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語法概述李鶴尊2015.7OG-4Attheendofthe1930s,DukeEllingtonwaslookingforacomposertoassisthim—someonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleaswellinordertofinishthemanypieceshehadstartedbutnevercompleted.(A)someonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleaswellinordertofinish(B)someonewhocouldnotonlyarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butalsomirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleinordertofinish(C)someonewhonotonlycouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butalsotomirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleinfinishing(D)thatbeingsomeonewhocouldnotonlyarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleforfinishing(E)beingsomeonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleaswell,finishingOG-4Attheendofthe1930s,DukeEllingtonwaslookingforacomposertoassisthim—someonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleaswellinordertofinishthemanypieceshehadstartedbutnevercompleted.(A)someonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleaswellinordertofinish(B)someonewhocouldnotonlyarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butalsomirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleinordertofinish(C)someonewhonotonlycouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butalsotomirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleinfinishing(D)thatbeingsomeonewhocouldnotonlyarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirroringhiseccentricwritingstyleforfinishing(E)beingsomeonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhissuccessfulbigband,butmirrorhiseccentricwritingstyleaswell,finishingParallelism:(A)(C)(D)(E)BOG13p665Onestatement,partofwhichisunderlinedFivechoices：一個原文、四個改寫ChoosethebestexpressionWhatisthe“bestexpression”?GrammaticallyCorrect?OrGMATicallyCorrect?GMAT的要求Sheldon:Onecriesbecauseoneissad.Forexample,Icrybecauseothersarestupidanditmakesmesad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad.Forexample,Icrybecauseothersarestupidanditmakesmesad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad:forexample,Sheldoncrybecauseothersarestupidanditmakeshimsad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad:forexample,Sheldoncriesbecauseothersarestupidanditmakeshimsad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad:forexample,Sheldoncriesbecauseothersarestupidandsuchstupiditymakeshimsad.語法×語法×邏輯×Onecriesbecauseoneissad.Forexample,Icrybecauseothersarestupidanditmakesmesad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad:forexample,Sheldoncriesbecauseotherpeople’sbeingstupidmakeshimsad.Onecriesbecauseoneissad:forexample,Sheldoncriesbecauseitmakeshimsadthatothersarestupid.簡潔語法、邏輯、簡潔√GMAT的考察范圍G標準書面英語中學英語語法OG給出的范圍（OG-P665~669）AgreementDictionGrammaticalConstructionIdiomLogicalPredicationParallelismRhetoricalConstructionVerbFormGMAT句子改錯的核心標準正確選項：語法正確，表意準確合理且相對簡潔明了錯誤選項：

語法錯誤，表意不準確合理或相對不簡潔GrammarMeaningConcision句子更正題的核心解題精神The3basiccriteriaforGMATsentencecorrectionare…Grammar,Meaning,andConcisionSC難在哪里？一道題多個考點，考點零碎；復雜的句子結構讓考點很隱蔽。解決辦法：規(guī)范動作規(guī)范解題步驟題干從頭到尾閱讀一遍，同時分析選項A閱讀并對比選項標志詞語導向考點選項差異導向考點排除加選擇檢查典型例題

OG13-1,6,51,90,136GMAT句子更正(OG13-1)Inareviewof2,000studiesofhumanbehaviorthatdatebacktothe1940s,twoSwisspsychologists,declaringthatsincemostofthestudieshadfailedtocontrolforsuchvariablesassocialclassandfamilysize,nonecouldbetakenseriously.

psychologists,declaringthatsincemostofthestudieshadfailedtocontrolforsuchvariablesassocialclassandfamilysize,psychologists,declaringthatmostofthestudiesfailedinnotcontrollingforsuchvariableslikesocialclassandfamilysize,andpsychologistsdeclaredthatsincemostofthestudies,havingfailedtocontrolforsuchvariablesassocialclassandfamilysize,psychologistsdeclaredthatsincemostofthestudiesfailincontrollingforsuchvariableslikesocialclassandfamilysize,psychologistsdeclaredthatsincemostofthestudieshadfailedtocontrolforvariablessuchassocialclassandfamilysize,Psy的謂語去哪了？Psy的謂語去哪了？E(OG13-6)Diabetes,togetherwithitsseriouscomplications,ranksasthenation’sthirdleadingcauseofdeath,surpassedonlybyheartdiseaseandcancer.ranksasthenation’sthirdleadingcauseofdeath,surpassedonlyrankasthenation’sthirdleadingcauseofdeath,onlysurpassedhastherankofthenation’sthirdleadingcauseofdeath,onlysurpassedarethenation’sthirdleadingcausesofdeath,surpassedonlyhavebeenrankedasthenation’sthirdleadingcausesofdeath,onlysurpassedA(OG13-51)Anewstudysuggeststhattheconversationalpaceofeverydaylifemaybesobriskithamperstheabilityofsomechildrenfordistinguishingdiscretesoundsandwordsand,theresultis,tomakesenseofspeech.ithamperstheabilityofsomechildrenfordistinguishingdiscretesoundsandwordsand,theresultis,tomakethatithamperstheabilityofsomechildrentodistinguishdiscretesoundsandwordsand,asaresult,tomakethatithamperstheabilityofsomechildrentodistinguishdiscretesoundsandwordsand,theresultofthis,theyareunabletomakethatithamperstheabilityofsomechildrentodistinguishdiscretesoundsandwords,andresultsinnotmakingastohampertheabilityofsomechildrenfordistinguishingdiscretesoundsandwords,resultinginbeingunabletomakeB(OG13-90)Theresultsofthecompany'scost-cuttingmeasuresareevidentinitsprofits,whichincreased5percentduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafteritfelloverthelasttwoyears.whichincreased5percentduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafteritfellwhichhadincreased5percentduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafterithadfallenwhichhaveincreased5percentduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafterfallingwitha5percentincreaseduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafterfallingwitha5percentincreaseduringthefirst3monthsofthisyearafterhavingfallenC(OG13-136)Whereasinmammalsthetinytubesthatconveynutrientstobonecellsarearrayedinparallellines,inbirdsthetubesformarandompattern.Whereasinmammalsthetinytubesthatconveynutrientstobonecellsarearrayedinparallellines,inbirdsthetu