讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)野外迷路-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)1——野外迷路題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Aboulder(巨石),asbigasahouse.That`showtheguidebookdescribedGiantRock.Dadsaiditarrivedheremillionsofyearsago.Iwasfinallygoingtoseeit,insnowshoes,withmytwooldercousins,mydad,andmyuncleDon.I`dbeensnowshoeingbefore,andIlikedtheadventureofhikingthroughdeepsnow.Attheparkingarea,afterputtingonoursnowshoes,westudiedthemap.Duetothegeographicallocation,electricaldeviceswereinaccessiblehere.Themapwasouronlyguide."Westarthere,"Dadsaid,"ontheredtrail(小路).Thenweturnleftontothepurpleroad.That`swhereGiantRockis.""Remembertosticktogetheranddon`twanderoff,guys,"UncleDonsaid.Thetrailranuphillalongsideastonewall.Itwaseasytofollowbecauseredmarkerswerenailedtothetreesandthesnowhadbeenpackeddownbyotherhikers.Atthetopofthehill,weturnedontothepurpletrail.Wesettledintoapattern,withDadandeveryoneelseinfrontandmeintheback,crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地踩)throughthesnow.Isawlotsofanimaltracks—mostlydeer,squirrel,andrabbitprints.Asthetrailwounddown,mycousinAndrewsaidwhatI’dbeenthinking:"WillweeverreachGiantRock?"MycousinAidensmiledandturnedtome,"Luke,doyouthinkyourdadinventedthisideajusttogetusawayfromtheTVforawhile?"Ilaughed."Youneverknow."4續(xù)寫原文Finally,weclimbedahillandsawthemassivebouldersittingaloneintheforest.Itreallyisasbigasahouse!MycousinsandIhigh-fivedeachotherandjoggeduntilwestoodatthebase,breathless.Standingintheboulder’sbroadshadow,Inoticedthesunhadsunklower."Let’sheadback,"Dadsaidafterafewminutes."Therewillbeseveralcrossroadsonthewayback.Guys,keepupwiththeteam."Soonwewerecrunch-crunch-crunchingourwayhome.Iwasalittlebehindthegroupwhenweapproachedacrossroads.AndInoticedasetofanimaltracksIhadn’trecognizedbefore,soIfollowedthemforacloserlook.5續(xù)寫段首語(yǔ)Paragraph1:IlookedupwhenIsuddenlyrealizedhowquietithadgotten.Paragraph2:Asgoingworriedly,Iheardvoices,someonecallingfaraway.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫建議我抬起頭，突然意識(shí)到它變得多么安靜。“大家在哪里？”我喊道。無。他們不可能走得太遠(yuǎn)。如果我快點(diǎn)，我會(huì)追上來的。走了一小段路后，我來到了十字路口，在那里我可以左轉(zhuǎn)或直行，但兩條小徑都有紅色標(biāo)記。我轉(zhuǎn)向左邊，看起來很熟悉。我大步走著，越來越安靜。我擔(dān)心我走開了。很快天就太暗了，我無法分辨標(biāo)記是什么顏色。我沒有手電筒，也沒有電話。如果我找不到回去的路怎么辦？9續(xù)寫建議就在擔(dān)心的時(shí)候，我聽到了聲音，有人在很遠(yuǎn)的地方呼喚。然后我注意到了石墻，沿著它延伸的小徑。這一定是對(duì)的。我邁著大步?jīng)_下山坡。然后，有史以來最好的景點(diǎn)：停車區(qū)和我的家人！我一邊喊著，一邊朝他們跑去?！氨R克？你還好嗎？爸爸的聲音很急。他用手電筒照著我的方向。我只迷路了幾分鐘，但感覺就像很長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間?，F(xiàn)在我想要的只是爸爸的熊抱，為家做路。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)IlookedupwhenIsuddenlyrealizedhowquietithadgotten."Whereiseveryone?"Ishouted.Nothing.Theycouldn’thavegonefar.IwouldcatchupifIhurried.Afterashortwalk,IcametothecrossroadswhereIcouldturnleftorgostraight,butbothtrailshadredmarkers.Iturnedtotheleftwhichlookedfamiliar.AsIstrode,itgotquieterandquieter.IworriedIwanderedoff.Soonitmightbetoodarkformetotellwhatcolorthemarkerswere.Ihadnoflashlightandnophone.WhatifIcouldn’tfindmywayback?12范文呈現(xiàn)Asgoingworriedly,Iheardvoices,someonecallingfaraway.ThenInoticedthestonewall,thetrailrunningalongsideit.Thishadtoberight.Irusheddownhillwithbigsteps.Then,thebestsightever:theparkingareaandmyfamily!IshoutedasIrantowardthem."Luke?AreyouOK?"ThevoiceofDadwasurgent.Heshinedaflashlightinmydirection.I’donlybeenlostforminutes,butithadfeltlikeaverylongtime.NowallI