英語九年級Unit4IusedtobeafraidofthedarkUnit4書面表達

Watchandtelldifference.

Heisaboy.HeisHanGeng.Heusedtohaveshorthair.Heusedtobelikeagirl.

appearance（外貌）personality(性格)

hobbies

habit

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現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)是一位九年級的學生了，你感覺自己和以前有變化嗎？請根據(jù)自己的體會，多角度，多方面談談自己的變化。請以“HowIhavechanged!”為題寫一篇文章。要求：

1.至少談3個方面的變化;

2.語句通順、連貫;3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。

HowIhavechanged!

Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!

WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowI’moutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowI’musedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.What’smore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.WhatgreatchangesIhave.BeginningEnding

HowIhavechanged!Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowI’moutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowI’musedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.What’smore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.

WhatgreatchangesIhave.BodySomanychanges…

youcandoitthisway:...usedto…nowThinkaboutyourchanges!過去與現(xiàn)在的生活情況Iusedto...,butnow.....Inthepast,Ioften...Now....Inthepast,Iusedtobe...butnowIam....總結(jié)觀點Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.自我感受WhatgreatchangesIhave!Ireallymisstheolddays!....outline自評標準：大聲朗讀自己的文章，從結(jié)構、人稱、時態(tài)、字數(shù)、拼寫、大小寫、標點符號等方面進行自我修正。Task1自我欣賞與修正

同伴互賞欣賞角度：

1.寫作基本要求:人稱,時態(tài)，語法等。

2.

要點齊全。

3.結(jié)構:開頭，正文，結(jié)尾。

4.好詞好句。注意：作文通用修改字符：優(yōu)美句子～；漏詞∧；錯處：○；去掉／