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fictionWriting寫作指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一則短篇科幻故事。時(shí)間旅行是科幻作品中常見的主題，也是人類對(duì)自由穿梭于過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)，駕馭時(shí)空的向往。本單元要求學(xué)生閱讀完《時(shí)間機(jī)器》(改編)后就時(shí)間旅行展開想象，假設(shè)自己可以穿越時(shí)空，會(huì)對(duì)世界進(jìn)行怎樣的探索。這次寫作活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生既要大膽展開想象，又要情節(jié)合理。其中細(xì)節(jié)描寫非常重要。常用表達(dá)Ioftendreamabouttimetravelling.我經(jīng)常夢(mèng)想著時(shí)間旅行。Perhapswewillbeabletoexplorespace.也許我們將能夠探索太空。Travelwillbeeasierforusbecausewehavemoreadvancedtools.旅行對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)更容易，因?yàn)槲覀冇懈冗M(jìn)的工具。Astimegoesby/Withtimegoingby，there’regoingtobegreatchangesin...隨著時(shí)間的推移，在……方面將有巨大的變化。Thespaceship/timemachineismainlycontrolledby...宇宙飛船/時(shí)間機(jī)器主要由……控制。Carsandbusesareallcomputer-programmed.小汽車和公交車都是電腦編程。Lookingaround，Ifindmyselfsurroundedbymanysmartdevices.環(huán)顧四周，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被許多智能設(shè)備包圍。Imagineafuturewheretimetravellingispossible.Wearefreetotravelthroughtimetoanypointinhistory.想象一個(gè)時(shí)間旅行成為可能的未來(lái)。我們可以自由地穿越時(shí)空到歷史上的任何時(shí)間點(diǎn)。你校學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦科幻故事征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一個(gè)關(guān)于飛碟的故事參加比賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)；2.主要情節(jié)；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。典例展示范文賞讀TheFlyingSaucerItwashotatnightandIcouldn’tfallasleepinthetent，soIcrawledoutofthetentandwalkedaroundtocooldown.Theskywasclearandstarswereshining.Suddenlyabrightlightflashedacrosstheskyandthennearmytentappearedaflyingsaucer，whichlookedjustliketheoneinthebookIhadreadduringtheday.Iquicklyhidbehindastoneandsawanaliencomedownthrougharounddoor.Hewalkedintomytentandcameoutwithsomethinginhishand.TheUFOthenflewaway.IimmediatelyranintomytentandfoundthatmyPadwasgone.IwassopuzzledthatIcouldn’tbelievewhatIhadseen.ButIdecidedthatthenexttimethealiencame，Iwouldtalktohim.Accordingtothetext“SatisfactionGuaranteed”，ClairefellinlovewithTony，whichledtoTonybeingrebuilt.WhatwouldhappenwhenTonywastakenaway？WhatwouldhappennexttimewhenClairemetTonyagain？Continuethestoryaccordingtothegivensentences.實(shí)踐演練Para.1

AfterTonywastakenaway，_______________________________________________________________________________

Para.2

ClairewassosurprisedwhenseeingTonyinGladys’house._________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步審題謀篇第二步遣詞造句核心詞匯(含本單元詞匯)1.荒唐的

_______________2.哭泣

_____3.內(nèi)疚的

_____4.然而

_______5.沖動(dòng)

____ridiculous/absurdweepguiltywhereasurge6.使目瞪口呆

____7.愛上

______________8.重新組裝

_______stunfallinlovewithrebuild連詞成句(含本單元句型)1.她知道戀上一個(gè)機(jī)器人荒謬至極，但她還是忍不住流淚。Sheknewitwasabsurdtobecomeattachedtoarobot；_________________________________.2.當(dāng)她面對(duì)Larry時(shí)，她感到很內(nèi)疚。WhenshefacedLarry，________________.shejustcouldn’tholdbackhertearsshefeltveryguilty3.畢竟，她的丈夫是Larry

而不是Tony。Afterall，Larry

washerhusband.4.有一天，Claire收到了Gladys

的邀請(qǐng)函，這讓Claire非常困惑。Oneday，

，andthismadeClairequiteconfused.5.Tony和以前大不相同了。_______________________________________________________ratherthanTonyClairereceivedaninvitationfromGladysTonywasquitedifferentfromwhatheusedtobe.第三步句式升級(jí)1.將句1改為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.將句2改成“連詞＋非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的形式。_______________________________________________________3.用強(qiáng)調(diào)句改寫句3。_______________________________________________________Whilesheknewitwasabsurdtobecomeattachedtoarobot，shejustcouldn’tholdbackhertears.WhenfacingLarry，shefeltveryguilty.Afterall，itwasLarryratherthanTonywhowasherhusband.4.用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句改寫句4。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oneday，ClairereceivedaninvitationfromGladys，whichmadeClairequiteconfused.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語(yǔ)短文。參考范文AfterTonywastakenaway，ClaireweptandweptuntilLarrycameback.Whilesheknewitwasabsurdtobecomeattachedtoarobot，shejustcouldn’tholdbackhertears.Tonywassosweetandunderstanding.Everythinghedidforhermadeherfeelbetteraboutherself.However，whenfacingLarry，shefeltveryguilty.Afterall，itwasLarryratherthanTonywhowasherhusband.SheknewTonywouldberebuiltbutshecouldn’thelpwonderingwhatwouldhappeniftheymeetagain.Oneday，shereceivedaninvitationfromGladys，whichmadeherquiteconfused.ClairewassosurprisedwhenseeingTonyinGladys’house.“Look！Thisisthenewesthouseholdrobotintheworld！”Gladyshadastrongurgetointroduceittoherguests，proudly.ClairehadamixedfeelingwhenTonygreetedherpolitelywithabow.His