoperationlastsfornearly5hours.Aftertheoperation,Ammie’sskinwasassmoothasbefore.Therefore,shehadaverystrongcharacterandfacedthedisasterbravely.Shereturnedbacktoschoolandcontinuedforherstudies.Iadmireherforhercourage.notlastedHoweverNo.4WelcometotheGreatWall.TheGreatWallofChinawasoneofthewonderoftheworld.Itisoneofthefewman-madeobjectsonearthwhatcanbeseenonthemoon.Itdatedfromabout770BC.Itismorethan6000kilometerslong,6-7metershighor4-5meterswide.Alltheworkwasdonewithhand.theiswondersthatdatesandbyManypeoplewereforcedtoworkonthewall.NowtheGreatWallbecomeaplaceofinterest.WeallknowthefamousChinesesaying:“HewhodonotreachtheGreatWallisn’tatrueman.”NowletmetoshowyouaroundtheGreatWall.Thatway,please.hasThisdoesNo.4Inmanycountries,womanarelookeddownupon.It’smoredifficultofthemtogetsomeworkthanmen.Inordertogetajob,theysometimehavetotellalie.That'sunfair.Onfact,womencanworknoworsethanmen.There'snothingwhatwomencan'tdo.Perhaps,they’rebetterattheirworkthanmen.InsometimesforwomenthatForexamples,inmakingtelephones,manycompanieswouldrathertoemploywomen.Thereasonisthatmencan'tpickthesmallpieceswiththeirfingers.Womencanalsobecomeexcellentengineers,doctorandteachers.SoIamsurethedaywillcomesoonwhenwomencanrealgetequalrights.updoctorsreallyexampleNo.5MrDavidcametoChinaforthesecondtimeinthisspring.DuringhisstayinginChina,hevisitedseveralcity.InBeijinghevisitedtheGreatWall,andnextdayheleftforNanjingbytrain,wherehevisitedtheNanjingChangjiangRiverBridge.AfterwhichhetravelledtoHangzhouinairandwentsight-seeingontheWestLake.thethatbycitiesstayTwodayslate,hegottoGuangzhoubytrainandgaveareportinAmericaEnglish.AndthenhewenttoShanghaibysea,andbuyovertenbooksinChinese.Aftertwoweeks,DavidreturntoBeijingbyplane.Americanreturnedboughtlater改錯(cuò)6Tomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthemorningandwasalwayslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedtofirehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime,buthewenttothedoctorforahelp.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.troubleforsoitThemandidastoldandsleptreallywell,wakeupbeforethealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforaproperlybreakfastandwasstillthe

firstreachthefactory.“Boss,”hesaid,“thatmedicinereallyworks!”I’mpleasingtohearit,“saidhisboss,”butwherewereyouyesterday?”wakingtoproperpleased短文改錯(cuò)7YousaidinyourletterthatyouarealwaystryingtoimproveyourEnglish,andyourEnglishteacherdidn’tappeartoappreciateyourefforts.SoyoufeltdisappointingandlostthedesiretolearnEnglish.Youknowteachersareverybusyandmaybeyourteacherisstruggledtoprovidepersonalattentionforallthestudentsinmyclass.werebutdisappointedstrugglingyourInmyopinion,itisafactoflifethatsometimespeople’shardworkwentunnoticed.Althoughitisnicetoreceivepraiseandencouragement,partsofgrowingupislearningtobemotivatedandstudyindependent.SokeepontoworkinghardatyourEnglishbecauseyoustop,youaresuretofail.goespartifindependently改錯(cuò)8：Allofusknowtheoldsaying"Practicemakeperfect.“ittellsusunlesswewanttorealizeouraim,weshouldpractise,andonedaywewillmakeit.It’seasytounderstand.OnceIwantedtolearnswimming.AtfirstIfounddifficulttocontrolmybody.Ijustsankintothewater.Ifeelveryfrightened.itmakesiffeltThen,Iwatchedotherswhoweregoodatthemandaskedthemthekeytosucceed.Iwenttotheswimmingpooleveryday,learnedfromthemandpracticed.Aday,whenmyfriendpushedmeintotheswimmingpool,IsuddenlyfoundthatIcanswim.HowexcitingIwas!NowIcanswimmorebetterthanbefore.successOnecouldexcitedit改錯(cuò)9：Timefliesasanarrow.I'vealreadybeeninthefirsthalfofseniorgradethreebeforeIrealizeit.ItisonlyalittlemorethansevenmonthsafterIgraduatefrommiddleschool.Atthepresent,Ihaveadaptedmyselftoworklate,reviewingmylessonsinordertotakethecollegeentranceexaminations.

likebeforerealizedworkingIwishtogotoPekingUniversity,thatisoneofbestuniversitiesnotonlyChinabutalsointheworld.I'lltrymybesttoturnmydreamtoreality.Mostofmyclassmatesarealsostudyingveryhardtorealizeourwishes.Idobelieveeveryonewillbeabletoenteraverygooduniversityandcollege.inwhichintotheirorMyhusband96-year-oldgrandmothercametolivewithusformanyyearsofindependence.Wedidallthethingswecouldmakeherfeelscomfortableinourhome,includinggivinghertheprivatetelephonelineforherbedroom.Oneeveningwearehavingapartywhilethephonerang.husband’safterfeelawerewhento10Itwasatelephoneoperator,whoasked,“Doyouhaveagrandmotheronupstairs?”“Yes,whatwashappened?”myhusbandreplied.Well,theoperatoragaincontinued,“Shecan’trememberyourphonenumber,andshelikeacupoftea.”wouldNo.11Deareditor，I’mworriedaboutifIcanfindasuitablejobwhenIgraduatefromuniversitybecausethatI’mnotasociablegirl.Ispentmostofmyowntimeonmystudy,soIhaveonlyafewfriends.It’sdifficultofmetocommunicatewithboysandgirls.spendforwhetherThoughItrytogetalonggoodwiththem,Icannotexpressmewell.SometimesIevendon’tknowwhatIshouldspeakwhenIamwithboysorteachers.Ihavelostmanychancestochangemylifebecausemycharacter.Iwanttobecomethesociablegirlbutitisnoteasy.IhopethatIcangetsomeadvicesfromyou. wellofmyselfaadvicesayNo.12OnedayMrs.Blackwrotealettertoherfriend,thatwasadoctor,invitedhimtohavedinnerwithherfamily.Afewdayslate,thedoctorwroteback,butshewasnotabletoreadhiswriting,becausetheletterwaswrittentoocareless.Sheturnedtoherhusbandforhishelp.Herhusbandgottheidea.

ancarelesslylaterinvitingwhoHetoldherthatachemistcouldreadunderstandthedoctor’swriting.SoMrs.Blackcametothechemist’sshop.Thechemistintheshopreadtheletterandthengaveheralargebottlemedicine.YetMrs.BenoofNo.13Timeisimportant.Losingtimewillnevercomeback.Wemustrememberitinourdailylifeandmakewelluseoftime.Onlybythiswaycanwesucceed.Whatcanwemakefulluseoftime?First,we’dbettertomakeaplan.Weshouldarrangeourstudy,workandrestandknowwhichweshoulddonextsothatwecansavemuchtimeaspossible.Lostaswhat

ingoodHowWeshouldspendeveryminutetimeonit.Afterwestudyorworkforalongtimewecantakethegoodrest.Ithinkthatallofusshouldemphasizeusingourtimeeffective.aeffectivelyNo.14TheAustraliangovernmenthavethelongestfenceintheworld.Itis9,500kilometerslongerwith20,000menlookafterit.Theyoftendrivealongitandrepairit.Iftheydon’t,thedingoeswillgetin.Dingoeswerewilddogs,thefiercestkillersinAustralia.hasarelookinglongWildanimalsusuallykillforthefood,butdingoesforpleasure.Dingoeskilled600,000sheepsinQueenslandfortenyears.Thefarmersfeltangrily,buttheycouldn’tstopthedingoes.Theproblemwassobigforthefarmerstosolve.Sothegovernmentagreedbuildthefence.totooangryinsheepNo.15It’sdifficultofparentstoteachtheirchildrentoberesponsibleforhousework,butwiththefollowedsuggestions,youreallycanmanagetodoingit.Ifyougiveyourchildrentheimpressiontheycan’tdoanythingquiteright,theywillregardthemasunablepersons.thatforthemselvesdofollowingUnlesstheybelievethemselves,they’llneverbecometotalindependent.Don’talwaysscoldthem;givelotsofpraiseinsteadof.Talkaboutwhatthey’vedoneright,notaboutthattheyhaven’tdone.Ifyourchildrencompleteadifficulttask,rewardhimwithaSundaytriporaballgame. intotallywhatthemNo.16AsthedevelopmentoftheInternet,thenetbarplaysanimportantroleon